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Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 57

hmmmm probs renee or james. idk both of them are creepy psychos i reckon.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 56

oh so glad she got him to stay with her. atta girl bella. and hmmm he loves her. of course we all knew that before he did lol

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 55

she needs to find comfort in edward as well not just run.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 54

Good for bella and her dad reconnecting. As for edwards hands...

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 53

Ohhh my sexy edward mmm mm. Glad shes not mad at him for any reason. I would have to kick her ass lol. 

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 52

What a fucking bitch. Yes i hope she pays. So glad she knows the truth that charlie loved her all that time but thought she didn't want anything to do with him. And he's gonna go visit her. 

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 51

Hmmm hope she doesn't take being pissed at alice out on edward

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 50

Meh he was single when it happened she needs to heed her own advice and be privileged that he wants her as a gf.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 49

Wow there is no way i could get into bed with a fuckhot sexy man like edward n just go to sleep lol

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh how terribly sad.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 47

Omg tanya sounds like such a bimbo lol oh well. At least he's not with her anymore.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2016 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 46

I enjoyed this chapter

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 45

So good to finally meet esme n carlisle. Lovely as ever.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 44

Wow it would be so nice to walk into a car dealer and buy whatever you want without worrying about cost.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 43

Oh dayumm that was some frickin hot dry humping.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 42

Ohh edward....so frickin hot n funny. What an aewsome date. I love that he wants to be bellas bf given he didn't want a relationship lol. Glad he gave tanya the flick. Im surprised she hasn't been hassling him still. Be pretty hard to let that hunk of a sex machine go.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 41

these two are really cute i love it when they're alone and i love it too because i have been to Sears Tower. it was awesome. and to me it will always be Sears Tower.lol

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

mmm hot sexy edward in a suit!!

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 38

it's great that they seem to be so much more comfortable with each other now. can't wait for this next date.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

ohhhh he knew the perfect time to go over to bella. that whole super hero protective thing...love it!

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 33

now that was a much better time with each other. glad they got to talk some more.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

well that wedge she put between them obviously doused the flames a little on edwards part but at least he wants to try as well. i'm glad he didn't go back to tanya for some release or anyone for that matter.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 31

you write her so well at the moment it's hard to like her lol.  but i mean the only reason she's talking to edward now it seems ...is because they came and put a fire out at her place so she basically had no choice to communicate with him in the first instance. so glad tho that she got help and stayed in touch with alice. i feel for edward. but i have to give her credit for having an honest conversation with him about her feelings.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 30

omg she shut everyone out?!! i can understand emmetts point. they were all empathetic to her and reaching out ready to help her and ....she didn't even have the decency to stay in touch. hmmm.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

definitely really fucked up. i mean she asks for edward and then when he's there she dismisses him and doesn't even give him a hug. she could've at least let him stay just so that she has someone in the house. he didn't necessarily have to stay in her room. oh well. at least he didn't take it personally.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

oh geez. poor bella. i do hope she can completely get back to her vibrant self. but everything is still pretty fresh.  edward is so sweet

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 25

so far so good. she's enjoying herself and not bothering to overthink things much lol

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

yay they're gonna spend a bit of quality alone time together. 

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

omg that was very brutal. her mom is a total fuckwit as for that james he's the monster of monsters!!! i'd like edward or someone to beat him within an inch of his life and see how he likes it. them and rose should all live together. james should get with rose or irina. they're all fuckwits! so sad for bella glad she has edward and alice as friends. 

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

why the fuck would you cheat on someone like edward? oh well i'm sure it's gonna be bellas gain.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh geez. i'm thinking maybe she was physically abused by her bf or whatever and she lost a baby as a result or maybe sexually abused. oh i don't know i'll just keep reading lol

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 19

rose needs a good bitchslap. glad emmett just let her go lol. what's going on with bella

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

can't wait to hear what the dealio is with bella.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

lol it's all good i've never liked rose. so this is no different. but seriously how can you condone actions like what irina did to edward.  she really is a bitch.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

i think he so damn cute lol

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

awww bella defs needs  some lovin

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

someone from her past i'm thinking maybe!

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

nice to hear what the girls got up to. and i was wondering if bella was gonna register about alices brother being a firefighter

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

Hahaha hes a crackup.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

glad he's breaking it off with tanya. so he's been really hurt too. what a fucking bitch. you've got to have conscience at all to cheat in you and your partners bed let alone cheat at all.

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmmm this is so good so far and i am dying to know what bellas deal is. 

Reviewer: glo4twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow so far this sounds very intriguing. 

Reviewer: Solenita Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 152

I know this is an older story, but grief takes a while to navigate.  I'm glad you found solace in writing.  I myself am not sure there is anything after this life, but simple physics says mass cannot be created nor destroyed.  I like to think our loved ones that leave us exist in some form of energy that surrounds us.  Maybe it's the sun shining, the waves cresting at the beach or the spring flowers pushing through the earth being reborn.  Regardless, she goes on living in a little piece of your heart.  xoxo

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2016 3:04 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

absolutely AWESOME!!! story + f/t ;) thanks for completing it with everything you've gone through in your rl i hope all is well ;)

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2016 6:22 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Family is the key to happiness!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 8:28 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Loved it.  Glad they had a boy. Tristan needs a little buddy with all those girls. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 4:40 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Wonderful follow on to the extended family.  Ty for sharing

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2015 7:36 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Loved it 😍

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 5:08 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !  It has taken me a couple of days to read this chapter because of the holidays and my mother being in the hospital but I read at every chance I got. Love the ending.  Bella's life turned out totally different than what she expected. She never thought she could have a Happily Ever After and she has. Thank you for sharing with us. Love this story. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 4:41 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Absolutely perfect!!! I love them and have missed them all!! I am so excited that you have given us an outtake! THANK YOU DOE THIS! :D

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 3:29 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Awesome story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 12:11 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

One of my favorite story's thanks so much for adding to there life

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 3:48 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Awesome.  Loved it and it wrapped it all up nicely. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2015 2:30 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Such a nice future for such a nice family, including all the newest members! I love to see good things happen to good people!

Reviewer: Mason1810 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 9:57 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

loved it

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 3:15 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Very sweet !   I hate  to see the end of  these  characters .    You have done a  great  job  with  thisstory ! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 8:22 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

good

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 5:46 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Wonderful finish to this story. Thanks!

Reviewer: Nrbl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 1:38 AM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Loved it xoxo

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 10:25 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

:) loved this 

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2015 10:02 PM Title: You're Having a Baby: CITF Future-Take

Beautiful! Really Josie, this was a perfect chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 164

Wow,so much angst in this story. So much sadness. I wasn't expecting it all the way towards the end here. Whew!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 152

I know this is late but I am so sorry to hear of your Mom's passing. I know this loss and my heart and thoughts are with you and yours.

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 149

Wow I'm depressed! Why damage beautiful Edward? Good story! 😉

 

 

 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2015 8:19 AM Title: Epilogue

Great story. Loved your Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2015 5:02 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh I want to know what they are having!  This was such a wonderful story and you are such a talented writer.  Thankyou for this wonderful story. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 12:48 AM Title: Epilogue

This was a gripping, amazing, wonderful story, and I'm glad you managed to get it out to all of us who love to read your stories, each and every one of them! It was so worth every lost hour of sleep it took me to finish this great Bella and Edward story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 174

That was a really great idea for a family honeymoon and was only sad when they came back to snow and cold! That's life and their's sounds like it's going just fine!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 173

That wedding could not possibly have been any better than it was! Everything was perfect!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 172

I guess unalloyed joy is too much to expect, considering all she and Edward have experienced this past year! It sounds like the wedding will be amazing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 171

Don't you just love Charlie? I know I do!They are almost there and I can't wait!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 170

No wonder Edward teared up at everything Garrett said abouthim! What a great tribute and how great that he's alive to hear it! What tattoo is it that Bella got?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 169

Great that Emmett and Edward cleared the air. I think it will be good for him to take his girls down to the firehouse. I also think it nearly broke his heart to lose that part of his life and the career he loved.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 168

Great birthday from the sound of it, only marred by the chill between Emmett and Edward. I'm so glad Charlie is moving to Chicago to be near his daughter and granbaby.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 167

Hell, I would have been surprised if all went swimmingly as soon as Molly gave the okay! I guess they are just normal human beings who have undergone some major traumas in the last year!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 166

Sounds like everyone is doing well, though Bella may have a problem? Maybe she's just hungry. Harold seems like a nice enough kid.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 165

That was too cute, Edward insisting Marie smiled at him and getting gas for his troubles! It really was a sweet moment! I'm just tickled they are all home , healthy and in one piece!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 164

Not the perfect outcome one might wish for but not too bad, either! The baby is here and relatively healthy, Bella lost her uterus but not her life and Edward is thrilled to have them both! Maybe now, life can get back to what passes for normal!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 163

Looks like Alice got the baby shower in just under the wire! Marie is on her way! I kind of felt sorry for poor Sheila , taken in and brainwashed by James the way she was!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 162

These two are sure making good use of their medical insurance! Talk about getting your money's worth! I'm just glad the major threat is gone, from now on it should be just normal stuff!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 161

Not only a hallelujah, but an amen to boot! I hate for Bella's office and equipment to go up in smoke, but she and Edward are safely out and thank the dear Lord, James is dead! Free at last, free at last!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 160

Come on, girl, after all the crap James did to him, you let him have at him again? Not nice!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 159

All the drama just proves nobody is perfect, not even Edward! It's nice that they can forgive and forget, and go on from there!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 158

Even though it's late here, I can't go to bed until I know what he's going to try to do to them next!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 157

It's so sweet that Marie's godfather is helping decorate her nursery, and also babysitting her daddy! I sure hate to hear that Bella is having nasty nightmares again and Edward has had a setback!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 156

Thanks for the promise of no harm to Marie, but how about Daddy Edward? He's not quite back to fighting shape yet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 155

Since your brain is the largest sex organ in your body, what they just did together is pretty sexy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 154

I hate whenBella gets those feelings like she's being watched, mostly because she is! At least the dress has been decided, so that's out of the way.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 153

I guess Bella has enough protection from Alice'smad shopping urges, with Carlisle and Charlie along. Edward will just have to pout about not seeing the dress.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 152

What a sweet, wonderful thing to do, both for Leah, Seth and Jacob, but for Edward, too!Charlie has a problem, wanting to be closer to Bella and the baby, but being too young to retire and move. Hopfully he'll figure out something.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 151

As long as he doesn't hurt them, their baby girl, or anyone they love, I don't care what happens to him. He should get all the plagues from the bible nd die a hooible death, so there!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 150

A lovely tribute to your mom, too! I think you picked the right one, anyway. What a situation to be in right now, both of them want to love each other so much and can't do much about it! Sometimes life just sucks!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 149

Makes me want to hug him, too and tell him it will all work out! I kind of don't blame him for not wanting to tell her about James. The poor woman has been through an awful lot of stress and enough is enough!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 148

I'll bet the bad news from Garrett is that they won't let Edward come back!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 147

Sure he'll make a full recovery, but that doesn't necessarily mean he'll still be able to be a firefighter. The man has a lot on his plate right now, rehab, baby, wedding, just to mention a few! Lots of stuff to be decided!

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