Date: 26 Jul 2017 4:13 AM Title: The Practice of Love
Oh poor Emmett. Grew up wiwith two loving parents (wealth)with no death, abuse, neglect or homelessness or stage III cancer. By all means let's celebrate you as the victim. Jesus he and Rosalie deserve each other. Bravo Pixie way to serve up the truth. I'm so glad Bella called I hope Lil Bell forgives her Ewoord.so freaking cute!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 7:23 PM Title: The Practice of Love
Surprise surprise Rosalie is a judgemental bitch and it took Alice way to long to defend him and she did it lamely and can she disappear instead of Jake? Also hello Bella you are damaged too dear. Shit we all are right. Again love lil bell!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:48 PM Title: The Practice of Love
So much to say: first Carlisle is shit sorry who abandones their twin sisters only child after she dies. You don't see bruises so that's your excuse! A 7 year old is good at hiding things? You're a family doctor FFS you know the signs. Rosalie is just as annoying as ever. It's so rare I tolerate her anway. I love Jasper in this story so far. Edward and Bella are two broken halves of a whole who settled in life to feel something...anything. So Jake and Tanya poof be gone! And more lil bell she is he sweetest! Good writing!
Date: 04 Mar 2016 10:04 PM Title: Virgins & Villains
what is the difference between Mike touching her and edward....and she is judging Edward by what is said in tabloids..First mistake if she is a writer, she would know you don't believe what you see and hear without it coming from the mans mouth....She has him pegged as a man whore when he could be the opposite of that.
Date: 23 Jul 2015 12:26 PM Title: To Have and To Hold
loved the story...
would have enjoyed a little more of the downgrading of
rose and more publically....but that is only my
evilness shining through...
i love that you finish all of your great stories instead of
leaving the readers hanging
wished more/all of the fanfic authors were like you.
thank you ~ keep up the great work!
Date: 17 Jan 2015 12:12 AM Title: Virgins & Villains
So we are on chapter 30 and I really do love this story but I guess I am a trollop just like Bella and I really hope the NC-17 rating starts to kick in soon, I love the romantic parts but I love the sexy raunchy parts even more! bring on the NC-17!! :^)
Date: 03 Jan 2015 6:56 AM Title: The Breakers
Fabulous Valentine weekend complete with amazing sex! Peyton's special valentine from Brody was adorable, but I understand how it made Bella and Edward feel, too! With him moving in, life is good, but I'm curious about him going out on the boat again. If that doesn't happen, what will he do?
Date: 03 Jan 2015 3:41 AM Title: The Breakers
That was rather gut-wtrenching for all concerned! Boy, am I glad that Bud shot Aleksei and he can't hurt anyone any more! Bless Charlie's heart, that scared hell out of him, for both Bella and Edward! I hope the relief outweighs the guilt for Edward, it wasn't his fault Aleksei was wrong in the head, thinking his miserable life was Edward's doing!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 12:45 AM Title: The Breakers
This is going south in one big hurry! After all this time, for that piece of crap to reappear in Edward's life is the most horrifying thing! It's bad enough Aleksei murdered Wayne, now he's about to do something awful to Edward and Bella! I don't like this one little bit!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 11:27 PM Title: The Breakers
Loved the Christmas gifts, especially Brady! I felt a cold chill, however, when I read about the cold, calculating eyes of Bella's visitor! No doubt in my mind that somehoe, Alexsei has found where Edward is and has come to cause trouble. That warning about what can happen wasn't spoken by accident!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 8:41 AM Title: The Breakers
Oh yes, Edward is going to have a most excited little girl on Christmas, Peyton will love a puppy, especially one from her best friend! Can't wait to see how that goes! Now we have to see how going back on the boat affects everyone!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:28 AM Title: The Breakers
Thank heaven they got him out of the icy water in time! God bless Jasper's roping skills, they most likely saved the day! Frankly, this chapter made me cry, several times! I was almost as glad as Bella when Edward opened his eyes and spoke!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 4:53 AM Title: The Breakers
What the hell, if they were saints, they both would wear halos, right? There are bound to be bumps in the road and bad days, but love and family will get them through. As for Tricia being that hateful, some people just can't help the poison in their hearts from leaking out! Bella told her what was what, anyway!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 1:27 AM Title: The Breakers
Edward may be Peyton's best friend, but she can manipulate all the mwn in her life, not to mention most of the women! It was cuter than all get out when she got his phone and asked her mom if Edward could spend the night, and the comment about him being her dad if he married her mom was perfect Peyton!
Date: 01 Jan 2015 12:08 AM Title: The Breakers
Things are going along swimmingly indeed! They both are smart to try and take it slow, not rush things along! You can kinf of tell they would like to hurry just a bit, and be together all the time. I can see it happening soon. Emmett is slowly being forgiven, even by himself, and Peyton, of course is wonderful!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:12 PM Title: The Breakers
Though it was a scary thing to confess to a seven year old, Edward should have just trusted what Bella told him! Peyton is a truly amazing child, like a gift from God, just meant to help Edward! Boy, do I love this story!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:07 AM Title: The Breakers
That was nearly overpowering! They are so good together, just as I suspected they would be! That was a sad story about Evan and her, but look what it produced, Peyton! If this chapter had background music, it would have to be Etta James, singing, At Last!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:21 AM Title: The Breakers
Poor Emmett, he just did what a lot of people do when they hear that word, prison. Too bad he didn't hear everything so he could judge fairly. Well, Rose will straighten him out, but good! I can just picture Bella running to the docks and Edward catching sight of him, and then them embracing each other tightly!Whooee!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:58 AM Title: The Breakers
Truly, life is what happens while you make plans. That sure wasn't the way he wanted to tell her about his past. Naturally he has put the worst possible spin on her words, but that's probably the low selfesteem talking. The guy sure doesn't cut himself any slack.
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:16 AM Title: The Breakers
This was tough for Bella and I'm thinking the next chapter is going to be worse! It's time to suck it up and bare all, I'm thinking! At least Xavier and Bella have made peace which should help. Her mom really laid it on the line about Edward being a fisherman. Sounds like a tough life and a dangerous one!
Date: 31 Dec 2014 4:42 AM Title: The Breakers
Xavier is going to cut his own throat if he keeps on at Bella like that! I think Edward did the right thing, telling him to take it up with him and not Bella! This was a great chapter, especially them making out in the parking lot like a pair of teenagers!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 9:21 AM Title: The Breakers
It's so easy to see why Edward loves Peyton, and I guess she sees him clearly so returns the sentiment. They are quite the pair. He and Bella are doing a lot better, too, for her to invite him to Sunday dinner. Now he just has to survive telling Bella about his past!
Date: 30 Dec 2014 8:36 AM Title: The Breakers
Evan must be Peyton's father, and from Bella's nightmare, he must be dead. I'm hoping you elaborate on that story later on. It sounds like Edward is fitting in and doing okay learning his new job and is at least friendly with Bella now. It was kind of obvious that they needed to at least be civil.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:41 AM Title: The Breakers
Instant attraction, mixed with fight or flight! Must be hard on the nerves to feel that way! Bella and Edward are both hiding things from their past that will probably need talking over in the near future. Can't wait to hear Xavier's history with Peyton and Bella, why they are so close.
Date: 30 Dec 2014 12:34 AM Title: The Breakers
Really curious as to why he spent seven years in prison for something he supposedly didn't do. There has to be a hell of a story there, I'll bet! His lawyer is guilty for not getting him a better deal and now thw parole officer hands him a hundred grand! From where comes that kind of money?