[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 35- Port A
:) wow great story cant wait to read more :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 35- Port A
I hate cliffee's, lol
Date: 07 Nov 2015 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 35- Port A
This sounds horrible for both Rosalie and Bella! Have you let them meet up with some really bad guys, by any chance? I always hated that part of Twilight!
Author's Response:
I'm going to paste the next chapter so you will be able to read it, but I promise you I can't write a brutal scene, don't think I can stomach it, I don't think I can do it justice, the feelings will be hard so don't worry Rosalie will be saved. Thank you for the review, it is good to know you are still around.
Aria xxx
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 34-Thanks giving
This chapter made me hungry for candied sweet potatoes!
Author's Response:
Lol, I get like that for chocolate Ice-cream. I'll try to find awesome pictures for the next chapter too and thank you for the review, when I see them I feel that some one is waiting to read this and it makes me want to write so once again I really appreciate them.
Aria.
Date: 29 Jun 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 34-Thanks giving
That was a lovely Thanksgiving, even with Emmett being his usual silly self. How sweet for them to include Penny, so she wouldn't have to be alone. I'm glad Edward wasn't hurt seeing Jassica with someone else. Maybe he's getting smarter?
Author's Response:
I'm happy that you loved the chapter and Emmett and the new character Mrs Penny. I'm sure Edward is starting to get a better idea about Jessica, let's wait and see about that and what do you think about action? because the next one will have some and I'm already writing that one hope I'll be able to update it soon. And thank you for the review they are the best and they motivates me to write.
Aria.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 32-Journey to Moon Lake.
I love the pictures & 'chapter quotes' at the beginning of each chapter. They do a great job of jarring my memory of the story before going on to read an update:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I do surf the internet when I have to post a chapter like mad but it is good to know it has some effect, but if you want ot see more photoes you can check my facebook profile.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 33- Earthquke
I've got mixed feelings about the possibilities of what will happen to Jacob when Ephriam's spirit uses him to do....whatever. Since it wouldn't really be Jacob doing whatever, I don't want him to die. But, considering he's pissed me off a million times in other stories, I want him to die a horrible death::))
Date: 15 Jun 2015 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 32-Journey to Moon Lake.
sorry but,
edward is a doofus!
you should have some other god-like guys to fall for bella and she for him
and have edward become jealous.
how he would think jessica is all that is beyond me.
i don't want bella to have to beg and grovel to edward to notice her.
she should not have to degrad herself to try to have edward like/love her
when he should do so automatically.
if he was her true love, how he cannot see it from the first time he sees her,
it just doesn't make sense esp since this is all supposedly something
mystical!
Author's Response:
Woah! I loved reading what you think about this story. thank you so much for your opinion, it was one of the refreshing ones and has me thinking what to do in the future.
Aria.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 33- Earthquke
I'm LOVING this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
How often do you normally update?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and about your question, I do update when I finish writing a chapter and the time it takes to complete one varies so it can be few dates or few weeks but I am going to complete this definitly.
Aria.
Date: 14 Jun 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 33- Earthquke
Loved it!!! Can't wait to read more
Date: 13 Jun 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 33- Earthquke
The unknown thinker, is sadly mistaken if he thinks the white wolf is his! She will have to set that straight I'm afraid. Now I know why Bella mingled her blood and Edward's, to make the water return to the well!
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm not saying who is the bad person in this story, about that blood mixing, it was to clense that dried up lake and the well is a side benift of that.
Aria.
Date: 07 Jun 2015 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 32-Journey to Moon Lake.
wow
Date: 03 Jun 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 32-Journey to Moon Lake.
I like this! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 30 May 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 32-Journey to Moon Lake.
thanks for the update, i enjoy your story, very much
Date: 29 May 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 32-Journey to Moon Lake.
I'm really curious as to what Bella's little blood ritual started! I'm pretty sure she did it for a reason, just don't what it might be!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 31-Pretend Girlfriend
I truly love this story.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 31-Pretend Girlfriend
Thanks for the update. Of course Bella would rather be outdoors hiking then go to a dance!
Date: 28 Dec 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 31-Pretend Girlfriend
I think Bella and Edward may be having a better time hiking than the rest getting ready for the dance! Of course, if it snowsall over them, then all bets are off!
Author's Response:
I hope they will have a better time and I don't know about Edward and Bella but I love snow, well until it starts to melt :o). Thank you for leaving me a review I hope to update soon and Happy new year!
Aria.
Date: 13 Dec 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 30-Journal
Edward and his comment towards Emmett.. lol
I can't wait for their journey, hope you update soon
Author's Response:
Couldn't help it and I'm glad you like that, their little trip will be on friday so we will get a peak and I do try to write fast but until I'm satisfied by the chapter I really can't post it, that's what happened with this chapter it was written and was sitting on the laptop for few days. I have a beta who is so far behind so don't have much help and have to do everything by myself, in future hope everything will settle down and school keeps me very busy. So thank you for being patient with me.
Aria.
Date: 13 Dec 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30-Journal
Go ahead, Edward, keep fooling yourself about pretending to be Bella's boyfriend! She knows the truth, I think, and just needs to convince him of it. Can't wait to see if they find the moon pool and what may happen there!
Author's Response:
Now that you mentioned the pool, I'm hoping to add a scene there. Lets see where it take this story and thank you for the review as always it is appreciated and loved.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 30-Journal
"....your family will be there until then protecting you, when the time comes will be there to look after you." It's interesting that Charlie is the last of the Swan's (I'm assuming) & Aysu wakes up during his time.
I have a feeling that when E & B find the pond, more will happen than having 2 people looking at a pretty pond.
Author's Response:
Ah! you guys have such lovely imaginations. Lets see what will happen, and thank you so much for the review I love reading them cause it makes me write faster and stimulate my imagination lol.
Aria.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 29-Janitor's closet
Luckily Edward came to his senses just in time to save Bella from disclosing her secret! The students of Forks High School are idiots, by the way! Had to laugh at Carlisle and Esme and Charlie, too, talking about the hell they raised when they were young!
Author's Response:
You are the only person who talked about the parents, I'm so glad cause I was dying to hear what you all thought about them, so thank you sooo much.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 29-Janitor's closet
NICE! Preasure, I'm glad I'm not in this generation. LOL
Author's Response:
I really hope peope don't behave this way too. and thank you so much for the review, I loved reading it.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 28-Sadie Hawkins.
OMG!😀😃😍😍😂 BELLA just went off like that. I love the way she innocently speaks her mind. Not trying to hurt anybody but still speaking the truth. & when Edward got embarrassed! 😍😍
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm glad you like it. I'm writing the next chapter so hope I can post it soon.
Aria.
Date: 27 Nov 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 28-Sadie Hawkins.
Good for Bella, that was something that Amanda needed to hear! Now the problem will be convincing Edward that Bella is much better for him than Jessica ever was! I figured the self-centered little bitch was just stringing him along, anyway!
Author's Response:
Thank you! My story and the imprinting thing is going to be different, that's why Edward and Bella are behaving the way they are. Hopefully in the future I will be able to get to it.
Aria.
Date: 25 Nov 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 27-Tanya
Can't wait until Bella reads Seth's journal and gets a look back to her history. Maybe it will help her regain some memory of her past! It's kind of cute to see Tanya try to get Charlie to notice her in a romantic way.
Date: 25 Nov 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 26-First National Bank.
Is it something from Bella's past, some family heirloom, perhaps? It must be a sad day for Charlie, since it's the day his dead daughter was born!
Date: 25 Nov 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 25-First day on school
Well okay you big dummy, ask Bella to at least pretend to be your girl so as to keep away unwanted attentions! Seems like the perfect solution to me!
Date: 24 Nov 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 25-First day on school
Love it
Date: 23 Nov 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 24-Chief Swan's daughter
Frankly, I'm getting a bit tired of Edward always mooning over Jessica, intead of seeing what's right in front of him, namely, Bella!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 23-Hurricane Amanda.
A nearly disastrous shopping trip, what with Amanda stalking Edward! The coming school year is going to be all kinds of fun! That last part of the chapter is definitely someone else besides our regular characters. I wonder who it might be?
Date: 23 Nov 2014 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 22-Badass Bella.
I'm on Bella's side in this one, she was only defending her friends. Maybe running off a girl pestering Edward also?
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 24-Chief Swan's daughter
Oh, Edward, give up on Jessica!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 22-Badass Bella.
OMG, that was so freakin funny. Emmett loved it!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 23-Hurricane Amanda.
Oh, mystery!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 21-It's Charlie........with a girl.
This seems to be a good plan, but knowing these two boys, there will probably be trouble!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 20-New girl friend.
Now that Rosalie has the facts of Bella's sudden appearance, she's willing to help out .
Date: 23 Nov 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 19-Cheaters.
Trust Emmett to mess this up all over again! Maybe Edward has the right idea and having a female ally wpuld actually be a good thing! Now all they have to do is convince Rose they are not crazy!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2014 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 20-New girl friend.
You really have a winner with this story. I would get it published.
Author's Response:
Oh my! thank you for the compliment.
Date: 20 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 18-Edward, look who's here to see you......
Boy! I wish Edward would get over this thing he has for Jessica! She definitely is not the girl for him!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 17-Secrets
Sounds like a pretty good plan. It covers all the questions everyone will have and makes sense, too. Now all we have to worry about is Emmett's big mouth!He has such a problem keeping a secret, like any child!
Author's Response:
I'm sure he will keep it close, he is afraid of big bad wolf isn't he.......
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 17-Secrets
Wonderfully written. Amazing story!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 17-Secrets
I am so wrapped up in this story! This story takes me on a journey. I love the fact that yhu update everyday. I like the fact that they are not falling in lobe right away. Gives them time for friendship. So unlike the rest of the imprint story. Other imprint stories if it's not love at first sight then it's infactuation to the of obsession. Love the little twist with the scientific reason behind finding the imprint. It makes sense plus it originated from SM, so it tied everything together. Great story and chapter. Yhu Did awesome reaching 2k words! a86;😉
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope to update every few days.
Aria.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 16-Bella Marie
Think about it for a second, boys. She is most likely related to Charlie and they do share eye color, so why not? Is there any hope that Emmett will ever grow out of his childish ways and someday think like an adult?
Author's Response:
May be......still I haven't think about it.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! I posted the new chapter here hope you like it.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 2-End of another school year.
Falling in love with this story
Author's Response:
I hope you will like the rest of it, I know it is kinda short but the rest is lengthy.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
Great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I feel really happy to hear that.
Aria.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 15-I have Quileute ancestors.
Ha! I love that ending!
Author's Response:
lol, I know. I hope you will love the next chapter too.
Aria.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 15-I have Quileute ancestors.
Good thing Charlie knows the legend and pretty much believes it. Now comes the part where Edward has to admit he's the virgin Charlie is asking about!
Author's Response:
Ah! lol, he is sneaky.
Aria.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15-I have Quileute ancestors.
Please please another chapter
Author's Response:
The new chapter is posted and I hope you like it.
Aria.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 15-I have Quileute ancestors.
great story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate your comments.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 14-What did you all do?
Great story so far! Well thought out. I'm having a blast reading it. Short chapters but yhu update frequently though!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I know it is short but I try to update frequently with all of the real life work keeping me busy I hope you will forgive me for the length of the chapter.
Aria.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 14-What did you all do?
I think Charlie is about to share some old family history to help explain the mystery! I loved her telling on the boys, by the way!
Author's Response:
I hope you got some answers in the next chapter.
Aria.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 14-What did you all do?
Awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Aria.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 14-What did you all do?
Please another chapter
Author's Response:
New chapter is posted!
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 14-What did you all do?
busted em. lol love her telling charlie about em doing it.
Author's Response:
She just tell it as it is and I'm sure Emmett is not loving that.
Aria.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 13-Busted.
Omg that is funny please a another chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you like the rest.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 13-Busted.
OMG, I love it. I laughed so hard. ONLY Emmett. Priceless!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm happy that this could make you laugh. And I love Emmett he is so goofy.
Aria.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 13-Busted.
Lol
Author's Response:
;o) I know. Hope you are enjoying the rest.
Aria.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 13-Busted.
I'm really glad Charlie saw her transform into a white wolf, otherwise, he might have locked them all up as mentally unbalanced! It's pretty funny that Emmett fainted! I hope Charlie remembers what she said about him having her eyes!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking time to leave a comment. I really wanted at least one adult to know the secret and Charlie is pretty smart isn't he?
Aria.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 12-I'm stuck
I like the supernatural mixed with the humor.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it,Thank you for taking your time to leave a review.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 12-I'm stuck
PRICELESS!!!!
Author's Response:
yeah! I know. I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can too.
Aria.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 12-I'm stuck
The real proof of Edward being a teenage boy is the fact of him having Emmett for a best friend, despite all the trouble he drags him through. With Em as a friend, you wouldn't really need an enemy! Now that Charlie has caught them in his house, maybe someone will notice Bella!
Author's Response:
Oh! he is going to notice :o)
Aria.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 11-Chief Swan.
Can't wait for Charlie to see everyone who has invaded his home! That was pretty sad to read about him losing his little girl in Thailand. I hate to think of Charlie Swan without a daughter, somehow! ( by the way, being hairless is spelled bald, not bold) I look forward to what punishment the chief doles out to Emmett and Edward! Hard to say what he will think when he sees Bella, no matter what form she is in now!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I corrected it here.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 10-Oh! you dirty boy.....
That chapter was just to funny andI don't like cliffee!!! LOL
Author's Response:
I know, My Bad. next chapter will be posted soon.
Aria.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 10-Oh! you dirty boy.....
Clueless little boys, these two! It hasn't dawned on either of them where this girl really came from! I feel they are about to find out, though!
Author's Response:
They never imagine it, who would lol..
Aria.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 9-Well that went well
Peeking into Bella's mind isn't much help, because she's pretty confused by what she is seeing! Poor thing, no wonder it's all a mystery, she's looking at things not yet invented when she was last in human form! There is going to a lot of shocked and surprised people when they all get a look at this girl who has appeared as if by magic!(little do they know, it really is magic that she is here!)
Author's Response:
You are correct, next few chapters will give you most of the answers, I hope.
Aria.
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 8-Honey Bear
Lordy, Emmett is an idiot, no doubt about it! Good thing the white wolf showed up to stare down the grizzly bear! I think Gorgeous is an appropriate name for her, too. I'm willing to bet that Edward wasn't the only one surprised to wake up with a naked girl in his bed! She probably wondered about it , too! Can't wait to see what the adults think about this whole spooky happening!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the lovely words, I was feeling down and when I read this it made it little bit okey. so thank you once again.
Aria.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7-FREEZE.........
Between Edward's guilty conscience and Charlies suspicion of Emmett, the truth will probably come out. I'm curious as to why the she-wolf thinks Charlie smells like her father? She has a couple questions needing answers! Hope she gets them and shares with the rest of us!
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm going to post the next chapter hope you will get some answers I really don't like to spoil your fun.
Aria.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 6-Getting spooked.
Tried to get in touch with you, but the contact link, due to abuse, has been canceled on this site. There are grammar and tense and spelling mistakes, plus a few punctuation goofs. The thing is, I'm not qualified to point out or correct, I'm just an old woman who reads a lot and notices stuff like that! This story is certainly keeping my attention, so I'll just keep my opinions to myself and enjoy these silly boys and their prank, plus the mysterious white wolf stalking Edward!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for telling me. I know there are mistakes and hopefully my beta will edit this. Actually the thing is we all are quite busy so it take time to edit so when I get edited chapter I replace them.
I'm so happy that so far you like this, hope I can keep your interest.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 6-Getting spooked.
wow.. esme is smart
Author's Response:
I know, Mothers know when the child are doing something they shouldn't, don't they? lol
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 5-That's a lot of blue there my friend.
LOL, POOR CHARLIE!!!!
Author's Response:
I know, I'm sure you will like the next few chapters and what Charlie will do.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 4- Breaking and entering.
THAT WAS AWEFUL! OH EMMETT, LOL
Author's Response:
I love Emmett in this so hope you like him too.
Aria.
Date: 23 Oct 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5-That's a lot of blue there my friend.
Love it. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'll try to post the next chapter around the weekend.
Aria.
Date: 22 Oct 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 5-That's a lot of blue there my friend.
cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
I'll try to post the next chapter around the weekend, so thank you for taking time to read and review.
Aria.
Date: 22 Oct 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 5-That's a lot of blue there my friend.
The whole Charlie thing went on a little long, but I did have to laugh about it! Although, I would have tried washing it out before I cut it all off!!
Author's Response:
Hm....I know everybody like to hear from the main characters but felt like writing about this and it gave me opertunity to get Alice and Carlisle some facetime and others to get an in on Charlie.
Do you think Charlie Swan would wear a color like that on his head even if it washed a little and he took a shower lol.
Thank you for your input I really appreciate it.
Aria.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 5-That's a lot of blue there my friend.
Lol. Love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you sou much I'm glad you like it.
Aria.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 5-That's a lot of blue there my friend.
Is anyone pre-reading or checking your story? I only ask because of a few small errors of grammar, etc. That aside, this is a pretty good tale, since I love the supernatural and historical angle! Besides, I can just see Charlie with his shaved head! When he finds out who sabotaged his shampoo, he's going to raise hell!
Author's Response:
Hmm....To tell you the truth I had a beta and she had some problems and can't do it anymore and getting a good beta is like trying to find a needle in a haystack. I'm currently trying to do that so when I get a good one all the unbeta'd chapters are going to her.
Can you tell me where you found these mistakes? I would really like to correct them until then. And thank you so much!
Aria.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4- Breaking and entering.
I'm sensing significance in the fact of Edward patting the white wolf statue with the hand with the cut finger! Something brought that statue to life, so it could play catch with him on the way to his house! Cute that his father teased him about seeing a ghost!
Author's Response:
Ah! you pay lot of attention don't you? There are lots of significant incidents hiding in all these chapters, I'm so happy you got it.
Aria.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 4- Breaking and entering.
She followed him. I love it! Edward and Carlisle's interaction made me laugh. I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
You are very welcome! I'm thinking to post the next chapter tomorrow, we will see hm....I think you will love what is going to happen to Edward.
Aria.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
I feel so sad for what happened. I hope Ephraim was punished in some way. Also I feel so bad for Charlie. He hasn't seen his daughter in 17 years??? I hope we learn more about him at some point. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Hmm...punishment......Let's see what we can do about it in the future. Well you will certainly learn about him in few chapters I'm sure. And you are welcome.
Aria.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 2-End of another school year.
Oh Emmett...I am thinking he should take Edward's advice. :-)
Author's Response:
Lol, Emmett is too stubborn so he is not going to take others advice in to consideration.
Date: 21 Oct 2014 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
How sad. I feel heartbroken for them. I can't wait to catch up! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
You are still in the begining:o) I just posted the fourth chapter, hope you will like it, and thank you so much for the review.
Aria.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
I guess I have to leave with dumb and dumber, because I can't think where Bella is, unless it's on her way to stay with her dad! Jake did a good job of telling the legend, by the way!
Author's Response:
Well.well. You are going to be pretty surprised with where you are going to see Bella, let's hope we can get the next chapter posted on this weekend, cross your fingers, it's with my Beta and she is working on it. And thank you for the review I always enjoy reading what you all are thinking about the chapters.
Aria.
Author's Response:
Well.well. You are going to be pretty surprised with where you are going to see Bella, let's hope we can get the next chapter posted on this weekend, cross your fingers, it's with my Beta and she is working on it. And thank you for the review I always enjoy reading what you all are thinking about the chapters.
Aria.
Author's Response:
Well.well. You are going to be pretty surprised with where you are going to see Bella, let's hope we can get the next chapter posted on this weekend, cross your fingers, it's with my Beta and she is working on it. And thank you for the review I always enjoy reading what you all are thinking about the chapters.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
Cette histoire de petit blanc louve est très triste
Bella est Aysu?
Author's Response:
Je sais que c'est triste, mais les prochains chapitres vais être amusant, et bien c'est ce que je pense. Le chapitre suivant est avec mon Beta dès qu'elle me l'envoyer, je vais poster ici. J'espère que vous l'aimerez.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 2-End of another school year.
C'est le début, difficile de juger, mais pour le moment, il est bon.
Author's Response:
Merci! Je sais que c'est court, mais le prochain est peu plus que cela.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
Je pense que ça va être bon!
Je vais vous lire.
Author's Response:
Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de lire ceci. C'est ma première fois affichant une histoire ici, donc j'espère que vous serez patient avec moi.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
Love it!!!!!! Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope I will be able to. The next chapter is with my Beta, as soon as I get it, it'll be here.
Aria.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2014 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
OMG, awesome story!
Author's Response:
O my! thank you for your review. Reading this made me so happy. I really want to post the next chapter as soon as it is in my hands I will post it here, Hope it won't take too much time.
Aria.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
Glad to see that you posted again can't wait to see what's next
Author's Response:
Really sorry it took me this long, I did post as soon as I got the chapter from my Beta. If you are in a hurry to read this I have an unbeta'd version on the fanfiction.net under the same name.
Aria.
Date: 02 Oct 2014 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 3- Scary stories.
Excellent chapter. Loved the story telling.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you have been patient to read this still if you want to read the unbeta'd version it's in fanfiction.net under the same name.
Aria.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 2-End of another school year.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I will update as soon as I get the next chapter from my beta.
Aria.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 2-End of another school year.
Ah, no vampires?? Boo.
Well, you certainly aren't the first to remove the vampires from Twilight, lol. I definitely wish you luck and hope you have fun!Keep writing. :)
-Ginnie
Author's Response:
Lol,I know. I love vampires and there are soo many vamp stories in here that I'm scared to write one because I feel I won't be able to write a good one, well may be one day.
And for this one, it is different,you will have to read it to see what is different here. Hope you like it.
Thank you so much for the review, I loved reading those.
Aria.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
Oh, cool idea. I think I like it, and I'm not usually a wolf-fic girl.
Thanks for sharing.
-Ginnie
Date: 05 Sep 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 2-End of another school year.
Edward seems to have the right slant on covering the Chief's house in toilet tissue! Don't do it! Emmett should know better, but may not do better! Saw your author's note about no vampires, only wolves in this story, so that will be different for me!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you will love Emmett, He is a wonderful character to write and so is the Chief, you would not believe what Emmett is up to. well it is enough to say that there will be more than toilet paper there,lol.
Aria.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 2-End of another school year.
Interesting, can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! My beta is responsible for any delay,lol
Aria.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
I'm in. I love the premise.
Author's Response:
WOW! Let me breath.....I didn't expect to see all this wonderful reviews. thank you very much from all my heart. I will post as soon as my dear beta send me the edited chapters. Hope you will like it, If not you can tell me I won't get upset, promise :)
Aria.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
The start is so sad!! Really good, but sad, please update quickly! I always like stories where Bella is able to phase.
Author's Response:
I know it is sad, I felt bad too. And thank you soooo much for the lovely review, you guys made my day.
Date: 05 Sep 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
Love this already I hope to read the next chapter soon
Author's Response:
The next chapter is already submitted but it is quite short but don't worry the other chapters are long so I hope you all be little patient with me. Thank you for all your thoughts.
Aria.
Date: 04 Sep 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
What were they doing, breaking the most important law of the pack? The punishment for that must be something fierce! I can't wait to find out what magic happened to the little white wolf and her dead lover!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, now the answer to your question hmmm.....some of it you will get in the second chapter, which means not the next one the one after it. It is already written and I'm waiting my Beta to send it back to me. Hope you will be patient with me. :)
Aria.