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Reviewer: malugargula Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing and hot

Reviewer: Randi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Gotta say i loved your story though wish it were longer. 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story it was amazing!!

Reviewer: iamkaren10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know if my review posted, as it has been a while since I have been on this site and left a review. If this is a repeat, I apologize. I really like this Christian and Ana. I enjoy reading different versions. I like that both of them have money even if Ana's came from a settlement. I love how he treated Ana's scar with such sweetness. This Christian was still very arrogant and I love that about Christian. This was a nice breath of fresh air to read. It was very entertaining...funny, hot, sooo interesting. Great job!

Reviewer: Divaslayer69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome one shot, I loved it.


Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good and clever!

Reviewer: jeangb Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2014 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

A fun read thanks

Reviewer: SeralynsMommy Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok so I totally disagree about this being for Mia and Ethan and not Christian and Ana. This was perfect for them!! Loved this every word of the way. That's just my opinion. I think this is Ana and Christian all over, the arrogant prick! Lol he was very arrogant and she was always wondering why he wanted her in the originals so I think you got that down right. As for the rest that's why it's called an AU fanfic. Means you provided the story while borrowing the characters. To each their own though. By the way this is Ashley Mercer, I commented on your post from Facebook about this story so decided to give it a read. I'll be reading whatever else you've got too!! :)

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not Christian or  Ana at all,  maybe you should of made this story about Mia and Ethan ex. They met there and fall for each other to then find out they are related to Kate, Christian Ana etc... Loved the story(hot and steamy)  but it just wasnt fittng for Ana and Christian sorry that's just my opinion 

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Thank you for your opinion! 

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Steamy Hot.  I liked it!

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Thank you!

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