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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2022 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love it 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2017 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love it

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

amazing story thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: lmolineaux Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 9


Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for writing and sharing your story!

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

you two are an amazing writing duo!!!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2014 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

With the amount that they keep giving away they will soon be middle class!

Reviewer: marirod1987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 5

Now this is my kind of Edward. 

Reviewer: marirod1987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

It's refreshing to see the Cullen family being middle class. In most stories we see them being super rich and not having to care about money.

Reviewer: marirod1987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

Go bella! 

Reviewer: marirod1987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

Edward is such a jerk. Don't like him not one bit. He acts like he's doing her a favor, when he's getting paid.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 20

You two rock my socks off!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

Hehe... "Oh, for the love of God!"

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

I'm eager to hear the sentencing!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hope tht she is not going to have second thoughts.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

I think that if Jasper can get past his own anger and hatred of Edward, he cod be a real help to them becoming close and healing their relationship.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

Poor girl. So many hard knocks, and so little information.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor girl keeps losing everyone and everything that matters to her. At this point, she's probably keeping him at arms' length in a bid (in her own mind) to try to protect them.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

I knew SOMETHING was up, but I couldn't figure it out...

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Something's gotta give!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

I'm just wondering why Edward has yet to use his supposedly keen business intellect to dig into the company and find out what Tanya is about, and got to ruin her!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow. It finally loaded on my phone. i think I'll read the rest here, seeing as the lemon is SO juicy! LOL

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

Really enjoyed your story. Thank you for posting it. 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks good chapters awesome story

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

What a darling way to end this wonderful story! Need I say again how much I loved it, pain, joy and all? You guys are the best!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved Bella and Edward's wedding, and loved Alice and Jasper's more! That Bella is a stubborn girl, she was going to see them married or else! I think it's so great that the family has grown, in size, in love, in all good things in life, and are so happy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

So that creepy prick, Mike got what was coming to him!Three cheers for the justice system! Emmett can complain all he wants, I thought the proposal was great!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ducks in a row and pretty much all squared away! I loved the sentencing of all the crooks, especially Tanya, who was nasty to the end! The house and the island sound fabulous!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

I almost hate that you call her the Viper, as it gives snakes a bad name, and I'm not real fond of snakes! I thought the judge was a sweetheart to offer that public statement to clear Bella's name. Hope it works, since some people just like to believe lies, the uglier the better! Sure am glad that the jury did the right thing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh yay, and Happy New Year! That's the way to begin their second chance at love! By the way, Emmett and the ham , hilarious!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

Nothing about this is going to be easy, but I think they have made a good start. Her birthday was pretty good all around, and she loved the locket! They should be okay with talking to Jasper, I think.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

Edward's tale of the poor boy and the princess (and wicked, evil with), was a good way of confessing. It was sweet when Bella asked him if the boy still loved the princess. Maybe she will take a leap of faith and give them a second chance!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm with Edward, doesn't the girl ever get a break? These people were her friends, and a tie to her dad! It's always sad to lose people you care fgor, but, lord, Bella is running out of people! I'm still crossing my fingers that somehow these two can find a way back to each other!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 11

Did a dance when the judge told Tanya what she was in for! There is payback! Now if only Bella would listen to why Edward said those awful things and allow him to crawl on his knees to ask her forgiveness!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

I could hardly believe my eyes, reading about how some readers nastied on you guys over what is going on in this story! Are they insane, or only brain damaged, do you suppose? Shame on them! From the sounds of it, maybe Tanya is about to experience retribution? If so, I hope it's extremely painful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

This chapter almost made me cry! I knew Edward was in love with Bella before he did, that's why he made love to her! I officially want to strangle Tanya with a lkength of razor wire, just so it hurts while she's choking to death! That evil, nasty, bitchy thing!( I'm not sure she qualifies as human!) Poor little Bella, her heart must be breaking, since she has no way to know the truth!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

As they have grown more comfortable with each other, I've been waiting for this to happen between them. The more they know, the more they like!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm getting this weird feeling , like the hairs on the back of my neck are raised! Could it be possible that the temporary CEO Bella is talking about is none other than Bitch Tanya? That would be just amazing!If it turns out to be true, I hope to hell there's a way to gang up on her and take her down!I'm a firm believer in Karma, and getting back what you put out in the world!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm getting a hint of how Edward and Bella could possibly help each other, concerning their businesses!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

This was really good day for both Bella and Edward! I like the way they are getting acquainted with each other. The shopping spree at Aro's bike shop was a hoot and the meal at Marcus and Debbie's was lovely! Them going to see Frozen was a delight!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yeah, definitely a first class bitch, that Tanya! I know there are nasty people in the world, but I've  been very fortunate not to have met many, only a few!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

That poor child, bearing those terrible burdens and sorrows, plus Edward being an ass! Now he feels like a snake's beely, I'll bet!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm thinking that both Edward and Bella are giving each other the wrong impression of themselves. I wonder if they overcome their prejudices and get to know their real selves?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Tanya Denali, stereotypical bitch on wheels! Good to know she hasn't changed her stripes much in this story! Sounds to me that Edward may have stumbled upon the answer to his prayers. His whole family has been working their butt's off, so maybe they deserve a break?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm thankful that you two just keep pumping out the stories!
It's sad when one ends but oh so exciting to begin another journey through your characters eyes.

Family Business was an endearing tale of hardship tackled by a group of head strong loved ones. Willing to put themselves in the line of fire to preserve the beliefs passed on through family values. Another great story. Thanks again for all your efforts in entertaining us, your fans.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

I was laughing so hard a Bella's outburst during the wedding that I almost wet myself.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

What a delightfully sappy proposal! Now the pressure is on to find the perfect ring.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

So many ideas on how to give back to the community.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

Vindication for Bella's name is essential for her to finally put this mess to rest. And allow her to shine in the eyes if the community.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella's finally found the large family she has always dreamed about.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Professionally Jasper has no say in Bella's choice to reestablish a friendship with Edward. He can only advise her to be careful, taking precautions to not fall back into the patterns that previously stripped her of her independence and self worth.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

How sweet it was for Edward to turn their life into a bedtime fairytale.
I think Edward's fear and Bella's age and lack of female support will continue to hold them back. Maybe some time with his family just getting to know each other again is the next best step.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

Another blow to Bella's circle of protection.
I'm glad that Edward paid enough attention to realize these people were important to her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

Interesting twist on the fraudulent use of a persons name.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

Was it Mike Newton's family that turned on Tanya?
I hope Sue Clearwater has some information that will keep Isabella as head of het father's company.
Tanya's not the bank. How can she foreclose on the Cullens house?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 9

I was thinking along the lines of how much this course if action in Edward's part makes him out to be weak. But then I realized all your stories have been HEA's so I'm just going to keep reading!
Maybe Tanya will slip up and give Edward the edge by revealing something about her daddy's method of business that will help take her down.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm wondering if the payments to Edward will ever become a negative issue. Could Tanya find out and use it against Bella in the future?
Will Edward, or Bella for that matter, have second thoughts about the progression of the relationship?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

You both deserve the nominations! You work so diligently to put out stories that entertain your fans. Each one deserving of recognition.

I think Bella's sheltered life and the abusive interaction with her own peers has confused her so much that she is unsure of how to be herself without dollars being involved.
I hope Carlisle can give Bella sound advise on how to deal with the items her father left in his will.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

I think Edward is the first person, other than someone her father knew, that Bella has placed a small level of her trust.
I hope this gas incident doesn't put Bella off from trying to learn in the kitchen.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella's father was a very good man. He taught her the value of people. That bring proud of a hard days work was a natural part of society. Bella's memories are attached to these types of business and the people who struggle daily to survive.
Now maybe Edward has caught a glimps of the girl that used to be, before the weight of responsibility was set on her shoulders.
Yep, Edward is physically attracted to this young beauty.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Let's add sexual harassment to the viper's list of business tactics. I would like to see Bella's company buy out the viper and blacklist her from the business world.
What kind of black market dealings was Eleazar involved in that he needed to bankrupt the furniture store?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

They have both been hurt. And uniquely by the same type of people. Maybe their shared experiences will create a bond to build a great friendship over. Possibly something more will develop in a year or two?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

How did Bella's family acquire their wealth?
Bella's style doesn't seem to fit the average over privileged child.
I hope mom's words have taken root in Edward's heart. He also needs to listen more closely to Bella's comments about her life.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting premise.
I'm excited to see where this leads.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Aww, I loved this ending. So glad everyone got their HEA and are still very much in love. Poor Charlie, being gifted his fathers good looks..such a chore. Lol. Debbie

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

So sweet. A billion thanks. Take care. 

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

Very good ending, I love it.

You are very imaginative people, thank you for sharing this fiction with us, and the ones to come this year or later.

Take care of youse, girls !

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm excited for all of the upcoming stories!!!!!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Fantastic. Can't wait for the next story.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER!!!!!!!!! I LOVED AND CANT WAIT FOR THE ONES YOU MENTIONED! LOVE YA

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

Glad to hear about your plans.  So many have stopped writing for Twilight while I haven't gotten my fill yet.

Enjoyed this story.  Thanks.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: msbullcullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved loved loved it. You ladies are freaking awesome!!! Can't wait for the next story.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

Nice ending cant wait for the others

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 20

LOVED IT.  Thanks for sharing with us.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

What a great ending to a great story thanks so much.  I will be looking forward to all you do

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for writing adn sharing this story. I loved the ending. I was thnkig, for your Xmas story, why not play with the song from Ghosy? Instead of "Unchained Melody" it could be Unchained Christmas Carol? Or Maybe Ghist of Christmas Present? Ala Charles Dickens. I don't know. I'm sure you'll come up with a better title, just wanted to throw some suggestions.

Anyways, looking forward to reading it and the Halloween one too! xo Mina

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wonderful end to to very enjoyable story.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

I am so glad Mike got his.  I just loved the ending, it was so sweet and funny.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great last chapter. Looking forward to the next story! Thanks so much for sharing.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

Can't wait to read the new story. I love the end there such a big happy family. And making it even bigger. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 20

I loved it how beautiful is this family so sweet loving and protective thank you and I can't wait for the next one you guys put out thank you again for the gift of your written words are I am a stay at home mom and this is my me time 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful as always!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

loved this story

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for sharing! 

Love how it turned out. 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

Delightful story.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful story and ending. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

This is such a fantastic story! I love it!! :)=)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 20

This was a wonderful end to this story. Thank you so much for giving it to us! I look forward to more...

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful ending.  Love that they are all so close.   I wanna Mike outtake too along with a viper one.

 

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love love love this chapter and story!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Perfect ending.  But I am sad to see it end. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful ending can't wait for more of your stories 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

I always hate for a good story to end

Reviewer: CaroMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love love love this chapter!  Bella tickled me with her outbusts. Can't wait to read about Tanya. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. 

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it. Well done. Bravo. Great story.

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