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Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 8

i can make you a banner if you want i have a facebook group and you can see what i have made

https://www.facebook.com/groups/425362977642281/ :)

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 11:54 PM Title: Epilogue

please dont take to long starting your new book. your writing is wonderful . hurry up  i am going to miss Xander and Olivia

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 11:39 PM Title: Epilogue

:O cant wait to read more of Olivia and Xander :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 10:11 PM Title: Epilogue

aww i wanted to see them reunited, i dont know how patient we"ll be but for you ill try! lol... so glad she was found alive and by great people.... cant wait to read the next chapter.....

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 8:18 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh how I love this story!  So proud of our Olivia!

Reviewer: BlueEyedGirl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 76

knew she had it in her can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 76

Im so proud of her!!!!! cant wait to read more. a birthday wish for today is a reunion stingy i know. lol

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 76

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HOLY CATS :O

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 76

wow hurry update

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 75

good so happy its almost over but it it 

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 74

let it end 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 74

oh please say they find her soon!!!! this is some heavy shit girl!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 73

omg this horrible please let this end

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 73

very well written chapter, i hope they find her soon!!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 72

WOW I JUST CAN'T see Xander getting over whats happening to Olivia the guilt will eat at him.  How will Xander and Olivia get pasted the rape and other things. 

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 71

OMG

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 72

ahhhh dont stop there :(

i hope Olivia is ok :(

cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 72

great chapter, i cant wait to read more! i was unprepared for the out come of the last chapter but it was well written and im still going to read it! warning next time would be great. lol

Reviewer: chmcolli Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really wish you would've said more than "a bitter pill" and that it was utterly graphic and horrifying at the end.   I'm assuming that the next few chapters will be quite graphic in detail as well so I'm going to take a break from the story and come back in a few chapters and hope that we're in the aftermath.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  I will go back and put a disclaimer on the chapters with graphic details; I realize some people are sensitive to such things. I don't know if you've read any of the comments I've made in either this story or my other, but I am a survivor of domestic abuse, and some of these very things happened to me.  In a way it's cathartic to write about them; it's hard knowing that there are people who are so brutal and care nothing for the feelings and well being of others, especially those they've professed to love at some point.  

I apologize if I offended you; it's not my wish to do anything of the kind to my readers, but in all fairness, this could be my story, embellished a bit.

~Ann

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 71

Oh. My. Gosh. Not again. I think I am going to be sick. Come on Ann, help her out!!! I may not make it until the next update! 😳

Reviewer: BlueEyedGirl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 71

Please let her kick some ass or get rescued or something..Come on Olivia you are stronger then they think!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 71

HOLY FU*K NOOOOOO :O OMFG :O

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 70

please hurry and update love:LOVE  Your story,,!!!!!!!""

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 69

WOW CRAZY BUT LOVING IT

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 70

Loved it!!! Sad but good can't wait to read more

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 68

WOW LOVING IT

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 67

LOVE IT

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 66

GREAT CHAPTER

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 69

Just got back from a cruise. Didn't have Internet (or time to read anyway) 😊. Could hardly wait to get caught up on my favorite story!  Can't wait to see what happens!

 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 69

oh sh!t hs hit the fan :O

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 69

ugh> love the update! cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 68

oh please say your not going to keep us waitting?????? great chapter btw:) cant wai to read more

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 67

loved it!!!! really cant wait to read more! just dont leave us hangin for to long:)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 66

Loved it! Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 65

loved it!!!!! cant wait to read more

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 65

great chapter hurry and update I wanted what Xander is doing to Olivia!!!!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 64

loved it! i really cant wait to read more... both chapters were great btw

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 64

great chapter 

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 63

good chapter

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 62

omg  Beyond Great chapter  Loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!! 10********** stars



Author's Response:

I'm blushing to my roots!  Thank you so much; you've made my day!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 61

wow love it

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 60

omg 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 62

loved it!!!!! cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 61

Loved it!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!! Hopefully soon😝

Reviewer: BlueEyedGirl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 60

Oh My! can't wait to read more damn cliffy! ;-) lol..dont leave us hanging to long again love it!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 60

Umm no words, great chapter , can't wait to read more.....

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 59

loved it! cant wait to read more

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 59

Love this chapter how sweet Don't keep your reader long to update !!!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 58

wow Love these two And Your story is really great  Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 57

what a wonderful reunion love ypur story

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 57

:) :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 57

loved it! good for them nothing like a good reconncting. cant wait to read more

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 56

LOVING your story! hurry and update

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 56

loved it cant wait to read more!!!!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 55

Oh boy! Things are looking pretty interesting! Love the drama. 

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 55

Xander is not going to lose his baby, right?  Either one of them!  I'm betting this Travis character has something to do with her ex. I know you won't let anything bad happen to Olivia, she has been through too much already. Right? 😊. I so love this story!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 55

hurry and update !!!!!!!!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 55

OH NO  :O

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 55

oh no!!!!!!!! cant wait to read more!!!!! great chapter btw

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 54

aww how sad! i love this couple so much, cant wit to read more

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 54

Wow! I sure hope that he doesn't fall from grace, business wise.

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 54

omg how sweet please update soon love these two  great story

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 53

great chapter cant wait to read whats going to happen

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 53

whats going on at his company????? need to know!!!! lol, cant wait to read more! soon i hope

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 52

I love them and the chapter, can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 51

Whoo! Nick and Tessa can give Xander and Olivia a run for their money in the hotness factor! 

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 51

omg omg omg  that all i could say!     please update soon   love your story!!!!!!!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 51

holy cats i am going to go jump in the snow that was HOT :)



Author's Response:

I think you just made my day with this comment!  **Grinning wickedly**  

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 51

loved it, now i cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 50

Beautiful chapter and message of a clean slate each day. Carpe diem. 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 50

:)

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 50

Wow love these two update now please I can't get enough of your story

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 50

loved it, hopefully we read more soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 49

loved it, cant wait to read more!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 49

Cheers to the Wades happiness!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 49

Omg could it be any better loving your story. Please update NOW!!!!!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 49

:)

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 48

wonderful chapter great story

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 48

I love that Xander and his family are now Olivias rock and support system. 

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 47

Great chapter

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 48

Loved both chapters, cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 46

Wow, that was raw emotion! The full spectrum of love, to scared to death,  back to awe, admiration and back to love. What a ride.

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 46

wow what an emotional chapter.  This chapter could not have been written any better!!!!!  Love it

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 46

Sad but great. Can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 45

Eww, he eyed a child ick bad boy!!! Lmao. Loved the chapter can't wait to read more

Reviewer: macera Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 45

more please more

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 44

please update soon .   love these 2.  can't wait fore more!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 43

wonderful

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 42

omg what a chapter love it

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it!!! Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 41

wow

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 39

wow

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it!!!!!!! Happy Valentines to you!!!! Cantnwait to read more;-)

Reviewer: wee scot Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 41

Having been to Greece I can picture how beautiful this is in my mind!  I love these two and I am so happy they got here so quickly after his memory came back. Life is too short to waste it!  Thank you for sharing your talent and your story with us 😊 d84;a039;



Author's Response:

It's my pleasure!  Thank YOU for reading and l'm so glad you're enjoying the story.  Going to Greece has been my hearts desire for a long time, so I didn't mind doing a little 'research' for their trip.  The more digging I do, the more I want to go!

Reviewer: BlueEyedGirl86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 41

goodchapter Sorry been so Quiet but i feel like i am at the Edge of my seat now :-)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 41

Ready for the wedding bells!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it!!!! You had me scared there for a min there at the end:-) can't wait to read more...............

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 41

need more please loving it :)

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 40

Yay!!! Loved the chapter by the way, can't wait to read more

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it, can't wait to read more!!!!!

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