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Reviewer: fairfax19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

Another great chapter, thanks so much. I would prefer f

or them imbedded but that's because I'm lazy and don't want to fuss with another site :-)

Reviewer: cookielady48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome. Keep them coming(lol)

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15

Embedded in the story please!  I am glad that Christian is going to go ahead with being the 'friends with benefits" for now.  Cant' wait for more!

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

What a women, Ana she is great....   Looking forward to hearing CG's feelings, after the steamy trailor scene.

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

Fanfiction ousted you for that? As far as foursomes go, was really very classy. When you said that fanfiction ousted you, I expected some raunchy orgy, crazy shit! Fan fiction was just being prudish and apparently some troll hater must have reported you because hell… I've seen much raunchier, nasty, not so classy scenes on fanfiction. That was very, very well done!  Good on you!

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

Good chapter

Reviewer: greyfan79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

I can't wait till ana realises she wants then just friends with benefits and keep pics on your Pinterest board Hun xxx

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am so really loving this story!

Reviewer: MrsCTGrey Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

So happy you moved here, this is such a great change from all the typical FF, and I certainly enjoy those. You didn't deserve to have your story pulled but I am thrilled you found a new home. As far as this chapter, Christian is on new ground and out of his depth with her semi rejection of him so it will be interesting to see how far he goes to make Ana his. 

Reviewer: JKFlowers1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

Enjoying this different take on the story, looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: kelmal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

Another great chapter Toni.

Reviewer: Kazzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

He really is so out of his depth.. This bold sassy Ana has him confused as hell..... Karen ;)

Reviewer: telcontari71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

Another Great ChapTer

Reviewer: smills Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter, see I followed you over!

Reviewer: Michelle please Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

They have to find their way through this please dont stop with this xxx

Reviewer: greyfan79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

I loved it and i am happy cg is in love with ana and i am glad in a way that he regrets what happend the night before. Ana needs to tell cg how she feels and he needs to get rid of his sub xxx

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!!  Just found your story!   Evergreen Speedway really?  I live less than a half a mile from there!!!  I have no problem not only picturing races there, but thanks to my close procimity to the place I also have no problem hearing them also!!!  Plus the firework show they have after championship races I get to see.  Let me tell you they put on very impressive shows for the size of track that is. 

 

Right now I hear a race going!!!

On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

OK, you lost me in this chapter. Despite the fact I like some changes from the original characters, this was over the top. It was so un-Christian, it was unbelieveable-even in fiction. The fact that Kate was involved really blew it. Remember the DNA and his insistance that Ana not even talk to Kate about him? He would never put himself in the position with a member of the media. 



Author's Response:

Hi,

There is a reason behind what happened.  I hope it becomes apparent in the subsequent chapters.   This event serves as catalyst for both Ana & Christian and leads to changes to their lives however it was necessary.  Hope you will keep the faith and stay with me.

 

Toni

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

OK, Christian just really missed Ana begging for him to dominate her in this scene. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

I am reading this all at once. I like the different spin on the characters.

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