Date: 16 Sep 2022 4:29 PM Title: Broken Roads
Just re-read the whole series again! I loved it, of course, but I hate that it ended. I always hate when the series ends. I want everything to continue forever. LOL
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2018 5:58 PM Title: Broken Roads
it was an amazing ride
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2018 4:58 AM Title: Broken Roads
wasn't Garrett abused and abandoned as a child maybe he was rescued by Lillian
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2018 5:11 PM Title: Here We Go Again
her sisters are back-stabbing gossip mongers with no loyalty to Bella, She needs to get her own place and keep them away from anyone she knows
Date: 27 Jun 2017 5:40 AM Title: Broken Roads
i think you should write anohter story in this series
Date: 26 Sep 2016 7:43 PM Title: Broken Roads
you should do one more story, about Bella being the big boss lady and stuff.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2016 8:30 AM Title: Here We Go Again
There was too much "whispering" in this.
Date: 28 Nov 2015 12:15 PM Title: Broken Roads
Love your writing. Brilliant
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2015 10:52 AM Title: Broken Roads
Brilliant story line
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2015 12:48 AM Title: Flightless Bird
So she is sol tough but she always gets kidnapped and hurt and but up hahaha doesn't make sense at all
my rating is for the complete story
Date: 17 Nov 2015 12:55 AM Title: Here We Go Again
Everyone talks in Whispers hahaha
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2015 4:52 AM Title: Here We Go Again
How many times the word chuckle is in every chapter?
the only thing they talk is about Bella being a good cop
bella crying
thanks it every single chapter
the same subject
borring
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2014 11:54 PM Title: Broken Roads
DAMN ... Ok, there needs to be possibly one more sequel...delving more into their
personal lives .... with another psycho for them to chase.
I have loved all three of your FBI stories even though this one got a little far-fetched with The Program.
I'm now going to go check out your other stories. You are a wonderful author, & I have thoroughly enjoyed each & every one I have read.
Thanks muches for sharing them with me....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2014 3:37 AM Title: Flightless Bird
You have RACKED MY LAST DAMN NERVE with this story !!!!!!
But I have loved every minute of it !!!!!!
I am EAGERLY AWAITING the next sequel .... they have both been
FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks muches for sharing another wonderful story with me....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 8:38 PM Title: Broken Roads
wow!!! AWESOME AMAZING !!!!! xxxxxx i didnt want this to be over but as they say all good things have to end *tears* thank you so much for finishing this story xoxoxoxoxo ;D
Date: 26 May 2014 5:04 PM Title: Broken Roads
*shock/horror* i havent read this story beore!! ;) its brilliant btw:) anyway how come they havent worked the riddle out yet i thought the picture from the lawyer worked it out? ;)
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 6:59 AM Title: Here We Go Again
BLOODY WONDERFUL !!!!!
Very accurate in your descriptions of police procedures....I watch a LOT of police real stories.
I thoroughly enjoyed your story & you really BLEW ME AWAY when James turned out to be her step-brother.
LOVED IZZY !!!!!!!!!!
Thanks muches for sharing your story with me. I am now off to the sequel.
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Author's Response:
Thanks, sweets!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2014 5:32 PM Title: Flightless Bird
awesome sequel yet again;) btw why is she going by swan and not mason? and eleazer and carmen not at the wedding? ;D
Date: 25 May 2014 1:52 AM Title: Flightless Bird
btw edward is agent mason/masen? not cullen thats carlisle ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2014 5:57 PM Title: Here We Go Again
awesome start to this storyline ;) im now off to read the sequel ;D
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2014 4:37 PM Title: Here We Go Again
Hello I really enjoyed it the way everyone evolved from one way to another way of thinking and to open their eyes thank you
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 5:31 PM Title: The FBI Saga
I HOPE THERE WILL BE A FOURTH PART TO THIS SERIES. I WANT TO SEE BELLA BE ABLE TO KICK BUTT AND TAKE NAMES AGAIN WITH HER IN CHARGE OF THE TEAM.
GREAT WRITING. GOOD TO SEE SOMEO E FOLLOWING THEIR DREAM! PATTY :))
Date: 08 Feb 2014 7:53 PM Title: Flightless Bird
Great story. I loved it.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:01 PM Title: Broken Roads
I hope Bella is finally happy.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 12:12 PM Title: Broken Roads
So are we gonna see a fourth in this series???loved it! Also just finished CBA ;-) lots of happy tears with that one,as well as a few sad ones.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:24 PM Title: Broken Roads
Thanks once again for sharing your talent :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 11:23 PM Title: Broken Roads
Will there be another part to this series a PART 4?????
I am absolutly loving reading this story because it is so uniquely different from so many other stories out there!!! This amazing story has left me captivated & intrigiued. Expectanly & impatiently awaiting next chapter update. This is a Briliantly amazing story, which has captured ur audiences attention!! I most definatly give this a 10 star rating!!!
U Truely are an amazingly gifted write with such an amazing talent!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 2:51 AM Title: Broken Roads
I loved readding all 3 of the stories...you did a great job!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing it all with us!!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 12:50 AM Title: Broken Roads
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Sep 2013 8:09 PM Title: Broken Roads
Looking forward to more
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:31 PM Title: Broken Roads
Bella needs to stop hiding and spend time with her family. She will probably feel less guilty and more normal if she interacts with the people who love her. She needs a life outside the office. She needs to spend time with the children and see the good in the world. She is already the leader of the team. She should take the job, but she needs balance. She would get that with family.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:01 AM Title: Broken Roads
No, please write more than two more chapters. Pretty please. I love this series.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 3:40 AM Title: Broken Roads
Looking forward to more
Date: 19 Sep 2013 7:00 PM Title: Broken Roads
I hope Stefan LeStrange is a good guy, but with a name like that I doubt it.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 9:21 PM Title: Broken Roads
Looking forward to more
Date: 05 Aug 2013 2:57 PM Title: Broken Roads
I hope Bella listens to Seth. She has to choose to live again.
Date: 01 Aug 2013 4:41 PM Title: Broken Roads
lookign forward to more
Date: 31 Jul 2013 4:27 PM Title: Broken Roads
I am glad that Edward is smart enough to shoot Embry Call. It had to be done. He was not going to stop.
Date: 31 Jul 2013 3:23 PM Title: Broken Roads
Looking forward to more
Date: 22 Jul 2013 6:27 PM Title: Broken Roads
Loved it looking forward to more
Date: 21 Jul 2013 6:51 PM Title: Broken Roads
I've been reading your stories ever since I read and re-read the Awakenings series. This FBI series has had me neglecting my housework for the last week. I can't wait to read the last few chapters in this story!!
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:32 AM Title: Broken Roads
Wonder what her name is? Something Dwyer?
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:24 AM Title: Broken Roads
oh wow Vanessa Hale.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 8:43 AM Title: Broken Roads
My chocolates melted. So I get RL.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:31 PM Title: Broken Roads
looking forward ot more
Date: 18 Jul 2013 10:59 AM Title: Broken Roads
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to more being revealed.
Date: 17 Jul 2013 5:55 PM Title: Broken Roads
Woohoo, keep posting.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:52 PM Title: Broken Roads
looking forward to more
Date: 16 May 2013 1:04 AM Title: Broken Roads
Keep on posting, another great work!!
Date: 13 May 2013 2:11 AM Title: Broken Roads
looking forward to mroe
Date: 30 Mar 2013 2:29 AM Title: Broken Roads
Thanks for sharing this story with us! I love it!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 10:08 AM Title: Broken Roads
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:59 PM Title: Broken Roads
Wow! Love this story! Thanks foe sharing your talent with us!
Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:57 PM Title: Broken Roads
Wow! I just love this story! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!,
Date: 18 Feb 2013 10:16 AM Title: Broken Roads
looking forward to mre
Date: 03 Feb 2013 4:28 AM Title: Broken Roads
Looking forward to more
Date: 03 Feb 2013 1:06 AM Title: Broken Roads
Great Chapter!!!!!! Glad both Bella and Edward are alive!
Date: 02 Feb 2013 10:23 PM Title: Broken Roads
Another great chapter! Your stories have always been worth waiting for...hopefully everything going on for you gets better soon.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:38 AM Title: Broken Roads
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 3rd which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 29 not 30!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
Date: 21 Jan 2013 10:46 PM Title: Broken Roads
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:14 PM Title: Broken Roads
Wow a great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next...
Date: 08 Jan 2013 2:34 PM Title: Broken Roads
This case is getting to all of them. They need to solve it before they are all broken.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 3:44 AM Title: Broken Roads
more puzzle pieces - i love them and dread them at tye same time you TEASE ;-)
Date: 05 Jan 2013 1:59 AM Title: Flightless Bird
Ok, I hope I won't get burned for saying this. I read Here we go Again and I liked the storyline very much, the pace was good, the chapters well written, building just enough tension to keep you reading but not too much too make you just close the browser and never be bothered with it again. All in all a great story with great possibility to envolve into more as you showed with Flightless bird. The one thing that bothered me however, and the only thing that makes me stop reading, is the relationship between Bella, Carlisle and Esme. I understand the way you bonded those three but I don't think the level in which the 'love' each other is healthy and to tell you the truth, the whole time I was reading the story I was ignoring that small but still very important aspect of the characters. In Here we go again Edward, even though he had his moments, was pushed entirely into the background and besides the few dates, he and Bella had no time to build their relationship and help it grow into what is from one to into the other a strong love. Carlisle was always there to do what Edward should be doing for her. I understand it to a point, since they've been through so much together. But I started reading this story as a romance between Edward and Bella, not Bella and everyone else. This chapter, Bella and Edward's wedding, was just too much. Bella's dance with Carlisle, though I'm not saying they shouldn't dance together, was too much.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the honest review. I know Bella's relationship with both Carlisle and Esme is different, but it's how I saw it when writing this series. I do appreciate your honesty.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 7:03 AM Title: Broken Roads
Looking forward to more
Date: 04 Jan 2013 3:06 AM Title: Broken Roads
oh its getting really good. :)
Date: 01 Jan 2013 1:33 AM Title: Broken Roads
diabolical. yiu gave us a bunch of puzzle pieces but I will ned help putting the puzzle together.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:44 PM Title: Broken Roads
looking forard tomore
Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:23 PM Title: Broken Roads
The pussle pieces are coming together and I can't wait to see the biger picture. Keep up the good work!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:24 PM Title: Broken Roads
I am glad you have a plan. I feel like we are in the maze at the end of The Goblet of Fire. You don't know what is going to jump out around the next corner to confuse the situation more.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:05 PM Title: Flightless Bird
uh-oh! poor bella!
Date: 13 Dec 2012 10:15 PM Title: Broken Roads
Wow. Great chapter cyhanks for the update and congratulations on the latest book you are so talented. Merry Christmas.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:16 PM Title: Broken Roads
You are an amazing writer. I think I have read your work for several years. I want to read your published work too.
Thank you, this is an amazing story.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:48 PM Title: Broken Roads
Embry is the mole. Poor zoe
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:43 AM Title: Broken Roads
loved the chaper