Date: 26 Sep 2020 8:33 AM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
Very intriguing, I do hope you continue this story.
Date: 01 Jan 2019 10:27 AM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
Loved this story so far. Will it ever be continued?
Date: 03 Nov 2015 10:49 AM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By
I love this story
Date: 03 Nov 2015 10:47 AM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
I love this!!!
Date: 12 Oct 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
That was an interesting turn.
Date: 11 Oct 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
Such a twist
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2015 5:54 AM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
:) I hope you are feeling better soon
Date: 10 Oct 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
Oooh renee was a witch... Maybe b is too
Date: 10 Oct 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
Unexpected.
Date: 09 Oct 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream
How cool would it be for Bella to be the daughter of a witch, and possibly be one herself? It might explain why this stalker wants her so much!
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
Sad I'm not a fan of a human Edward
Date: 20 Sep 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel
Awesome
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter-12: A Beating Heart
Sweet
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter-11: Ready or Not
Awesome
Date: 20 Sep 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book
::))
Date: 16 Sep 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter-27: Game Plan
Hmm sounds like too meant people want B. Hope e and all can keep her safe. nice Rose speech.
Date: 16 Sep 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter-26: Trouble In Sight
Glad they're being there or wanting to be there four each other
Date: 13 Sep 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter-27: Game Plan
Good chapter . I'm curious to see who the stalker is. Keep up the great work !
Date: 12 Sep 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter-27: Game Plan
To bad Edward is not there to listen to the stalkers thoughts.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter-27: Game Plan
I love this story. The site is seriously screwing up your spacing, though.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter-27: Game Plan
I'm really not liking where this is headed, because it sounds like the Cullens aren't going to be able to protect Bella from whoever this is!
Date: 05 Sep 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter-26: Trouble In Sight
Can't wait to see who was I. Bella's room
Date: 04 Sep 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter-26: Trouble In Sight
Sorry to hear you've been ill, hope you feel better now! This was a good chapter, what with Bella and Edward making up and spending time together. The piano playing making her jealous was pretty neat, especially when it led to the make out session interrupted by Alice's vision! The creature taking Bella's scent in her room is enough to set everyone on alert! Something bad is coming, I can feel it, and the family is smart to watch out for Bella! Take care and see you next time!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter-26: Trouble In Sight
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Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter-25: A Soul for A Soul
They are both learning.
Date: 18 Aug 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter-25: A Soul for A Soul
Sweet. Edward is finally getting it.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 6:00 PM Title: Chapter-25: A Soul for A Soul
glad they both had someone to talk sense into them.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter-25: A Soul for A Soul
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Date: 15 Aug 2015 7:50 AM Title: Chapter-25: A Soul for A Soul
Thanks to Angela and Rosalie, they're back on track and back together! Guess it takes something like that to make you appreciate what you have! I'm just glad they have each other!
Date: 11 Aug 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter-24: Intruder Alert
Bella was being a little bitch. Edward was concerned. He didn't do anything wrong. Rachel was being pushy. Jacob did hurt Bella. She needs to understand how important she is to Edward. She was the one being disrespectful.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter-24: Intruder Alert
I almost feel sorry for Edward because he truly doesn't see what he did. That tear is going to be his punishment, worse than any he's known before. Of course, he's smart enough to learn from it, too, so there is hope for him yet!
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter-24: Intruder Alert
Hmm I'm actually on Edwards side in this one
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2015 11:59 AM Title: Chapter-24: Intruder Alert
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Date: 21 Jul 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter-23: Realization
Glad he's realizing he loves her.
Date: 21 Jul 2015 11:36 AM Title: Chapter-23: Realization
I'm happy for them. They finally feel whole.
Date: 19 Jul 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter-23: Realization
So sweet
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2015 11:51 AM Title: Chapter-23: Realization
:)
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:47 AM Title: Chapter-23: Realization
Now I'm scared someone is going to try to ruin this for them both! Hopefully, Edward will be able to keep her safe!
Date: 15 Jul 2015 12:16 PM Title: Chapter-22: Dark Clouds Looming
Edward better keep his brain open for whoever wants Bella. Edward is not giving her up. I'm happy that Edward is finally happy.
Date: 13 Jul 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter-22: Dark Clouds Looming
Mr. McNasty, whoever he is, thinks he'll take Bella away from Edward? I don't think so!. I imagine Alice losing track of Edward must have been when he was near Leah, maybe. The wilves tend to mess up her visions.
Date: 12 Jul 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter-22: Dark Clouds Looming
hmm a secret evil POV. The blank spot I'm guessing is when he was near Bella's house and leah was ther?
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2015 2:23 PM Title: Chapter-22: Dark Clouds Looming
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Date: 09 Jul 2015 11:43 AM Title: Chapter-21: A Bond for Life
They are so cute together.
Date: 05 Jul 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter-21: A Bond for Life
Aww they are so cute together. Em is typical pita big brother.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter-21: A Bond for Life
Ah I love how sweet Edward can be when it comes to Bella its adorable! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter-21: A Bond for Life
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Date: 03 Jul 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter-21: A Bond for Life
Something tells me Edward is not unhappy to own the label Emmett put on him! It was cute that Mrs. Goff got fierce with him about hurting Bella! I'm glad they talked about mating, too.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter-20: Cryptic
:)
Author's Response:
:D
Hope you're enjoying reading this crazy musing of mine.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 26 Jun 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter-20: Cryptic
Imagine that! Prickly Miss Rosalie being the one to thank Bella for being who and what she is! Actually, the visit went pretty well, at least so far.
Author's Response:
She's not so prickly in this one ... not yet anyway. ;)
Hope you're enjoying reading this crazy musing of mine.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 26 Jun 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter-20: Cryptic
ooooh for Rose dropping the bomb like that. Didn't alice see?
Author's Response:
She wouldn't be Rose if she didn't do something dramatic now, would she? ;)
Hope you're enjoying reading this crazy musing of mine.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter-19: Take A Chance on Me
; )
Author's Response:
:))
Thanks for reading.
Date: 22 Jun 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter-19: Take A Chance on Me
Glad B is giving him a chance
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. :)
I hope you're enjoying the ride.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter-19: Take A Chance on Me
Last two chapters were great I loved the time he had with esma and that he called her mom. Then the talk I the medow
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Thanks for reading.
I hope you're enjoying the ride.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter-19: Take A Chance on Me
Good chapter: it really moved the story along.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
Thanks for reading.
I hope you're enjoying the ride.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter-19: Take A Chance on Me
I can only imagine how relieved Edward is by this second chance Bella has offered. He was so afraid she would send him packing and instead has only the two requests. Though not lying and not killing people are a couple of big ones!
Author's Response:
Lol. Yes, they are big ones. But maybe he'll give it a try for his human? ;)
Thanks for reading. :)
I hope you're enjoying the ride.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter-19: Take A Chance on Me
:)
Author's Response:
:D
Thanks for reading. :)
I hope you're enjoying the ride.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter-18: Doubting Minds
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Date: 16 Jun 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter-18: Doubting Minds
I hope Bella can help Edward find happiness.
Date: 14 Jun 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter-18: Doubting Minds
Glad B has someone she can talk to about stuff.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter-18: Doubting Minds
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Date: 12 Jun 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter-18: Doubting Minds
I understand why someone nominated this story, it grabs ahold of you and you can hardly wait to see what happens next! I'm crossing my fingers Edward hears good news over lunch, and I think he will, now Bella has talked to Father Webber.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter-17: Memoirs of Days Gone By
👐👐👐👐👐 I like that she needed time rather then being ok with the whole thing
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter-17: Memoirs of Days Gone By
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Date: 30 May 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter-17: Memoirs of Days Gone By
Makes sense to me that Bella needs time to think about all Edward told her. He just has to keep in mind, she didn't tell him to never darken her door gain. Has to stand for something good, right?
Date: 30 May 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter-17: Memoirs of Days Gone By
Glad he's being honest with her.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter-17: Memoirs of Days Gone By
:)
Date: 19 May 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts
Edward will not be the same again. He has found love.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts
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Date: 18 May 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts
Slow Learner indeed. I like Ms Goff though
Date: 18 May 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts
Growing up is hard to do....
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts
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Date: 17 May 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts
I held my breath when he found that woman by the side of the road! I'm so glad that he realized the comparison, and left her alive! Nurse Jackie gave Bella a lot to think about, also, and maybe is the reason she's now willing to listen to Edward. Hope that revelation goes well! Really looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 17 May 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts
Good chapter!
Date: 15 May 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
I think it is time to lay everything out on the table. It is time for honesty.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
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Date: 09 May 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
Talk about mood swings
Date: 09 May 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
Him, this boy has no clue. He really does need redeeming.
Date: 09 May 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
oh my Edward is going to get whiplash with all those mood swings.
Date: 09 May 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
Good chapter!
Date: 08 May 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
I'm hoping that she slapped him for thinking what he was had some bearing on her feelings for him. If not, then she thinks he's lying to her, or making fun of her, and that would be too sad! Can't wait to see if my ideas are any where near the truth!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
He deserved that! I hope she hasn't hurt herself
Date: 08 May 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating
Well done Bella!
Date: 08 May 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
Great story! I'm hooked!
Date: 04 May 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
Can't wait for more.
Date: 01 May 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
ooh a new twist there at the end
Date: 29 Apr 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
Mean lol
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
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[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
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Date: 28 Apr 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope
Not to mention how we hope Baltimore can pull it together and calm down! Meanwhile, we now have two big mysteries in this story, who is stalking Bella and why would Edward lose his sparkle, so to speak? See you soon!
Date: 26 Apr 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel
Definitely in need if redemption. But, kinda like this bad ass. Think Bella will straighten him out.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel
hmmm now I'm thinking there is a pot of money somewhere that mr employer doesn't want B to find out about.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 1:36 AM Title: Chapter-12: A Beating Heart
oooh some lady is going to regret messing with our kids
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel
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Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel
What's a little murder, when committed to keep your mate safe, right? Too bad she didn't know who she was working for, it would have simplified the hunt for Edward.
Author's Response:
Right. :D
You really didn't think I'll make it that easy, did you? *Cackles evilly*
Thank you for reading.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter-12: A Beating Heart
Sounds like vigilante Edward is going to be a bit busy tonight! Of course the dumb broad had no idea what sort of creature she was flirting with either! I sure would like to know who her employers were, though!
Author's Response:
LOL. Vigilante Edward ... I like the sound of that. ;)
Thanks. :)
Thank you for reading.
Take care.
Ann
Date: 17 Apr 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel
Wow, that's different! Love the mystery.
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)
I'm all about drama, you know that. ;)
Thank you for reading.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter-13: Avenging Angel
:)
Author's Response:
:D
Thanks. :)
Thank you for reading.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter-12: A Beating Heart
I'm really enjoying this story. Bella is a breath of fresh air in Edward's life. Edward is security to Bella.
Author's Response:
Perfectly stated, girl. :)
Thanks. :)
Thank you for reading.
Take care.
Ann
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter-12: A Beating Heart
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Author's Response:
:D
Thanks. :)
Thank you for reading.
Take care.
Ann