[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2020 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
:) loved this story
Date: 29 Oct 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for your story.
Date: 01 May 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 30
quick question, what happened to your story... A Love Story gone wrong?
I was really looking forward to reading it when it was completed, I really loved your other stories..
Date: 27 Dec 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
Cute.. Superman is gonna fly. I remember the first time I saw that. LOL
Date: 27 Dec 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 29
Well I am glad I found this update. I would hate to miss the end.
Date: 27 Dec 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
THIS WAS A GREAT STORY ..... :D
Date: 26 Dec 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really wanted to read this. I think you came up with a good idea but there are just too many spelling and grammar errors and I cannot continue.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
I enjoyed every chapter of this story. You spin a wonderful yarn! I love that you ended it on such a high note!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2014 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 29
Thanks for the book, the chapter and promise of an epilogue on Christmas. You are amazing and I hope Santa is very good to you!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 29
Fantastic story. Merry Xmas 🎄 to you and yours.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin aka Alia
Date: 18 Dec 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 28
Move on and make new friends keep in touch with the old ones and fly granny out to your new diggs and maybe keep her.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
if Audrey knew about the abortion before she went to Bella's office then she is the best witch in the world
Date: 03 Dec 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well you must eat spicy sickening food before you write Victoria, Esme and Audrey. Sad people.
Date: 03 Dec 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hope Victoria tells the truth
Date: 03 Dec 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh is Victoria going to tell the truth and tell her she had an abortion and not a miscarriage well wonders never cease
Date: 03 Dec 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
I wonder if V will come clean. On a side note, since Edward's family made such a big deal of Bella wanting the Cullen name, I think he should become a Swan after the wedding
Date: 01 Dec 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well good for him. I would still seek to have a restraining order placed on Victoria and her mother. Edward should go to the office and explain that his mother is ill in her head and her friend is a scheming woman trying to get him into a relationship with her daughter who is as bad if not worse than the other two women mentioned.
Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love Edwards back bone
Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love the update!
Date: 01 Dec 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
I am glad he stood up to his mother and has Bella's back..
Date: 01 Dec 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
Babkbone Edward, well done!
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
Way to go, Edward!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2014 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
Go kick some ass E!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
Good. He should be!
Date: 29 Nov 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 24
he should be on a rampage. I say sue those women. Restraining orders and all.
Date: 28 Nov 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh poor them
Date: 28 Nov 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
can not wait to see Edward give everyone a piece of his mind
Date: 28 Nov 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Good for Bella. I hope they do go to FL
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
Restraining order and sue his mother and her friend. This is what needs to happen. Just a story,,
Date: 28 Nov 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
shit can not wait till tomorrow
Date: 27 Nov 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Poor Bella! It is awful the way Edward's mom treats her! Hopefully, her and the baby won't be hurt! Great chapter!
Date: 27 Nov 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope Bella will soon realize it's not her fault
Date: 27 Nov 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Restraining order and defamation suit anybody.
Date: 27 Nov 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
okay.. Now she terminates her pregnancy and admits to us the baby was the cab drivers, girl is quite easy with her sex. encounters.
Date: 27 Nov 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
Always a good chapter
Date: 27 Nov 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
she had an abortion.
Date: 27 Nov 2014 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
Please please don't let her get away with it!
Date: 27 Nov 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my I am not sure letting that news out was wise..
Date: 24 Nov 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
SO neither of them are showing yet?
Author's Response:
Very slightly in Bels's case, but not enough for it to be obvious.
Date: 24 Nov 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Cat fight go Bella
Date: 22 Nov 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella & Edward should just go to the Justice of the peace, elope or Vegas & get married already. Will make Victoria a non issue until that baby is born.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
What will happen next, Vic goes into labor when Bella does and they switch babies, Now that would be difficult because then Bella wouldn't be the babies mother of course they could drag it out for a few yrs till vic's real baby gets sick (the one that Bella is raising)and if Edward marrys vic because of the switch and then Bella should leave and make him search you out
Date: 22 Nov 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
How frusterating. Maw and Paw C need to get their head out of their ass and Victoria... wishing no harm to an unborn child, needs to GO..
Thank you for shraring with us. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow! I know what's coming next! Great job!!
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
Now Bella is pregnant.. Vicky can not be pregnant from a BJ..wrong end
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Don't worry about the M.. Just don't sweat that.. write
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lies.. so sad.. this will be the end
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yep.. end of relationship.. No one is that drunk.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
Get her belongings and leave permanetly.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sorted out my rear.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor B she is going to get hurt. Edward is going to cheat.. he wants to dump her now.. so sad
Date: 15 Nov 2014 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
hmm she is not experienced in the sack.. Not wild enough.. how nice of him to point that out.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is pregnant.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
She is pregnant, don't let his parents see the baby
Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is pregnant & there will be a grandchild born a Cullen. Good for Edward for standing by Bella
Date: 13 Nov 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Forgot about testing who the father is test if she really is pregnant, if she says if James wont marry then Edward will then that just sounds like a ploy to get one of them to marry her.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope the baby isn't Edward's. Can't wait for more!
Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well lets just hope James is a good friend and doesn't team up with Vic, to get Bella for himself and I am sure Edwards parents will go for him marring Vic.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope it's not Edward 's baby.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can understand Bella being upset, but she has to realize Edward was in no condition to give consent. What Victoria did was essentially rape.
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Date: 13 Nov 2014 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
Kick in the teeth
Date: 12 Nov 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no! I can't wait to see what happens now!! Great chapter!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Victoria is lying.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Vicky is going to say its Edwards baby and his parents with force him to marry her and Bella will be left and if that happens I expect Bella to never be with Edward....I would not take him back, he can help raise the child without marrying Vicky.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
I really hope that it isn't Edward's. I was very proud of Bella, and very surprised his parents thought it was classy to say those things to Bella's face
Date: 12 Nov 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
I LOVE THIS STORY AND I HOPE IT A HAPPY EVERAFTER .
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great crazy chapter LOVE it
Date: 09 Nov 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG! How can you get pass this frustrating situation? Bella better ask Edward to have an STD test to make sure. Is James really in love with Bella?
Date: 09 Nov 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh I hate Victoria
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
I don't think Edward is a coward. I think while there may be a possibility that V gave him a BJ, it's still fuzzy enough to be dismissed.
As long as he didn't fuck her, all is good. Her word against his and Edward has a lot of people on his side.
I'm glad he was honest with Bella.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh Edward. You were doing so well. You should have come clean about the bj
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am so proud of Bella..
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
i enjoyed this story until he cheated what a asshole...so I wont finish this story i will check out your next 1..
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Victoribitch! Of course it looked like he called her. She probably called herself using his phone. The question is how did she get into his apartment!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope we get a Vicky POV. I also hope Edward learned from his mistake and is honest with Bella. Why on earth do people in fan fiction never password protect their cell phones?
Date: 08 Nov 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
I knew not to trust her, and how did she get in the apartment and I am sure she will be the first to tell Bella
Date: 07 Nov 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my! I can't wait to see what he decides to do! Great chapter!
Date: 07 Nov 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait for more!
Date: 07 Nov 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Kate rocks & I misjudged James. Thanks for the pleasant surprise
Date: 07 Nov 2014 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Kate seems like a good friend. Glad Vicky & Tanya's little scheme failed. Hope it stays that way.
Bella needs to get over herself.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad you didn't go the route of Bella seeing and getting mad before she knew what happened
Date: 07 Nov 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh Vic's little plan backfired
Date: 07 Nov 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
I can see where this is going , Bella will just happen to be at the same place and think Edward moved on
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm amazed that Victoria doesn't see how this could blow up in her face. The only reason James isn't pursuing Bella is because she's with Edward. I can just picture James swooping in to comfort Bella as she takes time away from Edward
Date: 04 Nov 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sorry - bella is overreacting
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
Funny enough I was able to read it. Great chapter!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
OH please tell me Bella isn't going to go off on Edward for something he had no control over...
Date: 04 Nov 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait for more!! I hope Edward is alone when Bella gets home! Great chapter!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
maybe he wants to ask Bella to marry him, I knew I shouldn't trust Vic..
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is a fool
Date: 02 Nov 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Starts with one little lie. Oh edward.....this is. It going to end well...
Date: 02 Nov 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what trouble gets himself into!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like having a James that has a decent roll.
Date: 29 Oct 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure what happened but there's nothing to read
Date: 27 Oct 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can not wait to read more
Date: 27 Oct 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
okay and we begin.. see you soon.
Date: 26 Oct 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am in for the next journey