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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

Poor Bella

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

I'm holding out hope that there is another tracking device in her ring. A backup in case of emergency or if the bracelet ends up exactly where it did. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

This is awesome! I am excited for more!! Mike is gonna get his ass kicked when they find Bella!! :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

well who is tanya working with i wonder

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

well we have no clues so I can only keep reading

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Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2

oh to marry money lol

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Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

the orderly?

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Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over

whirlwind

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Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen

wow

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Date: 04 Apr 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

wow, I am forced to wait on your other story and started this

Reviewer: LadyAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

pure torture! I need more!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

He should let Alice and Rosalie have a go at Tanya. Hopefully He will find Bella soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

How can Bella be so stupid?  If she loved Edward enough,  she would have yelled at Tanya,  not Edward. She would have let him explain.  Did she really think Edward, Esme, Carlisle,  Jasper,  Emmett,  Rose, and Alice all lied to her? Her situation is all on her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

Kick that bitch out fast Bella should have stayed there and beat the Shit out off her. Poor Edward didn't do anything. What is this creep going to do to get

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

Life is going so good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

There is no place like home lol. Wow is this freak that is after her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time

what a great time so cool him finding the Swan castle for her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One

Great begining.  Is it Aro?

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

Hmmmm Alec or Felix maybe??? 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3

very cool I love traditions.  Now on to the honeymoon lol

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue

Do the boys never go home and see their parents,  not even for Christmas.  Edward and Jasper had just finished their first year of college when their parents met Bella. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2

I wish my husband would remember I'm always right lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding

That is quite the announcement

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives

Love cow tipping lol 

Reviewer: adorablykrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

Chapter 24 please!! I wanna know who this creeper is!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

OH MY HOLY Effin trash bag! WOW!! This is freakin fantastic!! I am freaking the freak out here!! I am dying for more! :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen

This sounds so good. 



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy it.  I will be posting again later in the week.  Also, I will also be posting pic, but I don't know when.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?

I think they surprised every one lol

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Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

It has to be the ordily but who is he I thought is was James you got me lol. Is Bella the reason Edward was getting death treats in New York?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party

What great plans. Edward is going to want to kill someone. I think Bella is going to find out about her security now.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over

What was in the package

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Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen

Three weddings in one day love it .

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen

Hunter is a creeper OMG.  My heart was breaking for Bella after she was told about the gift. So excited for her to see the house that Edward built for her with Roses help. Rose is in trouble lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time

So happy they finely talked in person and I am amazed that they keept it from his parents for so long

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends

I want to live there lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue

King is scum so glad they got him to pay. Now they are getting to know each other fun stuff

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On

Love the connection they have even though text. I love how his parents feel about her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love

OMG that is so sad

Reviewer: seirr933 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

Loved it 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella

Well mom and dad aprove already they love her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen

I love them all

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

Cool

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

Hefty extra strong bags!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

Oh nooooo

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

; )

Reviewer: Edwards_Love_101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

OMFG, I've been playing catch-up on this story all weekend, since I came across it on Friday afternoon...I absolutely love it!!! Thanks for sharing, and I eagerly anticipate the next installment!

~Helen xx

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

Wow.  Tanya????  Is this good or bad????  As for the mystery man, I'm really hoping Sam and crew get to him before he gets to her.

 

Noticed that they blocked one of your pics, but the shower sex pic was allowed to remain.  Can't even imagine how hot the other one must have been.

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

oh my...

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3

AWESOME!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

I knew Tanya was working with the stalker

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

OMGosh!  What was Tanya thinking?  Are does she work for Bella's stalker? I finally caught up with the chapters last night.  So glad to get this update today. But I want you to update again soon. This is kind of a cliffy. Loving this story. 

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

Well I was all about to compliment tanya for being professional  but skankya appears.   Silly belly running.   Should have gone to the girls.   Got hope she doesn't get amnesia from the crash.   Grrr  for stupid stalker

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

poor Bella

Reviewer: vwatt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

I thought there might be something up with Tanya. Poor Bella!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

Hope Ms Denali is professional and doesnt try to cause trouble.  hmm the Mystery POV huh?  wonder what he is going to try to pull

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

Bella likes when Edward is demanding in the bedroom.  Wondering if he has a DOM side to him. Hmmmm! Lol. Who is this mystery person? ? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

Something tells me Aro isnot going to be happy about Bella quitting

 

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Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time

Boy once they started with the sex, they can't quit. Lol. To be young and in love again.  lol. I would love to read about Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose honeymoon.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One

Their 1st time was perfect.  at first I thought it was James. Then he was killed. Then I thought it was the orderly but now I am thinking that maybe it is Dr. Aro. Can't wait to find out more.  The plot thickens. Lol

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

Hmmn

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3

Love love loved this wedding.  Everything was perfect. Loved the pictures. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2

Loved all the gifts. Love all the Scottish references. My husband's family is originallyrics from Scotland.  They are from the Fyfe clan, the same as Tom Selleck.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding

Thank you for the invite. I will accept it. Can not wait to attend the wedding.  Lpl

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives

Lol. Loved what the boys gad to do. I was hoping that the cow would put up some sort of fight. Maybe chase them around the pasture.  Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?

Loved the dresses.  Where was the picture of Bella's dress? I am really loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

So it was not James who was taking the pictures.  Who was the orderly? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party

OMGosh!  What is going on?  So everyone has met James. Glad Edward has security for the girls. Again,  so glad I do not have to wait for an update.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over

Glad Alice already had their dresses made.  What was in the package Bella picked up at her door? ? Is it from James? Who is threatening Edward's life?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen

Love how they are telling everyone.  I am sooo glad that I do not have to wait for an update.  I am so off to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen

Perfect! !!!!!!!! I am glad that Esme told Bella about the"gift". So that she would understand what happened when they teached.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time

Wow,  Edward made big plans without talking to Bella.  I know over the years they have talked about houses but hope nothing changed for Bella.  Lol. Loving this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends

Love love love it!  I was wondering when they were going to call/talk to each other. 

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue

I am glad that the logging company paid for their negligence. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On

I meant to tell you in the last chapter that the house looked amazing.

I am glad that she and Edward are forming a bond.  I find it strange that none of the boys came home for Christmas.  



Author's Response:

Thanks, I love finding pictures that help the story bloom more.  I can recall several holiday (even Christmas) when my children were away at college having to visit them or taking a vacation away from home.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love

Oh no. Bless her heart.  That is so sad. You have moved time along in this chapter.  I am assuming that Bella still has not met any of boys.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and no she hasn't met the boys.....the force of the gift is at work....I hope will enjoy the rest of the chapters I have posted.  I have chapter 23 at the reader and beta so maybe tomorrow or Monday for another update. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella

Small world.  I just knew that Edward and Bella were going to meet.

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

; )

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen

Glad to know that the boys are following the rules.  

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Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

This story sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

I'm assumng mystery POV is the part timer from the hospital.  I hopt you won't do theobvious thing and have Tanya make a play for Edward.  I wonder if she is working with mystery POV

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

:)

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

Amazing first day back at work and play.

Who's the crazy, delusional stalker I wonder? He really scares me for Bella.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

OMG! I love this! I wonder how great Edward's new assistant will really be? And what about the mystery pov? Can you say, super creepy? ;) SO FREAKIN EXCITED FOR ANOTHER UPDATE!! :)=)

Reviewer: emmettsvampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One

Dam good story i love ff like this sooo romantic :) btw we have the same beta Becky Harrill  we wrote a ff together she recomended ur stories hope u will read ours : Forbidden Love 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

; )

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

It was sheer luck I found you and this story. What a wonderful storyline...the history, the wedding ceremony. Just the right amount of love and angst. You are a very talented writer in my opinion. I am looking forward to the rest of the story and more from you. Thank you for taking time to write this for us!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

Good,  sweet chapter! 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

love this story could not stop reading it

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

So, it is not related to Edward, but a stalker who existed prior to her meeting Edward.  hmmm.  Thank you for the update.  Of course, stealiing someone's panties makes me squiggy.  *ew*

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

Great update 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

Wonderful! Now who is stalking her?

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

I really love it!! I am dying to find out more about Bella's stalker!! I can't wait for another update!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

Glad she decided to just volunteer her time rather than go back to the hospital.   Hope Sam finds the sleeze soon.

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Date: 19 Mar 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time

I hope u update soon 

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Date: 14 Mar 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time

Well hell of a honeymoon!!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time

I have no idea why you were worried about writing lemons, you are truly talented at it.  Loved the honeymoon, and Swan Castle was a beautiful touch.  Now back to reality, and probably finding out who the scumbag is!!!!!

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Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One

Excellent lemonade my dear.  Who the hell is this guy??????

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Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3

Simply beautiful, stunning, and so classic.  Loved all the Scottish culture you wove throughout the ceremony.  Well done.

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