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Reviewer: Courtstuffs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2024 7:40 PM Title: The Late Late Show With Edward Cullen

Rose is such a cunt. She claims she's just trying to help Bella but Bella is an adult. Rose is coming across as an abusive, controlling spouse that's trying to isolate Bella. It makes the story very difficult to read or enjoy.

Reviewer: KristynTB926 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This will forever be my favorite story. ’

Reviewer: KristynTB926 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This will forever be my favorite story. ’

Reviewer: fanficaddict2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2023 5:22 AM Title: Quiet Storm


Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:35 AM Title: Outside the Box

You are a WONDERFUL writer. NEVER listen to the cyber trolls. They are TROLLS! You on the other hand are a QUEEN! I love you! Thank you so much for being brave and sharing your work with us. I feel privileged. I love ALL of your work.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2023 11:44 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2023 6:29 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2023 5:57 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Again hilarious, scary, but hilarious. Loved it. And you'l probably be mad at me, but I've never seen more than a glimpse of Gray's Anatomy. :( 

 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2023 4:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

I thought this chapter was hilarious! I woke my husband up with my laughing out loud. I loved her reactions and they got even better when she took the meds. His proposal was just fine, (what does Carlisle know) and definitely so them. The only thing I'm wondering now is if as doctors they'll still remember that Antibiotics cause birth control to fail!?! Let's not remind them though.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2023 8:56 AM Title: The Story Of Us

OK love al even more now - he's a good guy. Not upset with Tanya, she's VERY hurt. She'll work it out. Hopefully James feels like crap and makes it up to her. And by the way, 5 years is WAY to short to be getting bored with his sex life. He's a douche nozzle.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2023 7:55 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Wow, I REALLY enjoyed that chapter way more than I anticipated. Getting to hear hisPOV was refreshing and it made me like him a lot more than I did. I mistook him for a creepy dude who was trying to steal Bella from Edward (even though I knew that could never happen), but now I see him as a really nice kid whom Edward and Bella could probably be friends with. I have to admit I'm VERY disappointed with James though. It's obvious that he still has feelings for Bella and always did and now he feels it's ok to cheat (even if it's an open relationship, it's fairly clearly defined) and if he'll cheat on his wife, who's to say he won't make another play for Bella, right? It's fair to assume so now. LOVE THIS STORY - can't wait for more and the next one. Good call on the name change too. This name has better 'attraction" than the name of the hospital where they work, especially since Bella only worked there for a couple of chapters. 

Reviewer: pixiekat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...

Thank you.

Reviewer: pixiekat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...

Thank you.

Reviewer: kanergirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2023 2:52 PM Title: Weather the Storm

"Keep my wife's name out your fucking mouth!" I stood from my seat.


Reading this line in 2023 is fucking comical🤣

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2023 4:26 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2023 3:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Loved it

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:54 PM Title: Weather the Storm

Of course, I really love every chapter you write, But I especially loved Bella, putting Esme and her place. I hope she tells Carlisle and Edward what she did, but I know that's not her personality.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:45 AM Title: Weather the Storm

I can't believe he'd tap that after Edward and Alec... Blech!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:04 AM Title: Weather the Storm

This time I'm reviewing your authors note at the beginning of this chapter. 

Your story is GREAT, true to mob life (as far as we know) and your Edward is great just the way he is warts and all. Bella too! If people criticize you for what you write, they SHOULDN"T READ IT!!!!! It takes a lot of guts to make yourself vulnerable to criticism when you publish your words. You write your stories the way YOU SEE FIT!!! If someone don't like it they should stop reading and SHUT UP!! I hate thinking you as a writer are upset because some bigmouth doesn't like the water thing are being written. If they don't like it maybe they should give writing a story a try and see how they fair with the critics huh? 

Just to let you know, YOU ARE DOING GREAT, WONDERFUL, STUPENDOUS!!! Love all of your work. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you that you are not doing it right. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE you!! I can't say it enough. Great work, even the scary, angsty parts. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 7:41 AM Title: Weather the Storm

  I'm kinda worried about Esme plotting to kill Edward or Bella or both! She seems spoiled rotten and hellbent on getting what she wants and getting away with murder literally. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 2:33 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.

Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee! 

I may be in shock!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2023 8:43 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.

Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee! 

I may be in shock!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2023 9:44 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I can tell you this from reading hundreds and hundreds of these fanfiction stories.  Us readers we don't mind a monster word count. I love the longer stories I always read them first. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:19 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm

So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm

So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm

So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2023 8:47 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Two words... Amazingly insane! I absolutely LOVED it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2023 12:12 AM Title: Shamrocks and Shaninnagans

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2023 12:01 AM Title: Shamrocks and Shaninnagans

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2023 11:09 PM Title: Shamrocks and Shaninnagans

Loved it 

Reviewer: decayandescape Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2023 11:22 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Not entirely sure why people were giving you such a tough time with this story (it's fucking stupid that they were so "offended" that they reported you but whatever)

I love it and I come back to your work like once a year. Maybe it's because I lived in Brooklyn for 10+ years and am from Jersey -- or maybe it's your writing style or maybe it's because I prefer this story over the original material *shrug* - I dont care - love your work and it hits a spot for me! Thanks so much. 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: Korissaa Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

This story is honestly amazing  thank you for putting it out in the world 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2022 7:44 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

nice updte

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2022 12:48 PM Title: Behind The Images

did not play real hard tp get

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:34 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: booMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2022 10:19 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

Thanks for the update. Plus have really enjoyed re-Reading the story from the start. Enjoying it just as much second time around. :) 

Reviewer: i am mrs emmett cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2022 10:25 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

Hi,

Still a massive fan of this story, please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2022 9:39 AM Title: To Have and To Hold

Thank you for sharing your story with your readers. I just finished rereading this fic and loved it as much as I did the first time I read it.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2022 9:37 AM Title: To Have and To Hold

Thank you for sharing your story with your readers. I just finished rereading this fic and loved it as much as I did the first time I read it.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: inkheart15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2022 8:11 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

Me dancing because she finally updated 😩😩😩

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2022 3:24 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

I hope Edward can help her 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:38 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:17 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:07 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 4:52 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2022 8:41 PM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2022 7:22 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

It's so good to see this updated 

Great writing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 5:29 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

Hope to hear from you soon. I was so excited to see your post Thanks so much



Author's Response:

Almost finished with the next chapter. Thank you so much for your continued support =)

Reviewer: WordsMusicMagic Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2022 4:24 AM Title: Sticks and Stones

Cute. Funny. A little too choppy and abbreviated for my tastes, but good overall. 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 10:32 PM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 5:44 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading 😊

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 5:28 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 5:26 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 5:25 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

:) 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:46 PM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:51 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:44 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 4:05 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

While it has been years I love that you haven’t given up on it and even if it means slow updates I would la till drop everything to read the updates.

I really hope The Cullens find her before something happens to her. She’s had enough shitty things happen to her to last a lifetime without adding an unwanted mating.

Author's Response:

Updates won't be too far apart. I'm determined to finish. I owe it to all that are still reading 😊 Thank you so much for your support! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 4:05 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

Oh bree.  You deserve to die slowly and painfully along with James.  

 

Welcome back!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support ☺️

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

yay welcome back girly <3 <3 <3 



Author's Response:

I am! Thank you so much for your support ☺️ ❤️

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

yay welcome back girly <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

yay welcome back girly <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:32 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

Wow! I am soooooo very thrilled and excited that you decided to write again! I love this story, and it always broke my heart when the months, then years, went by with no updates. Thank you for not giving up on this story, and for coming back! Great update, and now I'm seriously worried for our Bella! Can't wait to hear how Edward takes the news that his mate is missing! 

Take care, stay safe and healthy 

Ciao!



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much! I really appreciate your support =) 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 2:56 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

Oh wow! Poor Bella. I'm hopeful she'll get out and be reunited with Edward, soon. If you'll still have me, I'll still beta for you! 



Author's Response:

Hey! I missed you 😊 My email addy is vampgurl1331@gmail.com  Email me since I don't have yours anymore.  I'm still in Arizona and it's been a rough time lol. Trying to get back home to FL. 

Reviewer: dizzykaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2022 11:58 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

It'll be good interesting to see what happens with Angela and Ben when baby comes and if aro gets taken down so that everyone can be free



Author's Response:

I'm actually interested myself lol. These characters all have a mind of their own. The story writes itself 😄

Reviewer: dizzykaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2022 11:58 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

It'll be good interesting to see what happens with Angela and Ben when baby comes and if aro gets taken down so that everyone can be free

Reviewer: dizzykaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2022 9:22 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

I can't wait I am certainly going to have to start reading it all over to refresh it in my mind again 😉



Author's Response:

I'm going through all my story notes again. It's been so long 🤦🏽‍♀️

Reviewer: dizzykaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2022 9:22 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

I can't wait I am certainly going to have to start reading it all over to refresh it in my mind again 😉

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:41 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:41 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2022 1:57 PM Title: A Labor of Love

Loving it.  Emmett is a riot.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 5:50 PM Title: Quiet Storm

This is the sleaziest Carlisle ever but I can't help but love him. 

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2022 2:03 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

What a truly evil thing Tanya is

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2022 2:03 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

What a truly evil thing Tanya is

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2022 2:03 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

What a truly evil thing Tanya is

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2022 7:38 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires

I didn't realize this wasn't complete until I hit chapter 24. It's been 4 yrs. I kept seeing you say you will finish, but I'm kinda upset you gave up. I've read a few thousand fanfics and this is the most unique one ever!  I don't understand why you would not finish. I hope you do. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm sorry that I upset you. But I do agree with what you said   Life has been rough. But I will upload another chapter within the next couple days and another within a couple weeks. I'm determined to finish. :) 

Reviewer: alderjd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2022 7:25 PM Title: Quiet Storm

I've been looking all over for this story and it was well worth the work. I'm already hooked on this story.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 9:33 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

very good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2022 11:50 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

hot

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 12:53 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

great so far

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:44 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

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