Date: 21 Jan 2016 10:45 PM Title: CHAPTER 1 CURTAINS DRAWN
Wonderful story! I love your Avenger /Twilight crossovers. I do have a question though, I do not understand the ending to this story. Could you please explain it. I am just a bit jumbled with the Loki/Balder/sif ending. Thanks so much!!!! I love your writing! I have gobbled up all your completed stories with the Avenger /Twilight pairings!!!
Date: 18 Dec 2014 8:24 AM Title: CHAPTER 1 CURTAINS DRAWN
I originally found this story on FanFiction, and I was curious to see where you were going to take it so I created an account on this site just so that I could read the story and find out. I have to say that I am pleased that I did so as this story is a fantastic read, albiet confusing at times but what story isn't?
I truly have enjoyed every chapter that you have posted, and I think that the way you have tried to bring the different worlds together is both interesting and quite inventive. Like I said, I am definitely pleased that I took the time to create this account so that I could read this story. I am looking forward to the next chapter you post, and to reading some of your other stories as whilst I was scrolling through your page (this that the right word?) I noticed several other stories that I thought might also be good.
Please don't let any one tell you otherwise on this matter, you are an amazing writer (sure there are several errors located throughout the story, but what writer doesn't have errors in their story? That only means that they are human and that we are perfectly imperfect creatures.) and I wholeheartedly believe that you should continue writing to your hearts content--no matter what.
P.S. As to the reason that you are no longer posting anything but the first chapter on FanFiction: that 'writer' (if they can lay claim to such a title) should be ashamed of themselves. I have dealt with plagarisers as well on that site, thankfully it was not my work in question, but still. It really is a special kind of person who plagarises someones work and then gets "butt-hurt" when the person they stole from reports them. Those kind of heinous acts are what cause good, honest writers such as yourself more trouble than need be.
I do believe, of course, that fate will eventually catch up with that person and that they will get what is coming to them. I only hope that the punishment fits the crime. Death by crow sounds quite lovely to me, does it not to you? ;-P (I am of course being sarcastic here.) Anyway, to you I wish a good day (or night, whatever it is when you receive/read this review) and a happy life. I also wish you good luck on your future stories, you have made yourself one more fan to join what I am sure is many. :-D
Date: 23 Nov 2014 5:08 PM Title: CHAPTER 4 WHAT’S MY NAME!
Poor B. Nightmares suck. Cant blame her for asking the question though.
Glad Jones called her. Lunch with clint; that should be interesting. Thor should be her bodyguard I think. Again I have the media sometimes.
LOL you and I think alike I see. He’ll make a good bodyguard. Go bad ass bella with the warehouse. Aww for jealous Thor. At least clint took it like a man.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 5:08 PM Title: CHAPTER 3 DADDY’S GIRL
Glad she thought to call pepper. I’d be confused too Thor. B and Thor are both alike. They are both destinged for more than they are at the moment. Johnny is such a wanker.
Glad Pepper is there to help B. I hate the “press” sometimes. Mr Stone is a real jerk. B handled them well.
Hmm is Loki really dead though? ooh they are picking the wrong woman and the wrong house to try kidnapping her from. Go Bad Ass Thor. Kick some arse. ooh was wondering how long till he kissed her. ooh lemony times.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 5:07 PM Title: CHAPTER 2 GREEN EYED MONSTER
Renee was selfish for not telling Tony. Wonder why B didn’t want to do the college thing? Well at least Bella liked Pepper. LOL for Thor eating all her food. Johnny is really bad news. LOL for B having to explain things to Thor like TV and Clothes. Johnny is a wanker. Ah Clint makes an appearance . LOL for porn reaction. B knows some interesting people. Bella’s boss is a snot. Oh oh Tony….soooo not good.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 5:07 PM Title: CHAPTER 1 CURTAINS DRAWN
Intro: hmm Tony as a dad huh? I could see it since he was a big manwhore before Pepper. 8 years old, that’s a twist. ROFL for her yelling at Tony about language and such. Poor sad B. Interesting about the deaths. Wonder who knocked off Charlie and Renee. Wow Nasty Woman. Glad Tony got rid of her though but B&Tony have lots of growing up to do.
Ch1: lol for her beating Johnny. Wow B is a strong headed kid. wow she’s going to try and go it alone. oops for wreck. Thor does have a superiority complex.