Date: 28 Oct 2017 1:27 AM Title: The Day After
I like Luke vanilla relationship!
Thinking of how experienced Severine is she knows there is a background file of her. She would also know that her contract with Christian would include no other intimacy with others.
Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:24 PM Title: The Arrangement
I liked this take on Christian as a Dom pre-Anastasia. Severine is a very enjoyable and realistic character, quite normal but with a taste for BDSM. I hope you will explore the emotional and psychological reasons that she and Christian are in the BDSM scene. Christian's emotional detachment, coldness in these playroom scenes can be felt at times. He also demonstrates through his acts that he cares for his sub's well-being and security. Excellently well written. You have managed to keep the reader's attention at all times. I look forward to the next chapters. I hope they come soon!
Date: 03 May 2015 3:53 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
I love this story. I hope you get the chance to finish it.
As a mother of 4 girls and a wife I know how Real Life
can pull authors from their stories.
I appreciate your commitment to your readers.
Warmest regards -
Date: 15 Apr 2015 1:15 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
I'm sitting here, shaking my head...NO!...please! This can not be the end to this story...I will keep my fingers cross.....would like Luke's pov. Has to be more then a look for both. I like Sevenina, she's more interesting.
Date: 14 Jan 2015 8:09 PM Title: The Arrangement
I discovered your story yesterday, and read straight through all of the chapters available. Really love your storytelling. Severine has a most compelling personality, and if I didn't know Christian's history, I would think she would be a "keeper" for him. So looking forward to Carl meeting a real Dom. And so torn between her staying with Christian and developing things with Luke. Great job - thank you for sharing with us!!
Date: 14 Jan 2015 11:11 AM Title: Confession and Inspection
Ahh, a cliffhanger. I wish that she had called Master and told him herself. However, I realize that that is not your story. I love it so much, I forget Christian is not suppose to end up with Severine. I can't wait for the next one!!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 1:27 PM Title: The Wisdom of Our Elders
Well, idk how this will play out. We know Luke is with Christian when Ana is there. But I want Serverine to take Luke back home to the bayou with her. Hmmm. I can't wait to see what you come up with. Also can't wait to read what happens Tuesday at 5:30!
Date: 20 Sep 2014 12:59 PM Title: You Can Go Home Again
Just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story. You are doing a great job at keeping the story interesting with twists and unexpected turns. It is always well written and as a reader I appreciate the regular updates. I especially like the rap pour between the two of them and the mature relationship they have. You have limited the story to only a few of the original characters in the book making their time more intimate and each of their lives more separate and making for a interesting read. Can't help but wonder though what might happen if a chance meeting between Mia or Elliot might bring. Good work.
Date: 17 Sep 2014 5:09 PM Title: Après Dinner
I agree, with another reviewer, it would be nice to have Christians point of view of this sub and what he feels about her. Why did he choose a scene that gave him a romantic setting - almost like craves it but can't give in to those feelings? Also, why doesn't he kiss her very often. What is he thinking about their arrangement as far as extending the duration? He gives her pleasure multiple times and only one for himself in this scene - does he derive pleasure from her pleasure? Or is this a way of giving of himself ewe. He can't give himself emotionally?
Date: 18 Aug 2014 1:32 PM Title: Ta Kill Ya
I really hope you post the next one soon and he does not end her contract. They haven't really developed their arrangement very far and I think so much more can take place. She is smart and does give Christian more than just sexual pleasure. I think he is monitoring her internet access and knows she wants to go to NOLA.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 10:33 PM Title: Piano Works
Humm. I'm really enjoying this dom/sub story. But, I also love FSOG so I hate seeing Christian with others... when he is being compassionate. In the FSOG books he always seemed so cold with others and when talking about his previous subs. I don't want him to be compassionate, caring and sweet with them. I hated he took Severine on the piano. That was supposed to be only Ana.
There, I got my rant out. Sorry.... My issues.
i am very much enjoying your work!!!!