Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:23 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
Something about your story caught my eye. I don't usually enjoys stories that are so different than the original book. I am glad that I did start reading this one, as it is very enjoyable. I love the way you write Bella and Alice. I hope Angela and Emmett are both allowed to accompany Bella to England.
Date: 19 Oct 2017 12:38 AM Title: Quiet Storm
Excellent chapter. I reckon it's Charlie. Glad Emmett and Edward are trying to make their relationship work. Thanks Really having a hard time trying to get my reviews through to you. Just the reviews. Nothing else. :(. ???
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:13 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Well I'm gonna be one of those backing Bella up. I'm beggining to think Edward would be best alone; he's so emtionally stunted he keeps making a worse mess of things everytime he opens his mouth. Bella doesn't deserve that. I just wish Trevor wasn't a bad guy so Bella cukd have a healthy relationship for once.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Oh, for Christ sake! He was being such a dick and then lays the horrible truth on her like that ugh! I wouldn't care if Maggie had turned out to be fucking mother Theresa, what he did was so wrong, I can't even with him. I'm actually in love with this Bella and her reactions, just until this last bit; he totally deserved a lot more groveling. I hate love triangles but I actually found myself liking this Trevor guy. Oh well...
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I think it's really sexist to think of Edward's fucking up, as some quirk he has that Bella just has to continue to forgive. Hell no! Like WTF? Either he grows up, mans up and stops pissing all over things or it is over. Bella does not deserve going after a loser like that. If the name of the character wasn't Edward, it would be much encorage for her to leave him behind. He really needs to step up his game already.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:19 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I'm really digging the story but I kinda hate this Edward. I don't get what he's hoping to accomplish by "explaining" anything to Bella. If it were me I would be royally pissed off either way. So he thinks is not as bad cuz he was trying to date the dotard bimbo? That to me is an even worse betrayal; so he goes and kisses her and then thinks it's an excelent idea to try a serious relationship with another woman? What kind of f-up logic is that? If the roles were reverse this kind of situation would be unforgivable and I hope she makes him freaking crawl for redemption because otherwise I'm gonna lose respect for her.
Date: 24 Sep 2017 4:42 PM Title: Unlock Your Heart
Crazy Karen! How did she get out of jail? Glad that Bella killed her!
And the fact that Victoria was in the FBI... quite the plot twist. I'm sorry she lost her job, but at least she was honest about everything