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Date: 11 Jan 2023 7:15 AM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 2:36 PM Title: Human Elemental

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Date: 14 May 2016 5:34 AM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Very well done.  Excellent

Reviewer: Dutchess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 10:52 PM Title: Human Elemental

I am so glad I found your story complete. Your had me from the beginning to the end.  I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing. Only one thing left to say, "Well written, well done"

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 5:06 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

while reading this it seemed like there were some missing chapters.  Especially between chapters 14 and 15.  Thanks,

Xanath

Reviewer: lyssmcgrath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2014 10:41 AM Title: Human Elemental

One of my favorite stories and I am gonna read it again!

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 2:52 PM Title: Human Elemental

Loved it all. Meg

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 7:52 AM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Fantastic Serie! Althought...where is Esme? She was being held by the Volturi.... I guess this was on the missing chapter, perhaps?

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 7:18 AM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Zafrina, Peter and Jasper are going to be in trouble when the fight is over...putting Bella in a ilusion....tsk tsk tsk... I get why the did it but Bella ain't ganna be happy about that.

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 6:56 AM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

ummm... is there a missing chapter between 14 and this one?

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Date: 30 May 2013 11:32 PM Title: Human Elemental

holy fucking migget on a stick!

Reviewer: BAGHERRA Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 5:25 PM Title: Human Elemental

J'ADORE MERCI

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 5:13 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Great loved it

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:37 AM Title: Human Elemental

Great loved it

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:17 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Not sure bit it seems like there is a chapter missing between 14 and 15, but otherwise this story is great.

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:41 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

So now Carlisle goes around trying to recruit others?? Hope many like the Irish coven will refuse and get away...good thing Fynn was there to save them or they'd be dead by now and Bella wouldn't have the werewolf allies...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:34 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

These boys always teasing each other and 'causing trouble... ^^

Poor Bella...She has so much to shoulder...I hope the news of their new allies among the werewolves will help her keep her sanity...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:22 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Bella's house get's destroyed quite a lot...at least this time she destroyed it herself ^^

 

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Oh these good for nothing Volturi fuckers...attemting to hurt little Tia and raping Henri...they deserved the torture and pain they got and more...so pissed at them...but this was the final straw, they won't know what hit them when Bella goes in for the kill...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Oh, this little family time was really sweet!! Bet they needed this after all the stress of the last few days and all the stress that is heading their way...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:19 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Ohhh, Jasper is pissed and rightfully so...they just assumed Carlisle and Esme got killed but didn't make sure...understandable in the heat of the moment after their last battle but a grave mistake nonetheless...So he really dismembered Esme...how could he do that??

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:17 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Wow, can't believe Carlisle actually got away alive without anyone ever noticing...but who does he have in his bag?? he said he created her, it can only be Esme, he only created 2 females, Esme and Rose...and Rose is back in the states...But he couldn't have ripped his mate apart, could he?? Wouldn't it hurt him to hurt his mate...or is she not his real mate after all??

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:11 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Wow, it's a really nice gesture of Jake to name his firstborn son after Charlie!! I hope Peter's talk helpede Bella a little to let go of the guilt about her fathers death...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:09 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Very hot Lemon!! Hard to believe it was the fort proper lemon you wrote!!

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:08 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Glad she was able to teach them how to effectively kill the children of the moon...hopefully this will give them an advantage...

Oh, Bella is pissed...cool punishment to freeze them for a day *lol* he shouldn't have sneaked away... ^^

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:06 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

I hope Auguste will be able to help them...she sure seems very powerful...glad she is willing to come with them and help...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:02 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Doesn't sound good for them if the children of the moon are this strong in their wolf form...wonder how they will win this fight...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Wow, so Peter is their spirit brother and a wolf, too...So glad Bella was able to save him...good thing her elemental gift is so powerful...!!

I have a feeling this fight will be so much harder to win for them with not only the Volturi as enemies but the children of the moon, too...but why would they help the Volturi?? Did Caius not try to wipe them out in your timeline for this story? I guess not, wouldn't make sense for them to fight alongside the Volturi if he did...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:57 PM Title: Elemental: Prophecy

Ohhhh sweet, Sam and Emily will become parents like they wanted for so long!! =)

But obviously no good news without bad ones...it's scary that Peter just collapsed and won't wake up...and Charlotte, mad with worry...hope Peter will sort this information fast and snap out of it soon...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:49 PM Title: Human Elemental

Poor Denalis...must've been hard to see Irina join the enemy and do such horrible thing to avenge her mate....

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Human Elemental

That was an awesome fight!! Really love it when the Major or the God of war comes out to play!! That's one hell of a fighter...and how brilliantly he deceived Alice...!! Good thing he remembered the promise he made to Bella...otherwise their fight wouldn't have ended so well...

Oh Peter just HAD to take the opportunity to shock them... *lol*

 

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:43 PM Title: Human Elemental

Esme made the right decision...but I think they should've made them swear an oath, too just to be sure...but I guess there's no time for that now, seeing as their enemies already arrived...!

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: Human Elemental

So cool that Ben froze the wolves and Bella refused to free them...she is right, Ben won't ever learn if she corrects his mistakes but it's not very nice for the wolves... *lol*

Oh Tanya again...trying to steal a mated vampire away...and a gay one at that...she really needed to learn some respect, no one better than Bella's beast ^^

Oh wow, that prophecy is a heavy burden to bear...the peace of the vampire world is resting upon her shoulders...and her mate's and brother's...good thing she has so many trustworthy allies...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:35 PM Title: Human Elemental

Wow, this Andre has a really awesome gift!! And so useful, they were even able to sneak into Maria's camp...that's some very important information they gained...!!

 

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:21 PM Title: Human Elemental

Wow, so Esme has s gift too with her extraordinary sense of smell...that's not bad!! But the poos woman was completely left in the dark by her mate...that must've been quite the shock...

And the nerve of Carlisle...to be proud of what they did and angry about their failure in keeping Bellla controlled...liked that she decapitated him...if I were her I'd burn him, too...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:03 PM Title: Human Elemental

Oh no, Rose didn't just cal Esme and Carlisle?? The bitch...she so got what she deserved...I like the australian girls though it's a tadbit difficult for me to understand sometimes.. *lol*

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:55 PM Title: Human Elemental

Wow, Jasper put his wish to kill Lucy to rest pretty fast...I understand they still hate each other, but a truce will hopefully suffice for now...

Wow, Maria has 85 newborns?? WTF?? How does she controll them all?? This will be a very hard fight for them...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:46 PM Title: Human Elemental

Wow, so many swore that oath to Izzy?? Incredible!! At least they know now that they can trust Lucy not to betray them...but if her and Jasper will overcome their past...that will be hard...but it will have to be done...in the dace of war they must stand united to win...

Izzy always the one to surprise...the first vampire to pass out... ^^

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:39 PM Title: Human Elemental

Oh, poor Lucy...Glad Bella was there to share her pain and ease it a little...! It's always good to have close friends...but like I feared, Jasper didn't react well to her and she just as bad to him...wonder how they will resolve that...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:31 PM Title: Human Elemental

OHHH, Maria's sister!! WOnder how Jasper will react to THAT!! I doubt that will go over well...but he'll get over it, at least I hope so...

Oh Rose really fucked that one up...messing with Bella's kids...wonder if they'll be able to make that better...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: Human Elemental

Now that was the best fucking way possible for her to remember everything...while making love with her mate...! I'm almost glad she didn't regain in back erlier...!! <3

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Human Elemental

So fucking curious about their 'master plan'...about Alice, Carlisle, Esme and Edwards role...and who else is involved...Glad Emmet and Rosalie were not part of it and get a chance to prove themselves!!

 

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