Date: 30 May 2013 6:12 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
ouch! that gotta hurt! I feel bad for Emmett, Rosalie and Jasper they didn't want to hurt her. Esme was to naive. Carlisle... well I guess I could call him coward? Edward and Alice... now these two are just vile.
Date: 30 May 2013 1:54 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Jared was so funny here!! But I feel sad about her leaving Charlie....I love Peter...I actually thought that he was going to be her mate but then I realize that it was Caius!! Silly me :P It's nice that he got to help Bella revenge and her get flight... Jasper was PISSED with Edward in this! I think he was the only one who always told her the truth.
Date: 18 Apr 2013 10:44 AM Title: Unyielding Love
Just wanted to know if you intended to finish this story. Franckly I would be disapointed if you say no!
It's the second time that I read this story and it's prequel and it still amazes me how much I love it.
So please find it in your heart to find the time and inspiration to finish this sequel.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:36 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I know what you did you lovely genious!! YOU LEFT AN OPENING TO CONTINUE ON, TO MAKE A SECOND PART OF THIS STORY AND WE LOOOOOVE YOU FOR IT!!!!!!!!!
OH AND RIGHT ON THAT SHE FOUND HER SELF SO SHE WAS COMPLETE AGAIN I WAS BEGINING TO WORRY IT WOULD TAKE FOREVERRRRRRRR AND SPICA WAS FUCKING AWESOME... HER MAMA WARRIOR-NESS LMAO
Date: 04 Aug 2012 5:01 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
WOOT WOOT for Caius, the fucker is old dude!!!!! seriously!!! then again Marcus is even older, old moldys lmao.. oh yeah WOOT WOOT fo Caius, he got his kiss on with bella!!! YOU GO GIRL!!!
Whats up wth Corin and her studder?? and am I gonna hate Chealsea?? is she gonna Eff with Bella and not like her .. she is the bond lady lmao bond lady.. oh lord.. smh
Marcus and his back up books that made me giggle!! OOOH I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW PISSED PETER IS GONNA BE WITH JASPY AND HIS BAND OF CUTPIRES CALLED CULLENS! I HOPE BELLA FORGIVES NONE OF THEM!!!!! AND I HOPE SHE KILLS VICTORIA!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:02 AM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I liked Caius and Bella getting to know each other, but I was disappointed when he revealed who he actually was. I was so excited, thinking of how you'd explain Julius Caesar's assassination; I thought it'd be really interesting, that maybe it was all a planned hoax or something. But then it ended up being Marcus biting him while he was in bed with two women.
I also thought it could be interesting if you had had Marcus be Marc Antony. That would've been really interesting, but I don't think it could've worked since he ended up dying much later.
Anyway, looking forward to your next update.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:49 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Like this story. I love Peter and Bella's relationship. Loosing Charlie was hard but gaining Peter is good. He will love her and be on her side of everything as a parent should be. Caius well that is coming along she says..
Keep writing Ellie and get us all through the bad time!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:35 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I LOVED IT ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!
though i think the cullens should pay severely for what they caused, what they did. Leaving Bella was wrong, no matter what. Carlisle is posta be a leader.. he's posta be the one that leads that damn coven and what choices they do. He's so very wrong for allowing anything like that to happen.
Being separated from the coven isnt enough punishment... Edward should be killed, as should Alice for being such a fucked up person that she is...Jasper... well he was wrong for keeping a vampire from his family.. he shouldnt have done that. he should have known peter wasnt going to hurt her.. they all just wanted to control bella's life.
i hope Bella kills victoria..
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:56 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
Wow, that's some harsh treatment for the Cullen's! Did this story's Edward not leave her to protect her, or is she just still in the dark? Edward will be tortured enough knowing she a vampire and mated to Caius. I will feel really bad if the Cullen's are seperated, but maybe that's just me.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:32 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I like Peter; I like what you've done with him and his relation to Bella and her family. And I think that the gift of 'knowing' or whatever is interesting, too. Can't wait for more! Oh, and I really appreciate the picture of Alexander in the banner instead of Jamie. He really just isn't right, and I don't think I could read a story thinking that Caius looked like him...
Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:22 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
it was sooo worth the wait to see inside his head.. tell me is your caius the image of the name who plays eric northman??? if so he is FUCKING HOOOT.. He is the puuurrrrfect Caius, mostly the most perfect for Bella!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:36 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
I think for her it he will recover and be a vampire better than has been hitherto.
Now that I'm very much and it is curious to know who this woman is old store in Florence. Yes, because it does not look human at all, is that she is a witch?
There's one more question, if Marcus told Bella to be his descendant, then it is what Peter, he or she is a descendant of the mother's side and not the father, if so .... looks alone would be a descendant of two vampires, Marcus by Peter and his mother by her father's side. You could answer me, or explain in a moment in the history of the line of descent Bella arising Marcus?
I'll be awaiting your answers to my questions. Please update real quick I'm super mega curious (laughs). XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:55 PM Title: Unyielding Devotion
PETER!!!! WOOOT, HELLO GRAND PAPPY!!! LMAO.
I LOVE YOUR BELLA SHE'S FUCKING BAD ASS.. AND MAMA4DUKES HAVING THIS STORY DEDICATED TO HER IS FUCKING AWESOME I READ ALL HER STORIES.. THIS ONE HAS GREAT POTENTIAL TO BE GREAT LIKE HERS ARE..
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE SERIOUSLY!