Date: 14 Jan 2018 12:18 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
Two lost and damaged souls. For these two, communication is the key if they are to build any kind of relationship. Bella really should explain more to Edward about her feelings regarding their previous arrangement, the good and the bad part because she enjoyed being dominated. Please update soon and let us know how these two are getting on.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 1:19 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
Why does Bella continues to call that dreadful mother of hers is absolutely beyond me. Its obvious that she doesn't want anything to do with her for whatever reason. She keeps calling her and depressing herself. And Kate need to mind her own business, because she gave Bella a job does not equate to her dictating how she should live her life; or whom to associate with.
Date: 13 Jan 2018 9:12 AM Title: Fold Your Wings
They need to talk, l mean serious talk, the type that takes a whole day. Bella's indecisiveness is infuriating sometimes. Make your mind girl up and stick to it and stop messing each other up. We really need to hear from deranged Edward.
Date: 12 Jan 2018 5:30 PM Title: Fold Your Wings
I really don't understand this Bella. She needs to grow some back bone, for sure life hasn't been easy for her but still. Its bad enough she is tolerating sadistic Edward due to need, but she appears gibberish and gullible all the time.
Date: 07 Oct 2016 6:36 PM Title: The Lucky Ones
I'm so in love with this story. I haven't felt that feeling of... I don't know how to explain it other than hope, hope for love, and hope to succeed. And you wrapped that all In 48 chapters. Amazing job.
Thank you so much.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 12:39 PM Title: The Lucky Ones
I don't usually like boxing and actually refuse to watch it, having said that, I really loved both of these stories! You did a wonderful job educating the uneducated about this sport and making it enjoyable to learn about at the same time. I love ur stories. Keep up the good work!
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:08 AM Title: Where Love Began
What a beautifully written chapter. As a mother that lost a daughter at 38 weeks, I can say that you captured the emotion perfectly and honestly. Grief and anguish doesn't begin to describe what you go through at a time like that. Thank you for your beautiful words.
Date: 11 Aug 2016 7:36 PM Title: The Lucky Ones
Now that you have finished this story will you work on your other stories like The Wife...I really miss that one.
That's the plan, but I'm not promising regular updates or anything. I've got a lot going on and I won't put that kind of stress on myself again.
Date: 29 Jul 2016 10:44 PM Title: Where Love Began
Loving the story, praying he does not rape her but even more fearful he will shoot her. The Swat Team is going to have to go in there and take him out. At this point I want him dead, not only for the abusing of Bella and the threats and scaring of the children in that classroom, but somewhere there is a little boy who has been abused for God knows how long and which it sounds like his mother has been murder by this asshat. He does not need to go back to his father. He needs some happiness in his life, I doubt he has ever known true happiness. I am just hoping Edward will not enlist to go with the team to rescue her but I know he will. God help him on what he finds.
i could not chose two children to stay with me, I would have to be like Bella and offer myself to let him let the children go. Such sweet children who offered to stay with her. She knew that the kids had to leave, but I am guessing that the stress is going to make Angela go into premature labor. If for some reason they get the asshole as a prisoner, that he does not die than I hope he will be charged with endangerment to the children and the child in Angela. Ben will want to help Edward kill this bastard! The nightmares these two women and the children will have.
so I wonder how long it will take before Edward, Emmett and Jasper's parents show their sorry ass's up. You know they will want to help but they will want to be in front of the camera and reporter saying how they will help their son and daughter in law get over this tragic event!!! Excuse me while I go into the bathroom so I can go throw up! Those two sorry son of a bitch's can go and get in line to find a good seat in the bowels of hell!
Date: 10 May 2016 11:58 AM Title: The Lucky Ones
i;m so glad i began reading this sequel i've enjoyed it ;) btw ben wasn't mentioned in the last couple of chapters? also i thought embry was gay? it was mentioned that he was talking about some girls he liked? looking forward to the rest ;D
Date: 09 Feb 2016 7:16 AM Title: The Lucky Ones
Hi! Thank you so much for sharing your stories with us. I really love this one and fighting for love. I cant wait until this one updates. Really looking forward to it. :) I hope you are doing ok. I saw a few of your authors notes saying you were having some health issues. I hope they are under control or doing better. And Happy new year!
Date: 23 Dec 2015 8:55 PM Title: The Lucky Ones
Hey, don't sweat it! I'm just greateful you didn't flounce off into the sunset after all the persecution you've suffered on FFN. It also sucks that we can't contact authors on here, but I guess that's the spammers fault!! :-(
Date: 23 May 2015 5:50 AM Title: Where Love Began
This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read and it isn't over yet!!! I have never read a more evil Esme!!! Why are her and Carlisle like they are?? Esme sounds like she is an alcoholic and she wants everyone as miserable as she is. To treat all her children as she does. It will be a miracle if all she does is lose them. I worry for Bella, Jasper and Rosealie, if all the kids have ever seen their parents like they are, then how the hell are they going to treat the people they have chosen to love and be with for the rest of their lives? Kids learn for words and actions and their parents seem to be the worse case of parents I have ever read!!! I fell sorry for them. Well on with the story.