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Reviewer: KristynTB926 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This will forever be my favorite story. 💜

Reviewer: KristynTB926 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2024 4:13 AM Title: Quiet Storm

This will forever be my favorite story. 💜

Reviewer: fanficaddict2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2023 5:22 AM Title: Quiet Storm


Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2023 3:56 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2023 11:44 PM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2023 6:29 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2023 5:57 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Again hilarious, scary, but hilarious. Loved it. And you'l probably be mad at me, but I've never seen more than a glimpse of Gray's Anatomy. :( 

 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2023 4:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

I thought this chapter was hilarious! I woke my husband up with my laughing out loud. I loved her reactions and they got even better when she took the meds. His proposal was just fine, (what does Carlisle know) and definitely so them. The only thing I'm wondering now is if as doctors they'll still remember that Antibiotics cause birth control to fail!?! Let's not remind them though.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2023 5:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

I am truly sad to see these stories end. I loved both of them and I feel like part of my life will be different without reading them every day! I'm going to read A Hard Day's Night next. Loved the STORM series too by the way. LOVE YOU! Reading on... 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2023 4:44 PM Title: Instructions Not Included

Again this is wonderful! 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2023 8:02 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

I thought she was preggers! I know everything will work out. CC is definitely pure evil, but very cute doing it! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2023 7:10 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

My goodness! That one was fun. He shoulda let Bella kick all their butts! She probably could have. Loved this chapter. I thought maybe Edward would invite Eric to check out Upstate and his practice to get away from Jersey. Just a thought. Reading on...

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2023 8:00 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

Wow! I don't necessarily think what EJ did to Roni was the correct way to handle the situation, but I get that he was really hurt and she manipulated Cecelia into hurting EJ for her own purposes. She did kinda deserve what she got - cruel and unusual punishment. He was correct in saying that he was always respectful with Roni and treated her really well-even tried and wanted to love her. You can't force that. You either love someone or you don't, it's that simple. Roni was very cruel to BOTH Cecelia and EJ and I have to say that I really don't blame him. Roni made him feel cheap which is something he never did to her. He is obviously tired of being "THE WHORE" around town. I think he really wants to find someone he can love, and Cecelia has that potential. I just hope Roni didn't ruin their chances. True colors can be UGLY. GREAT CHAPTER - very real. Some of your reviewers seem to think that the women are just victims and the men are heartless and whores. These girls are immature bitches.The act sweet and then show their true colors. Those boys have ALWAYS been on the level with the girls they are with - no deceit there, but with Roni, SHE was deceitful and cruel. These women (Sheila, Debbie, Roni) are NOT victims. They are just as much whores as those boys and they as JUST as responsible for their own behavior> I'm so sick of women taking the girls' side no matter what, just because they are women! Women can be horrible too- case and point- RONI!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2023 5:20 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

What are you talking about? That chapter wasn't boring at all. It was actually great perfect filler chapter. Even if it's a set up for the next ones still loving the story after all these chapters and looking forward to more.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2023 8:05 PM Title: Instructions Not Included

In 1995 I was raising my first child and working on my second literally bun in the oven at the time. You did great as far as the references go and once again great chapter I'm glad the kids aren't being rude to Jake because they really have no reason to even if they know what they know about his past everyone deserves a second chance. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2023 5:50 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

Wow! That was an unexpected twist. I have to admit I'm really surprised at EJ and his reaction. I truly thought he was in love with Roni and just didn't really know it. I hope Jake's change is genuine too. If he hurts them again that will not be cool, but then again he would go back to prison if he did. Very emotional chapter - I cried a lot reading it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2023 5:55 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2023 5:55 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 4:58 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

Great Chapter, LOVE Natalie, LOVE drunk CC, GREAT song choices! Reading on...

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2023 7:22 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

WOW! That was the BEST worst Thanksgiving I've ever heard of. I enjoyed that immensely. Can't wait to see what's next! Best line of the night-- "So where are we spending Christmas?" Gotta love CC!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2023 7:01 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

NO I did not enjoy that! What a silly question! I cried nearly the WHOLE chapter! Thank God that CC is ok. Bella is gonna be VERY upset when shen finds out that he woke up and she wasn't there for him. Still loving this story, just a bit traumatized right this second! VERY REAL!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2023 5:23 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

I actually DO feel bad for CC, but as a parent I also understand Edward's frustration. But at the same time Edward didn't even bother to get any other persons side of the story. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2023 6:54 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

Nothing you write sucks! Don't ever say that or think it. Your work is so wonderful. It makes me laugh and cry and feel things I don't get to feel normally. I love the stories and I love this chapter. I love the characters.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2023 8:43 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

Now THAT was a great chapter. The parents betting on which kids get some! That was hilarious!! Can't wait to find out the results!! 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2023 6:03 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

You are right this chapter was not funny, but it was REAL. Real people having real reactions to real situations. Most importantly, a family acting like a family should be with each other. CC was definitely disrespectful, but it was handled like humans handle things, imperfectly, but with great care. Excellent chapter it felt very real. It was very well written, very well executed. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2023 4:20 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

So cute! GREAT CHAPTER! I was born in Brooklyn, (live on East 54th street) but was moved away at the age of 4! :( unfortunately I don't think I have much Brooklyn left in me. Maybe just attitude.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2023 6:57 AM Title: Instructions Not Included

I thought this chapter was GREAT! Plenty funny and enlightening in regards to EJ. Also I LOVED the Twilight Saga references. And I LOVE Debbie even for EJ. Seems he was hit with the Italian Lightening Bolt!(Colpo di fulmine) I hope he doesn't blow it!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2023 8:56 AM Title: The Story Of Us

OK love al even more now - he's a good guy. Not upset with Tanya, she's VERY hurt. She'll work it out. Hopefully James feels like crap and makes it up to her. And by the way, 5 years is WAY to short to be getting bored with his sex life. He's a douche nozzle.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2023 7:55 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Wow, I REALLY enjoyed that chapter way more than I anticipated. Getting to hear hisPOV was refreshing and it made me like him a lot more than I did. I mistook him for a creepy dude who was trying to steal Bella from Edward (even though I knew that could never happen), but now I see him as a really nice kid whom Edward and Bella could probably be friends with. I have to admit I'm VERY disappointed with James though. It's obvious that he still has feelings for Bella and always did and now he feels it's ok to cheat (even if it's an open relationship, it's fairly clearly defined) and if he'll cheat on his wife, who's to say he won't make another play for Bella, right? It's fair to assume so now. LOVE THIS STORY - can't wait for more and the next one. Good call on the name change too. This name has better 'attraction" than the name of the hospital where they work, especially since Bella only worked there for a couple of chapters. 

Reviewer: pixiekat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...

Thank you.

Reviewer: pixiekat Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 9:20 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I didn't hate this chapter, but damn it was intense... and brilliantly done! Phew...

Thank you.

Reviewer: kanergirl88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2023 2:52 PM Title: Weather the Storm

"Keep my wife's name out your fucking mouth!" I stood from my seat.


Reading this line in 2023 is fucking comical🤣

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2023 4:26 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Loved it

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Date: 10 Jul 2023 3:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Loved it

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:54 PM Title: Weather the Storm

Of course, I really love every chapter you write, But I especially loved Bella, putting Esme and her place. I hope she tells Carlisle and Edward what she did, but I know that's not her personality.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:45 AM Title: Weather the Storm

I can't believe he'd tap that after Edward and Alec... Blech!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 9:04 AM Title: Weather the Storm

This time I'm reviewing your authors note at the beginning of this chapter. 

Your story is GREAT, true to mob life (as far as we know) and your Edward is great just the way he is warts and all. Bella too! If people criticize you for what you write, they SHOULDN"T READ IT!!!!! It takes a lot of guts to make yourself vulnerable to criticism when you publish your words. You write your stories the way YOU SEE FIT!!! If someone don't like it they should stop reading and SHUT UP!! I hate thinking you as a writer are upset because some bigmouth doesn't like the water thing are being written. If they don't like it maybe they should give writing a story a try and see how they fair with the critics huh? 

Just to let you know, YOU ARE DOING GREAT, WONDERFUL, STUPENDOUS!!! Love all of your work. Keep it up and don't let anyone tell you that you are not doing it right. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE you!! I can't say it enough. Great work, even the scary, angsty parts. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 7:41 AM Title: Weather the Storm

  I'm kinda worried about Esme plotting to kill Edward or Bella or both! She seems spoiled rotten and hellbent on getting what she wants and getting away with murder literally. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 2:33 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.

Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee! 

I may be in shock!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2023 8:43 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.

Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee! 

I may be in shock!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2023 9:44 PM Title: Weather the Storm

I can tell you this from reading hundreds and hundreds of these fanfiction stories.  Us readers we don't mind a monster word count. I love the longer stories I always read them first. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2023 8:47 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Two words... Amazingly insane! I absolutely LOVED it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2023 7:05 PM Title: Unlock Your Heart

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2023 11:48 PM Title: Unlock Your Heart

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2023 11:41 PM Title: Unlock Your Heart

Loved it 

Reviewer: decayandescape Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2023 11:22 AM Title: Weather the Storm

Not entirely sure why people were giving you such a tough time with this story (it's fucking stupid that they were so "offended" that they reported you but whatever)

I love it and I come back to your work like once a year. Maybe it's because I lived in Brooklyn for 10+ years and am from Jersey -- or maybe it's your writing style or maybe it's because I prefer this story over the original material *shrug* - I dont care - love your work and it hits a spot for me! Thanks so much. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2022 12:48 PM Title: Behind The Images

did not play real hard tp get

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:34 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: 2old4fanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2022 1:32 PM Title: Weather the Storm

This dream was unbelievably grim but great

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:38 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:17 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 5:07 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2022 4:52 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2022 8:41 PM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 10:32 PM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 3:46 PM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:51 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2022 6:44 AM Title: The Story Of Us

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:41 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it

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Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:41 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2022 5:50 PM Title: Quiet Storm

This is the sleaziest Carlisle ever but I can't help but love him. 

Reviewer: alderjd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2022 7:25 PM Title: Quiet Storm

I've been looking all over for this story and it was well worth the work. I'm already hooked on this story.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2022 9:33 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

very good

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2022 11:50 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

hot

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2021 11:25 AM Title: Sovereign Fate

Loved it, thanks for the story

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2021 11:24 AM Title: Sovereign Fate

Loved it, thanks for the story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2021 12:53 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

great so far

Reviewer: Als_50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2021 10:39 PM Title: Sovereign Fate

Loved the everything. The ending was so beautiful 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:44 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

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Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

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Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

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Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

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Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:41 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:41 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2021 8:20 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

thank you

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.

If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why?  Instead of cryptic comments.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2021 3:25 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Alice is a pushy bit*h in this.

If she wants Bella to stay away from Edward, maybe she tells her why?  Instead of cryptic comments.

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2021 2:20 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2021 5:07 AM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it! 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 4:21 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights

I loved this story!!!

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 3:27 AM Title: A Hard Day's Night

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2021 3:22 AM Title: The Wallflower and The Flyboy

A lovely story and its ending, but sad to hear that Esme and Carlisle have both passed away. Thank you for writing

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2021 1:18 PM Title: Quiet Storm

Loved it!

Reviewer: The Moon Writers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2021 7:59 PM Title: Quiet Storm

This is my FAVORITE story!!!! 

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