Date: 06 Dec 2016 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 23 forever yours
The love story of Siobhan and Aro was heartbreaking. What a travesty... And Aro not forgiving Marcus was understandable. It left me feeling melancholy for them all. They lost so much. Poor Charles never knew his father:(
I hope that Bella PLUS Edward and the Cullens will be able to visit Italy! That would be really nice. Bella will get to know her grandmother's back story from Aro and also meet her remaining family members.
I really enjoy reading these sweet characters so much. Regardless of the amount of their wealth or despite their suffering and loss, they're still kind and giving to others.
Excellent chapter. Looking forward to your next update! ~RoseE. x
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
The person who felt it unrealistic must not have children. My husband and i always say we might kill someone if they hurt our son, the only joking matter is my husband isn't the best planner so i would be the one to dispose of the body. Protective mothers are called momma bears for nothing.
Date: 03 Apr 2016 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
Love, love, crazy love Esme! I was crying when Edward and Esme were talking to Bee and laughing at Emmett's antics. That's how my husband found me, laughing and crying. He shook his head and left the office. Men just don't get it. ;) Great chapter, even greater story.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Esme is one cool momma. Yeah James is dead and can't hurt Bella again. Bella needs some birth control, so she and Edward can fulfill their dreams without worrying about pregnancy. They have plenty of time for babies later.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Way to go mama Esme! Take that you asshole! Well I for one am glad that James is gone. Permently. Thanks for not dragging it out. That chapter had just enough nail biting drama in it, without it dragging on and on. Just perfect.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
Oh, don't stop now!! I am loving this story. This Edward is just divine, sexy, romantic and all man and Bee is such a beautiful soul, is other half. Please update again soon, like really soon. xxoo
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Edward's Love
I loved the new chapter. You make me smile when I read this story so thank you. Poor Alice makes me feel bad for her morning sickness. Looking forward to the party and the Jessica and Mike drama.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 16- My Dearest Isabella
A tissue warning would have been nice :)........ You just made me cry. Love it. I hope she goes and find Aro. I hope he's still alive so that we can hear his side of the story.
I know how you feel. Nanna Swan was a lovely lady and her story was so full of love. she didn't sound bitter though, i think she was more regretful that she never confronted Aro.
Ah well. thanks for your lovely comment and thanks for reading my story.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 16- My Dearest Isabella
Loving it! Bless Nana Swan. I think Isabella should find Around and see what occurred from his point of view.
i loved writing Nanna Swan. I have a soft spot for Siobhan. Perhaps we will hear Aro's story, one way or another....
thanks for reading and thanks for your review.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 16- My Dearest Isabella
Grandma put a lot in that letter wow. I dont think the mean letter came from Aro I think it was his dad. I hope Bella finds him. Cant wait for more
the letter was very full, i can understand Edward wanting to just sleep on it and discuss it on the morrow. perhaps we'll hear Aro's side of things, one way or another.
thanks for supporting my story.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 - the greatest gift
Alice and Jasper are clueless. Who is taking care of the baby when they are at school and studying? It would be better to put the baby up for adoption than have it shuffled from babysitter to babysitter while they live the dream.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 Shake it off
I really feel that Bee is over reacting, and being overly a sensitive for a person that generally doesn't care what people say. Not to mention that he wasn't necessarily blaming her but admitting thatvshe gets under his skin.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 15 - the greatest gift
I am so disappointed in Alice and Jasper. What a selfish choice they made. I am so proud of Bella for standing up and pointing out what an idiotic reason for them to conceive a child. I hope that they smarten up before the child enters the world. >:(
I really do love this story and I am very excited for Edward to read Nanna Swan's Letter! :)