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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Arrival

thanks for sharing this bit of history with us ;) i'm looking forward to the next part in britain ;D

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Arrival

; )



Author's Response:

Thanks!  ;) <3

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Arrival

Thanks so much for getting Bella and Edward safely to the Iron Islands, and for sending Alice and Jasper, Angela and Emmett after them! A pox on Laurent and what he did in the name of his god!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Had to get them there.  Esme commanded it!  :D  I have a special pdf with pictures for this story.  If you'd like a copy of it send me an email at my addy which is.....   gardiniasteel@gmail.com  and I'll get it out to you.  Thank you for all your support.  Means a great deal.  

Talk to you later.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Arrival

Great and fascinating story!  Love how you worked in the actual history.  Look forward to possible future story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hopefully I'll be able to do that in the near future.  Mean while I have a pdf with some pitures if you'd like to have that email me at gardiniasteel@gmail.com

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Arrival

:) loved this story.  Look forward to reading more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I've enjoyed sharing my fictional version of the events.

See you next story?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 9

Would love to have you continue Bella and Edward's story.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I have hopes of comeing up with another 10 chapters in their journey, but at this point, I can't promise.  The characters have shut up for now, and let's face it, I'm just the typist.  :D 

I'm very happy that you've enjoyed the story.  If I do get more chapters, I'll post to this story line.  

Thanks again.

Hard Hugs

dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9

Too many of Laurent's ilk in this old world, to this very day! They would rather murder and destroy than try to get along with the rest of us! Fascinating story none the less. Will there be more when Bella and Edward arrive in the Iron Islands?



Author's Response:

Yep, unfortunately.  I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.  My problem is the Mother of Books is gone.  So, it can't be about it so the characters have shut up.  I'm just the typist you know.  

Hopefully they'll pick up where they left off, some day.  My thinking originally was to do 10 chapters about MoB, then 10 chapters into their future, and so forth.  However, the characters left the building, so to speak.  If I do manage to get them to speak again, I'll post to the same storyline - somehow.  *scratches head*

Thank you for being such a wonderful reviewer.  That means a great deal to me.

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

So sad!!!  He was insane



Author's Response:

He just felt "wronged".  He wanted to become a priest within the Temple complex, but his Karma was to do horrible things.

Thanks, again, for your continued support.  Couldn't do this without you!

Hard Hgus

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 Black Day - Part One

Thanks for the tip about Hypatia, it was quite interesting to read about her. As for Esme, I hated to see Laurent get his revenge on her, especially knowing what was yet to come! The idea of all that knowledge perhaps lost forever, makes me sad. See you next time!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I"m sure you are one of the very few who even looked at the information.  *sigh*  Esme/Hypatia was a great lady, and of course that made men suspecious of her and jelaous of her achivements.

See you next time.

Hard Hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 Black Day - Part One

This is so sad.  Poor Esme and Hypatia



Author's Response:

I know right, and the real sorrow for me is that this story should be yelled from the roof tops because the head of that whole complex, school and religious was a woman!  Back then that was HUGE.  Of course the jelaous man took care of that!

Glad you're still enjoying this.

See you next week.

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 To Be Saved Above All Others

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7 To Be Saved Above All Others

Poor Angela, to have seen all that death and destruction! Some gifts are as much a curse as a blessing! Of course I'm delighted that Bella and Edward have been sent away, to save them from the coming disaster. Sounds like the Iron Islands may be future England. Wonder what will happen to them there? See you next time!



Author's Response:

Yes she's got the same gift Casandra had.  At least they have warning for impending disaster.  Yes, Esme wants to perserve Bella's gifts, and Edward will be able to protect her.  Yes you're correct it is England though I think I should have use "Tin Islands" now, oh well.  At least you got it.  :)  As for what happens there, right now I have absolutely no idea.  I only have one other chapter written and I'm needed to be able to find time so I can write more!  LOL.  I"m doing two WIPs currently.  Told my beta to shoot me if I do this again.  LOL.

thanks for being so supporative.

I'm wondering why you use "1942" could it be we share a birth year?

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

It pays to ask questions! Now Bella and Edward both have hope that they will be allowed to marry. From the tone of your last reply, the fire that destroyed the great library of Alexandria must be coming to this tale soon. I wager that Laurent will be the major instigator of that horrible happening! So much knowledge was lost forever when that awful event occured! So glad you have received news of your story reviews. I wouldn't want you to think we didn't appreciate your writing!



Author's Response:

Yes it does.  The only stupid question is the unasked one.  Yep it's coming up.  So you know something about that historic event.  Where did you hear of it before?   I'd be really interesting in hearing how you know/knew about it.  :D  Laurent is a nasty piece of work.  It's very nice to know that I am appreciated.  Thank you for responses.  They mean a great deal.

Hard Hugs

Dinia



Author's Response:

Yes it does.  The only stupid question is the unasked one.  Yep it's coming up.  So you know something about that historic event.  Where did you hear of it before?   I'd be really interesting in hearing how you know/knew about it.  :D  Laurent is a nasty piece of work.  It's very nice to know that I am appreciated.  Thank you for responses.  They mean a great deal.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

Oh!  I do love that smile!

xoxoxo

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 Betrayal and Training

If Laurent's plan to destroy the temmple and the library come to fruition, Bella won't have to worry about training to be high priestess! Hopefully, it will mean she and Edward can be married.



Author's Response:

Yes that would make sense, but Oh the destruction and death that follows.  Eventually Bella and Edward will be striking off on there own to distant lands.

Thanks for your continued reviewing!  You just don't know how much these mean to me.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 5 Betrayal and Training

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 4 Warning and Betrayal

Too bad Bella has inadvertently made an enemy of her teacher, Renee! That may lead to unexpected consequences, and not good ones, either!



Author's Response:

Yes, but these things to happen in real life spiritual groups even though they try to not let it be so.  I think you're going to be maybe just a little surprised as to what happens next.

Looking forward to getting your take.

hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 3-Dangerous Argument

Laurent seems to come from the school of "my way, or the highway", if I may be flippant!



Author's Response:

Yes, Laurent is not a very nice man.  Like so many people in authority.

Thanks for your time and energy.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Overheard

I thought when you had them flee to a new land, that Kemet was another name for Egypt. Too bad Bella didn't get a good look at who was arguing with Esme, it would be easier to find him if she had.



Author's Response:

You thought was exactly correct as you now know.  

I just yesterday starting getting notifications from TWCS that I have reviews!  What a joy and a thrill.

Thank you so much for bearing with me.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

I can't imagine this priestess was too thrilled over her sacrifice, nor am I surprised at the man who took her virginity hiding his identity. Probably not too proud of how he did it! The training she underwent was pretty interesting, the sudden upheaval of the island, not so much! Having to escape destruction is damn scary!



Author's Response:

Many of the old religions of the World have a virgin's sacrifice of their maiden hood as a great rite.  The reason for the man not making his face known is she's not offering it to a human, but to the God-Force behind their religion.  He was supposed to be a non-enity.

Volcanois have a habit of doing that, even when they are dormant.

Thank you for your thoughts.

Hard Hugs

Dinai

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 Warning and Betrayal

Wonderful Renee!  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your time and reveiw of my story.  When you said, "Wonderful Renee"  I'm not sure what you meant.

I look forward to hearing more from you.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 4 Warning and Betrayal

Bella is going to have to watch Renee



Author's Response:

Oh Yeah she is!

Thanks Darlin' for your time and energy.  I'm just now starting to get notifications from TWCS due to an email snafu.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 3-Dangerous Argument

WOW, very interesting!  Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 3-Dangerous Argument

sadly, there are still people today with Laurent's attitude!!

Reviewer: magick23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

I like this. I'm interested in paranormal/supernatural things, so this story really fascinates me. Can't wait to see what happens, especially when Edward and Bella meet. I have to wonder if he wasn't the one who took her virginty.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Overheard

:):)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Oh,  I really like the start of this!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Prologue

looking forward to reading this



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Will be posting more soon. 

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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