Date: 19 Oct 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Think they both overreacted a bit.
Date: 19 Oct 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
No not at all Edward needs to pull it together
Date: 19 Oct 2014 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
I don't think Bella overreacted, she was smart enough to calm things down and KNOW that if Edward reacted that way they had no chance beating the. Kings. "Don't go off half cocked!" Is the old expression. At his point I think both of them would be surprised of their depth of feelings if they were honest. It's important to remember that showing your feelings deeply in their world is a deficit. Unless handled privately, decorum is the order of the day! Loving this piece of fiction!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
no I don't think Bella overreacted. Edward needs to watch his temper and save it for those who really deserve it
Date: 19 Oct 2014 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
Talk about hot headed! He needs to get his temper in check if he wants to be a successful mob boss! On the flip side, I can totally understand Edward protecting his wife, just went a little extreme!
Date: 19 Oct 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
god, they need their heads banged together
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow will Edward be able to keep his cool and poor Bella will she be able to help him
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well at least they are at least willing to work on the marriage. They do need to learn about each other. They need to become friends before they can have more.
Date: 16 Oct 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Nice to see them working
Date: 13 Oct 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
A slow burn is always worth the wait...so them taking the time to get to know each other is the right thing to do..looking forward to the next week of the honeymoon...
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well that was nice but will they fall in love will they be able to stay like this even after they go back home
Date: 13 Oct 2014 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love this story! Love that I can read one of your stories and be confident in the fidelity of Edward and Bella! Loved the chapter!
Date: 12 Oct 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
A nice start to their marriage
Date: 12 Oct 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wonderful thoughts about the honeymoon! If only everyone took time on their honeymoon to just learn about one another married life later would be a lot easier! It should be interesting to see how this Bella and Edward work as a couple once they return to real life. Wonderful, thought provoking chapter! Thank you!
Date: 12 Oct 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
The cheating thing kinda crossed my mind for a moment but I like to wait till I see (read) proof first. Sorry you got a troll guest review.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to more
Date: 12 Oct 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad you didn't do lemons right away. It wouldn't be true to their situation. I hate stories that have them hating each other or at least not getting along at first and the next chapter their already having sex and talking about babies.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope we hear some of the getting-to-know-you stuff, too!
Date: 12 Oct 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Thank you
Date: 12 Oct 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
They're spending time getting to know each other instead if fighting and/or the silent treatment!! That's definitely a step in the right direction. I hope that by the time they leave the island that they've at least established a semi strong foundation to build their friendship and hopefully trust in each other! Looking forward to next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love your story can not wait for more.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
They could make each other so happy if they were honest with each other. I can't wait until this turning point.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
I knew there had to be some sort of disruption!! Loving this story!
Date: 06 Oct 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
love it, cant wait to read more.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
SWEET
Date: 06 Oct 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oye I need more!!! Please and thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
I just love this story! Can't wait till next week
Date: 06 Oct 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well I hope they work it out on the honeymoon as this is no way to live not even speaking to each other.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
This should be an interesting honeymoon...hopefully it's not all seriousness and the do have some fun bonding time together...till next time :)
Date: 06 Oct 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
What a weirdo King is. Cant wait for more.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh wow Edward needs to get his head on straight or Bella will pay the price and wow Alec is crazy how far will he go to get her
Date: 06 Oct 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Alec is going to be trouble. They are married. Yeah!
Date: 06 Oct 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hope our two kids can work out their issues.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
when do we get the honeymoon ?????????????????????
Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Chaste kiss but with a burning desire for more...??? tee hee hee
Hope Edward didn't have one last fling! :(
And glad there wasn't any bloodshed on their wedding day! :D
Great update!
xo
Date: 02 Oct 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella needs to learn that you can be strong without being a bitch about it. They are just learning about each other. Edward was put into this situation just like her. She is also very young. It is the truth. He is trying to take care of her. Is that really so horrible? She needs to be patient and he will learn her strengths and weakness. She doesn't need to make this any harder than it is. So yes Bella, you are being a bitch.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
how do we know what it will be like? I mean they neither want this. He is pretty nasty. She is scared. It would be better for this to not happen.
Date: 01 Oct 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't really blame Bella.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Emo is putting it mildly! Oy vey! Wedding will probably be a disaster! Looking forward to it!
Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
Nice
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well he knows what he is asking is wrong if he is unwilling to put forth the same will they ever care for one another update soon
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG! Love your story.Can't wait for more.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
These two are oblivious to what others see. Hopefully they find a way to talk to each other the night before the wedding so they have some sort of middle ground to renew their wedding day. Hardheaded, stubborn, and pride and hard to overcome. Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 30 Sep 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
What's a wedding without a little drama? I do feel sorry for Bella...Edward not so much. I am looking forward to the next update and will wait as long as it takes. RL has to come first! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
I just love this story! Thank you for writing it! Good luck with work!
Date: 25 Sep 2014 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella has to fly off the handle at everything. Has she ever thought of talking honestly to Edward. They need to learn to communicate and trust each other. Carlisle is not helping the situation.
Date: 22 Sep 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad you updated.. Please I am reading your stories. get in the groove. LOL
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow go Bella but Edward needs to wise up will he update soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love it !!! Bella is to Edward game, I'm looking forward to the wedding, they will be so hot, of course if they do not kill each other before (laughs), they are so stubborn, just Edward and Bella is not aggressive.
Edward jealous of Bella, or it aente possessive of it?
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2014 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Elle sait ce qu'elle veut, elle va "soulever" les ces macho ... Salut, salut!
Date: 22 Sep 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
WAY TO SHORT.MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!
Date: 21 Sep 2014 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
You go girl!!! Set those guys straight. I love it. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 21 Sep 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella is a little firecracker and I love that she keeps Edward and Carlisle in their places.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love strong Bella.
Date: 21 Sep 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving this story. Please let Bella land a knock out puncn on Alec at one point in the story
Date: 21 Sep 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was AWESOME!!! Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
enjoying this fiesty b
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Quick, Edward, run after her! LOL *wiggles eyebrows*
Date: 21 Sep 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love it! :)
-Kate
Date: 21 Sep 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ils vont obtenir mieux.
Author's Response:
Okay, well...thanks for reviewing and reading, but I can't understand what you are telling me...lol.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ainsi, ils préparent le mariage ...
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oui, un armistice, il est une bonne idée.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
un mariage blanc.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oui Edward, vous allez vous marier ...
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ce qu'elle découvert?
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
C'est vrai, Edward n'est pas très agréable.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Merci, c'est très intéressant.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Le bon débuts, J'aime ce premier Chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ooh hoo! LOL! Date night!
Why didn't Bella smack Edward for laughing? Jealous hostess hussy! LOL! ;)
Date: 07 Sep 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
This story keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for you to update! ;-)
Date: 06 Sep 2014 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great story! I found it and kept reading all 10 chapters. I love your characters and the detail you take with emotions and situations. It really brings your work home! Thank you for a really enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to your next update!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. I hope they talk and really get to know each other.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love it, Edward is falling for Bella.
Date: 03 Sep 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE IT SO MUCH! NO INTERRUPTION AND LEMONS PLZ! ALSO UPDATE SOON PLZ!
Date: 01 Sep 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awesome story so fad I wish the chapters would be updated faster! !!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Can't wait!! Love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it wow Bella is really good at what she does now will they find the one doing it and how long will it take for them to develop feelings for each other update soon
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
What do I think? I don't know yet..
Date: 30 Aug 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to more
Date: 30 Aug 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Go detective Bella. Like her standing up for herself
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love this chapter .love your story can not wait for more.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh I need more of this!!!! Love it