Date: 18 May 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 54 - Recompense
Wow! So I've just devoured your entire story. Sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I just couldn't stop! This is so original and exciting! Please continue on with this story-I must know what happens!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 50 - The Council Hut
So sweet. Jacob deserved to have this happiness. Feels like we are moving toward the end. Continue to enjoy your work. Now off to check out your short story book.
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked Jacob's bit. :)
Date: 09 Oct 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Solitude
Lovely chapter. Riana and Bella's conversation was interesting. Latched on right away about the men and giving their mates their blood. So, wasn't shocked at Edwards thoughts/feelings about not being enough.
Hope for no more interruptions for Bella & Edward, they need to be one with eachother.
Thank you! :)
Date: 06 Oct 2015 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 48 - Blood-Typing
i love your story. i read it all within a week. and now i wait patiently for the next chapter.
don't you stop.
you have talent, when i read it was like i was watching a film !!!!
Awesome! I'm thrilled you like it so much. I just logged on to update and it was so nice to see this review. Thanks a bundle. :D
Date: 02 Oct 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Unexpected
I love this story.. It's so different and fresh compared to all the others I have read over the years. I hope you never take it down or at least provide a PDF copy to read later because I will read this again and again.
Thanks again for such a wonderful review. And the 5 teacups! :D
If I ever do take it down (or have it taken down) be assured that I'll provide PDFs. I'm just glad to hear it's that enthralling. Hehe, ego boost. ;)
Date: 11 Sep 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 48 - Blood-Typing
Wow, was she finally greiving her loss and her experiences? Heartbreaking. Where dose that leave her now? Perhaps it was all the human visitors that brought it about? Poor girl needs a break.
contnues to be one of my favorite stories!!
Thanks! It's great the chapter came across that way, that's pretty much what I was aiming for but didn't know if I'd hit the mark. New update will be soon. :)
Date: 25 Jul 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 46 - The Kiss of Life
This was definitely a fun chapter. Nice to see the wolves , mermaids and vamps getting along. Wondering if theres still a possibility of the mermaids getting their humanity back? And, love that Jake imprinted. You never cease to amaze with your turn of events. That makes this so much better!!
Best wishes with the job, until next time. :)
Thank you, glad you're still enjoying it! :) Mermaids regaining humanity? ... Maybe ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Mermaid Info
Congrats on the great news of your stories, and the absolute best of luck for the competition!! And, please,please.....let Riana be Jake's imprint, that would be the best icing on the cake, before the storm starts! Can't wait for the next chapter, I simply adore this story!
Ooow, thank you for the pretty 5-cup rating ;)
And thanks so much for the congratulations and the luck! The finalists hear about the winning story in August!
Got some of my fav chapters coming up and I hope you'll enjoy them. Update will be later today when I get a minute more.
Thanks so much for the lovely review, I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story. When I hear stuff stuff like this it makes me glad I finally decided to post, so I really appreciate it.
Date: 05 Jul 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Mermaid Info
Congratulations!! You'll have to keep us in the know about the short story you sold. I Love your work and would support it by purchasing it.
I like the storyline, Kali & Rosalie, very sweet for Rose. I feel like it's going to be bad for them in near future. I'm not sure why they don't just move away knowing that all is not good with the wolves. Like Bella, I feel like something bad is about to happen.
Thank you so much! I'm absolutely thrilled. I can mentioned bits and pieces on here but I don't think I'm allowed to say anything specific, otherwise SS might be taken down. And we don't want that! :s I do have a twitter account now though and I post links to my original work there (it's @NemmaW if you're curious). My first short story book (which I contributed one story to) actually just went on sale today as an ebook. The paperback is due soon, I think. Sorry, I'm babbling, still so excited. But now back to SS...
Yup you'll be seeing more on Rose and Kali soon. ;) I have a couple of my fav chapters coming up soon and I hope you'll enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Girls
Woah, that was an interesting turn of events. Very unexpected and what a way to being Rosalie into the forefront. You have such a creative mind!!! got to love it, I know I do.
Thank you so much! That's very kind. :)
Hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 43 - The Girls
Now that I'm super curious and I have to wait another week to find out what's happening! Bummer. Great chapter!
Sorry for the wait, it's up now! Happy reading and thanks for the reivew! :)
Date: 07 Jun 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Reconnecting
What a great turn of events. So wasn't expecting Riana again. Oh, but what bad timing. Lol.
I didn't know the awards existed so sorry, I didn't nominate you. But, I've gone and voted for you. I love this story and you write delightful. Good luck!
Hi, I'm thrilled that you are enjoynig the story. Thank you so much for voting! And for the encouragement! :D
Date: 19 May 2015 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Unexpected
Sorry to say I don't remember Gio in the story. But, I'm hopeful he'll have some answers and refresh his role. Still hopeful for a hea.
Still lovin the originality of this story!!!
Gio is the fisherman that the mermaids go to to get 'pretty trinkets' when out at sea. He also helped Bella with Riana when she was attacked by the squid and called Carlisle. He last appeared in chapter 11 so it was a while ago.
Thank you for the review! It's great you're still enjoying it! :)
Date: 17 May 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Unexpected
Yay, we have a new-old friend back!! I really do hope to find out about his lost daughter it's just so sad knowing how hard he's trying and never gives up hope. Please update asap!!
Thanks for the review. Update should be Friday! :)
Date: 10 May 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Ridiculum Emmett
Oh, Emmett!!! I thought he was very diverting, myself. I would've been tempted to make some of the same quips and was waiting for him to pull out the fish-themed "knock knock" jokes!
The same thing that occurred to me as to Bella about just writing the words they were translating... But then, what if she didn't know the proper name of the object or sea creature, etc? She'd still have to attempt a drawing probably.
Ahh, romantic Edward...so sweet! (I kept hearing "Kiss the Girl" from The Little Mermaid in my head.) I'm truly hoping that things turn out well for them somehow. For the mermaids, as well. If vampires, werewolves and shapeshifters can stay hidden from humanity then so should they be left as nothing more than stories and legends.
Great update! Thank you:) Looking forward to your next chapter. -RoseE. x
Damn, the knock-knock jokes! Didn't think of those. :)
Thank for the great review. Next update will be soon. Nemma x
Date: 25 Apr 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Confrontation
Excellent update!!! I'm with Emmett; the wolves are a bunch of supercilious, entitled jerks. They need to back off a bit and see that Jake, Seth and Leah prevented a war and the attention of the Volturi! Everyone would have died. Big picture, Tribal Council.
Recording the action sequence was a stroke of brilliant.
Well, if anyone can relate to Bella being drawn to human blood and using her lure to entrance the man, it would be the Cullens. Considering that Bella is basically a newborn... They will understand that. Also, Bella was just reacting instinctively to intercept the shooter and protect her sister. Balthazar's minion was going to kill Kiera and set off a blood bath either way.
The siren song was beautiful. Very easy to picture Kiera singing it and fit the scene perfectly.
Thank you:) Looking forward to the next chapter. -RoseE. x
Thank you! Brilliant review. :)
Update coming soon. :)
Date: 23 Apr 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Of Tanks
The seawater tank was a great idea. Loved the castle! The only thing missing were the treasure chest, diver and pirate bones lol!
Ugh....what MORE awful things could happen to Bella? I really hope it's only Jacob come to warn the Cullens that Balthazar wants to torture her for information. Because it would suck if Sam and the pack want the Cullens to turn her over without a fight! Screw that. They could just as easily grabbed her and run. Why stay. Bella hasn't even mentioned Charlie anyways. I'm surprised Bella hasn't said anything about Randall. Very odd...
Thank you for such a compelling story. Looking forward to the next chapter:) -RoseE. x
Don't worry, Charlie and Randall haven't been forgotten. I'm thrilled you like the story and thank you for the review. :)
Date: 22 Apr 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 32 - The Fallout of War
For some reason I stopped getting the updates. I thought you stopped writing. Glad that's not the case.
Was good to hear from Jake. Seems there is still trouble out there. I'd love to know what this Balthazar dude knows.
Hmm, no idea how that has happened. I'm trying to make a habit of updating at least once a week, and I should be able to do that for a while so that'll give you an idea of when the updates will be posted. I'm thrilled you're still into it. Thanks for the reviews. :)
Date: 20 Apr 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Of Tanks
Please let Bella and the Cullens get away if it comes to that. Jake needs to get rid of Balthazar and Paul.
I won't leave you hanging. Update is coming soon. ;)
Thanks for the reivew.
Date: 15 Apr 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Fallout of War
Oh hell no! That conniving basturd! He needs to have his hiney kicked outta there pronto~better yet tie him to an anchor and take him out to sea. Let the mermaids dance with him at the bottom of the ocean. Yeah. That's the ticket.
Nice! ;) Lol, thanks for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Home Comforts
Oh my, I was shocked that she could speak underwater. But, I really liked the sign language. And I'm glad to see her & Edward getting back on track.
geez, I thought for a long time they were going to get her back to human. But not sure it's going that way. So now I'm wondering about her life span? Can she become vampire or....
We'll get to that. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 04 Apr 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Learning
Ugh much love. I was waiting for the tail to resurface. Is it just a salt water thing or any large amount of water? I can't wait for the next update!
The next to that will come up! Thanks for the great review. :)
Date: 04 Apr 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Learning
More sweetness. Oh my, how do they get past this. I was sort of thinking if she stayed out of the water long enough she soul turn human again. But now, what happens to her legs, will she be back to before with no use? And her voice??
Lovin your creativity!!
*Big toothy grin* :D Thanks for the great review.
I'll be covering the issues with her legs and her voice next...
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Buffet Supreme
Aww. I love Em. He's always such a brightly ray of light. He can make anyone smile. so glad she's eating and that Edward is showing her affection.
Your story is so different, I'm really enjoying it. Thanks!!
Lol yeah, Em is awesome! :)
Thanks again for the support. And the lovely review! :)
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Nothing is ever that easy
Too sad. Need some hope 'bout now. She has been so deprived of emotions for so long. Just too sad. Something's gotta give or she'll give up.
Don't worry, it'll come. Thanks for the reivew! :)
Date: 19 Mar 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Home
Well, you certainly earned the brow wipe. :)
I loved the tenderness that this family has shown Bella. Was beautiful to read. I'm hoping when she has had time to heal she will be able to start communicating. Maybe if she got her legs back she will get her voice too??
Lol, thanks. I'm thrilled you liked it, it was one of my favourite chapers so far to write.
As to the voice, you'll see... ;)
Update will be soon.
Date: 18 Mar 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Home
I want to see her try and talk. Why is she so tired?!?! She's kind of a human now and she isn't eating anything! Even as a mermaid she wasn't drinking blood so she has to be absolutely famished. That's probably why she's so tired! But maybe she'll learn sign language or something cool - she has to have a way to communicate with them! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep it coming :D
Lol, I think you'll like what's coming up. Update will be soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
Danm I love this story... It is 6:48 AM I have been up all night reading it.. Can't wait for more..
Oops lol, but thrilled you like it that much! :) I think I was up that early writing it at one point, didn't even realise the time. :s
I'll be updating soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 12 Mar 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
My goodness. I'm glad she's back with the Cullen's. But her legs back, yeah! Hope they work. Hope she can talk. Nice chapt. Also, love Seth!!
Hehe, lol, thanks! Glad you liked it. Seth is awsome and always so happy, he's hard not to like. I'll be updating soon! :)
Date: 12 Mar 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
Yaaaaaaayyyyy!!!! Finally!!! I wonder if she can actually speak now too. I can't wait for more! I hope you have time to update twice this week too!
Thrilled you like it! :) I liked writing this chapter. There's more stuff to come so I'll be updatng soon!
Date: 12 Mar 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
I'm really glad they're together again. If I had to guess I'd say she got a "human" voice along with those legs - she just has to try it. But that might take a while, as she won't want to scare her family with any screeching…
Great, I'm glad you like it. I liked writing this chapter... and the ones to come. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 08 Mar 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Mending Bridges
I hope Bella is right about Edward. You said they have an HEA so I guess I have to believe. The cliff hangers are killing me though!
Will update soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 04 Mar 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Glass Coffins
Ahhh thank goodness for the fast update but this cliff hanger is almost as bad as the last one! I just want them to reunite already. Post more soon!!!
Sorry, lol. It won't be long now! Update will be soon. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 02 Mar 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Battle for First Beach Part III
Every time I get distracted and the suspense stops killing me, you update, and then I'm tormented all over again!! Aaagghh! I just want Edward to find her already! That was him that she hit into the cliffs, wasn't it?
Lol, sorry for the cliff-hangers, but thrilled you like it so much! :)
Emmett was the one who tried to stop the bullet when she jumped into the sea. It was he who went after her. I can see why that might be confusing at that point as a lot of stuff is happening but he'd just got off the phone to Edward. So it was him she swatted. ;)
Update will be soon. :)
Date: 14 Feb 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Leading the Charge
I don't know what has been happening with this chapter, but I've gotten more than 10 notifications of you posting it. I can't wait for the next part!!!
Hey, sorry, I've been having some trouble with the updates. I post, then there's an 'error' and it gets messed up. I've been trying to rectify it - no luck so far. You might get more notifications...
Date: 07 Feb 2015 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Leading the Charge
Lol. Hilarious is right, Team Edward & Jacob. But Team Emmett was the best.
I'm so hoping for a HEA but it's driving me crazy trying to figure out how that can even happen.
This is a great read, so very different.
Lol, glad you liked it - couldn't resist putting in the 'teams'.
Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 02 Feb 2015 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Orion the Hunter
AAHHHH I'm in love. I'm completley hooked. (I'm enjoying both the pun and the validity of that statement.) I can't wait for the next chapter!! How often do you normally update?
Great, so glad you like it! :) I try to update at least once a week - I'll be ok doing that for a while. Thanks so much for the supprt.
Date: 26 Jan 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Plan A
Now that I'm caught up with the story I'm sad I have to wait for more. Lol. Very creative and well written.
Really enjoying and so curious how you are going to work it all out. I just hope on the end we have a HEA for E & B. I look forward to the next update.
Hi there, thanks for giving the story a shot, and for the encouragement and support. :) It's always nice to recieve reviews like your's.
The plan is ExB (personally I prefer cannon pairings) and HEA.
Thanks again. Hope you enjoy the rest of the read! :)
New update should be soon...
Date: 28 Dec 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Surfacing
Good story, but maybe you can move it on a bit faster, it's getting a tad dull to hear the same thing over and over
Thanks for the feedback. Most of this is pre-written but it speeds up soon.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Realisation
thanks for this awesome fanfiction,
My only complain is the Bella character, please give her more personality: is she angry or sad ? , what about her thougths, what is she thinking about her past relationship with Edward or Jacob? what about her own happiness
Thanks for the feedback! Bella is... mixed up at the moment, she's pretty much lost herself in the mermaids' hive-mind, so it will take time for her to 'work herself out'. Hopefully her thinking will clear up as the chapters progress. :)