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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2021 7:57 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

hot

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2015 10:54 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

good job

Reviewer: MsTorres Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2014 1:32 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Can you say traick wreck? This is exactly that! Shit is about to get real for the morning after that's for damn sure!

Reviewer: KCPup1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 12:20 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Great Story! I liked the whole 'reading fan fiction together' I liked it even more when I realized it was a scene from your story 'The Perfect Submissive'. I just wanted to let you know that you do amazing work. I'm on my way to read this story from the other POV. As always thank you for sharing your brilliant talent.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:54 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Okay, I don't know what happened to Edward's POV but I got Bella's POV twice. *shrugs*

I still enjoyed the story and thanks for sharing.  I've favourited The Perfect Submissive so I'll be catching up with that one some time in the future.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:35 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Oh my God, I was about ready to slap Bella silly.  I can't believe that she took so long to confront Edward.  I know he was being childish by ignoring her but he was probably hurt and confused, he laid his cards and heart on the table and got nothing back.  Thank God she couldn't keep it in any longer and she admitted she had feelings for him too.

I really enjoyed this even though it did take me a while to get back to it, lol. Thanks for sharing, I'm off to read EPOV now.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 9:15 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Yep, it's official, they need their heads banging together, maybe Jake or Riley will do it for them.  It looks like Edward's going to have to step up, be the man and confess his feelings.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 6:47 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Gah!!  When are they going to get their acts together.  If Riley's not careful he could be in Edward's firing line and it won't be Riley's fault either.  I could bang Edward and Bella's heads together.

I can't believe it's took me this long to come back to these two stories and finish them.

Jane x

Reviewer: Lissy2110 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 7:41 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Hey,

an interesting little story.

Thanks

Lissy

Reviewer: DrPepperChk21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2013 4:22 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

I would love to see more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2013 4:44 AM Title: The Night My Life Began

:) loved this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2013 10:51 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

:) loved this story

Reviewer: TJ1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:09 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Really like this story (both of them) keep up the good work!! :-)

Reviewer: jatani33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 6:18 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

cant wait for that conversation and to know what Bella thinks of everything....

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 8:54 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Great story

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 11:57 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Well that was even more revealing.  I'm glad that Jake has said his feelings for Bella are more as a friend and sister, I don't think it would have ended well for Edward if Jake had romantic feelings for Bella.  I loved how Jasper rang Alice asking for advice for Edward, lol, it was too fucked up for him to deal with once he learned it was two guys and one girl and not the other way round, hehe!! They all would have saved themselves a lot of awkwardness if they'd talked the morning after even though it would have been uncomfortable.  Oh, oh, what about Edward and the BDSM fan fiction?  That boy so wants to tie Bella up and down. *phew, fans self*  I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this and TNIWNF.

Jane x



Author's Response:

I don't know if I will add that here or not. For some odd reason I always write my Edward to be a little dominant. LOL You should check out The Perfect Submissive....my BDSM story. Edward does tie Bella up with a slid of Jasper at first. It is one chapter away from completion. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 8:44 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Yippie jakes out...great update!

Author's Response:

Thanks and yeah, he's out of the picture. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 7:58 PM Title: The Night My Life Began

Oh my, that was very revealing.  I can't believe how long Edward's liked Bella and boy he didn't like Jake being involved in their shenanigans did he.  It sounded like Jake wasn't too thrilled either so that answers one question, yes Jake does have feelings for Bella.  Hmmm, will he be happy taking a back seat because I'm sure he's noticed the way Bella looks at Edward and the way she tended to favour Edward over him during their little escapade.  Lol, I loved Charlie's talk before they left for college and the way the guys tried to run off all of Bella's interested men.  The next chapter's going to be interesting.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Yeah, I haven't written from Jake's aspect of things. I think he was hopeful, but with Edward makes moved, and Bella responding more to him. He kind pulls away and looks in other directions. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:11 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Hmmm, I'm not sure about Jake and his feelings towards Bella.  I can't work out whether he's realised he has feelings but doesn't feel like he stands a chance because of the way Bella looks at Edward, he has feelings but is unsure whether they would want a threesome or whether he realised after going down on Bella the morning after that his heart wasn't really in it and he'd prefer them just to be friends.  Jake's clearly embarrassed, but for which reason, that's what we need to know.  Of course he and Edward may have talked about this already and it's obvious that Edward fancies Bella, I mean, he even reads fan fiction with her, lol.  I really like this story and I'd love for you to continue it.  I'm off to read Edward's POV, maybe that will give me some more clues, hehe!

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 4:11 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

I love poly stories, lol, I'm a complete whore. *snort*  I'd love it if you did more.  That was so hot, no wonder Bella squirted, I think she surprised herself.

I love their friendship, it's deeply formed and when the drinking started and the question was asked why Bella had never thought about either of them and vice versa, the answers are quite easy really.  How do you choose one over the other?  How can you leave one person out that you're just as close to?  Then you have to consider choosing might destroy what they've had for so long.  Now the big question is; what will the morning after bring?

Jane x



Author's Response:

Thanks I am glad that you like...this was a story my beta wanted to read and initial going to be a o/s. After some major reviews on ff I decided to include more. I don't know how much more, but more. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 12:16 AM Title: The Night My Life Began

Loved EPOV :D



Author's Response:

Thanks... so far you are the only one reviewing... Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 10:40 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Really enjoying your story. I wouldn't mind if she ended up with both of them :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing....LOL 

Reviewer: bellaroxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:44 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

i am loving ur story..but lol..the pics are not visible....

 



Author's Response:

Let me see if I have them uploaded here, if not give me a few minutes. I have tumblr or facebook I often share my pictures there too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. 

http://carolinacullen.tumblr.com/

https://www.facebook.com/carolina.cullen.319

Reviewer: jlou10dun Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:06 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

naw poly!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:22 AM Title: The Night My Life Began

I wonder just how this is going to go....are they going to remember anything I sure hope so waking up with two other naked people in your bed might be a bit confronting if you don't remember the night before. I hope they all cope with it. I wonder if Jake has feelings for her too....can't wait to read more of your story...great job so far :D



Author's Response:

At first, Bella doesn't remember anything. She figures it out soon though. Thanks for reading and reviewing. You where the first for this story. Thanks!!

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:38 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

No they all stay together :D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Now, you can read one of the boys POVs.

Reviewer: Kornygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:29 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Hot... Damn I would love to see more ;-)



Author's Response:

I am working on it....the Morning After....I will have to see from there. Also planning on adding another story to this one..."The Night My Life Began" its from one of the boys pov. Check it out too.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: po3a Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Yes you should continue ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I will continue.

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 1:05 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

I want to know whatnots like the morning after!



Author's Response:

The morning after is in the works.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:26 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

OHH!! There should be much more.. Please. This could get really good.

E/k

Author's Response:

There will be the response for more, has pushed me to write more. Develop more of a story. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:57 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Hell yes to more!

Author's Response:

LOL okay I will see what I can do. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:19 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Holy shit yes, I want to know what happens in the morning!  How the hell do you discuss that in the morning?



Author's Response:

Good questions, but I have to figure it out soon. Thanks for reading, reviewing, and letting me know what you think.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 10:12 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

More please :)



Author's Response:

Yes, we will be having more. I don't know if I marked it uncompleted at this time, but will in the future. Be sure to favorite the story or me for updates.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:59 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

OME YES I WANT MORE!!!!!  lol, Cheri



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote Cheri... I have had an amazing response to this story. Everyone is looking for more. I will place it here for everyone to see. That there will be more. 

Edward's POV will be a story title "The Night My Life Began" this will be his side of things.

Bella's POV will be "The Night I Will Never Forget" 

So, we will see from both perspectives or this is what I am thinking.

Reviewer: Ski Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:44 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

Please continue!!

Author's Response:

I will thanks for the review

Reviewer: bmjtc4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:05 AM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

More, please. :) Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks I have been properally talked into doing it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:11 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

I would like to see more....what happened between them after this.



Author's Response:

I think between my beta and the review that there will be more. I am in the process of deciding who, what, when, and where plot wise... Thanks for the review. Don't forget to fav or alert. So, you can see what happens next.

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:07 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

more please. but i want her to be with edward haha



Author's Response:

No worries my dear, not much of a Jake fan. Edward and Bella all the way...but you have to wait and see what I have planned next **wink**

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:20 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

This was great. I would love to see more. I'm going to favorite just in case.



Author's Response:

Thanks you do that there might be other stories you are interested into. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:13 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE  UPDATE SOON!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

I am about to...beta has been begging me to do more. I think I just might. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:36 PM Title: The Night I Never Will Forget

I am so excited to be your first review.....and all kidding aside this was well written and very exciting ...my husband like all men loves a touch of pron and i love Twilight so reading in bed for us with this was a win win situation all around

kudos to you ..and on to the next chapter ...lets see if its at all possible for two guys to share the same girl without wanting to kill each other



Author's Response:

Loved it... ;) Wish my hubby was that exciting about my love for all thing twilight or a least the exciting parts. LOL I digress thou. Well, see my beta wants me to do more, and another review from another site is on the same band wagon... Maybe once my vamp story is complete, then we will see where they go. Thought about just making a full story of it and having her choose between them, or having one chose what to do. Or, play with them both for a little while. Keep checking back might have more soon. 

Read The Perfect Submissive or Down on main street, there might be some scenes there that are interesting. LOL Thanks again for being the first one here.

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