[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2020 8:37 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Oh my! This story needs to come with a warning: Do Not Drink Coffee while reading because your screen will be sprayed on during the reading of this story. I have laughed so hard and chocked on my coffee during my enjoyment of this story. Jason is a hoot! Thank you for your great writing.
Date: 22 Jul 2019 7:27 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Loved it!
Date: 22 Jul 2019 7:26 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Loved it!
Date: 23 Sep 2018 8:57 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Now, tis chapter made me cry. It explains a lot This needed to be shared and unburdened. An therapist needed to be able to hear and addres and help this suffering man understgand that none of this was his fault.Holy crap. That poor 15 year old boy. Thank you for making your readers see a whoe new dimension of Christgian. Great insight.
Date: 21 May 2018 10:07 PM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it going.
Date: 19 Sep 2016 3:18 AM Title: 50 Shades: More Unfinished and 6 years later
good story
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2016 5:12 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Its very repetitive the names I lost count hoe many times u used them
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2016 10:36 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Wonderful chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:32 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Third time I've read this story and it's still as funny as the first time I read! Absolute classic, brilliantly written! Thank you!!!
Date: 15 Dec 2015 2:51 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Great story telling, thanks.
Date: 23 Nov 2015 8:06 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Thanks for sharing this story.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:39 PM Title: 50 Shades: More Unfinished and 6 years later
Gotta say I really loved the story, it was great.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:07 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
great story
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:05 AM Title: 50 Shades: More Unfinished and 6 years later
great story
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2014 7:25 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS STORY, THANKS SO MUCH FOR SHARING, I'm being greedy but I STILL WANT MORE , ;-) but I guess it all great things has to end some time :-( sooo sad to see it end . But the good news is that I can now move on to yr other stories, again thanks a bunch for yr fab view of Taylor & Gail xo
10 STARS ALL THE WAY XO
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 9:13 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
I read your story on FanFiction but it is even better on this site reading it the second time around.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:26 AM Title: 50 Shades: More Unfinished and 6 years later
I do not think I have read this story !!! I am soooo excited!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2014 3:01 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Awe fantastic the best chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:01 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Oh surprises!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:58 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Loved the emails!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:51 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:45 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Reading again!!!!
Date: 22 May 2014 7:06 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
i cant believe what christian did
i cant believe that you could write something like this
when you love somebody you cant possibly do the thing tat you know will cause her the worst pain
personally i would never forgive him, because anna always told him that she wasnt enough, that he has special needs
and after 2 kids and 7 years together he decides to do this????????
i know i am angry on a book but the situation made me so mad .....
i would put him through hell and back for this and pay him with the same coin in order to feel what she felt
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 6:12 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
The Green Gealous Giant roars
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 3:04 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
So nice to see a plan well exicuted
Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:49 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Sneeky...sneeky Ana!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:46 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
Anna has learned some skills
Date: 20 Apr 2014 2:35 AM Title: 50 Shades: Unfinished
So sweet!
Date: 14 Apr 2014 8:51 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Brilliant ...reading this again for the 6th time and I think this song should be played ...LOVER ALTERBRIDGE x THANKS
Date: 13 Apr 2014 9:11 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
this chapter broke my heart.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2014 6:32 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
I wouldve told him to tell me wat i dont know because if he doesnt im going to think something worse than wat he has to tell me
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:07 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
complicated couple
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:00 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
must restock happy pills
Date: 29 Dec 2013 4:53 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
cool christians alive
Date: 14 Dec 2013 6:49 AM Title: 50 Shades: More Unfinished and 6 years later
I love the {skank of honor} bit, it was so funny.
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:53 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
christian is in the icu. ana must feel terrible
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:41 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
christian is a steam roller
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:37 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
the relationship isnt looking good
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:33 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
phone submission?
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:29 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
hidden subs
Date: 14 Dec 2013 4:16 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
space can be a good thing
Date: 14 Dec 2013 3:52 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
way to be firm with christian
Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:13 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
chrisian screwed up
Date: 08 Dec 2013 3:05 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
divorce coming?
Author's Response:
No divorce. Never. A few bumps in the road, but a HEA story.
Date: 08 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
interesting vibrater
Date: 05 Dec 2013 7:18 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
good little climber
Date: 05 Dec 2013 7:14 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
does she have depression or is anna pregnant
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:26 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I can't beliveve this story has come to an end!! U did an amazing job in writting this beauifully capivating story & thanks for all the time u investined in writing for u s ur avid readers!!! Thanks again!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2013 5:27 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I've loved every chapter of this story and I can cofess that I've never read 50 shades but loved MotU -your story had me reading some chapters side by side to see it from all sides-you have a real talent that I hope will take you far x Thank you xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2013 2:22 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
J'ai beaucoup aimé ce POV de Jason... même si lu avec Google translate!
Fleur50
Montréal, Québec
21:22
Date: 23 Nov 2013 2:22 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
This was such a great story. You really did an amazing job with it! Thanks so much for sharing with us and sorry I didn't always review. Congrats on your upcoming publication. Wishing you success!
Date: 23 Nov 2013 2:04 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Thank you! You've made me laugh, cry and be shocked! Well done.
My favorite line this chapter... "every potential problem from Ana feeling unwell, to some sort of apocalyptic future where Seattle is plunged into darkness, hospitals are without power, and flesh-eating zombies stalk the streets. ". I was giggling mindlessly before my first cup of coffee this morning.
Date: 23 Nov 2013 1:19 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I really enjoyed your story. Wonderful ending.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2013 9:49 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Have enjoyed following this story, a well written alternative view. Thank you for completing.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2013 8:51 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
That was so very good. TY, it was wonderfully written!
Date: 23 Nov 2013 7:56 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I got 4 alerts for chap. 40. TWCS must have problems.
This said the chapter was good. You know I am not particularly drawn to Taylor, but I loved the side glimpses of Ana and Christian I got.
Are you continuing the other side stories? I hope so.
Author's Response:
Yes, sorry about the multiple alerts - the site kept telling me it wasn't loading. Grr! Yes, I'll be getting back to the other stories now. Thanks for staying with me, Camilla : ) jx
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2013 7:54 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
This is such a beautifully breathtaking story!! It truely leaves me captivated sitting on the edge of my seat!!! This story truely leaves me most assuredly intriguied leaving most definatly impatienly awaiting the next update so I can begin reading these amazing flowing words to once again appear on these pages again!!! I give this a 10 star rating!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for that! I really appreciate it. Hope you enjoy the end of the journey, too : ) jx
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 2:19 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
wow!
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon! jx
Date: 19 Oct 2013 8:09 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
:)
Author's Response:
Love that you're smiling : ) jx
Date: 19 Oct 2013 4:00 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
I knew what was coming and still I was on he edge of my seat. Loved it!
Author's Response:
That is the best THE BEST comment! Thank you!!! jx
Date: 19 Oct 2013 7:51 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
This was a great, great chapter. It is good to learn that Christian (and Taylor) realized quite soo that Ana was acting under duresse. And, btw, I have just discovered TheGame of Thrones, my son gave me a memory stick with the first 3 seasons. I have bought the books, so Ican know what happen next. It is not -for-kids fantasy, not YA, thanks God.
Author's Response:
Oooh! You have a treat in store. It was just something I imagined Barney watching : ) jx
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:05 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
So nice .....it all started here x
Date: 09 Oct 2013 2:03 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
good times .......
Date: 09 Oct 2013 7:51 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Awwwwwwwww xxxx
Date: 09 Oct 2013 7:32 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
I love the new Ana and I love the way Christian noticed all the attention she got xx
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:00 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Brilliant chapter ...loved it x
Date: 08 Oct 2013 9:01 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Go Ana xxxx
Date: 08 Oct 2013 8:28 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Excellent chapter ...who knows maybe in the future Ana may find the contract between Amy and Christian......just thinking xx
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:07 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Well he should have kept his torn trousers for Ana .....asswhole
Date: 08 Oct 2013 4:13 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Reading for 3rd time . I think it's always good to re-read a story , you miss so much cause I'm so excited I miss the tiny detail lol xxxxx
Date: 05 Oct 2013 2:35 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
I thought my heart was going to pop out seriously ....I thought it was happening to me ........Christian is an ass wipe x
Author's Response:
Hang in there. It gets a lot better. they have a great love going on.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:50 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Yikes! I like to think that he would have stepped in had Christian been to drunk to use good judgement... I'm glad he didn't have to. This next chapter should be a doozy...
Author's Response:
Sorry I'm only replying to this now! Hope you've enjoyed the ride : ) jx
Date: 26 Sep 2013 6:29 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Excellent update. It is interesting that although I know what happens next from Ana's POV the story still seems fresh when it comes from Taylor. You should be applauded for that.You might want to go back and change the name of the beauty salon where Mrs. Lincoln works and manages...you call it Escala (their home).
Author's Response:
Rats! I HATE making mistakes like that! Noted - thank you ! jx
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:50 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Super end .....especially the meeting with Flynn xxxxx
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:29 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
I like when you fill in the blanks about the subs. Brilliant x
Date: 26 Sep 2013 12:21 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Holding onto my hat! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! jx
Date: 25 Sep 2013 3:50 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:59 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
No sex but it's the lying...
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:43 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Bummer
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:21 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Please don't be cheating cristian!
Date: 20 Sep 2013 9:13 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Awe Cristian as a daddy I love it!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Great he's still an a$$ to Ana :(!
Date: 11 Sep 2013 2:53 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Amazing what goes on behind the scene. His POV is so interesting.
Date: 11 Sep 2013 12:28 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Thanks for the update. Enjoyed it as always
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2013 9:57 PM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Omg this was good. Your humor is so spot on can't wait to see who they cast in the role of T for the Fifty Shades movie!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2013 5:28 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Love it!!! Would like to see where Taylor and Gails story plays out!!!
Author's Response:
You will : ) jx
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2013 1:26 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Magnifique!
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2013 12:48 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
wow!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:15 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Never a dull moment in the Grey household, poor Taylor never catches a break.
Author's Response:
Nah! He definitely needs a pay rise! jx
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2013 3:26 AM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Tring to submit review for whole story.
Nuwriter, this is chewy, yummy, worth reading beyond all the lemons. In the begining I was leaving review for each chapter. The words breathed MOREinto each character. I could not pause. I felt I may miss something. Silly hugh?! The sex, passion, absolute primal needs, and love obtains massive erotic frequencies. Wet, needy, breathless....
Author's Response:
Wow. Thanks. Glad you are enjoying it. You've got a lot more to go. The ride is just beginnng.
E.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 7:51 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Very piqued!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 7:39 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Drawn to the positive aspects of sorting out a complication. I had not thought of how strong Christians details to micromanage would effect a non BSDM relationship.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 6:35 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Seems Ana may be missing THE Play Room?
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2013 6:26 PM Title: Fifty Shades....More
Ok.. Im hung up on why she cryin. I hope Christian isnt abusing her
Date: 23 Jul 2013 3:20 AM Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor
Great job! Intense at the end!