Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:23 PM Title: Sovereign Fate
Something about your story caught my eye. I don't usually enjoys stories that are so different than the original book. I am glad that I did start reading this one, as it is very enjoyable. I love the way you write Bella and Alice. I hope Angela and Emmett are both allowed to accompany Bella to England.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:13 PM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Well I'm gonna be one of those backing Bella up. I'm beggining to think Edward would be best alone; he's so emtionally stunted he keeps making a worse mess of things everytime he opens his mouth. Bella doesn't deserve that. I just wish Trevor wasn't a bad guy so Bella cukd have a healthy relationship for once.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
Oh, for Christ sake! He was being such a dick and then lays the horrible truth on her like that ugh! I wouldn't care if Maggie had turned out to be fucking mother Theresa, what he did was so wrong, I can't even with him. I'm actually in love with this Bella and her reactions, just until this last bit; he totally deserved a lot more groveling. I hate love triangles but I actually found myself liking this Trevor guy. Oh well...
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:15 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I think it's really sexist to think of Edward's fucking up, as some quirk he has that Bella just has to continue to forgive. Hell no! Like WTF? Either he grows up, mans up and stops pissing all over things or it is over. Bella does not deserve going after a loser like that. If the name of the character wasn't Edward, it would be much encorage for her to leave him behind. He really needs to step up his game already.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:19 AM Title: Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights
I'm really digging the story but I kinda hate this Edward. I don't get what he's hoping to accomplish by "explaining" anything to Bella. If it were me I would be royally pissed off either way. So he thinks is not as bad cuz he was trying to date the dotard bimbo? That to me is an even worse betrayal; so he goes and kisses her and then thinks it's an excelent idea to try a serious relationship with another woman? What kind of f-up logic is that? If the roles were reverse this kind of situation would be unforgivable and I hope she makes him freaking crawl for redemption because otherwise I'm gonna lose respect for her.
Date: 02 Oct 2017 10:09 PM Title: Insecurities
As much as I love your story I can understand why Jasper is pissed at Bella cause I would be to. She went behind his back and kept the fact that she called Edward from him when she promised she wouldn't keep things from him. And it's not Bellas place to decide who fights she's a newborn so she has no idea what it takes to win a war like Jasper does. But as I said I do love your story
Date: 27 Apr 2017 3:13 AM Title: Insecurities
I know that Edward a duck for most of this story but I really want you to write a sequel about him and his mate. If you could that would be great! If not I'll be happy with what you've written so far! Thanks for the story it was amazing!
Date: 10 Apr 2017 5:59 PM Title: My Other Brother
She is every fucking thing to me, Emmett. She's earth, water, air, and gravity. She's what keeps me grounded and sane on this rock of a planet, and it's been that way since we were ten, even if I wasn't able to admit the full extent of it.
That's soooo sweet!! I mealted when I read this!!
Date: 26 Oct 2016 4:30 AM Title: Gateway to the Heart
I personally think that the Jessica situation needs to be resolved permanently. Death would be suitable. As for him proposing, he is an idiot to even consider it, and she would be a fool to accept. She should have never went back to his house to begin with. She should have went to Alice's, or even Esme and Carlisle's for that matter. Their track record speaks for itself.
Date: 23 Sep 2016 4:36 AM Title: The Game That Changed It All
Just curious, did you ever consider having Rose have to deal with the repercussions of her telling something she'd been asked not to? It all came together in this neat package but I wonder what scenarios you went through when writing it.
Date: 12 Sep 2016 11:21 AM Title: Guarding Edward
I am loving this story so much! Team Jacob lovers wrong story and yuck on top of that. I prefer him as the gay best friend or the dead first husband even. Or mostly just the family dog minus the mythical roid rage. But the biggest upset is that Bella will have to change the company name from Elite Guardians to WTF Protection??because Edward not being secured by someone at intermission was beyond a rookie mistake. Even Carlisle should have been his escort. Shame really.