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Reviewer: cherrypie24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2020 4:24 AM Title: Eat Shit, Billy Boy!

I love this story it's so good would love to read more!!

Reviewer: Sonyag26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 4:23 PM Title: Oh, Lord, NO!

I am so loving this unusual story. The writing is wonderful, you can feel everything that the characters are experiencing. it's intense, it's funny, I love that Eric is such as strong character. Bill and Andre deserve something sinister to happen to them. Can't wait to see Eric play daddy. Please, please, please release another chapter.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you for the kind words. I may be slow with the next chapter, but it's in the works nonetheless. :)))

Reviewer: txgrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 11:44 PM Title: Eat Shit, Billy Boy!

Looking forward to Eric getting to interact with HIS family!



Author's Response:

Hopefully you'll enjoy it as much he does :)))) Thanks for reading and taking the time to review M

Reviewer: vicsterispissed Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 4:02 AM Title: Eat Shit, Billy Boy!

Omg. Epic.   Please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter.  Can't wait till they wake up .



Author's Response:

I promise I won't :))) and Thank YOU for the encouraging review.

 

M

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:29 AM Title: Eat Shit, Billy Boy!

Scumbill and Andre really need to just be terminated for being utterly annoying if for nothing else.  LOVED Scumbill getting put in his place.  And Lorena too, even if only via phone.

Love the "old bat" remark.  She is an annoying PITA. Mastiff??? Really?  ROFL  Poor Tommy.

Amelia really wants a smack upside the head huh?

Poor Adele.  She's gotta be pulling her hair out.  So nice of "mr smith".  Glad She can get back.  Go Jason.  LOL for her fussing at everyone about the language.    Claim or not, can't wait till Adele gets a hold of the viking.  LOL   At this point, a screw you comes comes to mind with his thoughts about Jason and probably Adele (and I love the viking).

 




Author's Response:

OMG, your comment was so awesomely good you had me crying:)))) Adele is on mission that's for damn sure. This Viking has no idea what he signed himself up for LOL

Thank you for not only taking a ride on this crazy AU SVM train with me, but for taking the time to let me know you're enjoying my shenanigans galore LOL 
It means the world to me and motivates me like no other.

 

M

Reviewer: jules3677 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:26 AM Title: Eat Shit, Billy Boy!

Can I say how much I adore long chapters.  They are the best.  You can immerse yourself in the authors world and totally lose awareness of the real world.  Sometimes that preferable.

I cannot believe that Eric finally got to rest, admittedly forced rest while the sun shone.

Pleased that Adele made her appearance.  That was sweet with the nice gentleman at the airport purchasing her ticket so she could get back to Shreveport to search for Sookie and the great-great grandchildren.  You write a credible Adele Stackhouse.  Not too sure what else Jason and Adele can do against the might of Sheriff Northman, hopefully there will be a happy for everyone resolution to this quandary.

Really want to know what happens with the Queen.  Will that mean Eric has to take over the kingdom?  Or will his Maker be the one to take over the kingdom?



Author's Response:

Awwww, I LOVE your comment, Jules:))) I pinky swear, you'll be the first to find out LOL.

Thank you a million times for all your help and encouradgement that keep me going. YOU ROCK GIRL!!!!!!

M

Reviewer: Sophi517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2014 1:19 PM Title: come back to me

I'm so glad I decided to browse for something new to read. This story instantly had me hooked. I really like the way your developing these characters and I can't wait to see what happens when Sookie and the children wake up, and what's in store for creepy Andre and that slime ball Compton if they keep pushing Eric's buttons. 



Author's Response:

Hi Sophi, I'm glad you took a chance on this crazy AU train ride and are enjoying the scenery so far. Your kind words are more than encouraging for which I humbly thank you and promise to continue doing my best to all the characters involved:)))) Happy Holidays to you and your family:)

Reviewer: babygirl912 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 5:32 AM Title: come back to me

I love the story!!:):) I can't wait to see where it's heading! I wouldn't worry about the readers being quite, it's probably due to the holidays because your story definitely has me wanting more:):)



Author's Response:

Thank you, your wonderful words encourage me write some more tonight:))))

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 12:48 AM Title: come back to me

Ugh of course Scumbill and Creepo Andre just had to keep running their mouths.



Author's Response:

Scumbill. LOL. Good one :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 4:16 PM Title: Who are you?

hmmm Don't like that he is hiding them from Gran



Author's Response:

Right? I have been trying to tell Eric the same thing so many times now that he isn't even acknowledging my presence anymore LOL :))))

Reviewer: vicsterispissed Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 10:10 AM Title: come back to me

Wow. Just wow. This story is amazing. 



Author's Response:

Aw Thank You. I am very glad you think so :))) Happy Holidays :)

Reviewer: Jadajuice Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 1:45 AM Title: come back to me

so, we better hope Godric(?) will arrive shortly to keep everyone alive.  Thanks for updating !



Author's Response:

Hmmm, or maybe Adele Stackhouse barges in and rips Eric a new one, a duuurty down under southern style. LOL 

Thank you for reading it, it has been fun writing it and it's always nice to see you guys enjoying my crazy AU twist on SVM:)

Happy Holidays!

 

M

Reviewer: ioan35 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 8:41 AM Title: come back to me

i like it. great job



Author's Response:

Thank you. I am a baby vamp-writer so it means a lot hearing you think so:))

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 6:00 AM Title: Who are you?

hmmm So Jason can feel her huh? interesting.  Bobby is a trip

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:54 AM Title: The F you will!

hmm a possessive pervert.  LOL.  Wonder what they are besides fae.  I know there has to be something else.



Author's Response:

Author's Response:

Hi there,

first thank you for the feedback, it put a smile on my face,  truly:)

As for Eric being a perv and possessive vampire, mmm can he really be anything but :)?  I hope you enjoyed the story and all your questions are very good ones. I know the answers and can give them to you of that is what you really want, but I am hoping you want to experience the suspense of the AU mystery. 

Again thank you for reading and commenting it means the word to me and motivates me to keep going, first time ever writing ff so I am very unsure of myself as you can tell.

M

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:42 AM Title: Lights out, asshole!

wow he's a pervert who is now high on thier blood.  Interesting.  I love Ludwig



Author's Response:

oh no I think I deleted your comment on chapter 5 somehow :((((((((( 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:26 AM Title: here lay stupid

Wow  what a pervert molesting her while she's unconscious.  Gotta love Ludwig

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2014 4:16 AM Title: Oh, Lord, NO!

wow  great start.  Who is the daddy I wonder?   aww poorHunter

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