Date: 09 Feb 2018 4:34 PM Title: The Corruption of Esme Cullen
Yeah someone actually knows about stds. In this day and age that is very surprising. Everyone has sex like they change their underwear. They took something that is beautiful something two people who care and or love each other to show that love and made it disgusting with there have sex with as many people as you can. I know I sound old fashioned but that is the way i see this younger generation. My grandma taught me sex is for people to show there love. Also she taught me that if you dress like a slut you will be treated like a slut. She did not use those extract words but that was what she ment.
Date: 15 Jan 2018 10:46 AM Title: Second Chances
Hmmm, take it from me, there is only one water when you give birth to twins. I even had boy/girl twins and the girl was born first! Emmet is in the absolute clear. Your water breaks, and you are in labor, the first twin arrives and you continue in labor until the second twin arrives. Now, my second twin arrived 8 minutes after the first. My mother's second twin arrived 12 minutes after the first. My grandmother's second twin arrived 23 minutes after the first. Honestly? I suspect the decreased time is down to the fact that the mother has gotten a bit bigger with each generation. My grandmother was 5', my mother is 5' 2", and I am 5' 4". My daughter is only 5', the same size as my grandmother, so it will be interesting to see how long it takes for her second twin to arrive. She is only 18 right now, no where near to getting pregnant. Odds are she will give birth to fraternal twins though. When I was 18, a doctor told me I was 40,000 times more likely to have twins than another person. Sure enough, I was in maternity clothes at 6 weeks but I had some complications, my twins were delivered at only 28 weeks. I hope my baby's babies stay put longer than 28 weeks! They were only 2 lbs 7oz and 2 lbs 14oz, so they were a bit on the tiny side. I hope she has a much calmer time than I did. Just FYI.
Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:23 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
Something about your story caught my eye. I don't usually enjoys stories that are so different than the original book. I am glad that I did start reading this one, as it is very enjoyable. I love the way you write Bella and Alice. I hope Angela and Emmett are both allowed to accompany Bella to England.
Date: 19 Oct 2017 12:38 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Excellent chapter. I reckon it's Charlie. Glad Emmett and Edward are trying to make their relationship work. Thanks Really having a hard time trying to get my reviews through to you. Just the reviews. Nothing else. :(. ???
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:13 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Well I'm gonna be one of those backing Bella up. I'm beggining to think Edward would be best alone; he's so emtionally stunted he keeps making a worse mess of things everytime he opens his mouth. Bella doesn't deserve that. I just wish Trevor wasn't a bad guy so Bella cukd have a healthy relationship for once.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Oh, for Christ sake! He was being such a dick and then lays the horrible truth on her like that ugh! I wouldn't care if Maggie had turned out to be fucking mother Theresa, what he did was so wrong, I can't even with him. I'm actually in love with this Bella and her reactions, just until this last bit; he totally deserved a lot more groveling. I hate love triangles but I actually found myself liking this Trevor guy. Oh well...
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I think it's really sexist to think of Edward's fucking up, as some quirk he has that Bella just has to continue to forgive. Hell no! Like WTF? Either he grows up, mans up and stops pissing all over things or it is over. Bella does not deserve going after a loser like that. If the name of the character wasn't Edward, it would be much encorage for her to leave him behind. He really needs to step up his game already.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:19 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I'm really digging the story but I kinda hate this Edward. I don't get what he's hoping to accomplish by "explaining" anything to Bella. If it were me I would be royally pissed off either way. So he thinks is not as bad cuz he was trying to date the dotard bimbo? That to me is an even worse betrayal; so he goes and kisses her and then thinks it's an excelent idea to try a serious relationship with another woman? What kind of f-up logic is that? If the roles were reverse this kind of situation would be unforgivable and I hope she makes him freaking crawl for redemption because otherwise I'm gonna lose respect for her.