Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart
Poor Bella
Date: 07 Apr 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart
I'm holding out hope that there is another tracking device in her ring. A backup in case of emergency or if the bracelet ends up exactly where it did.
Date: 07 Apr 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart
This is awesome! I am excited for more!! Mike is gonna get his ass kicked when they find Bella!! :)
Date: 05 Apr 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
well who is tanya working with i wonder
Date: 05 Apr 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
well we have no clues so I can only keep reading
Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
oh to marry money lol
Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
the orderly?
Date: 05 Apr 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over
whirlwind
Date: 05 Apr 2015 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
wow
Date: 04 Apr 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
wow, I am forced to wait on your other story and started this
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
pure torture! I need more!
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
He should let Alice and Rosalie have a go at Tanya. Hopefully He will find Bella soon.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
How can Bella be so stupid? If she loved Edward enough, she would have yelled at Tanya, not Edward. She would have let him explain. Did she really think Edward, Esme, Carlisle, Jasper, Emmett, Rose, and Alice all lied to her? Her situation is all on her.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
Kick that bitch out fast Bella should have stayed there and beat the Shit out off her. Poor Edward didn't do anything. What is this creep going to do to get
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
Life is going so good
Date: 03 Apr 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
There is no place like home lol. Wow is this freak that is after her
Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
what a great time so cool him finding the Swan castle for her.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
Great begining. Is it Aro?
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
Hmmmm Alec or Felix maybe???
Date: 02 Apr 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
very cool I love traditions. Now on to the honeymoon lol
Date: 02 Apr 2015 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue
Do the boys never go home and see their parents, not even for Christmas. Edward and Jasper had just finished their first year of college when their parents met Bella.
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
I wish my husband would remember I'm always right lol
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding
That is quite the announcement
Date: 02 Apr 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives
Love cow tipping lol
Date: 01 Apr 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
Chapter 24 please!! I wanna know who this creeper is!
Date: 01 Apr 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
OH MY HOLY Effin trash bag! WOW!! This is freakin fantastic!! I am freaking the freak out here!! I am dying for more! :)
Date: 01 Apr 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen
This sounds so good.
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy it. I will be posting again later in the week. Also, I will also be posting pic, but I don't know when.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?
I think they surprised every one lol
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
It has to be the ordily but who is he I thought is was James you got me lol. Is Bella the reason Edward was getting death treats in New York?
Date: 31 Mar 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party
What great plans. Edward is going to want to kill someone. I think Bella is going to find out about her security now.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over
What was in the package
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen
Three weddings in one day love it .
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
Hunter is a creeper OMG. My heart was breaking for Bella after she was told about the gift. So excited for her to see the house that Edward built for her with Roses help. Rose is in trouble lol
Date: 30 Mar 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time
So happy they finely talked in person and I am amazed that they keept it from his parents for so long
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends
I want to live there lol
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue
King is scum so glad they got him to pay. Now they are getting to know each other fun stuff
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On
Love the connection they have even though text. I love how his parents feel about her
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love
OMG that is so sad
Date: 30 Mar 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
Loved it
Date: 30 Mar 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella
Well mom and dad aprove already they love her.
Date: 30 Mar 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen
I love them all
Date: 30 Mar 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
Cool
Date: 30 Mar 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
Hefty extra strong bags!
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
Oh nooooo
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
; )
Date: 30 Mar 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
OMFG, I've been playing catch-up on this story all weekend, since I came across it on Friday afternoon...I absolutely love it!!! Thanks for sharing, and I eagerly anticipate the next installment!
~Helen xx
Date: 29 Mar 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
Wow. Tanya???? Is this good or bad???? As for the mystery man, I'm really hoping Sam and crew get to him before he gets to her.
Noticed that they blocked one of your pics, but the shower sex pic was allowed to remain. Can't even imagine how hot the other one must have been.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
oh my...
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
AWESOME!
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
I knew Tanya was working with the stalker
Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
OMGosh! What was Tanya thinking? Are does she work for Bella's stalker? I finally caught up with the chapters last night. So glad to get this update today. But I want you to update again soon. This is kind of a cliffy. Loving this story.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
Well I was all about to compliment tanya for being professional but skankya appears. Silly belly running. Should have gone to the girls. Got hope she doesn't get amnesia from the crash. Grrr for stupid stalker
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
poor Bella
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So
I thought there might be something up with Tanya. Poor Bella!
Date: 29 Mar 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
Hope Ms Denali is professional and doesnt try to cause trouble. hmm the Mystery POV huh? wonder what he is going to try to pull
Date: 29 Mar 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
Bella likes when Edward is demanding in the bedroom. Wondering if he has a DOM side to him. Hmmmm! Lol. Who is this mystery person? ?
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
Something tells me Aro isnot going to be happy about Bella quitting
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
Boy once they started with the sex, they can't quit. Lol. To be young and in love again. lol. I would love to read about Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose honeymoon.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
Their 1st time was perfect. at first I thought it was James. Then he was killed. Then I thought it was the orderly but now I am thinking that maybe it is Dr. Aro. Can't wait to find out more. The plot thickens. Lol
Date: 29 Mar 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
Hmmn
Date: 29 Mar 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
Love love loved this wedding. Everything was perfect. Loved the pictures.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
Loved all the gifts. Love all the Scottish references. My husband's family is originallyrics from Scotland. They are from the Fyfe clan, the same as Tom Selleck.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding
Thank you for the invite. I will accept it. Can not wait to attend the wedding. Lpl
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives
Lol. Loved what the boys gad to do. I was hoping that the cow would put up some sort of fight. Maybe chase them around the pasture. Lol.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?
Loved the dresses. Where was the picture of Bella's dress? I am really loving this story.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
So it was not James who was taking the pictures. Who was the orderly?
Date: 28 Mar 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party
OMGosh! What is going on? So everyone has met James. Glad Edward has security for the girls. Again, so glad I do not have to wait for an update. Lol
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over
Glad Alice already had their dresses made. What was in the package Bella picked up at her door? ? Is it from James? Who is threatening Edward's life?
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen
Love how they are telling everyone. I am sooo glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am so off to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
Perfect! !!!!!!!! I am glad that Esme told Bella about the"gift". So that she would understand what happened when they teached.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time
Wow, Edward made big plans without talking to Bella. I know over the years they have talked about houses but hope nothing changed for Bella. Lol. Loving this story.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends
Love love love it! I was wondering when they were going to call/talk to each other.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue
I am glad that the logging company paid for their negligence.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On
I meant to tell you in the last chapter that the house looked amazing.
I am glad that she and Edward are forming a bond. I find it strange that none of the boys came home for Christmas.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I love finding pictures that help the story bloom more. I can recall several holiday (even Christmas) when my children were away at college having to visit them or taking a vacation away from home.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love
Oh no. Bless her heart. That is so sad. You have moved time along in this chapter. I am assuming that Bella still has not met any of boys.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and no she hasn't met the boys.....the force of the gift is at work....I hope will enjoy the rest of the chapters I have posted. I have chapter 23 at the reader and beta so maybe tomorrow or Monday for another update.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella
Small world. I just knew that Edward and Bella were going to meet.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
; )
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen
Glad to know that the boys are following the rules.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
This story sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
I'm assumng mystery POV is the part timer from the hospital. I hopt you won't do theobvious thing and have Tanya make a play for Edward. I wonder if she is working with mystery POV
Date: 28 Mar 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
:)
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
Amazing first day back at work and play.
Who's the crazy, delusional stalker I wonder? He really scares me for Bella.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work
OMG! I love this! I wonder how great Edward's new assistant will really be? And what about the mystery pov? Can you say, super creepy? ;) SO FREAKIN EXCITED FOR ANOTHER UPDATE!! :)=)
Date: 26 Mar 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
Dam good story i love ff like this sooo romantic :) btw we have the same beta Becky Harrill we wrote a ff together she recomended ur stories hope u will read ours : Forbidden Love
Date: 23 Mar 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
; )
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
It was sheer luck I found you and this story. What a wonderful storyline...the history, the wedding ceremony. Just the right amount of love and angst. You are a very talented writer in my opinion. I am looking forward to the rest of the story and more from you. Thank you for taking time to write this for us!
Date: 22 Mar 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
Good, sweet chapter!
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
love this story could not stop reading it
Date: 21 Mar 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
So, it is not related to Edward, but a stalker who existed prior to her meeting Edward. hmmm. Thank you for the update. Of course, stealiing someone's panties makes me squiggy. *ew*
Date: 21 Mar 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
Great update
Date: 21 Mar 2015 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
Wonderful! Now who is stalking her?
Date: 20 Mar 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
I really love it!! I am dying to find out more about Bella's stalker!! I can't wait for another update!! :)
Date: 20 Mar 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
:)
Date: 20 Mar 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality
Glad she decided to just volunteer her time rather than go back to the hospital. Hope Sam finds the sleeze soon.
Date: 19 Mar 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
I hope u update soon
Date: 14 Mar 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
Well hell of a honeymoon!!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
I have no idea why you were worried about writing lemons, you are truly talented at it. Loved the honeymoon, and Swan Castle was a beautiful touch. Now back to reality, and probably finding out who the scumbag is!!!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
Excellent lemonade my dear. Who the hell is this guy??????
Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
Simply beautiful, stunning, and so classic. Loved all the Scottish culture you wove throughout the ceremony. Well done.