Date: 30 Oct 2014 4:05 PM Title: Perfect catch
this is one of the best i've ever read....
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2013 10:22 PM Title: Extra - Water fight
Loved the story!!!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:24 AM Title: Toiling in time - day 2
Another chapter, yes, still pissed.....OOOO I just want to smack, NO WAIT PUNCH him right in the freakin JAW and break it.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:11 AM Title: Edward
I hate to say it, I pissed that he went to Millie...I really am. He can't be in love. If he was, he wouldn't have went to her. That's just flat out wrong.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:12 AM Title: Cannon Ball
I would have had a hard time not climbing out of the pool and socking her in the nose.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 9:40 PM Title: The choice
I love your story so much and I think all the characters are perfect!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:31 PM Title: Extra - Water fight
That was funny I think I would of had to kick him in the balls so I could rub them after LOL
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:05 PM Title: epilogue
That was a wonderful emotional chapter I cryed there love was so strong. Thanks for writing it.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: Twilight
Wow that was a long wonderful chapter so much happened. I was about to die when I thought she was going to denie him. The Kiss thank god it happened I almost clapped my hands when she said she loved him about time.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:41 AM Title: Our doubts are traitors
For some reason I knew she would do this now stop fucking up and get that man
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:30 AM Title: sweet dreams
OMG please tell me she is not going to freak out to bad she feels the same way about him right?
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:20 PM Title: The teddy bear
I am glad Roses bullshit backfired on her I know she wants to protect him but he is a big boy. She has her man let him have his girl
Date: 16 Mar 2010 9:22 AM Title: Toiling in time - day 3
That was great loved the messaging. She has to share a room and with Jared that is interesting. It is a good thing didnt tell him what hotel because he would be on his way there to kick Jareds ass.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:50 AM Title: Toiling in time - day 2
OK I think he has learned his leason now let the skank go yuk Bella needs to hurry and get back.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Toiling in time - day 1
So everyone knows even Millie??? Does she believe??? cant wait for Bella to get back. Why doesnt he call her I know no cell phone but there is a phone somewhere.???
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:33 AM Title: Edward
He needs his dick slaped going back to Millie. Bella has to be riped up inside???
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:34 AM Title: The choice
He had better turn his ass around and get back to Bella NOW. After every thing he has done to show her he isnt what they say he is not looking good for him
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:19 AM Title: movie night
When is he going to tell her she is his X girl. The tension is very strong. He needs another lesson in something.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 8:11 AM Title: special occasion - part 2
very full chapter I loved it Edward punch Jared staking his claim on Bella. Telling Bella he loved her. Why is this girl not paying atention?
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:07 PM Title: Perfect catch
I just finished reading this story and I must say that you are fantastic, wonderful, awesome writier! I think this would make a great book and you should consider publishing it. You made me laugh, cry and cry some more. The ending was not what I expected and I think thats why I love this story so much. I have read many many many stories on fanfiction & twcs and none have ever had a happy ending like this one. Although it may seem bittersweet that they both died I think that you showed us the readers how much love they shared and how they remained true to their relationship.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:41 AM Title: Mrs. X
Edward is loving this leson he said he could look at her forever right so this is nothing. Loved the little chain letter that was cute and the sitting on the lap. Loving the funnys
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:47 AM Title: Moron
No Jared stay away. She is going to be so pissed when she finds out what Edward did.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:42 PM Title: Oh....crap
How sweet she is taking care of him but she is going to be beyond pissed when she finds out he did it to himself.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:34 AM Title: Cannon Ball
Bella is one confused little girl but she can play with the big boys GO GO GIRL.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:50 PM Title: moving
glad she can see he is not a complete dog
Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:27 PM Title: well, this is awkward
So Millie is a bussy girl LOL.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 9:22 PM Title: Hut!
Wow that was great gaming she kicked his ass she is tough. If you dont know there name you cant call them girlfriend. She showed him she did not approve.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:41 PM Title: Hello Goodbye
She is my idol LOL
Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:21 PM Title: Perfect catch
what a way to get off on the wrong foot lol Bella is a spitfire
Date: 07 Mar 2010 6:43 PM Title: well, this is awkward
I read this story before on ffn in a single day because i loved it .as i told you then it made me cry in the end so i'm gona read it again on twcs and review to tell you if it has the same impact on me almost a year or so later ... hope you post the rest of the chapters soon