Date: 19 Feb 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is so happy with herself to cute
Date: 19 Feb 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Very interesting! I find myself wondering if Emmett is still at the house! Perhaps that is why Rose almost never leaves? If Emmett is being held there, perhaps Aro is in charge and has him held there. Kudos! You have my head spinning like a carousel! I love it!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
thank you for the update...What is Rose upto?
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
What are the names for? So rose is now a partner in crime with Aro or is Aro holding something over Roses head?
Date: 18 Feb 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
She will get some answers
Date: 18 Feb 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
hope b gets to kick rose's ass
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are working together thats the way
Date: 17 Feb 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
He will not like it at all.
Date: 16 Feb 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
They are both alive.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Omg love this story can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Feb 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Finally the have a little reconciling! Knowing Bella it won't last long!
Date: 15 Feb 2015 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is the way it should be talk to each other reliy on each other.
Date: 15 Feb 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Aww! So sweet and while they discuss the horrific, they manage to feel the soft and gentle. Her promise now is bound to mean a lot more to both of them. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really like this Carlisle!
Hope Emmett & possibly Rose are ok
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
"...if it weren't for the white coat I would not have recognized he was a doctor. He looked more like a butcher..." lol Bella's funny when she's stressed:)
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Okay! Rose is alive! That would also explain why Emmett didn't want Bella to see her the last time she tried. A Rose-lookalike? Curiouser and curiouser... Marvelous drama here and a dutifully penitent Edward! Wonderful!
Date: 14 Feb 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
Did rose kill Dick? This is getting soooo good!
Date: 14 Feb 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
Rose is in on it
Date: 14 Feb 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is feeling very smug right about now!
Date: 14 Feb 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think it is safe to say shit hit the fan!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yup! I sorta knew Edward would be counting to 10! Bella isn't considering that the one who doesn't want him found is Emmett!! Love the drama and the cliffy here. I can't wait to read how Edward handles what Bella kept from him.
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Like a couple little kids lol
Date: 13 Feb 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
He will not win this fight I hope Carlisle can get them to compromise
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for all your wonderful reviews. I just want you to know I read and appreicate them all x x
Date: 13 Feb 2015 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
good
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for all your wonderful reviews. I just want you to know I read and appreicate them all x x
Date: 13 Feb 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
can't wait to see how e fully reacts
Date: 12 Feb 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh Bella you are in sooooo much trouble!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for all your wonderful reviews. I just want you to know I read and appreicate them all x x
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story sand I loved betrayal. I get so excited when I see an updated in my email. Thank you.
Author's Response:
No, thank you!!!! x x x
Date: 12 Feb 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
Barbie cant hide anything from Edward or he will end up dead. Edward is so worried about her.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
; )
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Thank you very much for all your wonderful reviews. I just want you to know I read and appreicate them all x x
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
I thought she would start up again as soon as dick called. Now she isn't going to be able to start. I do wonder if Emmett & rose are in hiding
Date: 12 Feb 2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent! The ending here is perfection. You don't even give us a chance to see how Bella will react to this. Too perfect! You've given us a true cliffy. And. Many many questions! What will be Edard's reaction when he finds out she wouldn't just drop it? How will he and Carlisle handle it? Will Bella wind up on house-arrest? Seriously, this could not be better. Kudos on a fiction well done and well handled!
Author's Response:
I heart your reviews so much. You make my work sound good. Thank you x x x
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Now she won't be able to stop and it tells me Emmett is alive
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
I keep wondering if Bella's pregnancy doesn't play right into Edward's hands. Concentrate on a baby, forget about your brother., don't investigate, don't keep looking. Timing is everything they say! Wonderful work! As I pointed out, you've got me going in circles. I love that in a piece of work. Keep me guessing. Kudos!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is emotional on her best day. You add pregnancy hormones and she is crazy. Poor Edward.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bella can't get off the drama roller coaster.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
:) I hope you're feeling better
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
So happy she is thinking about the baby
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
lol lol lol Crazy pregnant lady!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Maybe the pregnancy will make her a little sweeter? Nahhh I don't think so!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
If she has a hard pregnancy she is going to be miserable!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was thinking the same thing! Now how is she going to deal with it? Edward is going to be over the top protective!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
excellent. later
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
I just read all of Betrayal and up to this point of Revenge. There's only one thing to say...I'm hooked! I am loving story! I didn't see the pregnancy thing coming, but I can't wait to see how over protective Edward becomes! Loved Bella's meltdown over chocolate! I'm truly grateful I never went off the deep end like that. I'm sure I would've been left all by myself! Just kidding! I really hope Bella is right about Emett! She'll be more than devastated if she finds out he's truly dead! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awwwwhh! Speaking from personal experience, my husband made it to one doctor's visit with me. The other visits he was too busy at work to be there. Having him there was easier and happier - a shared experience, if you will. If he's smart, Edward will readjust his priorities! Loved it!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Being pregnant and being happy about it is one thing, but being unsure or afraid of it will only mess with your hormones and your mind. To be fair, I can understand why Bella doesn't want to pregnant. With all she went through losing Emmett and Rose her life is far more uncertain and up in the air now. Hopefully, she'll come around and realize that while she may have lost her brother and sister-in-law, this child is her family as well! Great chapter handled very well and realistically!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's he happy about becoming a dad.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
15 test lol talk about over kill poor girl is going crazy now she has a baby to worry about to
Date: 09 Feb 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Leave it to Carlisle to explain the obvious to the confused! I was wondering when they were going to figure it out! Love this fiction!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG I LOVE this chapter and story can not wait for next one or few (LOL ) .Just loved it .
Date: 08 Feb 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
excellent. until next time.
Date: 08 Feb 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Lets hope so.. Either that or she is NUTS.
Date: 08 Feb 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
She is prefers that explains it I think edward will forgive her
Date: 08 Feb 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
was waiting for that. thinking e is going to get more watchful of her now =)
Date: 08 Feb 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
When things get this tense, you know that someone is hiding something! Loving the sequel! Bella in theses chapters is a real character! Funny, deadly, and mysterious!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG love love your this your stories are great can not wait for more.
Date: 08 Feb 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
excellent. later
Date: 08 Feb 2015 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella always has to ruffle feathers! I hope she gets another box of chocolates before she leaves!
Date: 08 Feb 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
trying to remember who alec is. good chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2015 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Shit is going to get ugly fast she is out of chocolate lol
Date: 08 Feb 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
He is a smart man and he is lucky she loves him. Aro has Emmett hide somewhere but why?
Date: 07 Feb 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Gotta love this edward and bella. Great chapter. Thx! Next.......... ;o)
Date: 07 Feb 2015 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Edward the can of worms you just opened! Tsk tsk! Very cute about the chocolates!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is gonna be a handful.
Sherry
Date: 07 Feb 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
They really have a strained relationship.
Date: 07 Feb 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
So their aggression continues! I love it!
Date: 06 Feb 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sorry not to have responded sooner, but real life has been hectic! I'm SO glad you are writing a sequel to Betrayal! It was a stunning fiction and practically screamed for one! I'm still trying to decide at this point if Emmett disappeared on his own, Edward helped him, or Carlisle had him killed. One way or the other, I look forward to the ride to come. Thank you for putting so much heart into your work!