[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2019 4:23 PM Title: Where Love Began
Oh how so ssd
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2019 4:23 PM Title: Where Love Began
Oh how so ssd
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2019 8:50 PM Title: Where Love Began
Interesting storyline
Date: 23 Sep 2019 9:09 AM Title: Where Love Began
These two are a bit disfunctional, or just young and dumb.
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2018 7:00 AM Title: Accidentally in Love
Good
Date: 03 Jan 2018 1:05 AM Title: Where Love Began
Love it.I cried, I laughed, and sometimes I got turned on.....so many roller coaster emotions. I loved it
Date: 03 Jan 2018 1:05 AM Title: Where Love Began
Love it.I cried, I laughed, and sometimes I got turned on.....so many roller coaster emotions. I loved it
Date: 03 Jan 2018 1:05 AM Title: Where Love Began
Love it.I cried, I laughed, and sometimes I got turned on.....so many roller coaster emotions. I loved it
Date: 22 Oct 2016 5:51 PM Title: Where Love Began
(Insert whiny voice) why did you have to make the Cullens evil? I hope they redeem themselves...
Date: 03 Sep 2016 3:08 AM Title: Where Love Began
What a beautifully written chapter. As a mother that lost a daughter at 38 weeks, I can say that you captured the emotion perfectly and honestly. Grief and anguish doesn't begin to describe what you go through at a time like that. Thank you for your beautiful words.
Date: 05 Aug 2016 6:10 PM Title: Where Love Began
Oh wow lots of tissues for this story. Normally I'm not a fan of flopping back and forth in time during a story but this was done perfectly. It had a little bit of everything in it. Awesome job!
Date: 29 Jul 2016 11:44 PM Title: Where Love Began
Loving the story, praying he does not rape her but even more fearful he will shoot her. The Swat Team is going to have to go in there and take him out. At this point I want him dead, not only for the abusing of Bella and the threats and scaring of the children in that classroom, but somewhere there is a little boy who has been abused for God knows how long and which it sounds like his mother has been murder by this asshat. He does not need to go back to his father. He needs some happiness in his life, I doubt he has ever known true happiness. I am just hoping Edward will not enlist to go with the team to rescue her but I know he will. God help him on what he finds.
i could not chose two children to stay with me, I would have to be like Bella and offer myself to let him let the children go. Such sweet children who offered to stay with her. She knew that the kids had to leave, but I am guessing that the stress is going to make Angela go into premature labor. If for some reason they get the asshole as a prisoner, that he does not die than I hope he will be charged with endangerment to the children and the child in Angela. Ben will want to help Edward kill this bastard! The nightmares these two women and the children will have.
so I wonder how long it will take before Edward, Emmett and Jasper's parents show their sorry ass's up. You know they will want to help but they will want to be in front of the camera and reporter saying how they will help their son and daughter in law get over this tragic event!!! Excuse me while I go into the bathroom so I can go throw up! Those two sorry son of a bitch's can go and get in line to find a good seat in the bowels of hell!
Date: 29 Jan 2016 5:24 AM Title: Accidentally in Love
This story is so sweet! I'm so glad that I read it. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful story. :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2015 7:31 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
AWESOME!!! story thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 01 Dec 2015 6:00 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2015 12:17 PM Title: Where Love Began
Great story.
Date: 23 May 2015 6:50 AM Title: Where Love Began
This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read and it isn't over yet!!! I have never read a more evil Esme!!! Why are her and Carlisle like they are?? Esme sounds like she is an alcoholic and she wants everyone as miserable as she is. To treat all her children as she does. It will be a miracle if all she does is lose them. I worry for Bella, Jasper and Rosealie, if all the kids have ever seen their parents like they are, then how the hell are they going to treat the people they have chosen to love and be with for the rest of their lives? Kids learn for words and actions and their parents seem to be the worse case of parents I have ever read!!! I fell sorry for them. Well on with the story.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2015 11:43 PM Title: Where Love Began
:) Loved this story
Date: 13 Jan 2015 9:14 AM Title: Where Love Began
i really hope bella does some series ass kissing for blaming edward, because every time he tried to put his parents out of his and bella's lives it was her that begged him to forgive them and have a relationship with them
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2015 7:21 AM Title: Where Love Began
now that should of earned one hell of an apology from bella to edward for the way she is always running out on him or thinking the worst of him at every turn. edward shouldn't be the only one that gets yelled at or threatened for acting like a moron
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:06 AM Title: Where Love Began
OMG!!!! i cried so much in this story ;) i loved and hated it because they went through so much ;) thanks for posting it on here ;D
Date: 10 Oct 2014 1:46 AM Title: Where Love Began
This is such an amazing story. You are suchna talented writer. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. :))
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 2:27 AM Title: Accidentally in Love
Wonderful end to everyones story. Ty for writing and sharing with us all on TWCS!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2014 1:17 AM Title: Accidentally in Love
Aww sweet look into their post wedding life.
Date: 04 Oct 2014 12:56 AM Title: Accidentally in Love
wonderful wedding
Date: 03 Oct 2014 8:53 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Awww Charlie was so sweet. Her mo is a real piece of work. Loving Garrett's character.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 8:43 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Wow they need a new airline if the stewardesses are all like that.
LOL for Cockblocking times.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 6:11 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Loved Riley helping get back at E for B
Date: 03 Oct 2014 6:03 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
lol Esme outdrinking them all. Great Bachelorette night
Date: 03 Oct 2014 5:55 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
ack Em def has no filter and no shame. Wonderful Christmas gift for E.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 5:05 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Awww sweet birthday present. LOL for sleepy Halloween. Aww for Garrett failing in luv.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 3:28 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Glad the wedding prep is going well. Happy that Rose seems to have come around. Wonder if the craigslist thing will come out somehow?
Date: 03 Oct 2014 3:17 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
aww sweet proposal.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 3:04 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
awwww woo hoo for the ILYs
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:57 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
ROFL Gotta love charlie
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:49 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Glad they are home and working things out. Can't wait for the Charlie chapter.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 3:24 AM Title: Accidentally in Love
hmmm Charlie isn;t going to be happy I think. At least not at first. hmm is Renee going to show up? I was wondering about that
Date: 02 Oct 2014 10:35 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
I can understand B being overwhelmed.
SS about your family. We've has a could of instances of cancer in my family too.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 10:27 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Great talk with Carlisle. Jeez the ring thing is just crazy. Hope no one was eavesdropping on their conversation there at the end.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 10:18 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Ugh Em is a goober. Aww for Ang and Gar.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 10:07 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Glad they are both admitting their feeling for each other. Esme and Carlisle are too funny. Woo hoo for lemony end. Happy Lemon Dance
PS I loved black diamond too
Date: 02 Oct 2014 10:01 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Woo Hoo Love Bella standing up to Rose and to Maggie. She thinks quick on her feet.
Aww for the beach revelations.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 9:48 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Ugh Maggie is patheitc and gross. Rose is a piece of work alright.
Twibrary is cool. Too bad it only seems to list FFn works.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 9:41 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Glad E put Rose in her place. I like B's talk to Em about it as well. Ugh Maggie and the Denali skanks. Lovely..NOT
Date: 02 Oct 2014 9:08 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Hope Bella puts Rose in her place sooner rather than later. What a biatch. Rose doesn't want people talking about Maggie, but its fine for her to talk about Bella? What a snot.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 9:00 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Wow Rose is a piece of work. How rude can you be.,
Date: 02 Oct 2014 8:46 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Classic Em. Love B not taking any crap
Date: 02 Oct 2014 8:39 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Wow wonder if Carlisle coming early is a good thing or bad? The teasing is cute.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 8:28 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Sometimes moms are really pushy. Glad they are talking and learning about each other though
Date: 02 Oct 2014 8:20 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Hate women like that flight attendent who pull that crap.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:45 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
They are too cute together. Garrett is a trip.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:36 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
Alice is fashion crazy as always. Lol Cute they are getting to know each other.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:26 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
awww for first kisses.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:18 PM Title: Accidentally in Love
cute start. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Date: 22 May 2014 12:18 AM Title: Where Love Began
This is an amazing story. You made me laugh and cry, I felt so connected to the characters. I look forward to reading more from you.
Date: 11 May 2014 10:29 PM Title: Where Love Began
Wow, that was some story. Not always a big fan of the back and forth but it told them story well. Sad but beautiful and very true
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2014 2:40 PM Title: Where Love Began
Loved your story!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2014 11:49 PM Title: Where Love Began
Oh I needed my tissues. Such a touching story, not just the lovey dovey and full of lemons. Real struggles and human failure. So good.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 5:59 AM Title: Where Love Began
Congratulations on finishing! I'm glad I stuck with this story. I love it from the beginning to end and really enjoyed the character development from Bella and Edward. Thanks so much for writing!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:50 PM Title: Where Love Began
Great ending. I love to cry of happiness at the end of a story.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 12:14 PM Title: Where Love Began
Oh how perfect. I'm so glad that they were able to really work though everything and they were given Evan. It's great that they feel complete now. I still feel a little bad that they were not given the opportunity to raise a baby. While it's horrible that a family had to die and that Carlisle was given such a light sentence I'm glad that in the end they got what they deserved.
I'm really going to miss this story.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 11:20 PM Title: Where Love Began
This was an awesome story, it was hard to read and stay interested at times but I got through it. I can say now that it was so worth every frustration and you are an amazing writer to be able to bring it together like that. Thank you for your words.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:58 PM Title: Where Love Began
Thanks for finishing the story!! Everything about it was brilliant!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:16 PM Title: Where Love Began
I cried every chapter. Awesome read!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 9:03 AM Title: Where Love Began
Wow, beautiful story, this chapter had me crying happy tears
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:01 AM Title: Where Love Began
so sad it to be over, hope you do write some outtakes. I love all ur works and hope to see something new soon.....
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:23 AM Title: Where Love Began
Awww! I am so happy with the way this story worked out. Absolutely happy. It brought tears to my eyes and I'm really sad to have it end. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 2:07 AM Title: Where Love Began
Loved the ending. They went through hell and back to get where they are. Evan will be a wonderful and healing addition that they need.
Sorry to see it end!
Date: 09 Mar 2014 11:20 PM Title: Where Love Began
great ending !
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:19 AM Title: Where Love Began
That was such a beautiful ending.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 3:07 AM Title: Where Love Began
There is nothing that is going to heal Bella faster then those kids.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:54 AM Title: Where Love Began
Evan is so adorable and I can't wait for him to get the family he deserves.
Date: 09 Mar 2014 2:38 AM Title: Where Love Began
I truly love this story. They have been through so much and the thing that sticks with me is that they never seperated. I think that is the most telling thing about the two of them. It would of been so much easier for them to just walk away. But they stayed.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 7:57 PM Title: Where Love Began
Hmmm, I don't feel that you should have to justify yourself like that in the ending notes of this chapter. The fact that things aren't perfect for this is precisely the reason WHY I like this story. Yes, stories that are sweet and nothing ever goes wrong with the fantasy are great, but I love stories that are "real". Showing that something horrible can occurr and they can overcome it is a good thing. They get frustrating at times, but it works. I'm happy to see Bella recovering and her being able to stand. That's amazing! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 4:43 PM Title: Where Love Began
I have to say that you have a way of showing hurt that really hurts.
I feel so bad for both of them. I am not sure if I could have stayed with Edward. I mean Bella made plenty of mistakes. But that would have been hard for me to stay with him.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2014 3:41 PM Title: Where Love Began
Great chapter!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:10 PM Title: Where Love Began
I loved the ending. This story is the most "real" I've read in sometime. It may still be fiction but in reality that's how some relationships happen. You showed these fictional characters as human and I commend you on this. I'm glad I stuck with this story and I wasn't disappointed with the end. 5 stars!!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 2:07 PM Title: Where Love Began
I love happy endings.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 12:32 PM Title: Where Love Began
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 06 Mar 2014 1:16 PM Title: Where Love Began
All of those kids love has to help Bella. She needed to see them.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 11:22 PM Title: Where Love Began
But can't you see Edward she wants you to hold her, she said her self for 1 year she has been sober and where have you been..
Date: 03 Mar 2014 3:52 AM Title: Where Love Began
So much miscommunication. Will there be a HEA ?
Author's Response:
There willbe. What you have to remember, especially with one regular chapter left is that the past is now to the point where chapter one has started, and they weren't in a good place there.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 12:18 AM Title: Where Love Began
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2014 4:16 PM Title: Where Love Began
Great chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 8:11 AM Title: Where Love Began
I hope they make it. I feel he stays with her out of guilt and she stays with him for the same reason. He was out cheating on her. I don't care what she said when you cheat it speaks of your character.
Date: 22 Feb 2014 11:17 PM Title: Where Love Began
The first part of the chapter is so sad. I feel so bad for Bella. In the second part, both she and Edward needed that visit from Evan so much. I think it really helped them. And I'm glad that Garrett refuses to give up on her recovery. I want to see them progress and for Evan to go home with them. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 7:37 PM Title: Where Love Began
Edward is right he never left. Bella left everytime she got drunk. She needs to take responsibility for her actions.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 8:00 PM Title: Where Love Began
Great chapter
Date: 16 Feb 2014 2:32 AM Title: Where Love Began
thanks for the update. it is good to see them making progress when they had fallen so far apart
Date: 16 Feb 2014 1:30 AM Title: Where Love Began
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Feb 2014 10:15 PM Title: Where Love Began
Well, I am glad that the start of the chapter they are at least on the same page. It sucks that she can't feel him, though. That's a bit depressing. And the flashback...that's just really sad and absolutely tugs on my heart strings and I feel so bad for the both of them. They really seem to have a huge disconnect on communication. Maybe things wouldn't have been so bad if they'd actually bothered to talk to one another. But I get it. It's not always that easy when things are so off track. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 6:08 PM Title: Where Love Began
thanks for the update, looking foward to seeing them with Evan
Date: 10 Feb 2014 10:41 PM Title: Where Love Began
They need to go talk to someone. They pushed everything away for years, now it's time to get everything out in the open.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 2:29 AM Title: Where Love Began
great chapter! it is a long road ahead for everyone. I have to read this away from my husband, he teases me when I cry while reading. thanks for writing
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:28 AM Title: Where Love Began
Maybe your writing will be less of a struggle once Bella and Edward allows family/friends back into their lives. They've gotten a start but still a long ways to go.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:16 AM Title: Where Love Began
Hmmm, not really sure with this one. It's like a transition chapter, I think. Bella really needed to have that confrontation with Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett. I'm a little shocked to learn some of their background info, especially Rosalie. And I'm not surprised that Edward's anxious about adopting Evan and is worried about it. In regards to the flashback, I actually kind of like it. I think what they did with "that" house is awesome. I would so pull the same kind of stunt. I feel bad for them that the new house wasn't really working for them. I would like to see it become a positive place for them, eventually, though. And I'm glad that Edward has realized he wasn't there for Bella and wants to change that. It's a start. thanks for sharing!
Date: 27 Dec 2013 3:06 PM Title: Where Love Began
Wow... so much hurt! They both need to talk to someone. Bella needs to deal with the loss of her daughter.
Edward needs to let go of the guilt.
Looking forward to more. BTW. This chapter didnot suck. I thought it was very good.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 1:31 PM Title: Where Love Began
Looking forward to more
Date: 26 Dec 2013 8:40 AM Title: Where Love Began
So far, chapter 1 has me very much intrigue.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:39 PM Title: Where Love Began
enjoying looking to more