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Reviewer: heidisledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2023 6:33 AM Title: Be My Sub

Thank you for this, I have binged it all the way through. I'm sorry I didn't review as I was reading, but I assumed you would not receive reviews after having written this so long ago. 

We are years later... will you ever finish or are you too angered by non-reviewers?!

Thanks again,

Heidi

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2022 2:26 AM Title: The Mating Connection

Love love your stories .....

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2022 2:26 AM Title: The Mating Connection

Love love your stories .....

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2022 1:57 PM Title: A Labor of Love

Loving it.  Emmett is a riot.

Reviewer: Lapse In Judgement Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2022 6:12 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Wow, that story was intense to say the least! What a rollercoaster!

If you are still active, I have a couple of questions. I hope that's okay :)

1) Who is this "Bree" that killed James? Is it her sister impersonating her?

2) What happened to Aro after all?

Thanks in advance!

Reviewer: Lapse In Judgement Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2022 6:12 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Wow, that story was intense to say the least! What a rollercoaster!

If you are still active, I have a couple of questions. I hope that's okay :)

1) Who is this "Bree" that killed James? Is it her sister impersonating her?

2) What happened to Aro after all?

Thanks in advance!

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:13 AM Title: My Master of Darkness

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:13 AM Title: My Master of Darkness

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:12 AM Title: My Master of Darkness

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2022 6:12 AM Title: My Master of Darkness

I'm already interested..

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:16 AM Title: The Mating Connection

I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:16 AM Title: The Mating Connection

I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2022 3:15 AM Title: The Mating Connection

I have always loved this story, so very glad to find it on here, thank you for sharing your creativity!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2021 1:02 AM Title: The Mating Connection

good finish for Charlie

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: The Mating Connection

very nice

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2021 12:33 PM Title: The Mating Connection

very nice

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2021 12:00 AM Title: The Mating Connection

If you truly love someone you choose them because ultimately parents die and leave you

 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2021 1:36 PM Title: The Mating Connection

I love this edward

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 11:33 PM Title: The Mating Connection

me too

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: The Mating Connection

some nice subtle changes from the original

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 9:41 PM Title: The Mating Connection

some nice subtle changes from the original

Reviewer: peachtreegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 6:56 PM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Just re-read this from the beginning. It's definitely one that you can't stop reading, even though because of the graphic nature, you may want too. I do absolutely love this fic.

Now that James is dead (by Piper I fiction. pretty sure : sidenote- can't wait to see what she did to Peter and his wife from her POV! And what she has done to Aro) and the babies are here, I can't wait to see what happens next. To see how the disgusting house of cards of all those involved in that heinous way of life falls down. I hope that you will update this soon. I will be patiently awaiting. 

peach

 

Reviewer: kinnik Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 9:08 PM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Ah, so it must have been Bree's sister, though how she would know any of what had happened on the island is unclear. I suppose we'll find out.

Reviewer: kinnik Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 9:07 PM Title: Involuntary Rapture

I'm really loving this!!!

 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2020 11:37 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Of course they are Edward.. The had like several fucks sessions before also doing it on the fake wedding night. ALL where he creampied her

So really, his cum has 2 days to settle in a ovulating woman so really it shouldn't be a suprise. 

Reviewer: LolaYaKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2020 8:48 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

I feel like this plot of Edward not being with Bella cause of flimsy reasons is asisine, why they aren't together is so flimsy I'm surprised you can make a story out of it...

Reviewer: WIX Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2020 8:54 PM Title: Lucky Shot

This whole story was fantastic.  I loved it all .  Very funny and super cute.  Loved how everyone had a sharp wit.  Such a fun story.  I do not see a single reason why this one had to be removed from FF for TOS violations.  They never even had sex in here at all.  Well, no sex scenes.  You implied they had sex because of the three children that were born.  So very much enjoyed reading this.  Thank you for sharing your imagination with us here.  ~ChristyWIX

Reviewer: WIX Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2020 7:45 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Glad you are here to read this, since you removed it from FF.  Intriguing start.  I like Mrs. Cullen and her attitude towards the town gossips.  

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2020 2:53 PM Title: Wild Child

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 10:14 PM Title: The Western

Aww please update this story soon.  It is so wonderful!

Reviewer: Bellnedward0 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2020 10:14 PM Title: The Western

Aww please update this story soon.  It is so wonderful!

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2019 3:02 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Like mother like daughter!  Gossips

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2019 3:01 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Gossipy small town.  Wonder where we are going. Good luck, Esme with controlling that nosy gal.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2019 3:00 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Gossipy small town.  Wonder where we are going. Good luck, Esme with controlling that nosy gal.

Reviewer: Patriciadiane Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2019 3:00 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Gossipy small town.  Wonder where we are going. Good luck, Esme with controlling that nosy gal.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2019 2:11 PM Title: Involuntary Rapture

So good

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 10:38 AM Title: Love Life Family

Loved it! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 10:14 AM Title: Love Life Family

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2018 1:26 PM Title: Be My Sub

oh please update soon! I need to know what happens next! I've loved this story so far....please, please, please update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2018 7:32 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

James got off waaaaaayyyyyyy too easy! 🤬

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2018 5:15 AM Title: A Little Retribution

You would think that even a drunk person would wake up from the pain of getting a tatoo THERE.    LOL     That was pretty good revenge though.   hehehehe

Reviewer: kfoll Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2018 6:17 PM Title: A Labor of Love

90 hours a week away from his kids? When the hell does he see them? They’re four, he must seem the at Weekends only, unless he’s working then too.

All these women dying in childbirth. Is USA a third world country?

Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 6:28 AM Title: A Labor of Love

Loved readingthis storyline. Thank you for sharing your talents with us

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2018 3:44 AM Title: I Do but not Today

Edward pulled a Rachel & Ross.

Trust is very hard to get back.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2018 3:25 AM Title: I Do but not Today

Crazy Town!

Reviewer: Mariel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2018 10:15 PM Title: Be My Sub

I have loved this story wish you would finish it thank you

Reviewer: Bimini2327 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2017 5:48 AM Title: A Labor of Love

Love

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 5:59 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Oh boy....the old man is creepier and more insane than I'd thought! Lol

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:41 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

I wonder why he's not worried about Bella at this point...

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:41 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

I wonder why he's not worried about Bella at this point...

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:23 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

I hope it wasn't Edward who had broken ribs.. He needs to save Bella!

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:23 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

I hope it wasn't Edward who had broken ribs.. He needs to save Bella!

Reviewer: elenalena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:15 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Wow. exciting!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 1:44 AM Title: The Family Business

Thanks...I was right...too short.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2017 1:40 AM Title: The Family Business

Why doesn't Bella, pretty much any Bella in fandom, say that she won't marry Jacob?  Edward is not the issue.  She will never marry Jacob.

So the money stays with her.

Late to this story, but I am thoroughly enjoying it, though I suspect it is too short for me now that I've sampled it.

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2016 9:07 PM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Why leave rose & em?

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2016 8:57 PM Title: Involuntary Rapture

Drugged? I was suspicious over pilot. Mary Alice somehow gonna pop up too?

Reviewer: wolfpack15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 9:13 PM Title: My Master of Darkness

loved it

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2016 6:07 PM Title: Hardtail Curve

AWESOME!!! 2fer ;) thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:15 AM Title: The Western

Yes! No annoying Alice!!!!  I realy like this story and problably the best writing on the naughty this they did ever!!!mwell done

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 11:01 AM Title: I Do but not Today

It seems that they both have "crazy" in their families.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2016 10:24 AM Title: I Do but not Today

2-26-2016

I read this a while ago and enjoyed it so much. I've been looking like crazy for again. I couldn't remember author or title. I lucked out while scrolling through rbsschess's favorites and found it.

 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 12:57 AM Title: Wild Child

Poor Bella!  Thank God Edward finally figured it out!  Now, to get to explain everything to Bella!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 7:34 PM Title: Wild Child

I can't believe Edward is even considering Jane's proposal!  He needs to get his head out of his ass!  And of course their conversation would be interrupted. Wonder how long it will take Edward to figure out what Jane is up to?!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 3:35 PM Title: Wild Child

Good riddance to Tanya!!  Love the build up between Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: we wants the redhead Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:07 AM Title: Be My Sub

Please tell me you plan on finishing this!?!

Reviewer: we wants the redhead Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 8:06 AM Title: Be My Sub

Please tell me you plan on finishing this!?!

Reviewer: RainbowCupcakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 9:01 AM Title: Involuntary Rapture

So I read this story a few years ago (I think) as it was being updated, but then things happened in RL and I never got to finish it, there were certain parts I remembered though but other things like Jasper and Alice.... (I don't want to give anything away for ppl who just started reading the story and are reading reviews) well it was about the middle of the story. Anyways, I was so into the story that I didn't realize I had read the entire thing and that it's now 5:30am..oops

Needless to say, this story was by far one of my top stories to read! I was following you on ff.net until it got removed then started reading it on here, eventually posting my own stories on here! 

I'm actually reading another one of your stories which was how I remembered to finish reading this one :) 

I know there was a HEA but is the story really completed? I kinda hope not, I love this story too much to let it go! 

Waiting patiently for you to update, 

Your faithful reader,  

Mady xx

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:36 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Loved this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !  This was just too funny. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:33 AM Title: Lucky Shot

How long after the baby and wedding was this? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:30 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:29 AM Title: Lucky Shot

I like skinny dipping! !!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:05 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Definitely different 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 2:02 AM Title: Lucky Shot

This Bella and Edward are different. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:55 AM Title: Lucky Shot

You moved this story along. Moving on. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:48 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol. This is just to funny. He got shot again. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:45 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:42 AM Title: Lucky Shot

They did not use any. Lol!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:35 AM Title: Lucky Shot

The deed is done. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:21 AM Title: Lucky Shot

They finally get going and now they can't stop. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:16 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 1:12 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Bella is horny! !!!!!!!! Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2015 12:50 AM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol. I have a kid too that corrects the teachers. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 11:08 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Finally! ! ! !  She gives in.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 10:51 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Love how they aggravate each other.  They are really having fun. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 10:44 PM Title: Lucky Shot

They like playing with each other.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 10:37 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol. Little Matthew is too cute.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 10:00 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol!!!!!! To funny!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 9:46 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Wow, people in this town are real forward and blunt. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 9:32 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol. The old women are too funny. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:59 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Ok, I'm a little confused.  Edward helped the guys with the grilling.  I thought they were at a bar not someone's house.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:56 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:53 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Love Emmet. How many kids do Emmett and Rose have? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 8:20 PM Title: Lucky Shot

The bar sounds like a lot of fun 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 7:35 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Where is here

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 7:25 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Ok, let me see if I have this right. Bella had sex with her gay best friend.  He is the daddy to both of her kids. Is that right??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:53 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Horses and orders......what does Bella do? Where is it they are living where it is so hot?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:47 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Poor Alice. I can just feel how disappointed she is. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:43 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Lol. Looks like Alice and Bella have become good friends. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2015 6:40 PM Title: Lucky Shot

Too funny 

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