Date: 05 Aug 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well this was very sexy and erotic
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Date: 30 Jul 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Nothing like crazy kinky!
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Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:30 PM Title: A few days before he was my daddy
Loved it!
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Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:25 PM Title: The only way he would
Loved it!
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Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:09 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy
Loved it! Poor Bella!
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Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:05 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught
Loved it!
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Date: 21 May 2014 4:53 AM Title: Dr Jasper
That was over the top kinky! Fantastically kinky!
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Date: 04 May 2014 8:46 PM Title: Dr Jasper
Soooooo good plz continue
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Date: 04 May 2014 8:39 PM Title: Dr Jasper
I hope you have a hot chapter with all four of them getting dirty with each other
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Date: 04 May 2014 10:40 AM Title: Dr Jasper
So not expecting thst um wow
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Date: 04 May 2014 5:12 AM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught
I'm really not feeling the sharing thing either. But hey, to each their own right? And I felt bad for Bella. She was abused right? And now Dr. Jasper was taking advantage of her?.... While Edward watched?? Allowed him to, because he was getting all turned on? That's just wrong. Maybe I need to go back & reread this chapter or something. Maybe I read it wrong?
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Date: 04 May 2014 4:56 AM Title: Dr Jasper
Very good thank you for the fast updates
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Date: 04 May 2014 3:28 AM Title: The only way he would
Your doing great
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Date: 04 May 2014 2:50 AM Title: Meeting My Daddy
Great start keep it coming
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Date: 04 May 2014 2:28 AM Title: Dr Jasper
wow can't wait to read more
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Date: 04 May 2014 1:46 AM Title: Dr Jasper
This was pretty good. I don't like sharing...I hope that it won't continue. Also, what law states that she needed someone with her since she was under 21...that would be awkward to have someone in my first OB/GYN appointment at age 18.
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Date: 04 May 2014 1:00 AM Title: A few days before he was my daddy
This was good, but the grammatical errors (mainly capitalization of certain words) made it hard to read. Again, once you get that beta, it will be much better :-)
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Date: 04 May 2014 1:00 AM Title: The only way he would
keep going i think i'm hooked....
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Date: 04 May 2014 12:59 AM Title: The only way he would
Pretty good. Once you get a beta, it will be much better :-)
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Date: 04 May 2014 12:04 AM Title: The only way he would
I think your story so far sounds really good I cant wait to find out what is going to happen next.
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Date: 03 May 2014 9:07 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy
I love it can't wait for more.
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Date: 03 May 2014 8:58 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy
love it
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Date: 03 May 2014 8:51 PM Title: Meeting My Daddy
This was very hard to read with spelling and grammatical errors. I loved the basic idea, but it's hard to read.
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Date: 03 May 2014 8:49 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught
Oh wow! Love this so far!
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Date: 03 May 2014 7:21 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught
I'm enjoying your story, but please work on your grammar as it distracting.
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Date: 03 May 2014 5:04 PM Title: Baby Bella Gets Caught
I SO LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. GREAT START DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. READ YOU SOON.
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