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Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

So bella is a hacker

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am not liking this abusive Edward, but I love that Bella stands up to him. Dying to know what is in the file!! Great cliffie!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

:):)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

I'm looking forward to more! Edward really is an idiot, but I like our mobward and Bella is a stubborn girl, she can defend herself.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

I LOVE MOBWARD! BUT IS EDWARD GOING TO BE A MAJOR ASSHOLE THE ENTIRE STORY? PLZ NO, GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR YARDSALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hope you post soon

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 4

What a cliffhanger! Loving this story, and can't for the next chapter! (What did she find?!)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh brother,  I love this story.   Good luck with your yard sale! 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love this Mobward, it really is a bad boy, I want to see him when he falls for Bella. I'm glad Bella stood firm and not obdeceu our bad boy. The fights begin ...

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

WHY IS HE SUCH AN ASSHOLE? I LOVE IT THOUGH!!!! THANK YOU! UPDATE SOON PLZ!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love the tension between them can't wait for your next chapter

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ooooh Bella is in for  a few shocks.  Great update, thanks.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

Edward needs to be told no every once in a while. I guess very few people dare to do it and get away with it. Bella dis the right thing standing up to Edward as she did. Something tells me she knows more than her brothers and the Cullens think. we'll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh E you are being the same bully you were as a child.  Glad B stood up for herself.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

These two are going to have a fierce love hate relationship...can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loving it so far.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yes, definitely the defiant young woman, totally love it!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

I think Edward needs an attitude adjustment and Bella is just one to do it Go Bella! Thanks for the great new story im a big fan of your stories

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh my. Naughty boy! ;)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait for the next update! Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh man, please update soon!

Reviewer: Lud Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm so excited to Mobward!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved the update.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sounds great,  looking forward to more

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

Post soon

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it so far ,can not wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Tribal Matriarch Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting beginning.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Awesome! Got some answers, which leads to a few more questions, LOL! Can't wait til next week! :D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ah so B is aware of the "employment" and is a computer hacker huh?

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

So Bella can hack stuff...huh....guess she may be more involved in this than their women seem to be before too long, to help them find out the clues they need to solve the murders. 

Reviewer: gajujubee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it so far can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love Mobward, I'm ready for the next chapter, I do not care if this will be a bad Edward has since HEA.
Kisses.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a fantastic start! I am excited to read more of this story. :)

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

So far so good....can't wait till next week.

Reviewer: oh my Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cannot wait for more chapters!!! I will be reading this!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading this

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter.  Impatiently waiting for the next one!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looks good

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

GREAT!!!!!!!

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading more! How often will you be updating?



Author's Response:

Every Saturday

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

awww poor Bella.  Glad Her brothers got her away ok

Reviewer: darcy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning. A new and intriguing twist. Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like a good summer read.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it!! Can't wait till next week :) 

 

-Kate

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Reads like it is going to be very good

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