Date: 07 Jun 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 65 - The Meadow
:) loved this story
Date: 18 Apr 2018 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 65 - The Meadow
I really hope you make a sequel and Bella stays a mermaid. I reread this story all the time. I'm hoping for more and maybe a little baby. Not to much pressure
Date: 04 Sep 2017 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 65 - The Meadow
I throughly enjoyed your fantastic tale. So entertaining a true adventure. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 03 Sep 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Girls
What a plot twist for Kali/ Rosalie . Where did you get your ideas they are fantastic.
Date: 03 Sep 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Girls
What a plot twist for Kali/ Rosalie . Where did you get your ideas they are fantastic.
Date: 03 Sep 2017 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Unexpected
Seems like her two worlds will meet soon. I'm loving this story.
Date: 02 Sep 2017 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Red Shores
This is so original but yet has such great elements of Eclipse. I'm loving this.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Underworld
Oh my what will happen now? Poor Edward, this is a very original idea. What an imagination you have.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 65 - The Meadow
Thank you!
Date: 01 Sep 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Jacob
Nicely done the panic the Cullen's showed was intense. This will bring the pack to help search and got Jacob home in a hurry.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Bella
What an I credible ending to your first chapter. I really enjoy the Eclipse extras you have included. Looking forward to this!
Date: 13 Jul 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 63 - To the Rescue?
You are so mean to us!! You leave us so much time to stew between updates, and you always end the chapters on such violent cliff hangers!!!! POST AGAIN ASAP (pls)
Date: 12 Jul 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 63 - To the Rescue?
:O :O :O NO DONT STOP THERE :(
Date: 11 Jun 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 62 - Deep Trouble
:)
Date: 19 May 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 61 - Retrieval
:O :O :O
Date: 26 Apr 2017 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 60 - Plan B
:O :O :O :O :O :O
Date: 31 Mar 2017 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Let's Plan!
Thank you!
Xxx T
Date: 30 Mar 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Let's Plan!
I truly love your vision of how Edward and Bella live in this story. I can't wait until the next update.
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 59 - Let's Plan!
great!
Date: 25 Jan 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 58 - The Request
Every time there's a new chapter I can't help but to smile and dive right in. Thank you for this story and I continue to look forward to more.
Date: 22 Jan 2017 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 58 - The Request
:) :) :) :) :)
Date: 08 Dec 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 57 - When all fails, the sun still shines.
I love your idea for this story. Please update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 26 Nov 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 57 - When all fails, the sun still shines.
This was so nice to see in my inbox. I'm excited for the next chapter!
Date: 26 Nov 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 57 - When all fails, the sun still shines.
:) :) :)
Date: 17 Oct 2016 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 56 - An Unexpected Welcome Home
You didn't. After all this time we have waited and you inflict this. It's too much. And not enough.
Date: 09 Oct 2016 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 56 - An Unexpected Welcome Home
I started to read the story today and i'my hooked. I couldn't stop reading a86;so I will be followingthis story from now on
Date: 07 Oct 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 56 - An Unexpected Welcome Home
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 24 Jul 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 55 - The Plan
Thank you!T
Date: 11 Jun 2016 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 42 - New Guests
Omg, I love this Jasper so much.
Date: 18 May 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 54 - Recompense
Wow! So I've just devoured your entire story. Sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I just couldn't stop! This is so original and exciting! Please continue on with this story-I must know what happens!
Date: 15 May 2016 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 54 - Recompense
Great chapter! I hope Mara doesn't have the control Riana thinks she does over her and Bella.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 51 - The Morning After
Great
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 31 Oct 2015 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 50 - The Council Hut
So sweet. Jacob deserved to have this happiness. Feels like we are moving toward the end. Continue to enjoy your work. Now off to check out your short story book.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Glad you liked Jacob's bit. :)
Date: 09 Oct 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Solitude
Lovely chapter. Riana and Bella's conversation was interesting. Latched on right away about the men and giving their mates their blood. So, wasn't shocked at Edwards thoughts/feelings about not being enough.
Hope for no more interruptions for Bella & Edward, they need to be one with eachother.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 08 Oct 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Solitude
:) great
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 06 Oct 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 48 - Blood-Typing
i love your story. i read it all within a week. and now i wait patiently for the next chapter.
don't you stop.
you have talent, when i read it was like i was watching a film !!!!
Author's Response:
Awesome! I'm thrilled you like it so much. I just logged on to update and it was so nice to see this review. Thanks a bundle. :D
Date: 02 Oct 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Unexpected
I love this story.. It's so different and fresh compared to all the others I have read over the years. I hope you never take it down or at least provide a PDF copy to read later because I will read this again and again.
Thanks,
v
Author's Response:
Thanks again for such a wonderful review. And the 5 teacups! :D
If I ever do take it down (or have it taken down) be assured that I'll provide PDFs. I'm just glad to hear it's that enthralling. Hehe, ego boost. ;)
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 48 - Blood-Typing
:)
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Author's Response:
:)
Date: 11 Sep 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 48 - Blood-Typing
Wow, was she finally greiving her loss and her experiences? Heartbreaking. Where dose that leave her now? Perhaps it was all the human visitors that brought it about? Poor girl needs a break.
contnues to be one of my favorite stories!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's great the chapter came across that way, that's pretty much what I was aiming for but didn't know if I'd hit the mark. New update will be soon. :)
Date: 15 Aug 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 47 - The Visit
:)
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Author's Response:
:)
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 46 - The Kiss of Life
:)
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Author's Response:
:)
Date: 25 Jul 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 46 - The Kiss of Life
This was definitely a fun chapter. Nice to see the wolves , mermaids and vamps getting along. Wondering if theres still a possibility of the mermaids getting their humanity back? And, love that Jake imprinted. You never cease to amaze with your turn of events. That makes this so much better!!
Best wishes with the job, until next time. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're still enjoying it! :) Mermaids regaining humanity? ... Maybe ;)
Date: 11 Jul 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 45 - The Wolves' Return
I like it :-)
Author's Response:
Hehe, thanks :)
Date: 11 Jul 2015 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 45 - The Wolves' Return
:)
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Author's Response:
:)
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 45 - The Wolves' Return
OMG, that is hilarious! I love it. More so because it was totally unexpected. You rock!!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks! Glad you liked it. ;)
Date: 05 Jul 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Mermaid Info
Congrats on the great news of your stories, and the absolute best of luck for the competition!! And, please,please.....let Riana be Jake's imprint, that would be the best icing on the cake, before the storm starts! Can't wait for the next chapter, I simply adore this story!
Author's Response:
Ooow, thank you for the pretty 5-cup rating ;)
And thanks so much for the congratulations and the luck! The finalists hear about the winning story in August!
Got some of my fav chapters coming up and I hope you'll enjoy them. Update will be later today when I get a minute more.
Thanks so much for the lovely review, I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story. When I hear stuff stuff like this it makes me glad I finally decided to post, so I really appreciate it.
Nemma x
Date: 05 Jul 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Mermaid Info
Congratulations!! You'll have to keep us in the know about the short story you sold. I Love your work and would support it by purchasing it.
I like the storyline, Kali & Rosalie, very sweet for Rose. I feel like it's going to be bad for them in near future. I'm not sure why they don't just move away knowing that all is not good with the wolves. Like Bella, I feel like something bad is about to happen.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm absolutely thrilled. I can mentioned bits and pieces on here but I don't think I'm allowed to say anything specific, otherwise SS might be taken down. And we don't want that! :s I do have a twitter account now though and I post links to my original work there (it's @NemmaW if you're curious). My first short story book (which I contributed one story to) actually just went on sale today as an ebook. The paperback is due soon, I think. Sorry, I'm babbling, still so excited. But now back to SS...
Yup you'll be seeing more on Rose and Kali soon. ;) I have a couple of my fav chapters coming up soon and I hope you'll enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them.
Nemma x
Date: 28 Jun 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 43 - The Girls
Woah, that was an interesting turn of events. Very unexpected and what a way to being Rosalie into the forefront. You have such a creative mind!!! got to love it, I know I do.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That's very kind. :)
Hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 43 - The Girls
Now that I'm super curious and I have to wait another week to find out what's happening! Bummer. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the wait, it's up now! Happy reading and thanks for the reivew! :)
Date: 19 Jun 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 42 - New Guests
:) loving the story
Author's Response:
Thank you, as always :)
Date: 19 Jun 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 42 - New Guests
Still very much enjoying this story and the new developments.
congrsts for remaining nag in the Newbie category, well deserved!
Author's Response:
Great. Thank you! Hope you like the next chapter... :)
Date: 07 Jun 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Reconnecting
What a great turn of events. So wasn't expecting Riana again. Oh, but what bad timing. Lol.
I didn't know the awards existed so sorry, I didn't nominate you. But, I've gone and voted for you. I love this story and you write delightful. Good luck!
Author's Response:
Hi, I'm thrilled that you are enjoynig the story. Thank you so much for voting! And for the encouragement! :D
Date: 05 Jun 2015 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Reconnecting
:)
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Author's Response:
:D
Date: 01 Jun 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 39 - The Council
I like Jakes thinking that he doesn't need to say anything and not betray Bella. He always seems to find these loopholes... :-)
Author's Response:
Yup, that's our Jake! ;)
Date: 23 May 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Old Friends
:)
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Author's Response:
:D
Date: 19 May 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Unexpected
Sorry to say I don't remember Gio in the story. But, I'm hopeful he'll have some answers and refresh his role. Still hopeful for a hea.
Still lovin the originality of this story!!!
Author's Response:
Gio is the fisherman that the mermaids go to to get 'pretty trinkets' when out at sea. He also helped Bella with Riana when she was attacked by the squid and called Carlisle. He last appeared in chapter 11 so it was a while ago.
Thank you for the review! It's great you're still enjoying it! :)
Date: 17 May 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Unexpected
Yay, we have a new-old friend back!! I really do hope to find out about his lost daughter it's just so sad knowing how hard he's trying and never gives up hope. Please update asap!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Update should be Friday! :)
Date: 12 May 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Ridiculum Emmett
Ok so... Maybe when they're intimate she'll change back???
Author's Response:
... maybe ...
Thanks for the review. Update will be soon. :)
Date: 10 May 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Ridiculum Emmett
Oh, Emmett!!! I thought he was very diverting, myself. I would've been tempted to make some of the same quips and was waiting for him to pull out the fish-themed "knock knock" jokes!
The same thing that occurred to me as to Bella about just writing the words they were translating... But then, what if she didn't know the proper name of the object or sea creature, etc? She'd still have to attempt a drawing probably.
Ahh, romantic Edward...so sweet! (I kept hearing "Kiss the Girl" from The Little Mermaid in my head.) I'm truly hoping that things turn out well for them somehow. For the mermaids, as well. If vampires, werewolves and shapeshifters can stay hidden from humanity then so should they be left as nothing more than stories and legends.
Great update! Thank you:) Looking forward to your next chapter. -RoseE. x
Author's Response:
Damn, the knock-knock jokes! Didn't think of those. :)
Thank for the great review. Next update will be soon. Nemma x
Date: 01 May 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Aftermath
Thank goodness. Bella was so sure she would be asked to leave. Now where does it go?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. New update will be soon. :)
Date: 26 Apr 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Confrontation
Oh no. They came so far... I wonder what it looked like to the Cullen's?
Author's Response:
You'll see their take on it soon...
Updating now, thanks for the review. :)
Date: 25 Apr 2015 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Confrontation
Excellent update!!! I'm with Emmett; the wolves are a bunch of supercilious, entitled jerks. They need to back off a bit and see that Jake, Seth and Leah prevented a war and the attention of the Volturi! Everyone would have died. Big picture, Tribal Council.
Recording the action sequence was a stroke of brilliant.
Well, if anyone can relate to Bella being drawn to human blood and using her lure to entrance the man, it would be the Cullens. Considering that Bella is basically a newborn... They will understand that. Also, Bella was just reacting instinctively to intercept the shooter and protect her sister. Balthazar's minion was going to kill Kiera and set off a blood bath either way.
The siren song was beautiful. Very easy to picture Kiera singing it and fit the scene perfectly.
Thank you:) Looking forward to the next chapter. -RoseE. x
Author's Response:
Thank you! Brilliant review. :)
Update coming soon. :)
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Confrontation
:)
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Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 25 Apr 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Confrontation
Bella did nothing wrong. She was defending Kiera when that guy was about to shoot her.
Author's Response:
True. Thanks for the reivew. Update is coming soon. :)
Date: 23 Apr 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Of Tanks
The seawater tank was a great idea. Loved the castle! The only thing missing were the treasure chest, diver and pirate bones lol!
Ugh....what MORE awful things could happen to Bella? I really hope it's only Jacob come to warn the Cullens that Balthazar wants to torture her for information. Because it would suck if Sam and the pack want the Cullens to turn her over without a fight! Screw that. They could just as easily grabbed her and run. Why stay. Bella hasn't even mentioned Charlie anyways. I'm surprised Bella hasn't said anything about Randall. Very odd...
Thank you for such a compelling story. Looking forward to the next chapter:) -RoseE. x
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Charlie and Randall haven't been forgotten. I'm thrilled you like the story and thank you for the review. :)
Updating now...
Date: 22 Apr 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Of Tanks
They are going to try and take Her. I'm hoping Jake & Seth to the rescue?
Author's Response:
You'll see. Just sorting out the update. Thanks for the reivew. :)
Date: 22 Apr 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 32 - The Fallout of War
For some reason I stopped getting the updates. I thought you stopped writing. Glad that's not the case.
Was good to hear from Jake. Seems there is still trouble out there. I'd love to know what this Balthazar dude knows.
Author's Response:
Hmm, no idea how that has happened. I'm trying to make a habit of updating at least once a week, and I should be able to do that for a while so that'll give you an idea of when the updates will be posted. I'm thrilled you're still into it. Thanks for the reviews. :)
Date: 21 Apr 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Of Tanks
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 21 Apr 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Of Tanks
Please let Bella and the Cullens get away if it comes to that. Jake needs to get rid of Balthazar and Paul.
Author's Response:
I won't leave you hanging. Update is coming soon. ;)
Thanks for the reivew.
Date: 15 Apr 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 32 - The Fallout of War
Oh hell no! That conniving basturd! He needs to have his hiney kicked outta there pronto~better yet tie him to an anchor and take him out to sea. Let the mermaids dance with him at the bottom of the ocean. Yeah. That's the ticket.
Author's Response:
Nice! ;) Lol, thanks for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Home Comforts
Oh my, I was shocked that she could speak underwater. But, I really liked the sign language. And I'm glad to see her & Edward getting back on track.
geez, I thought for a long time they were going to get her back to human. But not sure it's going that way. So now I'm wondering about her life span? Can she become vampire or....
Author's Response:
We'll get to that. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 04 Apr 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Learning
Ugh much love. I was waiting for the tail to resurface. Is it just a salt water thing or any large amount of water? I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
The next to that will come up! Thanks for the great review. :)
Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Learning
More sweetness. Oh my, how do they get past this. I was sort of thinking if she stayed out of the water long enough she soul turn human again. But now, what happens to her legs, will she be back to before with no use? And her voice??
Lovin your creativity!!
Author's Response:
*Big toothy grin* :D Thanks for the great review.
I'll be covering the issues with her legs and her voice next...
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Buffet Supreme
:)
Author's Response:
Yay! Five cups, thank you! :)
Date: 28 Mar 2015 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Buffet Supreme
Aww. I love Em. He's always such a brightly ray of light. He can make anyone smile. so glad she's eating and that Edward is showing her affection.
Your story is so different, I'm really enjoying it. Thanks!!
Author's Response:
Lol yeah, Em is awesome! :)
Thanks again for the support. And the lovely review! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Nothing is ever that easy
Too sad. Need some hope 'bout now. She has been so deprived of emotions for so long. Just too sad. Something's gotta give or she'll give up.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, it'll come. Thanks for the reivew! :)
Date: 21 Mar 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Nothing is ever that easy
These two just can't catch a break..
thanks,
v
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely 5 cups! :)
Date: 19 Mar 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Home
Well, you certainly earned the brow wipe. :)
I loved the tenderness that this family has shown Bella. Was beautiful to read. I'm hoping when she has had time to heal she will be able to start communicating. Maybe if she got her legs back she will get her voice too??
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks. I'm thrilled you liked it, it was one of my favourite chapers so far to write.
As to the voice, you'll see... ;)
Update will be soon.
Date: 18 Mar 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Home
I want to see her try and talk. Why is she so tired?!?! She's kind of a human now and she isn't eating anything! Even as a mermaid she wasn't drinking blood so she has to be absolutely famished. That's probably why she's so tired! But maybe she'll learn sign language or something cool - she has to have a way to communicate with them! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep it coming :D
Author's Response:
Lol, I think you'll like what's coming up. Update will be soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 17 Mar 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Home
I love how even Rose tries to make her feel better - ever if they don't really know what she needs.
Author's Response:
Rose can be cool... sometimes. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 14 Mar 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
Danm I love this story... It is 6:48 AM I have been up all night reading it.. Can't wait for more..
thanks,
v
Author's Response:
Oops lol, but thrilled you like it that much! :) I think I was up that early writing it at one point, didn't even realise the time. :s
I'll be updating soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 13 Mar 2015 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
My goodness. I'm glad she's back with the Cullen's. But her legs back, yeah! Hope they work. Hope she can talk. Nice chapt. Also, love Seth!!
Author's Response:
Hehe, lol, thanks! Glad you liked it. Seth is awsome and always so happy, he's hard not to like. I'll be updating soon! :)
Date: 12 Mar 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
Yaaaaaaayyyyy!!!! Finally!!! I wonder if she can actually speak now too. I can't wait for more! I hope you have time to update twice this week too!
Author's Response:
Thrilled you like it! :) I liked writing this chapter. There's more stuff to come so I'll be updatng soon!
Date: 12 Mar 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
I'm really glad they're together again. If I had to guess I'd say she got a "human" voice along with those legs - she just has to try it. But that might take a while, as she won't want to scare her family with any screeching…
Author's Response:
Great, I'm glad you like it. I liked writing this chapter... and the ones to come. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 12 Mar 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 26 - A Mermaid on Land
YES!!! I wasn't expecting her legs to come back on dry land. Hopefully it's relatively smooth sailing from now on.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :) Updating again soon.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Mending Bridges
I hope Bella is right about Edward. You said they have an HEA so I guess I have to believe. The cliff hangers are killing me though!
Author's Response:
Will update soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 09 Mar 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Mending Bridges
Sad. I hope it doesn't take long for them to get her out.
Author's Response:
No long now ;)
Thanks for the review.
Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Glass Coffins
Are the wolves going to give her back??
Author's Response:
You'll see, lol. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 04 Mar 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Glass Coffins
Ahhh thank goodness for the fast update but this cliff hanger is almost as bad as the last one! I just want them to reunite already. Post more soon!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry, lol. It won't be long now! Update will be soon. Thanks for the review! :)
Date: 02 Mar 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Battle for First Beach Part III
Every time I get distracted and the suspense stops killing me, you update, and then I'm tormented all over again!! Aaagghh! I just want Edward to find her already! That was him that she hit into the cliffs, wasn't it?
Author's Response:
Lol, sorry for the cliff-hangers, but thrilled you like it so much! :)
Emmett was the one who tried to stop the bullet when she jumped into the sea. It was he who went after her. I can see why that might be confusing at that point as a lot of stuff is happening but he'd just got off the phone to Edward. So it was him she swatted. ;)
Update will be soon. :)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 22 - The Battle for First Beach - Part II
Go Bella, thank you for saving Seth! Please stay and let the family help, so eager for the reunion.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Updating now... :)
Date: 20 Feb 2015 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 22 - The Battle for First Beach - Part II
No!! She was so close. Hopefully Carlisle will be able to save her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Updating now... :)
Date: 16 Feb 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 - The Battle for First Beach - Part I
It's up!
Author's Response:
Yay! And it stayed.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Leading the Charge
I don't know what has been happening with this chapter, but I've gotten more than 10 notifications of you posting it. I can't wait for the next part!!!
Author's Response:
Hey, sorry, I've been having some trouble with the updates. I post, then there's an 'error' and it gets messed up. I've been trying to rectify it - no luck so far. You might get more notifications...
Date: 07 Feb 2015 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Leading the Charge
Lol. Hilarious is right, Team Edward & Jacob. But Team Emmett was the best.
I'm so hoping for a HEA but it's driving me crazy trying to figure out how that can even happen.
This is a great read, so very different.
thank you!!
Author's Response:
Lol, glad you liked it - couldn't resist putting in the 'teams'.
Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 02 Feb 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Orion the Hunter
AAHHHH I'm in love. I'm completley hooked. (I'm enjoying both the pun and the validity of that statement.) I can't wait for the next chapter!! How often do you normally update?
Author's Response:
Great, so glad you like it! :) I try to update at least once a week - I'll be ok doing that for a while. Thanks so much for the supprt.
Date: 26 Jan 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Plan A
Now that I'm caught up with the story I'm sad I have to wait for more. Lol. Very creative and well written.
Really enjoying and so curious how you are going to work it all out. I just hope on the end we have a HEA for E & B. I look forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Hi there, thanks for giving the story a shot, and for the encouragement and support. :) It's always nice to recieve reviews like your's.
The plan is ExB (personally I prefer cannon pairings) and HEA.
Thanks again. Hope you enjoy the rest of the read! :)
New update should be soon...
Date: 26 Jan 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Ethics and Resolutions
Her slowly losing her humanity is disturbing. I'm thinking drinking human blood could be her final loss of self.
Date: 26 Jan 2015 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Home and House-calls
This is a fascinating story. But, will it be a HEA for Edward & Bella?