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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 7:44 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

awesome story;) it was weird that bella had to have a prostestic leg though i liked how you made the hybid lore different ;) thanks so much for completing and posting you rewritten works of the 4 books on here for us ;D

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Date: 08 May 2015 5:57 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

awesome re write ;) i liked how you tied the date they met with him proposing ;) but i hoped he would have his canon b'day like bella ;) a love how the wolves have all but imprinted and it looks like you doing the jacob one as well;( i was hoping that their child would mate with another hybrid like nahual? anyway 'see' you on book 4 ;D

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Date: 07 May 2015 7:43 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

WOW!!!! that was sooo cool!!!!! ;D

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Date: 07 May 2015 12:33 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

i LOVED your re-working of the saga ;) and i really love this bella ;D

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Date: 15 Apr 2015 3:15 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

wow

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Date: 15 Apr 2015 10:38 AM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

GREAT

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:54 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

GREAT JOB

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:17 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

quite a different EDWARD

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:40 AM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

great deserves more reviews

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Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:08 AM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

was very good

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Date: 11 Apr 2015 11:30 AM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

this is amazing better than the original

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Date: 11 Apr 2015 10:08 AM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

this is good

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Date: 10 Apr 2015 10:22 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

vg

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:40 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Yea outliving your family/friends would have to be the hardest part.  Glad Jake and Rory made a wonderful lives for themselves.  LOl for Rory trying to ground her daughter. 

TY for writing and sharing with us all.  You will be missed.  

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:30 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

oh wow.  No putting humpty dumpty's back together again? no fixing lost limbs... that sucks. hmm interesting story of Xara.  Never read a story with some of the twists you've come up with.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:18 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Rpov: Glad her and Jake are doing so well.  They need to go back though.  awww for the proposal. 

BPOV: oooh the kids brought help.  coolness. ugh V have crappy timing.   Glad Kate et al came to join the party.  Go Rory and Xara!!!! 

JPOV:  NOOOOO Rory!!!!   Wait???  jake bit her?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:35 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

BPOV:  Love the imprints.  They are too cool. 

Ah the new vampires appear.  oooh the Quens.... I like it!!! 

 

 

noooo I don't want you to be done writing FF.  :-(

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:17 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

JPOV:  I'm with Jake.  Its not safe her being out there alone. At least Jake is being honest with her.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:07 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

RPOV:  Glad R feels good about being there and doing normal girl stuff.  Aww for her knowing something is off about her and Jake.  lol for breaking hte doorknob though.  Don't blame her for being pissed though. ok her going off on her own is NOT smart though.  The V could get her and blackmail the rest of the family.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:49 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

JPOV:  Well at least he and Quil are trying to make the best of things.  awww for meeting Aurora in the store.  

BPOV:  Glad they are all back together finally.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:39 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Glad they are honing skills and planning and not just going off half cocked against the V.  Oh wow, Jake barely talking to them?  thats not good.  

APOV:  Sooooo Can't wait to take Aro and co all out.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:35 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Poor B.  Mother or Child....of course she chose her child.  (personally I don't think she really loved Bella; but I'm cynical).  Glad Charlie was able to come to her and got through to Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:26 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Rpov: lol for her scheming to get her first kiss.  Oh wow  Renee showing up and stealing Rory....ACK!!!! 

EPOV:  I can see Edward as a teacher.  Glad they have allies.  The V overstep alot it seems.  They should serve the constituents, not the other way around.  

BPOV:  Wonder if someone will be able to get through to Renee.  oh no.  Bella is going to take a long time to forgive herself. Hope they take out the anger on the V.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:18 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

lol for Morgan channelling Forest Gump.  Jake dating??? I don't like that.  Why do I get the feeling that the V changed Renee to try and get her to voluntarily come to them?

BPOV:  lol for the typical dad/kid fight over music.  Rory is a smart kid.  Glad she talked to her mom.

APOV:  Ugh I knew they had changed that POS that was her egg donor. (Yeah I don't like Renee; pfft)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:37 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Poor Jake. Sucks that he and Rory have to be split like thing because of a greedy wanker.  Hope B can keep herself together through all this.  Meeting Kitty was a help to her I think.  

APOV:  They are defying them by not joining I suppose?  Sactamonious pricks.  Well I usually like Marcus, but sounds like he a a prick too.  Well at least they are leaving Charlie alone.   They know way too much as it is.  Ugh Renee....  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:19 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Ugh Jane and D got away.  I was hoping that bella melted them or something.   Sucks that they didn't know about Betta's ability. knew Jake wouldn't take them leaving very well.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:17 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Poor Quil.  Sucks that Claire went away. Glad they are all getting along so well.  Did Betta know about the wolves?  Hope she rips Jane's head off.  Biatch


Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:10 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Yea still not really caring about Renee at all.  Glad her hunts and visits from the pack/imprints is going well.  oooh interesting new power.   I'd be worried about the V too, esp since they don't want to see her. Carlisle is gonna feel bad for speaking well of Betta the traitor.  lol for the ogling og Damon/Ian.      

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:57 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Wow Aro is a devious little prick ain't he.  Betta got what was coming to her for her part in it all. Guessing Betta knew how to get around Alice huh? 

Wow not sure if Charlie is being brave or just stupid.  I was wondering if you were going to do the cottage or not.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:45 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Great job with her transition and first "feed".   Well at least you didnt give her R as a first name.  aww for Grandma

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:32 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Glad E's taking the imprinting ok.  I kinda agree with the bonding with B first part.  Glad the others didn't push it. 

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 2:11 AM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

I love seeing a little bit of the girly-girl coming out of Bella in this chapter. I can't think of any girl that doesn't like to pamper themselves just a bit like that :)

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 1:46 AM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 7:07 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Glad the pack is standing behind them as well as Sue and Charlie.  Dear God, please dont use Renesmee.  That was the stupidest thing I'd ever hear/read. Sleeping Beauty reference huh?

lol for B seeing him imprint.     

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 7:00 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Glad B & J kinda "make up" in a way.  Everyone is scared and can't blame them for that.  

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Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:51 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

oooh so Edward's telling Charlie. that's different.  Surprised Alice didn't try to stop him.  Ah Charlie.  I love that you've allowed him to be observatant and not clueless like other stories.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:42 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Poor B.  Can understand her being sad, angry, frustrated, Etc.

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Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:38 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Well Having Doctors living in house can def make it safer with a c-section and all that. Well the extended family took it well too.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Love B's reactions and talk with E.  

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Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:24 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

EPOV:  Glad E is enjoying his honeymoon. oooh  Ms Laki really wants to die huh? Don't blame E for reacting that way.  Pfft Edward.  B loves you.  

Hmm Now I'm wondering if this is why Aro wanted her for the volturi?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:14 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

I would have tested out of school if I had the option.  hmm  now i have to go look up what she said.  Well google translate was useless.  Guess I'll have to wait and see..

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:05 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Glad no mopey, emo Edward after their first time. LOL for sneaky vampire not telling where she's going.  The house and all sounds wonderful.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:58 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

ooh interesting new backstory to the Denali's.  Nice Jake speech. ROFL for Leah's parting gift.

hmm a Bella Bucket list huh?  interesting.     

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:51 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

BPOV: I'm with B.  Way too many hours before ceremony.  Aww for Dad making breakfast.  he really does need to get with Sue.

EPOV: short but sweet ceremony.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:43 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

LOL  Glad she is standing firm with no heels.  I'm with Charlie....Renee is like a child most of the time.  Glad she got to talk a little to E though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:35 PM Title: Book Four: We Are Breaking Dawn

Don't blame her for taking me time.  She deserves quiet alone time.  ROFL for kidnapping her to a strip club.  An even bigger ROFL for the strippers.  

 

Aro: Ugh for Sleezy Aro and his "wife".  Sigh someone else who feels 'entitled' to claim Bella. 

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 4:28 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

ROFL! Bella is awesome :)

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Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:26 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

Yes, Edward, resistance is futile ;)

I love that your Bella isn't as shy as the original. She takes the oppurtnity to turn her clumsiness into a joke. That's nice.

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 8:25 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

Nice chapter. I'm anxious for another Biology encounter :)

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:51 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Yea I wouldnt be happy with yellow either.   ty for writing and sharing.   

ty

Off to start the last (so sad to say that)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:48 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Glad she is ok and thinking about college.  Nice birthday present she gave him.  Thoughtful.

Aww for proposal

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:45 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Like your friendshop with J and B better than any other I've read.  Ugh Jake should have shifted.  Victoria is such a conniving witch.  Glad she's finally gone though

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:38 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

LOL for the siblings messing with B now.  Although surprised they left her in the house alone with V still on the loose.  annnddd of course she was kidnapped.  

Grr jus two going is stupid.  Poor B.

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:30 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Yea def proudness for not letting Charlie help take care of his child since you moved around all the time. (can you tell I'm not a Renee fan?)  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:25 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

LOL for the siblings all terrorizing Edward. LOL for Carlisle.  

I agree with Edward.  Renee could have come out.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:06 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Yea kinda sucks being in the middle that way. Ugh for Victoria getting away again.   Hope she doesn't go after Charlie.  hmm wondering where you are going with this since the big fight scene from Eclipse was this chapter.....I think???

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 6:48 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

So glad she has a normal relationship with Rose. Love the costume ideas.

Glad the plan seems to be working so far.     

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 6:40 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

wow the killing and such are getting ridiculous.  

aww poor Quil.  Gotta be insanity to imprint on a baby.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 6:25 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

lol for Klutzy Bella. I'm like Bella shopping ..in and out.   oooh a tattoo.  I was thinking a belly ring.  Tattoo is good too.   Wow  great team presents.  aww for the overprotective big brother speeches.    

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 5:27 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

I like how you have the Cullen's interact with each other. They seem more like a family and that they actually like each other. 

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 2:36 AM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

I like the changes you are making to the vamps. Can't wait to see what else you do with them. 

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Date: 05 Mar 2015 10:59 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

ah the diner is closed.  I had wondered about that.  hmmm Cinammon Buns....yum.  oooh practice time.    

oooh Charlie and Sue. wow wonderful talk with Charlie and Edward.  Sweet Dad present too.  

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Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:23 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Good that they are tackling the sex talk in detail.  and nice bonding time

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Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:17 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Hope Elan behaves. And Paul too.  Seth is such a sweetie.   If ripley, morgan and Bella were all camping, who was working the diner?  Sorry my brain runs away with me sometimes. 

Glad E is supporting her with the plan.  awww for bonding time

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 6:58 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Wonder how long till they figure out B's clothes are missing.  Well I'm glad Alice got a vision so they know more of what they are up against. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 5:49 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

awww for Paul still fighting the imprinting.  Hang in there Ripley (everytime I see her name I think of the Aliens movie). uh oh for Jared with the Elan thing.   Glad E&B are talking about the uncomfortable issues. Horror Movie...if Charlie only knew.


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Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:29 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

hmm dreams again huh?  Wonder what they mean.  Premonitions?  

Glad Leah is joining the pack.  :-)  I agree with Kim.  Too many High School and College degrees have so much garbage classes attached to them.

Good plan of B and Jakes.    

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:13 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Think Charlie will take it ok.  Not like in the books where she was zombie like in the book.  aww for new first kisses.

Glad she talked with Charlie.  Renee....I just resent her so much sometimes.  But I suppose she tried.    

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:46 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Wow  Jake is actually being a real friend in that conversation.  Awww sounds like Paul is going to imprint now. Ugh the beast died.  you scared me for a moment thinking V would come out of the woods

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Date: 05 Mar 2015 2:53 PM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

awww Leah imprinted. Glad that she's still hanging with Ang and Jess.   go Bella for helping Jasper.

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Date: 05 Mar 2015 4:36 AM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Love that she is so strong willed in this one instead of the doormat follower in the book.  Glad E is trying.  Love the wolf express.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:36 AM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Glad she and morgan are being smart and listening and not just arguing. Wow  V is getting too close.  Glad they are working more closely together.  Stupid about not crossing lines when V was just abusing it anyway

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 3:25 AM Title: Book Three: Fighting An Eclipse

Hate when relatives forget about time zones. I got a couple in my family who constantly forget.    

Of course Charlie had to mention to Renee to call.  Sigh.  Sorry but I have plenty of guy friends.  But I  did 20 years in the military and are surrounded by more guys than girls esp since i was in a maintenance field, but I did in high school too.

Good that he is giving her space, but it does sound like she is trying hard to keep him away

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 10:09 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

Love that she is getting closer to Charlie.  Hope he and Sue get together sooner rather than later.  aww for her and Morgan bonding over the pack.  Glad she is "living" and not just going backwards.  Great end.  

This is my least favorite of the series book wise, but I'm glad you changed it enough for me to have a better opinion of your story.

Ty for writing and sharing.  On to Book 3.

ty

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 10:04 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

Glad she's telling him what she needs too.  But the V are still out there so she needs to decide some things with that as well.   oooh Leah phased.   That's gotta be hard being the only girl.  wow  E called jake.  Good move. "the person" thing...you watch Grey's Anatomy don't ya.   

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:46 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

I like that little twist of Bella waking up in the forest. 

 

Charlie has always been one of my favorite characters and I love that you have him being so sweet. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:20 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

Wow  smart plan bella.  She's changed indeed and guess who was the catalyst for that, Edward.   lol for the wine comment. Glad they got out but E's gonna pay for knocking her out that way I bet.  

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:12 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV:  Glad she's not just all buddy buddy. She's going to make they all work for it, as it should be.  

lol for our budding Nascar driver, Alice.     

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 8:36 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV:  Can understand her wanting closure.  Jake needs to admit what he did before she finds out.  Ugh  Jake is def a child in a big body.   Never cared for Jake at all in any of the books.  Glad B is not just being all accepting they are back.   That was one of my sticking points with the books.  

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 8:25 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

EPOV:  Gotta love Esme.  Oh no.  Now what was that vision about?  ACK!!!  

BPOV: hmm Sam et al wanted them back simply because the Cullens are coming back? or something else?  Eeek

EPOV:   oh wow for what Jake showed him

JPOV:  that was so wrong of him. 

BPOV:  wow Bella is still selfless.  Glad she protected the girls though.  Jake needs a punch in the face now.  Thought we were going to be able to avoid the Italy trip, but guess not

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 8:11 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

Glad Leah talked with Emily.  Wow they are a messed up, perfect group though.  Nice talk with charlie though.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 8:00 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV:  Glad Leah has a job and a purpose. College isn't necesarily for everyone, esp not right out of High School.  I know I wasn't.  Well; at least Leah was told and not just left in the dark.    awww for Jared making his move. OMG so LOVED her decking Sam and telling him off.   

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 7:40 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

Glad he said goodbye to carmen and told her the story.  Sucks dying alone.  Wow Carmen sure is a special person.  Glad he went back.  Also SOOO glad Rose isn't a selfish witch. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 7:10 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

EPOV:  Glad he's realizing what a moron he is.  LOl and the family talking behind his back too.  wow for Jorge story.  Good kick in E's butt though

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 7:02 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

ooh Embry to the rescue.  lol for him and Morgan.  Stupid B running in the woods.  of course Laurant it there....Sigh. LOL for bareback werewolf riding.  lol for Bella observing everything. ROFL for Bella gagging. I'm with Bella. Sam handled it poorly.  awww they want her to stick around.   Like this introduction rather than how the book had it, esp since no nasty Jake in this one.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 6:37 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV:  Wow Jake is encouraging her to contact him? LOL  thats different. oh wow  V coming into the diner?!?!  so not good

EPOV:   ah so Alice got a vision.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 6:32 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV: poor leah. Sam has some really crappy timing.  Wonder when B is going to break down.  Sadly Jake is right with her keeping it all in.  hmm so they are looking at B strange as well.  The Nasty Jake is going to come out soon I'm afraid. Oh wow she's talking to Kim about it.  Oh wow  she's seeing V now. Sooo not good.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 5:58 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV:  Glad Jake is stayin in the friend zone.  :-)  awww poor Sue.  Oh wow the witnesses to the imprinting.  Always thought it was stupid that they didn't explain to Leah.  Granted she was a bitch in the books, still feel kinda sorry for her.

EPOV: Carmen is so observant.  

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 5:43 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV:  Ah Sam.  Time for Leah to get hurt I guess.  Glad the girls got better grades.  So long as they stay in friendville, Jake can stick around.

EPOV: In this case, he should read Jorge mind.  Find a better way to help him that way.  Carmen is quite the investigator with the questions

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 5:33 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

EPOV:  While think he is an idiot, at least he's doing something consructive with his time.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 5:26 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

LOL for the little brother running off. aww for Billy and his little crush on yaya.   

uh oh for  the end.  No Dating werewolves....or soon to be werewolves.

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 4:57 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV: ugh  always hated Charlie pushing Jacob on her.  hmm french tutor huh?  You are surprising me with B's hidden talents. Cool that she is going to tutor and earn gas money at the same time.

EPOV:  Ah so alice did see.  hmm so E can read minds at long distances?  interesting.  Maybe like demetri can sense where people are anywhere in the world if he has their "signature" in his brain. 

APOV:  Glad she's still watching out for B even if she's not there.  Still thing it was wrong of them not to have the courtesy of saying goodbye.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 4:41 PM Title: Book Two: Broken During The New Moon

BPOV: Glad she is angry.  Always thought New Moon sent the wrong image to impresionable young girls.  Glad she is keeping busy in a positive way, although her as a waitress with her klutziness seems like a bad mix.  LOL. Glad Charlie defended her to Renee.  She is so annoying; moreso now that I knew Charlie moved too to try to keep B in his life more.

EPOV: hmmm so he's back to hunting huh?  interesting twist to it.  Ah only 2 weeks huh?  surprised Alice didn't try to stop him somehow. 


Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 4:53 AM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

I like how you have Bella dreaming about her future since she was a child. It makes her becoming a vamp seem more like destiny :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 10:22 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

Off to book 2.......................

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 10:20 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

Stay mad Bella.  Kinda pissed that Alice at least didn't say goodbye.  Kinda cowardly if you ask me.

 

Ty for writing and sharing

 

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 10:14 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

Ugh Victoria is still around.  Well I guess she has to be for NM and E...sigh.  E is such a goober.  Glad B is mad though.  Stupid vamp boy.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 10:11 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

Sounds like they should have all stuck together.  Wait  how is Edward seeing her vision when they are in the next state over???  Glad Jasper was there to take out the three nomads with Alice.  Grr for laurant.    

hmmm so she wasn't bitten.  Interesting twist.  So James and Laurant are gone....What about Victoria though?   

Ugh sounds like E is making the decision to leave.....sigh.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 10:04 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

Not sure they should actaully leave.  But I guess them leaving will make the nomads chase them instead of taking Charlie hostage to get her to come to them. Think Jasper would have been the better choice to fight the nomads more than Carlisle. But i guess having one fighter with Bella could be smart too in case the nomads split up too.   oooh the Denali's huh?   Bella is def observatent; moreso than the books I'd say.  oh wow....More nomad?  ack!!!

Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 9:59 PM Title: Book One: Reborn in Twilight

I like this beginning. I'm interested to see where you go with this and what changes you make. 

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