Date: 05 Feb 2024 7:40 PM Title: The Late Late Show With Edward Cullen
Rose is such a cunt. She claims she's just trying to help Bella but Bella is an adult. Rose is coming across as an abusive, controlling spouse that's trying to isolate Bella. It makes the story very difficult to read or enjoy.
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This will forever be my favorite story. ’
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm
This will forever be my favorite story. ’
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Wonderful Story. Loved it.
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:35 AM Title: Outside the Box
You are a WONDERFUL writer. NEVER listen to the cyber trolls. They are TROLLS! You on the other hand are a QUEEN! I love you! Thank you so much for being brave and sharing your work with us. I feel privileged. I love ALL of your work.
Date: 28 Sep 2023 11:44 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Wonderful Story. Loved it.
Date: 28 Sep 2023 6:29 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Wonderful Story. Loved it.
Date: 25 Sep 2023 5:57 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
Again hilarious, scary, but hilarious. Loved it. And you'l probably be mad at me, but I've never seen more than a glimpse of Gray's Anatomy. :(
Date: 25 Sep 2023 4:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night
I thought this chapter was hilarious! I woke my husband up with my laughing out loud. I loved her reactions and they got even better when she took the meds. His proposal was just fine, (what does Carlisle know) and definitely so them. The only thing I'm wondering now is if as doctors they'll still remember that Antibiotics cause birth control to fail!?! Let's not remind them though.
Date: 30 Aug 2023 8:56 AM Title: The Story Of Us
OK love al even more now - he's a good guy. Not upset with Tanya, she's VERY hurt. She'll work it out. Hopefully James feels like crap and makes it up to her. And by the way, 5 years is WAY to short to be getting bored with his sex life. He's a douche nozzle.
Date: 30 Aug 2023 7:55 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Wow, I REALLY enjoyed that chapter way more than I anticipated. Getting to hear hisPOV was refreshing and it made me like him a lot more than I did. I mistook him for a creepy dude who was trying to steal Bella from Edward (even though I knew that could never happen), but now I see him as a really nice kid whom Edward and Bella could probably be friends with. I have to admit I'm VERY disappointed with James though. It's obvious that he still has feelings for Bella and always did and now he feels it's ok to cheat (even if it's an open relationship, it's fairly clearly defined) and if he'll cheat on his wife, who's to say he won't make another play for Bella, right? It's fair to assume so now. LOVE THIS STORY - can't wait for more and the next one. Good call on the name change too. This name has better 'attraction" than the name of the hospital where they work, especially since Bella only worked there for a couple of chapters.
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...
Thank you.
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...
Thank you.
Date: 20 Aug 2023 2:52 PM Title: Weather the Storm
"Keep my wife's name out your fucking mouth!" I stood from my seat.
Reading this line in 2023 is fucking comical🤣
Date: 10 Jul 2023 4:26 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Loved it
Date: 10 Jul 2023 3:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Loved it
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:54 PM Title: Weather the Storm
Of course, I really love every chapter you write, But I especially loved Bella, putting Esme and her place. I hope she tells Carlisle and Edward what she did, but I know that's not her personality.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:45 AM Title: Weather the Storm
I can't believe he'd tap that after Edward and Alec... Blech!!
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:04 AM Title: Weather the Storm
This time I'm reviewing your authors note at the beginning of this chapter.
Your story is GREAT, true to mob life (as far as we know) and your Edward is great just the way he is warts and all. Bella too! If people criticize you for what you write, they SHOULDN"T READ IT!!!!! It takes a lot of guts to make yourself vulnerable to criticism when you publish your words. You write your stories the way YOU SEE FIT!!! If someone don't like it they should stop reading and SHUT UP!! I hate thinking you as a writer are upset because some bigmouth doesn't like the water thing are being written. If they don't like it maybe they should give writing a story a try and see how they fair with the critics huh?
Just to let you know, YOU ARE DOING GREAT, WONDERFUL, STUPENDOUS!!! Love all of your work. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you that you are not doing it right. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE you!! I can't say it enough. Great work, even the scary, angsty parts.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 7:41 AM Title: Weather the Storm
I'm kinda worried about Esme plotting to kill Edward or Bella or both! She seems spoiled rotten and hellbent on getting what she wants and getting away with murder literally.
Date: 03 Jul 2023 2:33 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.
Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee!
I may be in shock!
Date: 02 Jul 2023 8:43 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.
Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee!
I may be in shock!
Date: 29 Jun 2023 9:44 PM Title: Weather the Storm
I can tell you this from reading hundreds and hundreds of these fanfiction stories. Us readers we don't mind a monster word count. I love the longer stories I always read them first. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:19 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 22 Jun 2023 11:17 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.
Date: 14 Jun 2023 8:47 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Two words... Amazingly insane! I absolutely LOVED it!
Date: 04 May 2023 12:12 AM Title: Shamrocks and Shaninnagans
Loved it
Date: 04 May 2023 12:01 AM Title: Shamrocks and Shaninnagans
Loved it
Date: 03 May 2023 11:09 PM Title: Shamrocks and Shaninnagans
Loved it
Date: 14 Mar 2023 11:22 AM Title: Weather the Storm
Not entirely sure why people were giving you such a tough time with this story (it's fucking stupid that they were so "offended" that they reported you but whatever)
I love it and I come back to your work like once a year. Maybe it's because I lived in Brooklyn for 10+ years and am from Jersey -- or maybe it's your writing style or maybe it's because I prefer this story over the original material *shrug* - I dont care - love your work and it hits a spot for me! Thanks so much.
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Feb 2023 11:28 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
This story is honestly amazing thank you for putting it out in the world
Date: 17 Dec 2022 7:44 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
nice updte
Date: 14 Nov 2022 12:48 PM Title: Behind The Images
did not play real hard tp get
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:34 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm
This dream was unbelievably grim but great
Date: 23 Oct 2022 10:19 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
Thanks for the update. Plus have really enjoyed re-Reading the story from the start. Enjoying it just as much second time around. :)
Date: 20 Oct 2022 10:25 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
Hi,
Still a massive fan of this story, please don't make us wait as long for the next chapter
Date: 11 Oct 2022 9:39 AM Title: To Have and To Hold
Thank you for sharing your story with your readers. I just finished rereading this fic and loved it as much as I did the first time I read it.
Sherry
Date: 11 Oct 2022 9:37 AM Title: To Have and To Hold
Thank you for sharing your story with your readers. I just finished rereading this fic and loved it as much as I did the first time I read it.
Sherry
Date: 08 Oct 2022 8:11 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
Me dancing because she finally updated 😩😩😩
Date: 24 Sep 2022 3:24 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
I hope Edward can help her
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:38 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:17 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:07 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 10 Sep 2022 4:52 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 09 Sep 2022 8:41 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 08 Sep 2022 7:22 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
It's so good to see this updated
Great writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Date: 07 Sep 2022 5:29 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
Hope to hear from you soon. I was so excited to see your post Thanks so much
Author's Response:
Almost finished with the next chapter. Thank you so much for your continued support =)
Date: 07 Sep 2022 4:24 AM Title: Sticks and Stones
Cute. Funny. A little too choppy and abbreviated for my tastes, but good overall.
Date: 05 Sep 2022 10:32 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 5:44 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading 😊
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:46 PM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:51 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:44 AM Title: The Story Of Us
Loved it!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 4:05 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
While it has been years I love that you haven’t given up on it and even if it means slow updates I would la till drop everything to read the updates.
I really hope The Cullens find her before something happens to her. She’s had enough shitty things happen to her to last a lifetime without adding an unwanted mating.
Author's Response:
Updates won't be too far apart. I'm determined to finish. I owe it to all that are still reading 😊 Thank you so much for your support!
Date: 05 Sep 2022 4:05 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
Oh bree. You deserve to die slowly and painfully along with James.
Welcome back!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your support ☺️
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
yay welcome back girly <3 <3 <3
Author's Response:
I am! Thank you so much for your support ☺️ ❤️
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
yay welcome back girly <3 <3 <3
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
yay welcome back girly <3 <3 <3
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:32 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
Wow! I am soooooo very thrilled and excited that you decided to write again! I love this story, and it always broke my heart when the months, then years, went by with no updates. Thank you for not giving up on this story, and for coming back! Great update, and now I'm seriously worried for our Bella! Can't wait to hear how Edward takes the news that his mate is missing!
Take care, stay safe and healthy
Ciao!
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much! I really appreciate your support =)
Date: 05 Sep 2022 2:56 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
Oh wow! Poor Bella. I'm hopeful she'll get out and be reunited with Edward, soon. If you'll still have me, I'll still beta for you!
Author's Response:
Hey! I missed you 😊 My email addy is vampgurl1331@gmail.com Email me since I don't have yours anymore. I'm still in Arizona and it's been a rough time lol. Trying to get back home to FL.
Date: 04 Sep 2022 11:58 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
It'll be good interesting to see what happens with Angela and Ben when baby comes and if aro gets taken down so that everyone can be free
Author's Response:
I'm actually interested myself lol. These characters all have a mind of their own. The story writes itself 😄
Date: 04 Sep 2022 11:58 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
It'll be good interesting to see what happens with Angela and Ben when baby comes and if aro gets taken down so that everyone can be free
Date: 04 Sep 2022 9:22 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
I can't wait I am certainly going to have to start reading it all over to refresh it in my mind again 😉
Author's Response:
I'm going through all my story notes again. It's been so long 🤦🏽♀️
Date: 04 Sep 2022 9:22 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
I can't wait I am certainly going to have to start reading it all over to refresh it in my mind again 😉
Date: 10 Jun 2022 1:57 PM Title: A Labor of Love
Loving it. Emmett is a riot.
Date: 25 May 2022 5:50 PM Title: Quiet Storm
This is the sleaziest Carlisle ever but I can't help but love him.
Date: 27 Mar 2022 2:03 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
What a truly evil thing Tanya is
Date: 27 Mar 2022 2:03 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
What a truly evil thing Tanya is
Date: 27 Mar 2022 2:03 PM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
What a truly evil thing Tanya is
Date: 21 Mar 2022 7:38 AM Title: Living Amongst Vampires
I didn't realize this wasn't complete until I hit chapter 24. It's been 4 yrs. I kept seeing you say you will finish, but I'm kinda upset you gave up. I've read a few thousand fanfics and this is the most unique one ever! I don't understand why you would not finish. I hope you do.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I'm sorry that I upset you. But I do agree with what you said Life has been rough. But I will upload another chapter within the next couple days and another within a couple weeks. I'm determined to finish. :)
Date: 08 Mar 2022 7:25 PM Title: Quiet Storm
I've been looking all over for this story and it was well worth the work. I'm already hooked on this story.
Date: 23 Jan 2022 9:33 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
very good
Date: 09 Jan 2022 11:50 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
hot
Date: 22 Dec 2021 12:53 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
great so far
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:44 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Awesome story! Thank you very much.