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Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 35

Good to see Emmett alive. Bet he will have a massive case of PTSD tho:(

Reviewer: csp4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 32

Shit! lol lol These people are crazy::))

Reviewer: csp4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 31

Rose is truly an evil bitch:(

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 35

good

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 35

I apologize for missing an update and not reviewing both. Just know, I'm so happy you are back.
For so few words per chapter this story is one hell of a ride! I know if one of my close family was in Bella's position, I wouldn't give up until I found them and my family would do the same. Missed you and I am so happy your back. Love all your stories!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 35

Omg seriously that was awesome 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 35

Makes me want to cry so happy he is back

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 34

 

 

Thank god they found him but what kind of shape is he in

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 34

Yeah Emmett made it out!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 33

Does Emmett make it?  Does the baby survive?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 32

Bella is going to be in trouble again for not listening!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 34

good

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 33

well head on concrete will prove to be a big problem.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 33

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 33

Oh shit

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 32

; )

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 32

Aro is crazy

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 32

Oh damn!  Explosives!  I so was not expecting that for some reason.  Perhaps because he's at home....why wear them there unless you expect to need them?  Is there a rat in Carlisle's crew or did Aeo just notice all the lights out, etc.?  Great move here and marvelous cliffy!  Tension?!  Uh, yes! I'd say!!!  Well done!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 32

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

:):)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 31

Happy belated birthday!  

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 31

Sussinct chapter, but boy, does it get the job done!  We know hoe angry Bella is, how twisted Rose and Aro probably are, how frightened Bella is for her brother yet how she I tends to be there for him.  We also know that Edward is more than a bit worried about her and her new nickname is making the go around!  Thank you so much !!  You take such care with each and every chapter!   By the way, it sounds as if your birthday rocked - I'm glad!  May you have many more that just keep getting better!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 31

So sad that Emmett maybe her hurt in more ways than just his body.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

Bella needs to be strong, but she also needs to be patient and listen. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 31

Happy late birthday .  I hope they can put Emmett back together again.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 31

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 31

good

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

They're now calling you The Optometrist." Yep, I get all squeamish when I read mafia style torture but there usually ends up being some comedy to take the edge off::))

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh Bella be smart and cool. Cool head fair better.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

My don't piss off Bella the men maybe not so mean.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

Bella needs to cool her heels and listen for once.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 30

I love her new name!  It only makes her more bad ass!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 30

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 30

That is a great nickname.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

good

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 29

That was by far the best revenge you could have given to Rose!  I love it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

He better remember never to piss her off lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 29

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 28

good

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 28

sigh.. I was ready for them to throttle Rose..

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward and Bella are on the same side I love it!

Reviewer: mjlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

can't wait for more.   

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 28

Carlisle is iritated with them but he has to be proud to

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 28

; )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

I hope Bella does some good torture techniques on her!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 27

I cant wait till they get her back



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 27

can't wait to see how b handles rose



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 27

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

; )



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

Wonderful!  Rosalie is in for it now!  You've done a great job of building the suspense  and the tension.  I'm looking forward to more!  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

I love this crazy ass Bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 26

Bella is wise I hope edward is paying attention lol



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

smart thinking B. I am glad Edward is finally listening to you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your reviews. I treasure every single one of them xx

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2015 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

good

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 25

well good job that could have been so much worse on her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

Good ridens he is dying a faster death than if edward had time with him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for posting again so quickly I was on pins and needles wondering what was going to happen next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for much for all your review. xx

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

good

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh yummy!  Love the action and the drama!  Thank you for the updates!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

oh shit now what

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

can't wait to see what b does with rose

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella the brain

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

together.. perfect

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

well I am shocked in this chapter. Rose has flipped sides..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

Edward is by her side how sweet

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

; )

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

Finally, Edward understands why Bella has been acting the way she has!  Truth be told, I'd be surprised if Carlisle didn't expect them to try what they are.  Great job!

 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) :)

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love. That's all I have for this story is love. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 21

; )

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 21

So me might be tied up literally! I am glad that Bella is going to end Rosalie! If not her then Edward!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 21

I feel for Bella; knowing her brother may still be a prisoner and has been used by his wife and Aro?!  God help the when she catches up with them - especially Rose!  Great work!  I love it!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 21

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

:) :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great story can not wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 21

She is one mad little spitfire.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

; )

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

strange time for that.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

Only badass Bella chocolate & blood go so well together!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

I just love the way you blend the heavy drama with pregnancy cravings!  The only thing I craved was cheese - but to be fair, I couldn't get enough!  Loved it!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 20

lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 20

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 20

No big deal guy getting beat she wants chocolate lol

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella is completely in queen bee mode! 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

; )

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 19

Yea she listens and so does Edward..

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2015 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'll just bet Tony would rather deal with Edward than with Bella!  Edward and Bella shou.d learn to work together as area, more often - look how simple that was!  She had background info, pointed and behaved, and he took care of the strong arm stuff and has more thank few questions I'm sure!  Wonderful chapter - also funny watching how these two learn to tag team!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

It seems to go better when they work together. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

Bella needs to stop pulling the I'm going to your daddy card. She is careless. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

good

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