[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2015 1:35 AM Title: Epilogue
cool story ;) i loved the ending thanks for sharing this on here ;D
Author's Response:
Hi again!
Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it
May
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2015 6:25 PM Title: Epilogue
:) Loved this story
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 22 Oct 2014 10:19 PM Title: Epilogue
Now that what I call happy end. Thank for the story and heartfelt messages. Good job!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for taking time to read and for trusting me.
I hope you and your mother are fine. I'm still sending you my good vibes.
May
Date: 20 Oct 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Pretty good story. I got lost a few times but hey I climbed back on.
Author's Response:
Thank you for being with me all the way.
May
Date: 19 Oct 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
At least Esme got what she deserves
Author's Response:
Ding dong the witch is dead!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
May
Date: 19 Oct 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Esme went nuts but she should have left her son and wife alone now she at the bottom of the ocean with all the two bad soul. They might find her body then again maybe not. Hey the evil bitch esme is dead. Wish I know what going through esme and Jacob mind when they meet there end. By the way thank for your message on my review to my mother and me. But my mother got some good news from job a raised and a start p sorry I have autism can't spell have time.
Author's Response:
I'm glad things are going up for you and your mother.
Thank you for reading, commenting and sharing a bit of your life with me.
May
Date: 16 Oct 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is rather strange Tanya Jacob and the ghosts.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Do you think it's too weird? Maybe I should add more information in the next chapter, Bella & edward's side.
Thanks as always.
:) May
Date: 15 Oct 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Tanya! That's what you get jackass Jake
Author's Response:
You made me laugh. Thanks!
May
Date: 15 Oct 2014 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm happy Tanya made it out alive that the ghost help. Can't wait to see the next chapter with bella and edward hope at last they never have to see the evil bitch esme again.
Author's Response:
I'm glad youlike it. Tanya deserves to live well.
May
PS Hugs!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Omg esme should be lock away somewhere,she pure evil. I hope edward goes back home soon. It her own fault that her greed over money get to her. Something tells me that if she goes to the house there going be a ghost waiting for her to arrive. My mom doing a little better the funeral for her dad is on Monday. While can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hun, you're in my prayers. I hope with time she finds solace.
I'm posting the new chapter, I really hop you like it.
May
Date: 10 Oct 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Esme is one sick woman..doesn't she know if she hurts Bella Edward would never forgive her
Author's Response:
She's very self centered.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
May
Date: 10 Oct 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Attention is used wrong in this story. It means to concentrate on one thing. You mean to say her medical care. Two words but much better in this story.
I have had trouble reviewing keeps giving a fatal error.I am not sure this will go through.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
That 'fatal error' also happens when you publush a chapter, I don't know why this happens.
May
Date: 10 Oct 2014 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
this woman is more than controlling. She may be ready to do something illegal like murder.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's the next step of selfish.
Date: 10 Oct 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
Pay for her attention. Attention meaning mentally concentrating on one subject. When you were speaking you had my attention. Pay for her health care or pay for her hospital bills. FYI
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'll correct this when I get home. I appreciate these cooments.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
I knew it !!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi! Yeah, he did so.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Omg I hope Tanya survives. Thank you for the chapter, my mother is close to losing her father, I'm doing ok I just worried for my mother. P.S your doing a good job with the story thank you.
Author's Response:
Oh honey, your family will be in my prayers. I'll send all my good vibes to you and your mother.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh shit she is going to hurt Bella, well the surprise is that Rose is there also
Author's Response:
Hi!
You have to consider Esme is a devious mom. ;)
Thanks for erading and commenting.
May
Date: 07 Oct 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Look like esme hadn't given up yet. She most really want to live off her son money that badly, can't wait for the ghost come out and play. Now what will esme think now that edward knew about the money his father left him. There going to be some words between edward and his evil mother. P.S. thank you for the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for reading. I hope you like the next chapter, I'll try to post it tomorrow.
May
Date: 07 Oct 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
I don't trust Jacob! Get out of there Tanya
Author's Response:
LOL If only she could hear you...
May
Date: 03 Oct 2014 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Nice job on the history of the house. WOW the bitch has landed in forks. Bet she has a lot to say to her son. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the history of the house. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya better be careful first her best friend goes missing and now her aunt dies have a feeling that her aunt Irina tried to tell her that drink had something in it.
Author's Response:
Things are going to change for Tanya
May
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Lock the old girl in the room. lol
Author's Response:
Maybe ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
May
Date: 03 Oct 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
that whole chapter left me saying huh. Someone followed Tanya. Irina just died trying to tell her something.
Author's Response:
Thing are going to change a lot for Tanya now.
Thanks for reviewng
May
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
This woman, Esme is scarey. Possessed with the money not really caring about her son's happiness.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she won't win 'Mother of the year' never.
:) May
Date: 25 Sep 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh no now esme will truly be piss. What kind of a mother is she? It always about the damn money not her son happiness, I hate say this again but I have say it what an evil bitch. I hope someone does go and get scared to there core that they never return to the house again. Afraid ghosts mighty come after them.
Author's Response:
She's used to control everything, and Edward never stood against her, until Bella. But yeah, she's an evil bitch.
The house... I can't tell you the deal about the house, but soon you'll see. ;)
May
Date: 25 Sep 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Boom!!!! I hope Esme has a heart attack. She so mad
Author's Response:
Maybe not a heart attack, but an ulcer... :)
May
Date: 25 Sep 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Tanya is not .. Bella at all.
Author's Response:
Oh no, Tanya is so different from cannon Bella. She's too naïve, witless, aphatetic. Now she's waking up and beginning her change.
Thanks for commenting, I really appreciate your opinion.
:) May
Date: 24 Sep 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jacob becoming too needy tanya should be careful around him and watched her back. Good see Tanya stand up to Emily. Enjoying the chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Tanya is a bit naive, but she´s learning.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
May
Date: 24 Sep 2014 10:02 PM Title: Prologue
Hey good start love a good horror fic few Q's though
When is the horror coming into it
Is it all tied in together
Where the hell is heidi lol
And is the house e/b living in aunt irina's house
I know you obv cant answer all lol but it is a good fic so well done.I usually give up if a fic is dragging a bit but i will stick with this a bit longer see where it goes
Author's Response:
Hi!,
You're right, I can't tell you too much. But I can tell you that both stories are tied; no Irina/ Tanya's house isn't the one at the cliff ;)
Yours isn't the first comment on how slow that story is coming, and all of you are right. If I posted more frequently maybe it wouldn't be noticed. I pictured the story to finish at Halloween, but I made some changes. What I did starting with this chapter is join two of the original chapters together, and change a bit of the story. The next chapter is B/E side of the story. Oh and the horror/mistery will start coming the next of Tanya's chapters.
Thanks for reading and commenting :)
Date: 20 Sep 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
I can not make too much of these short chapters. I have learned to get more information before forming opinions. I do think Esme is awful.
Author's Response:
Do you think the story is going too slow? I'll try to compensate by posting more frequently. Thanks.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward mom is evil,she doesn't know what real love is only money. Jenks is going have his hands full with esme no question there and she will be piss off when she found out that bella and edward are married. Your doing a great job with the story. P.S. could you please when esme goes to bella house have a ghost scared her.
Author's Response:
I'm a firm believer in HEA, in my fics, the bads will get their 'just desserts'. Trust me ;)
Date: 19 Sep 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Enjoying the story so far. But I still don't trust jacob,and Heidi missing there something wrong I think something bad happen to her plus the telegram must be a lie.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes Heidi's telegram is kinda phishy :S
Date: 07 Sep 2014 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well Esme sounds just lovely.
Author's Response:
Yes, she's the Mother-in-law of the year. Thanks for staying with me and reviewing.
May
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
Boy edward mom sounds like a bitch and a bully.
Author's Response:
That she is, thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Author's Response:
That she is, thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wouldn't trusts jacob black just yet there something off about him.
Author's Response:
Thanks. You're very clever ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. You're very clever ;)
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW I guess it for a new bed.
Author's Response:
And a new floor :) Thanks
Date: 07 Sep 2014 7:27 AM Title: Prologue
Sound scary. But interesting.
Author's Response:
:) Thanks
Date: 07 Sep 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your writing improved a lot this chapter. I did not notice any misspelling or grammatical errors.. BRAVO
So she likes Jake.. okay Glad she is not smitten with Edward.
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm finising chapter 4, so please, wait a little for the next chapter :) Thanks for your comment, my beta dropped me this week, so I'm flying solo for these two. And you're right, in this story Tanya won't be after Edward, her story will be apart from him.
:)May
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
the house is haunted and Tanya is the cousin or Jake..
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wish I could say something, but all I can do is to promise to post soon. :)
Date: 25 Aug 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
well I am not sure about this. You may want to use a word program and use spell check. Honestly you have to be more invested into the story before anyone can see where it is going. You set Tanya up with Bella type personality. Ed & Bell are already married. So if you update this we will have to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you for take the time for read and review.
I know my grammar needs a lot of work, I'm working on it. All I can say my writing will improve the next chapters. About the story, you are right with Tanya's personality. I'm going to put an OOC in the summary, because this time Tanya is going to be sweet, contrary to the usual. We'll see her story from the beginning. But Bella&Edward are married, because the trouble they'll face is different. You'll see snippets of the beginning of their story, how they met and how they got together, but the principal point of their story is going to happen later.
Again thank you for sharing your opinion, I really appreciate it.
May :)