Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think Edward did the right thing. Who wants to marry a man who won't stand up for her honor. It was actually one of the best ways to show Bella that he trully cares for her. He didn't have time to think. He just acted for her honor. That is how she can know it was true.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well that went well didn't it now will he relax and how soon will they be married
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
They need to work on igniting the spark that is there. i like this Bella a lot.
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
They are getting close, Edward cares about Bella, but he did not realize he loves her.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great to see your post
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Glad B is supporing him with Carlisle and smacking Alec down. Pussy move with the cheap shot.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
New chapter asap please!!!! Love this story! !
Date: 21 Aug 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward should have put the ring on her finger.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Bella kissed Edward !? They are so hot, two people so strong and stubborn ...
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is thinking about giving? Bella is a strong girl they can fight and fight, but I hope they are well
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella! Edward is a jerk, but Bella will pick up this beast.
Date: 18 Aug 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
We'll, I'm hoping they kissed each other! My other thought is that Royce/Alec said something to ruin the moment. I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter!!! I'm loving this story and can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!!!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Big kiss? Or Alec exploding?
Date: 17 Aug 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
She kissed him of course.
Date: 17 Aug 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
A part of me thinks Bella will kiss Edward and give everyone a show. Another thinks the Kings are the ones who will put on a shocked and probably angry show.
Date: 17 Aug 2014 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
life is like this not peaceful and full of surprises. Roll with the flow.
Date: 17 Aug 2014 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well I get that Carlisle makes the decisions. Can you imagine telling your children this? They would pack and leave.
Date: 17 Aug 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
she is hard to get along with as well. Yes he was mean as a child, you don't just hold that forever though
Date: 17 Aug 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
What happened?! Oh tell me she shocked everyone by kissing him good, keeping it soft, sweet and romantic...
Or the other theory is, the King's made a commotion...
Please update soon
Date: 17 Aug 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can't wait for the next chapter. Is she going to kiss Edward?
Date: 17 Aug 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
She kisses him ??...or pushes him ?? I hope it's the first. Can't wait to see what it is.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
That was just mean and good all at the same time
Date: 16 Aug 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
great start. If we hate Edward please don't get mad.. He is so easy to hate. LOL
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh gosh I dearly love this story
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow if they are acting they should be in movies what happens next hmmm update soon
Date: 16 Aug 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hate creepo men. Royce and Alec need to have certain parts of their anatomy removed.
Date: 16 Aug 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ohhh. She grabbed him by the lapels and pulled him down to her for a passionate kiss?
Date: 16 Aug 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Aug 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Both of them have an imaturity problem. They have not learned how to communicate or compromise. They are both spoiled and want to be right. For this to work, they will need to think of the other person more than themselves.
Date: 14 Aug 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it, cant wait for more!
Date: 10 Aug 2014 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well at least E is a bit calmer now.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks you - enjoying this tale...I don't often review as I read on my phone, and it's a bitch to review from, so rest assured I'm a loyal and grateful reader!
keep up the good work! T
Date: 10 Aug 2014 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is getting interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love. It can't wait for more.great story so far .
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love Edward and his temper.
Date: 10 Aug 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm sure she will be a big help. She is a spunky one. Why didn't they think she knew what the family did? She isn't stupid! Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 09 Aug 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
She is quiet but listens well....most me would love those qualities in a women!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Goodness I love this story
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow could they call a truce wl they be able to be together and Esme wants to plan a wedding she might have had in her head for a long time heheheh update soon
Date: 09 Aug 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
With Bella's computer skills and knowledge of numbers I think she'll make a great partner for Edward and the family...but they seem to be starting out with a love/hate relationship that usually makes for a great couple later on...it's interesting to know that Edward was already smitten with Bella in the past.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
LOL, "If she could stop pushing my buttons." tee hee hee
I bet much later in the story he can't wait for her to push his buttons! ;) Hot sex forecast! LOL
Date: 09 Aug 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love to see them work together.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
If they are too peaceful, these two will put a stop to it ;)
they work well pushing each other's buttons, I think.
Date: 09 Aug 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow poor Bella but will they learn to be together maybe even like each other update soon
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2014 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh Bella and Edward will not be happy about that. How funny.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awww! They fell asleep across from each other!
If they fear for Bella's safety, and thus announcing the engagement so quickly, will the wedding be quick, too?
Author's Response:
A wedding will probably be quick....especially with what is going to happen at the announcement
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is a winey little brat...Really what mafia underboss acts like he does? You're never suppose to show feeling he needs to work on that if he is to be in charge. Also I thought that mafia was big on family...therefore I'm sure kids are in the equation
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
I THINK EDWARDS AN ASSHOLE, BUT I LIKE MOBWARD. UPDATE SOON PLZZZZ!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love it, cant wait for more!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is too funny.
Poor, clueless edward
Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think Bella realizes that it's the only way to protect herself.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Part of Bella's calmness is due to her having figured out Carlisle's plan already. Her calm won't last too long though, and something tells me Esme is kind of hoping to see her snap with Edward.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE all the point of views you covered
Date: 03 Aug 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh boy! All hell is about to let loose...can't wait.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Truly enjoyed.
How many chapters in this story?
Author's Response:
I'm not sure yet. I only had 1-5 prewritten, so I am just letting the story drive me....
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh most definitely the calm before the storm! Poor girl"lol" seriously he's hot to look at but his personality is leaving MUCH to be DESIRED, in this story..."so far"
Obviously he will come to his senses at some point, but what a dense boy for his blantant inability to not see or figure out "who" the wife was to be!
Our girl is a smart one though, she had it pegged that's for sure! Love this story line!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait for Bella to make him even more passed off. He deserves it. Not to mention that he's an idiot to not put it together before am.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love it, can't wait for more.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well there are no feelings yet between Bella and Edward so I say they both will be pissed.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
WOW! Carlisle knows how to give a news ... I'm looking forward to more!
I understand that Edward is an arrogant jerk because he is a gangster, he is the way a crime boss should be. Bella will have much work to do Edward wrapped around your little finger, he will be furious when he learns of his father's plans ...
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
hahaha go Eddie boy, cant wait to see their reaction
Date: 29 Jul 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
I don't think anyone will be happy about this news....can't wait for next chapter :)
Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
OOOH! Edward got in trouble! What kind of uproar will happen when he and Bella find out they are going to get married? Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love your story can not wait for more chapters.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Don't think B or E are going to react well to the news Carlisle is about to impart. LOL
Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, my my my, not sure what I expected her to find, but that wasn't it. This is so good
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
No way! I think Charlie was forced to be with the blonde. :(
And why would Bella have an arranged marriage, but her brothers have not married yet?
:D
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it. Thanks for the update.
Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
It going to get more than a bit crazy once the news are out...
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
interesting story! hope to see more soon :)
Date: 28 Jul 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Who is Royce King's son?
Author's Response:
you are the only one to ask! Trust me you will find out....
Date: 28 Jul 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter love the interaction everyone
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good I like when Bella is smart not helpless. I hope this is the case in this story