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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 44

OMG! I LOVE THIS!! I couldn't stop reading it once I started. So, now I am all caught up and waiting for more!!! This is so fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 44

Can't wait

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 43

Hope they make it out alive

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 44

I LOVED what Bella did to jasper! That was great!

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 44

They need to hurry and get the heck out of there and back to Edward's house where it's safe and pronto. I hope Jasper's reason for turning a traitor is maybe Royce has Alice and he's being forced to do his bidding. If not the he deserves whatever Edward does to him after now. 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 44

Jasper's supposed actions are a big surprise. Even tho it looks really bad for him, I'm not completely convinced he's guilty.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 44

Wonder why they are bothering to keep Jasper alive?  To find em? 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 44

I am with you..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 44

loving this

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 44

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 44

Jasper is a creep and her dad is a a a a a I am not sure what to call him lol.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 43

if she listens for once we will all faint.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 43

This does not look good!  I'm on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 43

uh oh

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 43

Why do I get the feeling that Bella's going to get grabbed....Which will then cause poor Barbie to get his ass handed to him again for not follow orders. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 43

Hurry what happened??????????????

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 43

Ugh wonder what Jasper is going to do.  Try and overpower her? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 42

He is mad at her but still protective.  I have a bad feeling about this exit.....

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 41

Oh oh please update

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 40

So excited for the next chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 39

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loving this story so much

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 37

Hope Bella is right

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 36

Nice

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 35

Again great story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 34

Love your story 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 33

Love this chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 32

Hope his okay can't wait for the exit chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 31

Your a great writer

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 30

So good

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 29

I can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 28

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

Update please

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'm so hooked on this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

Hope they will get out of this

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 24

Please update soon

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love love love

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

I can't stop reading this is great story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 21

Please update

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loving this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

Can't wait

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 18

Just love this story 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm hooked

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

This is my favorite story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh oh wonder what Bella will do

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 11

I can't wait

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thank you for quick updates

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

I like this Edward

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 6

Interesting

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

Bella I sticking up for hereslf

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 4

Different kind of Emmett I like

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love this chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love this Bella

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Like the story already

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 42

I hope they make it out alive

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 42

Use Jasper as a sheild then kill the bastard but where are Emmett and Rose?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 42

Damn!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 41

What an as$. Not liking jasper in this one. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loving this

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 42

Hope Jasper pays dearly.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 42

good

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 41

So disappointed that Jasper is a bad guy!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 41

grrr Time for Jasper and Roy to die.   What a prick

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 41

Wow-- so disappointed in Jasper :(

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 41

Now they have a chance to kill Royce too!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 41

Well Perhaps Jasper is first to die.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 41

Jasper needs to die now

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 41

uhg

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 41

No, I just cannot see Jasper turning on them.  There has to be some misunderstanding.  I am sure they will get out but Jasper cannot be in on it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 40

Edward was not far away

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 40

very disappointed with Jasper

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 40

Well it looks like Edward should be rewarded.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 39

I hope jasper is just playing nice with her father & not really on his side.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 40

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 40

oooh Jasper....you're in trouble now.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 39

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 39

hmm sure hope he's not talking about Em and Rose.  With any luck, he's talking about her dad.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 39

She gets it Edward is just worried about her about lossing her.  Please tell me that Jasper is helping Emmett and Rose.

Reviewer: lynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow

Reviewer: lynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 38

Absolutely fascinated with this story!

 

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 38

["Please Carlisle," I said turning to my father-in-law] It just occurred to me Bella took their word that she's married to Edward. I'd need proof::))

BTW...chapter 38 on the other site is the best chapter of the whole story! lol lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 38

Edward is going to be freaking out poor guy he just wants her safe.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 38

bad situation.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 38

; )

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 38

Will Edward give her some lemony punishment for going against him?

Reviewer: Yin - Yang M Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 38

I think Bella is right. I don't think Jasper betrayed them. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 38

Both men have a point.  I think it is Bella's right, but she is injured.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 38

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 38

good

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 37

omg I didn't see that coming. O poor edwards blue balls

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 37

So much for them f-ing!  Edward knew it would kill the mood. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 37

oooh Sounds like Jasper needs to die along with the sperm donor.  Hope Emmett is ok.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 37

; )

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