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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 146

Yes, they have so many things to discuss, and soon. Then they need to get him back to good health and it's going to take a while. Then there is the problem of James, who obviously took Edward's gear and made his escape. Too bad he didn't die right there!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 145

The poor guy has no idea he's been out for so long! Has he got a lot to catch up on!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 144

His injuries are quite serious, but he's strong and healthy , with a lot to live for, even more than he knows! Bella just has to have faith, in him and modern medicine! And she really has to quit apologizing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 143

Coma be damned, I'm so glad she told him of the miracle their love made!Now we just have to keep her healthy and heal him, so she can really tell him the good news!As for James, I hope he bled out in a filthy back alley somewhere!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 142

My God, woman, the manloves you more than himself, buck up and be strong for him now he needs you!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 141

You couldn't let him die in that fire, right ? That would be too good for him. Now Bella is going to have a cow before they find him and get rid of him once and for ever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 140

As long as the crew gets to him pretty soon and they stop the blood loss, all will be well. I hope to hell Edward stabbed that son-of-a-bitch to death! It would be too easy a death, but we'll take what we can get!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 139

Damn! Now what and who?

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Date: 21 Aug 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 138

I hope to heaven nobody gave you a ration when you were going through this painful time, that would plain suck!  It's real nice of Carlisle nd Esme to have Peter come stay with them for a while, until he gets settled elsewhere!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 137

I hope the prayers and good thoughts helped you survive the trauma of losing your mom, and yes, I peeked at future author notes and read that. I'm so sorry that is such a horrendous loss, trust me, I know from experience! I hope this bad patch B&E are going through is resolved before he loses his tiny mind!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 136

At least he knows where she is and she's probably okay. I can't imagine the worries that must be going trough his mind!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 135

Now that the child managed to be conceived, please don't let anything happen to it! Wait until she tells Edward, he's going to be thrilled!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 134

Okay, if she is pregnant with Edward's child, there better not be anything bad happening to this miraculous child!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 133

Well, of course she is, after all, miracles do happen! I'm just glad Alice thought of it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 132

I hope Charlie can haelp Bella see this isn't doing any good, only worrying everyone!I think she just gets overloaded with guilt and has a mini breakdown. Too bad Edward isn't there with his calming touch!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 131

N ot that I blame her for wanting her dad, but it might have been nicwe to let Edward know where she was going! I'll bet he is beside himself with worry!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 130

What was he thinking, telling her something like that over the phone?She coming home tomorrow, it could have waited, if he hadn't hit the panic button thinking Bella was in trouble!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 129

I hope to hell her bitch-mother hasn't got her hands on her! That could be fatal! I'm sure glad Peter fought off James as well as he did!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 128

I don't like that Peter is hurt, but I'm so glad James is still in Chicago and not after Bella in Florida!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 127

Altogether, a very happy day!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 126

Just the relaxation and distraction they needed!

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 125

I cannot imagine what crazy James has been doing all this time. Probably enjoying making everyone anxious and on edge!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 124

Good for her and great attitude also!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 123

I sure hope Bella's photographer and old professor isn't next to die! That was a totally creepy phone call , whoever it was! (probably James?)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 122

Some good news would be a welcome relief! This has been as hard on Bella as it has on Edward! The real bad part is the not knowing when or if it will ever end, I would imagine!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 121

Evidently Chicago has some pretty good cops if they have discovered all this already!

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 120

I'm almost afraid to hazard a guess as to the next target! I suppose it could be anyone they know. James wants to kill Edward because he thinks that would get him back Bella, the delusional asshole! Renee just wants to plain kill her own child, the selfcentered, evil bitch!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 119

Of course Bella needs Esme's mother love, something the poor girl has never had from her own! This is all very traumatic , but they are all going to have to suck it up and find a way to overcome it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 118

Why would anyone hate on Bella for a perfectly natural reaction? Some people's childre, I suppose. Thank heavens for family to help them get through this awfulness! Can't wait for the police to get busy investigating, hunt them down like the rabid dogs they are!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 117

Well hell, better to laugh about snoring and hogging the bed, than be sad over what you can't change!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 116

I have always thought it would be about the worst thing to lose all your keepsakes , pictures and memories in a fire like that! Poor Edward!

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 115

Yeah, yeah, we know who's going to be caught and I hate the very thought of those two loonies getting their grasping claws on Bella, possibly even Edward! Hate it, hate it! Of course Laurent is the dead body, bet he was shocked when James killed him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 114

Sounds like a wonderful Christmas, and it was funny that Edward found a way to make Alice leave them alone!

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 113

I just wish Bella would tell someone about these odd feelings she's been having. I also wish Detective Cruz and or her dad was on the trail of the bad guys! I was thinking, Charlie could shoot James and Renee and most likely get away with it, right?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 112

But, I don't want James and Laurent to surprise Edward! They want to kill him, which kind of defeats the whole purposeof this story!

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Date: 20 Aug 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 111

Gorgeous proposal deserves gorgeous acceptance!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 110

What a wonderful proposal, I'll bet she says yes in a heartbeat!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 109

Come on, I know she will say yes, she loves him to pieces! It's cute that he's so nervous, but as Jasper told him, totally unnecessary!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 108

I almost can't enjoy this because of what might be coming to attack them soon! Please tell me that James doesn't get his evil, filthy hands on Bella again! It might send her round the bend if he did!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 107

I'm glad that he's going to propose with Nana's ring, which I'm sure she will love!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 106

If the monsters are coming to Chicago right after Christmas, and Edward is looking for a ring for Bella, I hope he gets a chance to ask her before all hell breaks loose! When I think of what might happen to both Bella and Edward it gives me the creeps!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 105

What difference does it make who is crazier? They both need to be at least locked up, if nobody wants to kill them. I would do it happily, free of charge, just provide me an alibi and it's done! Renee and James both make me sick!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 104

A bit over the top, shall we say? This is nearly unbelievable, that she and that monster would plot to destroy her own flesh and blood! Where are the guys with straitm jackets when you need them?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 103

Ahh! Do we have to listen to the new POV? I have a bad feeling it will be the crazy pyromaniac, most likely James!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 102

The stomach knot you were writing about? Now I'm getting one, too! I hope you're not going to destroy all the businesses or homes of all the people Bella loves! That would just be mean!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 101

No idea who the poor soul might be, but I'm with Edward , it's is tied to the realator office fire and most likely started the exact same way!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 100

Inevitable, I suppose that Thanksgiving dinner would be interrupted by a fire. One at Clear Waters, though will galvanize the crews big time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 99

These two both have a kind of premonition thing in common and it turns out right most of the time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 98

I can't feeling that Laurent is there as a plant, or mole, however you want to name it!I'm just glad he is on his way out!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 97

Beautifully done and described! They are each other's hero and that ain't bad!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 96

Bella is so much better than she was, but still needs a bit more confidence, so she can quit apologizing for stuff like that! I'm so glad they plan to get rid of Laurent, and only sorry it probably won't mean he will disappear altogether!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 95

I agree wholeheartedly about Laurent's ickyness!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 94

This was a totally amazing chapter, what with the valor award, but I definitely don't like Laurent, at all!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 93

Of course he is a bad guy, just the Name is a clue, and the staring thing is a dead give away!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 92

Off to the Fireman's Ball we go! I'll bet everyone is gorgeous!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 91

Glad they found the perfect dress for the ball, nd for New Years! Alice's supplier of fabric is really being a twit! Who is working for whom, here?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 90

That was amazing kitchen sex! The calendar is going to be great. too from the description!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 89

That actually sounded like fun, and not nearly as bad as Edward was expecting!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 88

If it was me, there's no way I would stay by myself in that house. Especially when there is this gorgeous man craving to protect me!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 87

Bella is thinking exactly what I am!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 86

My God! What a hideous way to die! Poor thing, I hope he killed her before setting her on fire! If this is tied to Bella in some way, I shudder to think what is next! You would have to be crazy to do something this awful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 85

The opening went well, except for the call to the fire, of course. Wonder why Victoria never showed?

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 84

When she threw the condom on the floor, I knew what she had in mind, bless her heart! I also knew Edward would probably be okay with the possible result!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 83

She is doing great! It looks like all that loving patience has finally paid off! He really is the greatest guy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 82

A rather unpleasant part of modern living, traffic jams, but you just have to grin and bear it! Now that they have arrived they can relax and enjoy each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 81

This weekend is sounding better all the time! I like Leah in this story, but it would be nice if she could find a girfriend! I hope Bella doesn't get so wound up she forgets to have a great time with the love of her life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 80

I suppose as well as things have been going, you felt compelled to drag in some more drama! I would say that Bella and Edward celebrated her birthday quite beautifully!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 79

What a pleasant surprise, meeting one of Bella's professors from college and having him take pictures of them! Looks like it will turn into a job for him, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 78

Breakfast in bed, cooked with his very own hand! What a lucky girl, and it's not over yet!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 77

When Edward mentioned see-through nightie, Alice looked guilty!Whatever it is I'm sure Bella is going to love her birthday this year just because she has her dad and Edward to celebrate with!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 76

It was nice that Charlie came to hang out with Edward at the firehouse. It gave him something to do while Bella was busy with work. The weekend at the b&b sounds great, but I wonder what else he has in mind?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 75

I'm so glad Charlie showed up and is the kind of dad she should have had all along! Renee has a ton of stuff to answer for and I hope karma is a realbitch!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 74

This is a pretty good Charlie from what he's said so far. I guess he isn't entirely to blame for Bella being without her dad all this time. It seems to have been about ninety percent Renee's fault, that evil bitch!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 73

Well, hello Charlie! Wonder why he's here early?

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 72

How wonderful, she finally was able to say those words! I'll bet Edward is about to swoon with happiness!( or whatever guys do in circumstances like this!)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 71

Even Garrett, that was so nice of him! Esme was sweet and not pushy, I love her! As soon as the guys get the locks changed, she'll feel a lot better!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 70

May we now beat the shit out of that awful, horrible woman?

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:23 AM Title: Epilogue

I absolutely loved this story, thank you for writing this and for being my favorite author!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 69

That really is a tough one for Emmett, cancer is not something you wish on your worst enemy, let alone someone you once loved!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 68

I bet he's not only very relieved, but proud of his girl for how confident she is becoming!

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Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 67

That had to be incredibly encouraging for Edward, if a bit frustrating!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 66

Alice may love her brother, but she isn't nearly as considerate of him as Bella is!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 65

Talk about some not so subtle blackmail! Of course, Alice is probably right about having a barbeque ina house versus a condo! I wonder why she thinks Bella will be saying ILY soon?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 64

Well, he told her it was up to her to set the pace and he was true to his word. He builds trust, one kiss , one caress at a time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 63

I really like that they can talk about anything. They seem to be building a solid foundation which should last them forever!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 62

That really was bad timing with that particular question! I'm kind of surprised Bella did that!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 61

Too bad Bella can't bring herself to feel about her body as Edward does, but that may come with time! Irina must be nearly braindead to think Edward would just forgive and forget what she did to him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 60

Not only a skank, but delusional to boot! I think Emmett had it right, they both have crazy exes!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 59

Just color me clueless! One of Edward's old girlfriends, or...? Nice of Alice and Bella to come help with the painting, by the way!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 58

I doubt very much that Edward is imagining being followed, he's pretty aware! Bella shocked the heck out of Victoria, telling her she wouldn't be needing a loan to purchase the travel agency space!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 57

Great, now what is dogging Bella looks to have slopped over on Edward! I hate to think of who it may be!At least Bella is doing well in therapy which is a big plus for both of them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 56

I can tell Edward is in for the long haul, as they say! He's going to do whatever it takes for as long as it takes, and that is exactly what Bella needs!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 55

That's just a part of Bella getting well again and healing, I guess. Can't help feeling bad for her though!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 54

Charlie meetimg Edward, yeah, that will be fun!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 53

Even sore and tired, he comes over to feed his girl, now that's a boyfriend!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 52

My God! Renee is right up there with James, on the scale of poor excuses for human beings! that is so awful for a woman to do that crap to her own child! Hope she burns in hell forever!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 51

Oh lord, what has Renee done now? This ought to be interesting!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 50

At a guess, Bella probably isn't thrilled about Tanya, but she realizes it is the past and really has nothing to do with her relationship with Edward! I hope she cuts him some slack over it!

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Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 49

Being the honest, decent guy he is, Edward will most likely tell Bella about Tanya! It was so great that she as there for him after the horror of the day!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 48

That was just plain awful, but thank God the baby was okay!Something like this wreck just makes you so thankful your family is safe!

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