Date: 24 May 2018 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm really enjoying your story, so far.
Date: 21 Aug 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loving it! Really unique.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Date: 15 Aug 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm loving this story. Keep updating regularly. Great story.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is a really great story!
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Keep them coming!!
T
Date: 06 Aug 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Je aime ce premier chapitre.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Really enjoying a different take on these characters. Great writing. Can't wait for the next chapters
Date: 30 Jul 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
When you're in the process of posting a chapter, you recieve an error code, which I almost always do when I post, contact the site director and give them your penname, post date, and name of story in an email, along with the error code. They'll fix and place it on the recently updated page. I have to contact them every time, it seems. Its an unfortunate flaw in the coding that the site director can't remedy for some users, for one reason or another. Hope that helps! - great story so far, btw.
Jamie
Date: 29 Jul 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
"Known Quantity" Yes I know that. I went to school (in the olden days) with the same classroom of kids all the way through 6th grade. My parents were't menbers of the 9 hole country club so I was not in the in crowd....OMG, so glad to be gone! Ha Ha
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella and Edward are so mixed-up. It's sad.
Date: 25 Jul 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am happy enough with the POVs so far. I don't care about other carachters' POVs, but you must have your reasons.
I so hope you will continue updating.
Date: 23 Jul 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to you writing more
well done
Date: 05 Jan 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely story :-)
Date: 06 Dec 2014 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it update soon
Date: 02 Dec 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Enjoying very much! I'm an old hippie(50 something) so the drug use is familiar to me. My husband & I have also been on the fest circuit for the last 13 years now. I like having a Bella that is really living like many teens & finally a lustful Edward acting like a 17 year old dude. "Twilight" was just too saccharin!!! This is why I love the portrayal of the couple in fanfiction. Looking forward to more eagerly. Thanks.
Date: 12 Oct 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
An unusual beginning, totally unique perspective, & Alice's observations are astute.
jansails
PS:
I think the author was lucky in her recreational drug use, & evidently so were her friends.
During my high school, a good looking popular male athlete who also happened to be a twin, keeled over in a heart attack in a national park with his brother & friends. He died instantly. Can you imagine being his twin, participating in drug use with him, having him die before your very eyes, carry his body off a campsite & down a trail to finally reach the national park's parking lot. Then, letting your parents know your twin brother died from illegal drug use sitting beside you on a log, in front of a campfire?
Date: 03 Oct 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh----- please hurry and update!!!! Fantastic story!!!!!
Date: 03 Oct 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward drooling haha very good. Well she invited him to dance is that he became dumb right hahaha. Looking forward, I see how long this control will last.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
I wonder if the black eyes that saw Bella in Edward was to find the party and was so angry. Or see how Bella was dancing.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hmm Edward do not even know a good entry .... but what I really want is to see how he will react to notice this bunch of teenagers crawling your backyard and living room, even if he notice a high chemical Bella dancing in the middle the room with her sisters and I imagine with the boys watching her ** laughs **.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward fled cowardly, with fear of what feel, he has to stop and think have found your mate, oh and remember that it feels like Jasper said lol.
PS: I have no trouble reading your story.
Date: 29 Sep 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK I'M HOOKRD AGAIN! BUT FIRST PLEASE SAY YOU INTEND TO CONTINUE "CORORATE WHORE'S" SOON!!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING, HOPING , AND CHECKING FOR NEW UPDATES. IT;S REALLY A GREAT START SO FAR PLEASE! THINK ABOUT UPDATING SOON. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 28 Sep 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying this and since you invite criticism, I will add this. I started reading the chapter and imediately went back to see if I had missed a chapter. I think just adding a phrase to the second sentence would have prevented this confusion. So "It was Saturday five days after Edward ran off" would have placed the time in the chapter and negated the need of an A/N for the reader to avoid confusion.
I have no complaint with the way you write or immediacy of the posting. Thanks.
Date: 27 Sep 2014 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for Edward's reaction
Date: 27 Sep 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know the song but love the story can't wait
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well, she has stored in her bottle of advil a huge cocktail of drugs to addicts would envy. I hope Edward take away it that path wandering.
PS: What day update?
Date: 26 Sep 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying your story though the fact that you did not continue your other stories worry me in the extreme. I think I can start really enjoying this story and get her without knowing her more, for you give up or get discouraged and stop updating. :-)
Date: 26 Sep 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow her life is crap and she is using to get throught it will anyone help her before it eats her alive update soon
Date: 25 Sep 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
will this story have an hea for bella and edward i hope her doing drugs is hard to swallow
Date: 25 Sep 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Sad to see B using. I hope E will be good for her