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Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2022 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buffeted

I like the Bella very much. Well written 

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2022 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Dove Flies

Such I great chapter. I understand Edward had to be put back together, spitting venom was a neat trick and Edward made light of it, Emmett's reply " Good God he can't thrust!" Lord you had me on the floor , also using your quote- He's got eighty-six years of stress hormones clogging up his innards," Jasper frowned.


Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2022 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 9: Snow and Ice

OMG! Ok mike the boobie stalker ! Edward won't get his head outta his ass, the crash !!!!!, jazz with his voodoo, the inner an outer verbal ramblings of Edward, You had me laughing crying, I don't know if you will ever read this and why there is not more reviews but BAM you are a awesome writer.

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2022 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 6: Obscured Light

Poor Edward. Would love to see Bella's point of view.

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Date: 21 Mar 2022 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Sky Blackens

Poor Edward.Very well written

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2022 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Patter of Rain

I love how Edwards mind works , it's inner dialog, you had me laughing till I about peed with the inner workings of all the others minds, I think the way you had Edward get acclimated to Bella's scent was also great, and the vivid explanation of what Bella's home looked like almost had me there.

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2022 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: Frisson in the Air

I'm so in love with  this story, the connection between your characters are wonderful and makes me laugh, yes Edward is still hard on himself but the connection he has with his siblings over rides I guess , we see Edwards struggle but also a bit of cheeky Edward too, I look forward to continuing to read !

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 4:18 PM Title: Prologue: Maelstrom

That had me almost crying right along with Edward. I can't wait to see where you take me on this journey. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the praise. I hope you enjoy the story. Happy reading. :)

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Feb 2016 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 50: Downdraft

Oh I love this story 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter presently. Happy reading!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 50: Downdraft

thanks so much for this AWESOME!!! chapter ;) i think i would like to slap bella upside the head with this one like the rest of the girls ;) and hug edward so tight!!! but i didn't understand the poem at the top of the chapter though ;D



Author's Response:

LOL Bella could probably use a good smack upside the head. Sigh.

The poem at the top is about Courtly Love. Basically, it's a girl and a guy fawning over each other, but keeping it chaste. People in the 1300s thought that to act on their desires was to commit adultery--even if that desire was acted upon with their spouse. They therefore dreamed up this idea that it was great to fall in love with somebody and worship them from afar, without any of the hanky panky. Poor Edward. I'm taking a poke at his morals.

Great question. Thanks for asking. :)

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2016 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 50: Downdraft

This explains Alice and Edwards nicknames a little better. I want to give Bella a kick in the rear. Edward is being a bit of his mellow self again. Wonderful chapter. Love having doctors in the house. Rose in Edwards corner, good for her. 



Author's Response:

Just so you know, the Doveward in my head is not feeling mellow right now. :D :D :D

Thanks for reviewing. xoox j

 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 48: Fogbow

I don't  know  how  I missed  this story but   I  have  now read it  from the  beginning  and it is  superb.  I  think I   was initially  misled by the summary and didn't  realize  that  you  were  basically  retelling  the entire  Twilight  saga with a lot more interesting  details and explanation  of  Edward'a character  and thought  processes .    I love it.  You have done  a  fabulous  job so far .    I  also see from  your  author notes that you have already continued this saga in other stories, so I  guess I  need to find  your  website and  read the others.  Keep  up  the  great  work ! 



Author's Response:

Sorry I didn't respond sooner. Joys of email.

Thanks so much for your praise. Yes, I have a whole bunch of stories in this series. Almost all of them are on TWCS, but the remainder are posted on FFN. I normally post everything here but I haven't had time, so I hope you'll catch up with me eventually.

Happy reading!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2015 2:07 PM Title: Prologue: Maelstrom

hi ;) i was so excited when this story showed a new chapter up but unfortunatley there was NO new chapter???? and i reviewed on it already;(



Author's Response:

Hi, I'm not sure what happened, sorry. A 'reporter' over on FFN threatened to report my mature-rated stories so a friend helped me by uploading any chapters I hadn't posted on TWCS. Perhaps one posted twice by accident. Anyway, the last couple of months have not been fun. I'll post a chapter as soon as I can but I lost the next chapter of this when my laptop died. It's going to take me a while to catch up. Sorry for the delay and thanks for sticking with me. xx

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 48: Fogbow

WOW!!! 3 chapters ;) are there 1 or 2 more until you press complete on this section? i can't decide which chapter i enjoyed the most they were all great ;) thanks for posting ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! And special thanks for the five stars.

There will be a lot more chapters before we hit NM. I haven't found a good place to break yet, so this may turn into a really long story. :)

 

 

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 45: Mudslide

lOVE IT AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm about halfway through the next chapter and hope to be able to post again soon. :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 45: Mudslide

LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter ;) i really liked the charlie interaction ;) it's giong to be interesting how the get over this lila incident. l really hope they stick to staying vigins until marriage but go all the way up to that point until then ;D



Author's Response:

*snickers evilly* I think you'll be happy with their (cough) practice. :D

Reviewer: jmolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 44: Easterly Wave

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Whenever I post a chapter like this, I worry that it will trigger somebody. I'd hate for that to happen.

Yes, Kate has her canon power. :)

Poor Edward, indeed.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 44: Easterly Wave

AWESOME!!! thanks for the warning at the top ;) i had to read this twice so it could sink in properly ;) i was wondering if you gave us info about kate having her canon power? POOR EDWARD!! ;D



Author's Response:

It was a heck of a chapter to write, both for content and for his confused state of mind. Glad the warning was beneficial. Yes, Kate has her canon power.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 43: New Moon

WOW!! THANK YOU for replying to all my previous reviews ;D i just noticed you posted this chapter and i'm sooo glad i did ;) 1st i can't believe what sam 'said' about leah!!! and i'm really looking forward to a domme bella!! ;D and i'm really glad that jasper is in edwards corner in this chapter ;) and hope lila is dispatched SOON!!! ;D



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 42: Slippery

sooo cool!!! i'm glad you were able to post a new chapter;) i hope your rl gets better and you can relax soon ;D xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you. I took a break today from everything. My family members all have a nasty cold and I think they've shared it with me, but I don't feel too bad tonight. Might be lucky and miss out on it. Anyway, the next chapter's up, so enjoy. :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 41: Doused

sooo cool!!!!! i'm glad i was wrong about the attack being the 3 nomads ;) i hope all is well in your rl and your in my prayers;) please come back soon and put his adolesence to rest so i can continue with the other parts of the series ;D



Author's Response:

LOL! Ed has a long way to go to get to Eclipse. There's a lot of story to unfold, yet.

Thanks for your prayers. They are very much appreciated! xo j

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 40: Thunderbolt

AWESOME!!! but if feel like i've read it before? have you posted this chapter as something else? it felt like dejarvu? ;D



Author's Response:

Nope, it's the first time these scenes have appeared (mention of vibrator, lace nighty, trip to Greece). They are mentioned in later stories, so if you've read other stories of mine, they'll sound familiar.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 37: Light from Darkness

ooh!!! so the jane in woof WAS jane the pain volturi!!!! so i think that all the pictures that esme etc. post on 'facebook' will bring her to make a visit asap? ;D



Author's Response:

Cackles! Yes, Jane the Pain and Edward once had a very awkward and unpleasant blind date. He isn't over it yet.

Aro does not allow Jane to have Facebook. She tends to be too opinionated. And she overreacts. Besides, he's told her that it's all about sharing pictures of kittens. Once she found out they were not dead or tortured kittens, she lost all interest.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 35: Whirlwind

i LOVED vampire ELVIS!!!! i cried my eyes out when he passed away on the 16th of august 1977  i was inconsolable ;( anyway that was awesome and the intro to bree and the 3 nomads WOW!!!! excellent ;D



Author's Response:

There must be an Elvis vampire. Thank you. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 30: Heaven

i'm TOTALLY with edward on this subject ;) i think bella should invite all the cullen's to her back yard and give them all the tree shreader speech ;D



Author's Response:

Another chipper shredder fan? Woo hoo!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 29: Boom!

loved it as usual ;) why are they making themselves conspicuous? the volturi will be on their a** !!! ;D



Author's Response:

Snort. I think there are different levels of conspicuous. Childish pranks? Okee dokey. Blood and mayhem? Not. TV reality show? Watch out, Jane's coming! ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 28: Flurries Kiss

that was such a cool chapter ;) i'm so glad you explained the vampire hierachy ;D



Author's Response:

Wasn't easy to fit the hierarchy into the series. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 19: Torrents

WOW!!!! alot happening in this chapter ;) i love how diffent their phsiology works kudos ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks. Yes, I didn't like the canon physiology. If you can't feel pain, you can't feel pleasure, either. Science lesson of the day. :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 18: Crackerjack

excellent coule of chapters ;) i liked how you got everyone involved with the 'attempted rape' scene ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks. I could only see them working together to cover up slips. Besides, they all want to take care of Bella.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 16: Blue Skies

sorry i didn't cry but it was still very moving ;D



Author's Response:

I don't always make people cry. Honestly.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 14: Static Electricity

AWESOME!!! thanks for repliyng to my 1st review btw ;D i'm glad i made you day ;) i love how you write and the language you use ;) i have a question on this chapter though when edward mentioned the times they were here he didn't say that they were here in the '80's as in when alice and jasper met the girl scouts in the 2nd instalment of this series? ;D



Author's Response:

You are the first person ever to ask me that question! AWESOME You. Here's the answer: the Cullens were not living there and none of them were working or in school. Alice and Jasper went there briefly to check on the property. They were noticed anyway. But they didn't remain long. Jasper was too thirsty. ;)

Thanks you for all your reviews and compliments.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 13: Swirling Currents

i LOVE his querks ;) also they have to shave? in the last chapter i forgot to say in the review that he didn't me mention rosealie when he told her the ages of his family ;D



Author's Response:

Snickers. Yes, they do have to shave, because nobody pulled any hair out by the roots before they were turned. Yes indeed, hair and nails do grow after death. He didn't mention Rose's age? Maybe she gets a bit testy about it when people share. :D :D :D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 12: In the Eye of the Storm

i really LOVE!!! your edward and bella ;) they are just like canon but with more gumption ;D



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! That's just what I like to hear. :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buffeted

i don't know about this dom business? and edward has mentioned spanking bella a few times? is there any slight bdsm in this story when she becomes a vamp? if so i REALLY hope she is the domme 'hehe' ;D



Author's Response:

*whistles nonchalantly* There might be a bit of that. You'll have to keep reading. ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Dove Flies

interesting phsyiology and 'law' you've made ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 9: Snow and Ice

i like how vunerable you've made your vampires ;) and i've never heard of an os penis before ;D and having sam be a paramedic? interesting twists you're making ;D



Author's Response:

I like my vamps a bit vulnerable and my Wolves a bit unpredictable. LOL! Lots of animals have os penises. Whales, for instance.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 8: Storm

i LOVED your twist at making the wolves bullies HILARIOUS ;D



Author's Response:

Thanks. I figured they outnumbered the Cullens enough to be cocky about it. :D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Distant Thunder

AWESOME so far ;) i'm just going to comment on a hope ;) that he is uncut ;) and bella NEVER!!! gets a brazilian wax!!!! ;D



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAH!!! You just made my day. I hesitate to ask what made your mind go in this direction. Yeah, don't tell me.

I'm going to be mean and withhold answers to both hopes. Be assured, there is a purpose to all I do to these two. I will say, however, that several of the males in my series are not cut. xo

 

Reviewer: mnmccasey Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2015 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 38: Damp

I'm still waiting for Eddie to find out what's in the toiletry case! Perfect as always, keep 'em coming, you write dysfunctional teenage edwardian vampire boys so well it's scary... is there something you need to tell us?



Author's Response:

Oh, you made me LOL! *wipes eyes* Thank you for making my day. :}

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 36: Dust and Sand

The Picture is not showing it's only showing a red x when u click story PLEASE FIX!!

Thanks for updating such an captivating story again....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for letting me know. I truly appreciate it! Glad you're enjoying the story. I'm hoping to update again this week. :)

Reviewer: mnmccasey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 36: Dust and Sand

Huh, it deleted my first review - bummsickles! Anyhoo, awesome as always and I hope you're feeling better soon! Thank you!



Author's Response:

Argh. I hate it when you write a review and it gets deleted. lol. So thanks for re-reviewing. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the well-wishes. :)

Reviewer: mnmccasey Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 34: Desert Storm

Awesome, thanks for this wonderful story, now I have to wait all week for another update... I can be very patient when I choose to be. ;) <3 it!



Author's Response:

LOLOL~ I'm churning out the updates as fast as I can, so I'm glad you can be patient when you choose to be. :D Thanks for the praise, and thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 32: Radar

I am really enjoying this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: mnmccasey Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2014 5:31 PM Title: Prologue: Maelstrom

So I find myself checking this story on a daily basis looking to see if it's been updated- I like it that much! Double update makes me heart melt...thanks for that, and keep up the awesome writing your version is better than Meyers your characters have personality and depth. I heart it sooo much. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kindness. I had some time to write this morning, so about a third of the next chapter is roughed. Hopefully, it won't take me too long to send out another one. Thanks for loving my story. :)

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 29: Boom!

Thank for updating this intriging story I truly am look forward to the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! And thank you for your review. I appreciate it!

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 26: Dew

I'd love to see pictures of Edward in a speedo. Yumm.

Bella is getting better at fendinge off Charlie. 

Poor Edward, it must have been really hard not to have fun with a nearly naked Bella. He'll get ther. 

Can't wait. 

Thanks Jess.



Author's Response:

I've had a hard time finding any pics of Ed in a Speedo. Didn't expect that. I did find one that Soapy made of him in his underwear that looks kinda like a Speedo. Check out my FB. LOL!

He'll get there. Not fast enough to suit Mr. Ed.

Thanks for reviewing, Jan.

 

xoox j

 

 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 25: Dancing in Air

Oh my oh my where to start. I'm jealous you know how to dance. I have two left feet. I love West Side Story and I think they would have been a great Maria and Tony. 

I got very soggy when Bella set him straight. Good girl!!!!

Their last dance was beyond romantic. (Wipes tears away).

Hmmmm what will she wear (or not wear). Poor guy with his tape OUCH!

Love this chapter lots and lots. 

 



Author's Response:

I just love torturing Ed with tape. *happy sigh*

I know how to dance but I haven't danced many of these dances. Some salsa, lots of classics, no jive or Lindy or Tap. I WISH I could do those. I married a man who does not dance. At all.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2014 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 24: Stillness and Movement

Johnny Mathis always makes me melt. His love songs could put me in the mood any day. 

Emmett and Jazz, still the pranksters. i'm glad they love Bella so much. Dance attire sounds beautiful. 

You and your use of duct tape. Ouch. 

I really don't see how people dance to the music they play now adays. 

Great chapter once again. 

Looking forward to the remaining dance and after party. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, Johnny Mathis is great. :) Some of the modern music is great for dancing. It does take a look past the pop standards, though. I like a lot of the Indies.

I have pics of the attire on Facebook. I'm sure I'll catch you there.

Thanks for reviewing. xoox j

 

Reviewer: jmolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 22: Seeds and Slips

I sure enjoyed this review. You're right on all counts!

I'm looking forward to the dance, too.

See you next time, hon.

 

xo

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 22: Seeds and Slips

Everything was blurring when this came out. Figured I'd enjoy it better when I could focus. 


So funny.... you really are on top of your game Jess.


Jasper really is a little devil. Same blow up doll that Eric has in the hearst?


Bella's volleyball skills are remarkable. 


Charlie doesn't stand a chance with Alice. 


Looking forward to the dance.


Thanks Jess


Jan

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Date: 05 Aug 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 21: The Earth After It Rains

Waited a while to read again and give a dress reviw. Loved their "coming out". Lauren is so nasty. 

Jasper's romance story would be interesting. Do we get a peek at that?

 The locker stuff is priceless.

Edward is beginning to sound receptive to exploring a little. Jess, I loved it.

Jan



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing in both spots, Jan. I appreciate it.

You might see Eddie Boy dress Jazz down a bit by reciting from his novel. LOL!

Glad you enjoyed the fun.

 

xo

 

 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Sky Opens

That was beautiful family love. I do believe Edward is starting to believe he is worthy. 

Embry is strange. 



Author's Response:

LOL @ Embry is strange. Yeah, he's... different.

Edward might just start to crawl out of his shell. We'll see. Thanks for reviewing, hon. xoox

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 19: Torrents

Think this was even harder to read this time around. I can't condone what he did but can't fault him either. He is after all a man.



Author's Response:

This one took a lot of time to write. It was hard to put on paper, too.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 18: Crackerjack

The drama in this chapter is simply amazing. I've never understood how people can do such accurate descriptions of a suspect. I couldn't do that if my life depended on it. How can she be so calm? I'd be a basket case.



Author's Response:

Bella isn't normal. Edward's always said this. She doesn't react the way most people do.

(Ed is poking my arm and saying, "See? I told you!")

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 17: Darkening Skies

His thoughts(you thoughts) are oh so deep. Amazing



Author's Response:

Quite the compliment. Thank you. xo

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 16: Blue Skies

Totally lovely beautiful chapter. Wish I could dance.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Anthony said we'd take dance lessons, but we've never managed it. I miss it. My maternal side of the family did a great deal of dancing.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15: Flung Out into Puddles

The tarts never change do they? Matchmaking can be fun and always makes me think of Hello Dolly.



Author's Response:

No, they never do.

I love Hello Dolly. :)

 

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 13: Swirling Currents

They have such fun adventures. I just realized how hard it is to give a good review when you've read future stories.



Author's Response:

LOLOL! Peril of reading my series in the order I wrote it, sorry. I seem to have the same problem. :)

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 12: In the Eye of the Storm

Love his practical jokes. Heck what don't I love about this story?



Author's Response:

He's fun when he forgets to angst, isn't he? Thanks for the love, hon.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 11: Buffeted

The tribe is getting on my last nerve. Bella way to go chica



Author's Response:

Weeeeeell... they're young. And irritating. Bella won't stand for it. I like my Bellas with a backbone.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Dove Flies

Love a fiesty Bella. They are so comfy in bed. Sweet

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 9: Snow and Ice

What an exciting chapter. Charlie's head must be spinning. Beats a dull ride. That's how I get with Ativan but worse.



Author's Response:

Now you're trying to get me laughing. Admit it.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 8: Storm

Charlie reminded me of Jackie Gleason in Smokey and the Bandit. Billy is high on my shit list. Naughty naughty Edward.



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHAHAH "Rufus P Coltrane?" omg.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 7: Heaviness in the Air

Just when he starts to feel better you send in the squad to freak him out. Very Evil Jess.



Author's Response:

I've always told you I was an evil writer. Right? Right?

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 6: Obscured Light

Carlisle is so special. Hoping to catch up tonight but am working on a spitting headache and two hour sleep.



Author's Response:

Ouch. I hope you get a proper sleep tonight, hon. xoox

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Sky Blackens

I never did like Jacob, poor Edward and Bella. Just when things were going well.



Author's Response:

True, but Jacob didn't mean to cause trouble. He's just a kid.

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Patter of Rain

Glad the skank club left. Oh, Alice and Jasper, too funny. Ben and Angela perfec match. Edward is gerrinf such and education. 



Author's Response:

Perhaps Bella's getting as much of an education as Edward. LOL!

Reviewer: janm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3: Frisson in the Air

They all love eachother so much. An amazing family. I love the Bella told me.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Edward loved it, too. :D

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Wind Rises

So sad story about Edward's time away. That is why I think Carlisle will ask him to come back. Jem and Eleazar both give advice. Almost similar. 



Author's Response:

That's a very good point! Thanks, Jan.

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Distant Thunder

Love his swagger and his self "discovery". Tanya tried glad she doesn't succeed.



Author's Response:

Can't you just picture Eddie Boy with the t.p.? LOL!

Yeah, Tanya would never succeed with our Ed. He's a romantic.

xoox j

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 12:13 AM Title: Prologue: Maelstrom

Just need to read again. Haven't reviewed here. This really is an awesome beginning Jess.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jan. Glad to see you as usual. xoox

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Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 14: Static Electricity

Looks like I need to start over here and review too. Hudson is a jer. Bella is precious. Hard to believe Paul and Jacob once like the other. Oh how things change between these two. . I think Edward has had enough of the insults. Little boys and their name calling. Come on you gus, grow up.



Author's Response:

It seems to take immortals a long, long time to grow up, doesn't it? Thanks for reviewing here, hon. xoox

Reviewer: ToniaA Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:15 AM Title: Prologue: Maelstrom

jMolly, It is hard to believe that you only have a single review of this story!! You are a masterful writer and it is a refreshing change to read the prolog to one of my favorite stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tonia. Kelly Trobough did me the enormous favour of uploading the remainder of my stories here, so actually, Dove has only been on this site for a couple of weeks. I do hope that people will stop by and leave some reviews, but it's good just to be here. I'm very pleased to have you with me. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Camilla11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 11: Buffeted

When you have time do put images on. It is one of the benefits of this site.



Author's Response:

Hi!

It is a BIG benefit of this site.

Kelly Trobough has done me an enormous favour by uploading most of my stories here. I wouldn't have had time to do it on my own. She even put up the author's notes and the banners. So I'm very thankful.

Happy reading. :)

 

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