Date: 17 Nov 2023 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
Boy, those two have had to go through so much! They are both so strong! Renee was batshit crazy! Thank goodness she didn't kill Bella or the babies. I loved this story. Grandpa Charlie was one of my favorites. Thanks, Ladies!
Date: 10 Jul 2018 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
So good, but you had me in tears.
Date: 30 Jul 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great story, lots of twists!
Date: 27 Jul 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
AWESOME!!! story ;) it had everything ;) thanks so much for posting it on here for us ;D
Date: 01 May 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it Loved it haven sounds wonderful.
Date: 01 May 2015 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow that was some scary stuff someone needed to put Renee down long ago. All babys are home safe so happy
Date: 01 May 2015 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 29
That was a great proposal. Im glad Carlisle got shit of his chest but I think it would of been fare if Edward got a chance to do the same but at least now Edward can maybe understand a little more about him.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
Jake needs to be put away to bad the football team didn't kick his ass.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 27
Things are heating up. So glad Emmett is coming from the dark side and sees the light
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Edward is the best no matter how they have treated him he will still protect them. Royce and the rest of the ass holes got what they deserved
Date: 28 Apr 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
Edward knows how much his parents loved him very sweet. Renee needs to be put back away never to be let out again
Date: 28 Apr 2015 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
I think Carlisle is just a dick lol
Date: 27 Apr 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Carlisle is a peice of shit is Esme his real mother is that why Carlisle is treating him the way he is.
Date: 27 Apr 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
I just cant beleive that the Cullens are so closed off to hear him. What is Bella not wanting him to hear??
Date: 25 Apr 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
I loved it his parents took care of her
Date: 24 Apr 2015 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Bella wrong place wrong time Edward will not give up. Rose has turned into a great friend
Date: 24 Apr 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is amazing
Date: 24 Apr 2015 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is a good person no matter what the person has done. I am impressed with Rose for being so sorry she is in a bad place and no where to turn I get it and so do they she is a good person. I think Emmett is going to try to tell Edward he is sorry if he hears from Rose.
Date: 24 Apr 2015 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Rose was so lucky they came along and so lucky they are good people. Edward is so lucky Bella stayed and did not give up on him.
Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am not happy with the Cullen s at all. It's time to look at the video
Date: 21 Apr 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was so sweet he got so into her his body just did what it wanted lol
Date: 21 Apr 2015 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett is sad Rose is a bitch and loves to cause trouble. when is Edward going to kiss her on the lips lol
Date: 20 Apr 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
That is so great she has more family that care and love her. Wow what a surprise about he money . Alice better have something important to talk about lol
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 31
You guys are just so good at this, I love your stories so much! The epilogue was wonderful!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 30
I was beginning to think God didn't love Bella, the way Renee showed up and nearly killed her and the babies! Bless Carlisle for saving them all. Guess it makes up for all the bad stuff he did! Loved the triplet's names, by the way.
Date: 19 Nov 2014 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 29
Sounds to me like this hellish year is getting better and better! I have my fingers crossed that it is so!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
I was really glad the football team, and Jasper protected Bella from that crazy Jacob! It's nice that Bella and Edward are sending stuff to Jessica for the baby, but that's just how they are!Boy am I happy the trials are all over and Aro got what he deserved!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
Closer and hotter all the time! It won't be too much longer, I'm thinking and they will just naturally go the rest of the way! I admire Esme and Emmett for getting help and trying to mend relations with Edward. I guess there's not much hope for Carlisle or Alice!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
Absolutely yes, Bella is the best! I thought Esme was just too snotty when she went to Charlie's to "command" Edward to come home with her! Who does she think she is, anyway? The trial came out just perfectly and Bella really scored, getting Rose to go to a support group with her. I hope Edward doesn't get hurt helping Emmett! Frankly, I have had enough of people beating the hell out of Edward!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward's letter from his mother was so sweet, and Bella's from her mother was so gross and ugly, the contrast couldn't be more stark!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 24
Because he's a self-centered, jealous, vindictive asshole perhaps? Those are the kindest descriptives I have right now! There has to be a powerful reason why he's that way, unless he was born that way? Sure glad Bella and Edward have each other!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm crossing my fingers that Edward will be able to handle whatever he is about to hear! I'm glad Christmas was good for everyone, except for the part at the Cullen's. Carlisle is a real son-of-a-bitch and I hope karma works in his life!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
It must have been draining to have to tell her story and sort of relive it. Good thing Edward and Charlie were there to support her! I too am curious about what Bella told Martin and Peter.
Date: 19 Nov 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
I really loved that Edward's parents helped save Bella and wouldn't let her die!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
This must have been hard to write when you were not feeling well, so thanks! I nearly had a panic attack myself when all this went down!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bless Bella's loving heart for telling Alice and Jasper a few home truths! I would like to see the whole Cullen family come crawling to beg Edward's forgiveness, but he probably would, being the guy he is! That would tick me off mightily, since I'm not near as forgiving as Edward!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Who will try to contact Edward depends on who hears Rose's story and believes it, I guess. It sure as hell won't be his "dad", the s.o.b! It might be Emmett, or maybe even Jasper, if he gets clean of his drug habit. All I can say is thank God for Charlie and Bella!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Rose needs to get on her knees and thamkGod Edward and Bella saved her! I'm so glad Bella is a smart girl with a loving heart and didn't let her boyfriend drive her away! Please let life lighten up just a bit for these two! His family ought to be shot and hers ought to be sainted!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
That is just too damn messed up to even be real! How can anyone believe this of Bella or Edward? Poor kids sre sure getting the shitty end of the stick!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
Now that they have declared themselves completely, it's going to be next to impossible to hide it, I'm thinking! Love like that just sort of shines out of you!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward and Bella may be doing okay, but his family needs to get a damn clue! I was so angry with what happened over Rose! I know just how Bella feels, I want to punch Rose also!
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'll bet you could have knocked Bella over with a feather! First she reunites with her dad's relatives, then finds out there is more than enough money for college, left by her dad! As for that phone call, I hope it's really important!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Two things, first, Bella had a great birthday and Edward had an epiphany! Second, I think he should listen to Charlie. It's a shame his relationship with his dad is so rotten!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
May I just say that Bella's grandpa is really cool? So are the guys that play poker Thursdays. I think Charlie is right about Edward talking to the therapist concerning his relationship with Bella.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am most disappointed in Edward's dad! He is riding that boy so hard he won't even listen to his side of things! It's not right or fair for him to assume that everything is Edward's fault! He's right when he hates the school.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
I can see why Edward would worry about losing the closeness that he and Bella had at camp. I think it's nice that his mom sticks up for him, and nicer that he worries about her and his dad fighting over him. I'm kind of surprised that Rose would be open to betraying Emmett. I thought she loved him?
Date: 16 Nov 2014 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think Bella really l liked Edward's surprise, and the time in the pool worked out great! I can't believe how that woman hit on Edward, it was grotesque! I'll bet he's not the only one not looking forward to going home soon!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds to me as if Bella and Edward really won this contest but for a bit of collusion!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
Life has definitely been hard, in spots, for both of them! I kind of think they are made for each other, just because they can empathize with what has happened in their young lives!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm thinking there are a lot of "daddy's little girls" who get away with the stuff Alice does, so it is partly Carlisle's fault. The mouth onthe girl is bound to get her in trouble, so she better learn to keep quiet. I wonder if either Bella or Edward notice how close they are growing?
Date: 16 Nov 2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
This was so much fun seeing them have a great time all day, plus taking out a total jerk!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jane is really creepy! Edward better learn who to play truth or dare with and stay clear of Miss Seamen! Poor Bella, what a really good reason to be afraid of water! I bet Edward will be able to help her overcome that fear!
Date: 17 Sep 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
Small town corruption, alive and well in Forks, Washington! I fear I'm not going to like what the headmaster, coach and cop have in mind for Bella, not to mention Jake and his buddies! Oh yes, meeting Jane and Alec in Chicago sounded a little creepy, too!
Date: 17 Sep 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A Day With Edward
This is starting out in an interesting fashion, and I think I will enjoy getting to know this Edward and Bella! As usual, I already can't stand Jake!
Date: 07 Aug 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved this story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for writing this story ladies. I really enjoyed the different takes on the traditional characteres, especially grandpa charlie!! Keep up the good work. I have you in my favorites both on this site and FF. Thanks again for writing stories I look forward to reading!!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 31
Thanks good chapter
Date: 21 Jul 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
Perfect ending to a beautiful story. Their souls will be together forever.
I am loving the new story a d I can't wait to see it though.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 31
I cried several times during this story and especially the last couple of chapters, tears of sadness and happiness. I loved this story so much. I can see myself rereading in the future. I have read all of your stories and look forward to many more in the future! Thank you for sharing your stories and thus keeping my Twilight obsession continue to live on!
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 31
I loved it!! You guys are so talented!
Date: 20 Jul 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 31
This was a wondeful story! I loved it!! :D
Date: 19 Jul 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
WOW!!! Carlisle is a real piece of work! Unbelievable! My heart hurts so much for Edward. I can't believe how far back this all goes and is all connected. I am in awe that Edward is still willing to keep his heart and door open to The Cullen's after how much they've hurt him.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
Lovely story, very enjoyable.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wonderful end. Glad for the happy endings.
TY for writing and sharing with us.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
awww poor charlie. But at least they had time to say goodbye. OMG The doctor telling b to have an abortion was ridiculous. Wow Carlisle really stepped up in this chapter. What idiot let Renee out on bail after attempted murder, assault and battery, and violating a TRO? Go Rose!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 30
This is fantastic!! I love it!!:)
Date: 19 Jul 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
I loved it that was beautiful and sweet just like them thank you for all of it
Date: 19 Jul 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 31
loved this story. looking forward to reading your new one
Date: 19 Jul 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh I love that ending that was amazing. Poor rose giving birth to a 15 lbs baby. So glad everyone got the hea they deserved good luck on winning for bent not broken hope you win.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 31
aaawwww you know the whole life in heaven is a very common thing when it comes to FANfic regardless i like the way yall did it
Date: 19 Jul 2014 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it! This was my first time reading it. I cried like a baby when Charlie passed.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow what a crazy time maybe it can be calm now I loved it thank you
Date: 19 Jul 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow. Nearly all the doctors in this story are assholes. The first doctor talking about teen pregnancy and abortion. The the doctor wanting to take Bella's kidney saying oh you can have another baby he seemed like a brain dead moron. I loved Charlie's send off that was cool casino night that is so Charlie. Rene is freaking wacko I am glad she is dead. Loved this story so much.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow, what an emotional chapter full of highs and lows. I loved that Charlie walked Bella down the aisle. Very sad for everyone that Charlie died, but he wanted a happy celebration of his life, including a casino nite.
Carlsisle really made up for all the bad in the story for saving Bella's life and the babies. Edward owes his whole life to Carlisle now. Bella came back from the dead twice in the story. Wow. I loved all the names. They are young parents, but very lucky to have such a great family. Just loved the emotional chapter. It was just great!!
Date: 19 Jul 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks good chapters
Date: 19 Jul 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 29
I loved it wow will Alice ever be shown the error of her ways will she open her eyes and wow what a prom that was beautiful what he did for her now when will they marry and will things be easier for them update soon
Date: 19 Jul 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
Ahh.. this is so good.
Carlisle and Alice are a great pair. They both need to grow the heck up!!
Loved the proposal!! :D
Date: 19 Jul 2014 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Carlisle is still a jackass but at least he told him why and that he gave the piano back. Edward is so romantic wonderful proposal. Loved the speech.
Date: 19 Jul 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wow Alice is a real piece of work. Well at least Carlisle is talking I suppose. Awww for Prom and Proposal
Date: 18 Jul 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 28
The football team must protect the muffin maker. Jake is still crazy wanting Bella think she belongs to him. Glad Aro and his band of jackass are gone for good. Awwww talking babies.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow for the trial stuff. hmmm THe dig about her killing her dad. Has someone been talking to Renee???
Glad Jasper was there and stepped up. Stupid Jake.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well more evil is put away and for good too and Bella now that people are getting to know her the care about her and her safety even Jasper but will Alice ever get help and will Renée come after Bella still update soon
Date: 18 Jul 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
I know that its better to forgive etc etc but Please can Carlisle have something really bad happen to him ( if it affected (M)alice toothat would be great. Just saying ....
Date: 18 Jul 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
Holy snap well it seems things are going great for them but Carlisle needs to let go and get help not only for him but Alice too but hot damn Bella and Edward are heating up
Date: 18 Jul 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow finally they got some good news those evil jerks are going away and rose can now move forward now will Edward help Emmet get away
Date: 18 Jul 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks good chapters
Date: 18 Jul 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am glad they are getting the help they need. Oh oral was fantastic loved it. People will only change when they are ready and Carlisle and Alice have not got there yet.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
I knew she would come around eventually but dang took her long enough I am glad she is divorcing the prick what a shit for brains he is taking it out on Edward cause he thought Edward and Esme slept together in college and he is a doctor I sure would not not want him to be my doctor. Of course Edward will help Emmett cause Edward is a wonderful person. So glad Royce iss not eligable for parole for 15 yrs.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
You can just feel the love of Edward's mother and how much she cared for him. Bella is opening up a bit more to the intimacy side of the relationship which is good poor Edward needs some relief. Renee is quacked out of her mind.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well at least Em is getting his head on straight. Think Esme needs to get Alice away from Carlisle and soon. Wowser.
Date: 18 Jul 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
He was skewed on the coin toss no matter what. lol "Heads I win Tails You Lose" no matter what he was making the speach. ROFLMAO.