Date: 18 Aug 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can not believe that someone would come in on a private funeral a day do that. I hope he gets arrested.
Date: 18 Aug 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
porrait avoir un autre chapitre stp merci
Date: 18 Aug 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow Bella will be getting better soon with all the support she's getting <heavy sarcasm>. Jeez
Freedom of the Press really sucks when they don't have common sense or common decency.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love love love this story.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Fucking hell... While I understand being angry at Bella, I would've expected that from Marcus and Garrett. Alice, Esme, Rose and Emmett have no business being so mean to Bella. So much for them being for her, huh?
Stupid reporters, not surprised tho. I was kinda expecting that to happen.
Thanks for the update, bb. Can't wait for the next one!
xoxo Mina
Date: 17 Aug 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Delighted to see an update on this one. Hopefully Michael will come around soon. That photographer at the end is an insensitive idiot, breaking into a funeral with a camera, but I must admit I'd been wondering if Gabriel Varner was behind that fire as well. Will be interesting to see the reaction to the photographer in the next chapter. I would imagine Carlisle and the others are going to be less than pleased.
Date: 24 May 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am in love with this story. I understand you can't always update like other writers but when you do I get so excited to read it. I really hope you finish this story because I need to know how it ends.
Date: 07 Jan 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
Is there more please post more
Date: 07 Jan 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
I finally get to finish this story thanks
Date: 07 Jan 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been looking for this I never finished it now it's here thanks
Date: 18 Dec 2015 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
I understand why they are mad at Bella, but to be honest, anger does nothing for any of them. Sure, it was a stupid risk and someone died because of it, but I would be more relieved she's okay. SHE GOT KIDNAPPED AND WAS ALMOST RAPED, FOR FUCK'S SAKE! They only people with the right to be mad at her are Carlisle and the boys. THEY are the ones she promised to never leave. THEY are her family. Period. The rest can feel angry, but acting they way they did towards her is totally cruel and uncalled for.
Thanks for the update, bb. I know you've been struggling, but I never lost faith in you.
xoxo
Mina
Date: 16 Dec 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
Dr. Gerandy is a piece of work. He didn't show up for HOURS to check on her condition and then never made the tiniest effort to examine her injuries. It's a wonder he hasn't been sued years ago. I don't blame Bella for going after Jake like that. He nearly didn't check up on the call. Wow, the professionals in this town need to be replaced. I do love this story.
Date: 16 Dec 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is a good chapter. I am disappointed in all of their friends. If any one of them had been in Bella's place they would have made the same sacrifice. Michael's behavior is understandable for a child his age.
Date: 15 Dec 2015 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
yea. I totally get why she left. if Varner had hurt the boys, she wouldn't have recovered from that and I doubt anyone else would have let her forget that either. She was screwed no matter what move she made.
Date: 15 Dec 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes a new chapter!
Bella screwed up and she knows it. I can uderstand het reasons, but the boys (all of them ;-) ) feel betrayed. I hope they all get through this.
I am glad you're still posting here. Stuff them at FFN! Please keep writing. I for one, love reading your stories. They are different!
Date: 14 Dec 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update. Michael will be okay.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 14 Dec 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update. Bless Michael's little heart!
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 14 Dec 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
I can see why Bella left them all ..
She did what she thought was best !
She put the saftey of her children and family first and although it went haywire I don not think she was being selfish ..
I just hope once everyone says their peace to her they let it go ..
Peter's death wasn't her fault ..
It was Aro's ...
She didn't ask Peter to follow her .. he chose too ..
So looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 14 Dec 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think you did a great job. Reentry is difficult.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 14 Dec 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
So excited to hear from you again. I have missed this story. I think this chapter is great. You did not sugarcoat the situation. You were very realistic with it. Hope to hear from you again soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 14 Dec 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh dear, looks like it is going to take awhile for Michael to forgive her, not to mention gaining Carlisle's trust back. Carlisle also needs to try to understand Bella's point of view as well. Hopefully they will eventually be able to overcome this, and that their little family isn't broken beyond repair. Will be looking forward to the next update, and thank you for this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Dont blame her for being pissed at jake and sam as well as dr g.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is going to need help with all the guilt she had over Pete's death. My heart hurts for both Bella and Carlisle. So glad to get your update. I have missed this story.
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bless it!
Date: 21 Sep 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
Powerful emotional chapter !!!
Well done hunnie !!
I'm still bummed and in mourning that Peter's dead !!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
Really well done.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you. For the update. Love these two!!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh yes, lots of drama yet to come. They've got a lot ahead of them One thing I'm uncertain about is if Gabriel Varner is actually dead or not. That wasn't actually spelled out in the last chapter, just that he dropped when shot. There could be even more drama ahead if he survived being shot. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to the next when ready.
Date: 20 Sep 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
That's all I got.
Thank you for the update.
xoxo
Mina
Date: 20 Sep 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awesome chapter! Please update asap...Thanks!
Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh dear!!! I'm crying my eyes out! I have just loved this story!!!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Finally Sam and Jacob managed to do their job!!! I can totally understand Carlisle being mad, nut I hope he forgives her. She did come to her senses. A bit late, but she did. And it's not her fault that Aro killed Peter.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
I wished Aro had suffered more, but I'm glad he's dead. Finally Jacob did something right.
Thank you for the update, bb!
xoxo Mina
Date: 18 Jun 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Whoa ... about time Jake and Sam did their job !
Poor Bella ... finding out that sick fucker kileld her father ..
Dr Gerandywhether he thought of her as a daughter doesn't excuse is behaviour ..
Now Carlisle ..
Eek .. I honestly expected him to go off at her more ...
Maybe it's the calm bfore the storm ?
Can't wait for more
Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad asswipe is gone now. Hope Bella and Carlisle can have some happier times once the grieve for Peter. They certainly deserve it. I hope Carlisle can get past her leaving cos I would hate for it to come between them.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
I´m glad they caught him, sadly I think she´s gonna blame herself for Peter´s death
Date: 17 Jun 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad Sam got there in time. Gerandy is still a dick
Date: 17 Jun 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm sad Varners death wasn't more painful but I'm glad he's gone. Looking forward to seeing how Carlisle and Bella do now.
Katy x
Date: 17 Jun 2015 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Really good chapter.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Crying before work. Loved it!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad to see the end of Gabriel Varner, and that he didn't manage to rape her. I'd been wondering for awhile if he'd killed her father, and still wondering if he had anything to do with the fire that killed her mother. Looks like Carlisle and Bella are going to have some issues to get over, with Bella's broken promise and Peter's death. Looking forward to further updates when they are ready.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMGosh! He killed her father. Wow, he has been planning to take her for a long time.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait for next chapter! Thanks!
Date: 17 Jun 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
Aro got off too easy!
Date: 12 Jun 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Omg!!! Please update soon I can't believe he had her and Carlisle dad died!!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2015 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?!?!?! I need a hug...
Date: 06 Jun 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
Don't hate you, but it's very sad. My first thought is lawsuit. They ought to use the school that hired "Varner" and the Folks PD for not protecting Bella.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG! I can't stop crying. Poor Carlisle. When they find Bella, she's gonna blame herself for Peter's death now too. I can see how she thought she was trying to keep everyone safe, but they're all correct in that Aro wasn't going to stop until he got her and he would've used them to draw her out! I hope they find her quickly. I also hope Bella finds her inner strength that everyone else sees and fight back, fight with everything in her! Can't wait until the next chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
You are evil!!! But I still love ya.
Poor Peter. Edward is going to have a breakdown along with the kids. Hope B will be ok
Date: 06 Jun 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nooo. Poor Peter. At least they realised the psycho has Bella. Hope they can find her soon before anything bad can happen to her.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
She was afraid that Gabriel harm to people she loves most...Well his stupidity did just that...If she had not left the house maybe Peter had not died trying to avoid her to be kidnapped by Gabriel...Right now I'm so mad at Bella I want is to kill her.
Looking forward to more! Thanks!
Date: 06 Jun 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
:O You kiled Papa Pete :'(
Oooh you Evil Evil Lady *Sniffs*
& poor Carlisle ... he's going to think that the worse of Bella now .. I hope he doesn't blame her .. she's going to blame herself because Peter wouldn't have been out if he wasn't talking sense into her ..
Lord ... the next lot of chapters are going to be horrendous ..
Big girl panites on ...
Date: 06 Jun 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Holy shit !!!
I am so glad that Peter talked her out of leaving ... But effing Aro/Garner whatever his name is now has her and Peter's injured !!
Please don't kill him off ! I heart Peter :(
Date: 06 Jun 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMGosh! Peter died. I hate that. My heart breaks for Carlisle and the boys. Can't wait for more.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
I don't like you right now. Love it. Hope Bella or Carlisle beats the crap out of Aro.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Peter. Saw that coming last chapter, though. At least he had a chance to reconcile with Carlisle and the boys before his death.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Omg I can't believe I found this! I totally didn't know u were on here.
Date: 29 May 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
:O noooo. Poor Peter. Please let both he and Bella be ok and please don't let Carlisle find the note and think she just ran and not realise that Gabriel has her.
Date: 28 May 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
You evil person!! How can you do that?!!!! But I still love u!!! I hope that theu find her soon!!!
Date: 27 May 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
I cant BELIEVE you left it there!!!! ACK
Date: 27 May 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
No! Peter! *cries*
Date: 27 May 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMGosh! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please don't let Peter die. Please save him. Carlisle is going to go crazy. Hope you update soon. Please don't leave us hanging long.
Date: 27 May 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 14
Evil woman. Maybe Varner will get what's coming to him soon thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 27 May 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
well i had a feeling this was going to happen but shes is stubbarn its awful! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 27 May 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my gosh. Hope Peter is ok, and that nothing too bad happens to Bella. Will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Date: 11 May 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad Esme and Alice were being vigilant. Can't blame b for being a bit paranoid.
Date: 11 May 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh no. I knew she would want to leave them to keep them safe. with all the money that Carlisle and his family has I just don't understand why they have not hired someone to find Aro. Why didn't Alice call the detectives when they saw the car? I feel so sorry for Bella.
Author's Response:
They have hired someone. Demetri, but it's not like Aro is having around the 7-11. He's sneaky. And just because Alice calleJasper, doesn't mean she hasn't called the detectives, too.
Date: 10 May 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the update!
Date: 06 May 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well finally some answers and they believe her now!
Date: 06 May 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh wow. Poor Real Garner Family.
Date: 06 May 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, so glad you revealed who is really after them.
Date: 05 May 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
That is scary that Gabriel or Aro did all that stuff. I don't blame Bella for losing it.
Date: 03 May 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
When you you going to write more? I love this stor .
Author's Response:
Hoping to have more soon.
Date: 03 May 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad they had a good day and enjoyed being together. The way Carlisle said they found Gabriella Verner,
Date: 02 May 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow really gotta be hard to send school with that maniac on the loose.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
Glad they hired a PI to help them And taking self defense classes. I have gotten caught up now I have to wait on your update. Hope it is soon. I have missed reading your stories. You do an awesome job writing.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
Gabriel was really close this time. I am really scared for them.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
oOMGosh! !!!! He was that close to them. That is really scary. Carlisle will be hiring body guards next. Lol
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved how you handled the boys meeting Tanya. Classy!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hope demetri can help.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
I amglad the Ty was ok. I thought he was hiding from his brother and Gabriel Varner. I really hope the boys don't get hurt.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh! !!!!!! Please don't let Gabriel Varner have him. Please just let him be hiding because he is mad at his brother.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
That is awful about Tanya.
I have a feeling that it was Gabriel Varner outside their home. Carlisle needs to hire someone to find him. Legal or illegal.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Gabriel Varner is mental. He scares me. With the Cullen name carrying so much weight there surely they will get help. Carlisle can afford to hire a private detective to find him. Glad they have their friends.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
They can not even move and get away from it. I can not believe that all their stuff was destroyed. How did he get inside the moving truck. The moving company has some explaining to do.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
so i started, The Babysitter, yesterday & now all caught up! getting a PI to look for Varner is a start but Carlisle should think about getting some kind of security around the house & bodyguards for Bella and the Boys.
one comment on the writing: can you please not say Varner's full name every time? its slowly going from frustrating to annoying. people don't talk or think like that. i'm loving your stories but if this keeps up; i'm going to have to stop reading. i know this sounds minor but repetitiveness drives me batty!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMGosh! How have I missed this story. I loved The Babysitter. I am so glad that I saw this. Can't wait to read the other chapters.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yea sadly the police are hancuffed by the law. Sucks that they have to go to such extremes to be safe.
Date: 03 Feb 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
lol for her not bieng able to swim. Ugh Varner again.
Date: 03 Feb 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
hmm well at least she admits she is selfish
Date: 01 Feb 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
that man needs to die!
Date: 29 Jan 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
Of course! Hang in there! Thanks for the update. ...loved the chapter.
Date: 28 Jan 2015 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jeez, I just hate it when I have to feel sorry for the bad guy. This was a sweet chapter.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Get well soon my friend! Great chapter!
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
wow Glad Tyler hid. Sucks that the person practially has to kill her before she can get help. And a TRO really doesn't do much either sadly.
Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hope you feel better soon and thanks for the update :)
Date: 07 Dec 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to the next chapter