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Reviewer: djw Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2023 12:54 AM Title: The Naked Guy Upstairs

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Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:58 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:58 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:58 AM Title: Arms

Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward 

Reviewer: debb8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2019 11:12 AM Title: Arms

I just read this again!! I have read it several times. Please don't leave us in suspense!!

Reviewer: madamine58 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2019 8:09 PM Title: Untamed Hearts

Thank you

Reviewer: madamine58 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2019 7:57 PM Title: Untamed Hearts

Thank you for the family tree

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 7:19 AM Title: Arms

I so wish there was more to this as i want to know why Alice and Jasper are there, would they ever see Edwatd's family again? Other than the cliff-hanger this story was left on, its a wonderful story! Loved Reading it!

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 7:18 AM Title: Arms

I so wish there was more to this as i want to know why Alice and Jasper are there, would they ever see Edwatd's family again? Other than the cliff-hanger this story was left on, its a wonderful story! Loved Reading it!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:10 PM Title: Arms

Well you have me hooked.  Tangled webs and all.  Got the story from the Top 10 Poll for this month, and am glad I gave it a chance.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:10 PM Title: Arms

Well you have me hooked.  Tangled webs and all.  Got the story from the Top 10 Poll for this month, and am glad I gave it a chance.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 6:52 PM Title: Arms

I hope they have news from Edward's family.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 3:30 AM Title: Arms

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2018 8:27 PM Title: Arms

Great chapter, keep writing

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2018 8:27 PM Title: Arms

Great chapter, keep writing

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2018 3:24 PM Title: Arms

AWESOME!!! chapter ;) looking forward to part 3 ;) hoping for good news ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2018 1:15 PM Title: Arms

thank you so much for coming back to this ;) i reread the whole thing again and really enjoyed it ;) looking forward to part 2 ;D

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2018 6:27 PM Title: Arms

I loved this story. I wish they have a couple of little boys who look just like little Edwards. I also hope that everything works out so Edward can meet his family as Mason. They bad guys have to be gone at some point. What even happened at the trial? What happened to Jasper? So many unanswered questions.

Reviewer: khills Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 4:59 AM Title: Untamed Hearts

Sigh...I wish it was completed. It's a really wonderful story!

Reviewer: Auror21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2018 5:36 PM Title: Arms

Love this story but are they ever going to reunite with the Cullens? How did the trial go? Are there still crazy monsters potentially after them? Any chance you can get that bit answered/ wrapped up next chapter? 

is Bella’s alias Leia because Edward loves Star Wars?

great job so far and love the character development.



Author's Response:

Hi! Thanks so much. All good questions, and all coming up in future takes. 

 

Thanks again!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2018 4:41 PM Title: Arms

I forgot i read this so very long ago. Good story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2018 4:40 PM Title: Arms

I forgot i read this so very long ago. Good story

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2018 9:59 PM Title: Arms

I love this story. Thank you for updating it. Yes it took a while, but that's ok. That's why I never take stories out of my favorites .  My wish for the finsl chapter would be some way that Edward could see his family again and Esme and Carlise could meet their grandchildren .  But they have to be safe of course. Thanks, Maria



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!! I will see what I can do! ;-) 

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2018 9:59 PM Title: Arms

I love this story. Thank you for updating it. Yes it took a while, but that's ok. That's why I never take stories out of my favorites .  My wish for the finsl chapter would be some way that Edward could see his family again and Esme and Carlise could meet their grandchildren .  But they have to be safe of course. Thanks, Maria

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 2:19 AM Title: The Naked Guy Upstairs

I'm so happy there were no separations for 'anyone's good'. Those drive me nuts. Fabulous story. I Loved it! 

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 12:12 AM Title: The New Girl Downstairs: A TNGUS Side-Shot

Excellent first look!

Reviewer: cherylchuy2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2017 9:19 PM Title: Arms

Fantastic, your characters are so real. I love this Edward, I want to just reach in my tablet and pull him out, he is so cute. You are the real thing!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you kindly!!! Appreciate it so much. I'd love to have him at home too, believe me. ;-) 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 4:24 AM Title: Arms

That's so sad that they finally get to be together and can't stay with each other!

Reviewer: zacho Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 5:08 AM Title: First & Ten

I absolutely love this story! Have you considered doing a continuation in the kids perspective? That would be pretty cool!

Reviewer: zacho Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 5:06 AM Title: First & Ten

I absolutly love this story! Have you considered doing a continuation in the kids perspective? That would be pretty cool!

Reviewer: zacho Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 5:05 AM Title: First & Ten

I absolutly love this story! Have you considered doing a continuation in the kids perspective? That would be pretty cool!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2017 11:14 PM Title: Arms

Been reading this on FanFiction.net, but this chapter was removed from that site.  Glad I found it here.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for being so understanding. Chapters are all back up on FFn for now. Some edited a little. Full lemons are still only found here. 

All My Best, 

Ginnie 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 12:35 AM Title: Arms

Wow, that was intense!  

Reviewer: MariahajilE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2016 9:25 PM Title: The Naked Guy Upstairs

Congratulations! You've been nominated in the 2016 TwiFic Fandom Awards!

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Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2016 8:55 PM Title: First & Ten

love it!!!

Reviewer: ellasecy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 11:58 AM Title: Arms

Thank you for sharing this lovely story to us readers.

Reviewer: fullmoon77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 6:57 PM Title: The Naked Guy Upstairs

I'm so happy to find this story! Thank you for keeping it posted. It's very, very enjoyable to read.

Reviewer: petmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:27 AM Title: The Naked Guy Upstairs

I love this story. I usually only read on Fanfiction but somehow got directed to this story. I don't know how to navigate this website. Is there anyway I could get a pdf of this story? I don't want to lose it. Such a sweet and broken Edward and sweet and snark Bella. I loved your banter.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

Mickey

Petmom1213@aol.com

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2016 8:41 AM Title: The Naked Guy Upstairs

Thank god I found this story again!!! I love this story. I was so mad and sad that fanfiction took it down.... I can't wait to read it again.

Reviewer: rosemarieswan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2016 5:49 AM Title: Arms

Loved the Story!!! Although I wish I knew what happened at the trial and how they dealt with it as a new family. But thank you so much for sharing! :)

Reviewer: dramioneify Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2016 8:00 PM Title: First & Ten

I love this story

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2016 7:29 PM Title: Arms

Good story

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:08 PM Title: Arms

Interesting storyline

Reviewer: Nikaka Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:31 AM Title: First & Ten

You aren't going to do an outtake of Bella and Edward messing with Emmett and telling him that his son-in-law is now a daughter-in-law??

Reviewer: 90sKid Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2015 2:06 AM Title: First & Ten

Hey, 
I just started reading this story and so far I can't stop laughing. I love it and Emmett is awesome in this one :)

Andy ;)



Author's Response:

Glad you had fun with it!  Definitely my favorite Em :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: TwiTwiAgain Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2015 5:01 AM Title: Arms

Once the Cullens showed up I started crying. This was a fun plot. Thanks for sharing your talent. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2015 10:34 AM Title: Arms

great but would have liked an epi or a sequel to see justice served

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2015 12:04 PM Title: Arms

so good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2015 9:34 AM Title: Arms

great start

Reviewer: Twinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 4:07 AM Title: Arms

This has been a great read!!!  I loved every bit of it.  You can't just leave it there though!  I hope you are serious about that epilogue.  Did they make it to the trial for The Swans murders against the Volteri?  Did they have a boy or girl?  What name did Bella use as her alias?  Come on!!!

 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:54 PM Title: The New Girl Downstairs: A TNGUS Side-Shot

i loved this o/s in epov ;) i hope you manage to write more asap ;D

Reviewer: bran Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 11:33 AM Title: First & Ten

awesome story loved renee and emmett lol my hubby thought i was losing my mind reading this when i woke him in the middle of the night laughing so hard at the stuff renee and emmett would do or say and esme too



Author's Response:

Haha I"m so glad you had fun with it!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: Delmar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:21 AM Title: First & Ten

Loved this story, it had me laughing through till the end. 



Author's Response:

Love to hear that!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: bran Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:38 AM Title: Arms

this s crap she should be able to tell him her real age right but im loving whatim reading but wish he knew the truth so far

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2014 8:53 PM Title: First & Ten

AWESOME!! story second read through although i hadn't read this last one ;)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2014 2:27 PM Title: Untamed Hearts

Hopefully you will be finishing this sequel to Lonesome Hearts?
I was just getting into the characters.

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2014 2:37 AM Title: First & Ten

Great story



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2014 9:49 PM Title: Arms

Thank you. I loved the story and I cried hard in the end.

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 3:40 AM Title: First & Ten

I'm re-reading this story, and I have to say that I totally LOVE this outtake and this Emmett is the BEST I have ever read!!! I forgot how funny this story was with prankster Emmett and his too funny nicknames! Thanks for such an incredible read!



Author's Response:

Hehe I'm glad you enjoyed them all over again!  This Em is still one of my pride and joys!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 7:35 PM Title: Arms

AWESOME!!!!! story ;) i hope you come back and post the epilogue asap;D

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 12:10 AM Title: Arms

Can't wait for the epi cuzz tissues were def needed for this one!!!

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:08 PM Title: Arms

Good lord what a killer ending. So glad they got to do it though and say goodbye. This was such a great story, really well written, full of love, but not soppy, just a great piece of story telling. Cried a lot this last chapter. Thank you, and an epilogue that shows life is good, and maybe the bad guys are gone and they get to go home..... just saying....

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:22 PM Title: Arms

Did I mention I love this story... I can't stop reading...-

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2014 12:16 PM Title: Arms

God this story is so GOOD!

Reviewer: bethian3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 10:26 AM Title: Arms

Wonderful story! Loved it from start to finish! Would love to have an epilogue!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 6:38 PM Title: Arms

This has to be one of the saddest stories I have ever read.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 9:06 PM Title: Arms

Ils sont ensemble vont rester j'espère?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:50 PM Title: Arms

Elle va devoir fuir

Poor Edward

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:16 PM Title: Arms

It is very like that!

Thank you

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:02 PM Title: Arms

I liked this merger between Bella and Edward! 

There is nothing bad in that.

Thank you

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:51 AM Title: Arms

Très intéressant! 

Merci

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:23 AM Title: Arms

J'aime ce premier chapitre.

Merci

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 5:24 AM Title: Arms

So steamy!  Finally he knows her age. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 4:13 AM Title: Arms

WHOO Hoo!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 3:41 AM Title: Arms

Step two.... Let's kiss.  Haha!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:53 AM Title: Arms

That was so good that jasper took her out. She was in such need of that!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:05 AM Title: Arms

Poor Bella!  All this pressure is going to make her crack!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:31 AM Title: Arms

This has started out soooo good!  Edward actually seemed a little flirty.  Does he know she is a little older? Him coming back to forks from the navy is a good question. Why did he do that?  Could he be an under cover US Marshall that she doesn't know about?

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2014 7:00 PM Title: Arms

Awesome story!!   They don't get much better :-)

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:59 AM Title: Arms

GOOD STORIES   ARM  I LOVE IT

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:29 PM Title: Arms

That was really an interesting ending. Most of these writers would be pulling HEA to the max. I like real life touches. 

 

Thank you

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:14 PM Title: Arms

lol Mr & Mrs Black. lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:02 PM Title: Arms

good story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:47 PM Title: Arms

If she had said sorry one more time I was going to combust myself. Way to much repitition in her language in that chapter. I get nervous but that was almost redic.. LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:38 PM Title: Arms

just put them together save everyone the stress. Alice can handle them. Best Alice in a long time. I usually don't like the character. I love this Alice. Really this Bella is much better than some of the young ones.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:56 PM Title: Arms

oh my pregnant and seperated and.. in Witness Protection Program. etc etc.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 6:24 PM Title: Arms

That hole chapter confused me.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 5:23 PM Title: Arms

I am almost scared to look at the next chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:59 PM Title: Arms

Yes she is older and gone.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:45 PM Title: Arms

who is the message from? I mean she can  not be doing that.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:33 AM Title: Arms

I am thrilled that they got to say goodbyr to his family! It was so touching that they accepted what had to be and wished them well. Tori's little surprise was a nice touch, too, and explained her odd reaction to that mention of grandchildren. I'll hold out a hope that someday Edward  and Bella will be able to see the Cullens again and share all the happiness with them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:07 AM Title: Arms

This isn't an easy life they are about to embark uopn, but I feel the love the have for each other will carry them through the hard parts!

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