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Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. Thank you

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter. Thank you for writing. Try to mix it up a bit 😉

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Be well. Beat this thing. On another point I thought I'd reuse that over used word yet again...Brilliant. :P Thanks

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 16

Surprised again. How do you do it. What a place your mind must be. Brilliant. Thanks

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow. So well played out. Um...;D. Brilliant. Thanks. So pleased you're feeling better.

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

Lol. Holy Snapping Duck S**t Batman! Here's an overused adjective...BRILLIANT!

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thrilling m thank you

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

LOL. Holy mackerel. Amazing.

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

The plot thickens. Wonderful twists and turns. Thanks

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

I've been thinking it was Mike but I'm never right. Lol. Such a good read. Oh! And what a good Oops cliffhanger. ;P

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

No words. I'm completely flummoxed!

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Did not expect this. And I can't fathom Tanya's game plan. Brilliant chapter. Thank you

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved the game played by Emmett and Rosalie. Lol. Thank you

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Brilliant. Thank you

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Date: 26 Sep 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Intriguing. Unexpected. Brilliant. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

So interesting. So fresh. Loving this story. Thank you

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Really enjoyable. I am also liking your characters. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting changes you've made. Grandpa was a surprise. Lol. An enjoyable read. Thank you

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Love your story can't wait to read more! Glad your feeling better.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

That's why chelsea was so interested in bella.

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Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

Tanya went right for the juggler with that comment to bella.

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Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

This gets crazier & crazier but i can't stop reading! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

Not sure i trust the depties. Did jessica tell breaking dawn?

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Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

Emmet is having his way with her i'm sure. 

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Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

I was hoping she would get some of emmet's blood.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is sooooo busted!

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Date: 17 Sep 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Is chealsea heidi or tanya?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

So why did tanya make edward do it if she didn't want the girl?

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Date: 17 Sep 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love what a stake does to them! Was that a wolf in the woods staring at bella?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

Why can't edward stay in her room with the curtains & blinds shut?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

What is she thinking going into the woods with only a robe on. You had me so scared she wouldn't make it to Edward. Thankfully she did! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

I have never watched true blood but if it's anything like how edward fed from her, i think i have a new show to watch! 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great the boys are back

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

I absolutelt love this story  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well Fan Fiction is down So I am here reading.. Jasper says there is a problem.. Okay

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

I can't wait for rose and Emmet to have some interaction with Edward and Bella 

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Outside, it is the ground not the floor. Your story has great flow until it hit that bump... it takes me away from the story which I don't want to happen. You have a great story here and I enjoy finding a new chapter every time it comes up. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well now, Bella is sure to get the wrong idea. Will she give Edward a chance to explain? Hmmmmmmmm.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

Hating Tanya 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope you bring more of Emmet into the twist of the story

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

love the four of them 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love that you put the guys outtakes in an that there on a United front. Hope Jake takes out Tanya

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hope you post again soon

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

well if you ask me Jessica implied Edward brings "honey's" in there from time to time.

 

Jessica.. ugh

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love that you have reposted this story I hope to read more soon

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

The wolf should go along and stay outside. Just saying that they might need extra muscle.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you will keep this going, updating often. That is what creats interest. :-)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2014 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thought this was a great start to the story looking forward to reading more

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