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Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well this was very sexy and erotic



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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

Nothing like crazy kinky!



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Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:30 PM Title: A few days before he was my daddy

Loved it!



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Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:25 PM Title: The only way he would

Loved it!



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Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:09 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy

Loved it! Poor Bella!



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Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:05 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught

Loved it!



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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2014 4:53 AM Title: Dr Jasper

That was over the top kinky! Fantastically kinky!



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Reviewer: zoey1001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 8:46 PM Title: Dr Jasper

Soooooo good plz continue

 



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Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 8:39 PM Title: Dr Jasper

I hope you have a hot chapter with all four of them getting dirty with each other



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Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 10:40 AM Title: Dr Jasper

So not expecting thst um wow



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Reviewer: oh my Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 5:12 AM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught

I'm really not feeling the sharing thing either.  But hey, to each their own right? And I felt bad for Bella. She was abused right? And now Dr. Jasper was taking advantage of her?.... While Edward watched?? Allowed him to, because he  was getting all turned on? That's just wrong. Maybe I need to go back & reread this chapter or something. Maybe I read it wrong? 



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Reviewer: mom2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 4:56 AM Title: Dr Jasper

Very good thank you for the fast updates



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Reviewer: mom2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 3:28 AM Title: The only way he would

Your doing great 



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Reviewer: mom2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 2:50 AM Title: Meeting My Daddy

Great start keep it coming



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Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 2:28 AM Title: Dr Jasper

wow can't wait to read more



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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 1:46 AM Title: Dr Jasper

This was pretty good.  I don't like sharing...I hope that it won't continue.  Also, what law states that she needed someone with her since she was under 21...that would be awkward to have someone in my first OB/GYN appointment at age 18.  



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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 1:00 AM Title: A few days before he was my daddy

This was good, but the grammatical errors (mainly capitalization of certain words) made it hard to read.  Again, once you get that beta, it will be much better :-) 



Author's Response: I have one last unbeta'd chap to go them i shall go on my search for a beta/pre reader

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 1:00 AM Title: The only way he would

keep going i think i'm hooked....



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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 12:59 AM Title: The only way he would

Pretty good. Once you get a beta, it will be much better :-) 



Author's Response: I have one last unbeta'd chap to go them i shall go pn my search for a beta/pre reader

Reviewer: nickjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 12:04 AM Title: The only way he would

I think your story so far sounds really good I cant wait to find out what is going to happen next.



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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 9:07 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy

I love it can't wait for more.



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Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 8:58 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy

love it

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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 8:51 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy

This was very hard to read with spelling and grammatical errors.  I loved the basic idea, but it's hard to read.



Author's Response: I appologise i will be getting a beta/pre reader so they can kick my arse into shape haha

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 8:49 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught

Oh wow!  Love this so far!



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Reviewer: tazzded Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 7:21 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught

I'm enjoying your story, but please work on your grammar as it distracting.

Author's Response: I know it is atroshious i will be getting a beta/pre reader though

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2014 5:04 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught

I SO LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. GREAT START DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.



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