Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:33 AM Title: Will It Ever End?
The anticipation to discover who the intruder/stalker is painful. I don't remember Leliah having red hair so it remains a mystery for me. And, the scenes are fabulous! The way Christian is with her; it's hard to believe there is no feelings... He is so in tuned to her needs. I guess that's just being a good Dom???
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:25 AM Title: Fire and Ice
Wow, just discovered this and love it! Please continue!
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:26 PM Title: Fire and Ice
Wow, what an emotional release. Very interesting take on how BDSM can help. I love this aspect. But, it almost seems like Christian is having an emotional tie to Severine???
Date: 20 Jul 2014 5:33 PM Title: Fire and Ice
poor girls great ch
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:08 PM Title: Fire and Ice
Oh, so fun and then so sad. The only thing that bothers me is that Christian is doing no aftercare of his sub after they play.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 4:06 AM Title: Doing Penance
This is such a different take. Thank you for showing how BDSM can work without the romantic emotions. It's also interesting to see Christian with a sub before Ana and learn more about how he is the way he is.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:00 AM Title: Doing Penance
Very interesting perspective, on why she seeks penance.
Date: 08 Jul 2014 3:53 PM Title: Safe and Secure
nice love the ch
Date: 05 Jul 2014 9:10 PM Title: The Arrangement
I often wondered how Christian interacted with his subs when they weren't in the playroom. After all, he isn't the kinda guy that makes small talk but he did spend the weekends with them. I really like the way you depict CG as having fun especially during their Cajun night ..dancing and drinking. He's not so cold and distant in your story and he really does care (though you know he would disagree). Enjoying your story very much and look forward to the next update.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 3:11 PM Title: Guns and Posers
I really love this story! I even hate thinking about the original when I am reading this because I want Severine to be THE ONE.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:00 AM Title: Guns and Posers
I love this story! So well written and so interesting. Please keep going; I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 9:48 PM Title: Juju
nice one, who is after her?
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:27 PM Title: Juju
Ilove the new elements in this chapter!
Date: 29 Jun 2014 2:04 PM Title: Juju
another fascinating chapter. thank you.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:41 AM Title: The Suspense Is Killing Me
What a girl handling that, he has got to be impressed. I hope her apartment hasn't been wreaked! Looking forward to more....
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:31 AM Title: The Suspense Is Killing Me
Suspenseful! Love this story!
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:04 AM Title: The Suspense Is Killing Me
What a fun weekend. Liking this story!
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:50 PM Title: The Suspense Is Killing Me
the woman
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:27 AM Title: Ragin' Cajun
I am so glad he if finding her a little interesting! Nice chapter!
Date: 21 Jun 2014 7:08 PM Title: I Can't Get No
Brilliant Thanks xxxx
Date: 20 Jun 2014 6:25 AM Title: I Can't Get No
wow i can't wait to read more
Date: 20 Jun 2014 5:52 AM Title: I Can't Get No
Not a nice man, I know this is what it is all about but it is so frustrating. I am certainly looking forward to her explosion and I think it will be a big one! Thanks great chapter.
Date: 20 Jun 2014 1:00 AM Title: The Arrangement
just found your story and I must say I love it!
Date: 18 Jun 2014 6:09 AM Title: Punishment
My word, that was very hot, great chapter but I feel so sorry for Severine even though she can handle it!
Date: 17 Jun 2014 6:12 PM Title: The Arrangement
I'm really enjoying this story and your frequent updates. Nice job
Date: 16 Jun 2014 4:01 AM Title: Baby I Can Drive My Car
So good!!!! Love this story!!
Date: 15 Jun 2014 11:46 PM Title: Baby I Can Drive My Car
Yikes! ;)
Date: 15 Jun 2014 9:53 PM Title: Baby I Can Drive My Car
This is going to be interesting. Speeding punishment, Mr Grey is going to enjoy that I am sure. Looking forward to the next chapter, I think.......
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:23 PM Title: Night and day
Frankly he Is different with her.Ana was lucky he realy loved her and they had way more sex
Date: 14 Jun 2014 1:46 PM Title: Night and day
Again loved the chapter, so hot! It's great reading this stuff but so don't like the servant feeling of being submissive.
Date: 13 Jun 2014 6:19 PM Title: Play time!
This is story is quite addictive, looking forward to the next episode!
Date: 13 Jun 2014 2:49 PM Title: Play time!
I love this story!! Awesome writing and im looking forward to more chapters!