Date: 20 Sep 2018 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story and wish there was more ofit to read lol if could say anything wish would of talked more about way she was treated at work before she forgave them all
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
Date: 21 Sep 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
there going to blow a hole in the wall and go underground through the basements and steal the gold and replace it with fakes..
Date: 25 Jan 2015 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
great story. thanks for posting it.
Date: 13 Dec 2014 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for this good moment.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for a wonderful story.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Sweet ending. I'm glad you let us know about Bree. TY for writing and sharing
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
Your story was such a joy to read, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Another amazing story from you. I'll be waiting for more.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
That was a really great way to wind up this story!
Date: 14 Nov 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you Nikky and Kasi! I truly enjoy reading what you write. My only critique, and I try to say this as lovingly as I can, is that the endings of several of your stories that I have read all go the same way. You write clear, descriptive chapters until you get close to the end, then it seems you write the last couple of chapters so packed with years of events that it feels rushed and void of those rich details that make your stories so nice to read. I wish you wrote the last 2 chapters of this story like the rest.....and not so galloping toward the end....sorry if this offends you but it is how I see it. It won't stop me from continuing to read what you write...
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it he hehehe hehehe that was perfect thank you for everything
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved this story
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for another great one.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
It was Las Vegas after all, so no shock when they got married. The court cases webt beautifully and the bad guys went away for a long time. This has been a great story and I'll be sorry to see it end!
Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
loved it cant wait for the rest
Date: 14 Nov 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 14 Nov 2014 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
It was a very enjoyable read, but ended way to soon. Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 13 Nov 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
good one.. thank you both.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward is so happy and can't wait to be a daddy . The bad guys still can't get over the fact that they got there but kids by a girl
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is my hero . Mike and Eric are more than just ass holes
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh I loved it and I was right they got married hehehe he and now they are trying for a baby so sweet update soon
Date: 13 Nov 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
So now that she's not working in his department anymore, they're free to be together! They wouldn't be eloping to Vegas, now, would they? Naw.....too soon....or is it? So cute when a daughter does a role reversal with a parent when it comes to having relationships.....!
Date: 13 Nov 2014 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad everything is going well. Happy Bree is settling in.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
It's always sad to say goodbye to a good storiy, but when it's its time there's nothing to do other than expect another great story coming soon ;)
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
Daddy has a girl and They are in Vegas.. hmm and all it brings
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wonder will the end up married hmm.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Come on, what do we think will happen? A lot of fun stuff, if I know anything! Maybe even some gambling? Sounds like Bella is going to vet her dad's new friend! It's nice that Bree has found a place to be safe and cared for!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Vegas baby! I've never been but it's on my bucket list.
Great chapter!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
aww for Charlie getting a girlfriend.
ummm I live in Vegas. The new saying is What happens in Vegas ends up on Youtube.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
One they better check out the bed and a lot of other surfaces. We have been writing 18 chapters for this....will they get drunk & married?
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh wow that was sweet what the guys did to send Bella off and I am happy Bree is being taken care of but hmm mm will they come back with rings on their fingers hehehe hehehe update soon
Date: 12 Nov 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
So relieved they caught Jacob before Bella could be hurt! When Bella and Edward go away for the weekend, might we see a lemon or two?
Date: 12 Nov 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm ready for some one-on-one time for them! :)
Date: 12 Nov 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
good job.. everyone
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow she is one smart cookie and now they caught the bad guys but did they get everyone
Date: 11 Nov 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is the good cop Edward knew she would be, and she hoped to be! The girl has a talent for police work, that's for sure!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think it shocks me, although it shouldn't, how narrow minded and nit-picky people can be. I mean she is only just out of the Academy herself, so not being much older than a teen herself she will look like a teenager. I cannot believe people question these stupid details. I am closer to your age though so maybe rational thinking expands with age (for most). I figured there was something up with Mike but I though he was just stupid and reckless so he would sabatoge the assignment.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Glad B got all the sleezeballs.
I agree with you about the look think. Look at how many actors in their 20s or more that look uber young
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! I can see her passing for a teenager. I'm just glad Mike & Eric didn't see her first. Cover blown
on your a/n, I'll be 51 tomorrow (can't believe I revealed that) but I've been told I look anywhere from 27 - 35 (just two weeks ago)...or people are shocked and insist early 40's at the most. Had to even pull out my passport once! Enjoy your youthful appearance. Age is just a number - it's how you feel and I feel fabulous
Date: 11 Nov 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 11 Nov 2014 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
Her team is not up to par is they lost her so soon....I love that Edward went to Aro right away to let him know that Bella is his woman and to do things right at work. It's about time her co-workers gave her some respect!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Yes! He finally went for it and she responded. I love that!
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
They better find her before something really bad goes down! Then Edward will go ballistic!
Date: 10 Nov 2014 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
No hidden gps tracker for Bella?
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
Wonder if Jake will figure it out before the cops arrest him?!
Date: 10 Nov 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Of course they lost them.. GRR.. love this story
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh snap will she be OK will they find her in time update soon
Date: 10 Nov 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Of course the team lost her..... Sigh. But she is smart that's for sure
Date: 10 Nov 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella is a very good actress! I know Edward will find her! I think here is a leak in the dept.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella is getting the respect she deserves and Edward is showing he is a stand up guy and she is his. She is still whereing the wire??
Date: 10 Nov 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
I was so happy when he went back loved it and the way they just hold each other
Date: 10 Nov 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
Yayyyyy!!!!!!
Finally!!!!!!!!!
:) :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 15
It's not over yet??? Not by a long shot.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
FINALLY! Edward took the bull by the horns & grew some balls!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh thank goodness he got his head out of his ass but they are smart to take it slow update soon
Date: 09 Nov 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
That ended their day very well, I'm thinking!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
A bit fast but at least they seem to be on the same page.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay!!! About time Edward! It'll be interesting to see how they navigate their relationship with work. I'm excited they're together now. I hope they talk so Edward can let her know he wasn't upset with her but rather worried and trying to let her know he wasn't going to so anything stupid!
Hope you enjoyed sleeping in. I'm sure you deserved it!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yes!!! He did snap out of it :) however, there's lot to talk and consider and it won't be easy, at least they'll be doing it together and no doubt with help from their friends and bosses.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
so close but so far away from the goal.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow they stopped them and they are all ok but did they really get them all
Date: 09 Nov 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward has to take care of her.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 08 Nov 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Come on Edward, man up and tell her how you feel! You came close to losing that opportunity forever, so get busy!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
Will Edward declare his feelings for her? I hope so.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
What's to hate about Edward? He's a good guy. I don't get that.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad Charlie is gonna be ok. Surprised they didn't admit Bella as well.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
God this is great, can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
Dying to find out who Chucky is.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can you imagine how he would react if he heard what Jake said to her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
She is one tough cookie.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Seems everyone underestimates her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Nice twist with Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
You write a really obnoxious (and good) Jake.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good a strong Bella.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward needs to get his head out of his ass.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope that at least when he drops her off at her house that he kisses her forehead so she can see he has some feelings for her, since he definately isn't planning on making any major announcements.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward needs to grow a set of balls and tell Bella! He had a golden opportunity to tell her but held back. Him holding back is what's gotten him in this situation. He's hurt her a lot instead of just talking to her! Good grief, Edward, grow up and man up!!!
Til tomorrow, have a great day ladies!