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Reviewer: Technofobe Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks, lovely



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Thank you so much for reading! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 26

It was such a happy ending for the girl who had a hard life growing up which made me so happy if all stories are like this one.



Author's Response:

Yes! We felt that after everything she had suffered, Bella definitely deserved her happy ending. Plus we both love an E/B HEA, so we like to write them as well. Thank you so much for reading! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh No!!! Phil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2016 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 26

thank you so much for sharing this AWESOME!!! story with us ;D



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Thank you so much for reading and for leaving us this wonderful review. :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: Mounds01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 26

Very good story.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

I absolutely loved this story..new reader, I couldn't stop...I'm happy it was already finished when I started to read it...so I could just read it all the way through...bravo!!!Amazing



Author's Response:

We're so glad you found us and gave us a try. It means a lot to know you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for letting us know! And yeah I prefer completed stories, so I know how great it is to just be able to read straight through. It makes it so much better since I have no patience. Lol. Thanks again! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

Hi ...

I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this story!

Plus I'm awfully sorry for not having commented on each chapter, but I got so engulfed with it, that I just couldn't stop reading until it was finished ...

Took me three days ...

You really are a good writer, you know how to let a story enfokd, how to discribe everything, ...

Thank you very much for sharing this story!

Lots of greetings from Germany,

leinchen

 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh! Thanks so much for reading and we appreciate just knowing you enjoyed it. I can't tell you how much we love knowing that you got engrossed in the story. Thank you so much for giving us a chance! XOXO

Greeting from the south here in the USA,

Lissa and Fyre

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ladies another wonderful tale I toast your efforts with a glass (well bottle really)🍷🍷of merlot. Fyre I just voted for leftward again. I hope to see this over on twific recs next. I await your next story happy valentines from a fand84;a039;💕d84;a039;💕

Author's Response:

You are so sweet!!! We're so glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the vote for SLT. Thanks for reading and giving us a chance. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I really enjoyed it! I hope to read more of your work in the future ;)

Author's Response:

It was absolutely our pleasure. We're so happy you liked it. You will definitely be seeing more from us in the future. ;) Thanks! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great, great story, I loved it all!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. It was something very different for us and really out of comfort zones, so to know we gave you something you could enjoy means a lot. Thank you so much for reading!  XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

Everything I thought their wedding would be, and just so romantic! You guys did a fabulous job!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 26

:)  loved this story 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad. Thank you so much!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

Married on a beach in Belize, surrounded by family and friends, sounds like a great wedding! It's a big relief to Edward at least, that Bella doesn't want to be a street cop. She will be perfect as an advocate for children. It will appease Esme to plan Alice's wedding and Rose and Emmett will be wonderful parents. Edward and Bella will most likely be great ones also!



Author's Response:

I would have loved to have been married on a beach in Belize. Lol. I was married outdoors, but definitely not anywhere that nice. Edward will certainly be able to rest a lot easier knowing Bella will be off the streets and safe. Everything is working out for everyone and they're all getting their well deserved happiness now. Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! We appreciate you sticking with us. Not far to go now. :)

XOXO, Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

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I'm so glad you review here too since we can't reply to our FFn reviews. Thanks so much for reading!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

What a relief, not only for Bella, but the rest of us as well! Now those bastards are dead, and Marcus maybe on a better path, things are looking up! I see some good stuff coming down the road at Bella and Edward, Charlie, Rose and Emmett, Jasper and Alice! Have a wonderful holidays and see you in the new year!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

Heads up, Edward! Doesn't the name Phil sound a bit familiar?I will bet money on it being that evil bastard step-father of Bella's! Charlie might make the connection faster because he's hunting Phil and Renee. I hope everyone gets really careful from now on!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with us and these characters. XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

This was a lot for Bella to get through, for herself and for Charlie, Edward and even Maggie. All she has experienced has left her, not a broken shell, but a strong, loving woman eager to help others. That's not a bad place to be, in my opinion.



Author's Response:

I can't tell you how happy you make me. I really want everyone to see how incredibly strong Bella is, and you do. She's come so far and her past didn't break her. Now she has a good man, good friends and she has the opportunity to do something important with her life. Definitely not a bad place to be. Thanks so much! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 20

That is the glue that holds them together, the ability to really talk to each other, even about the tough things! Their love for each other doesn't hurt, either! Bella is good with everyone at the shelter, so that would be a great alternative, if the police thing doesn't work out!



Author's Response:

Communication is key in any relationship and while it took them a bit, they got there. They love each other fiercely and are such passionate people that it can make talking a little difficult sometimes... or maybe it makes the listening part a bit harder. Lol. But that love means they will do whatever it takes to work through things and stay together. And Bella definitely has a lot to offer in whatever career she chooses. Hopefully she'll choose the one best suited for her. With her support system, I'm sure she'll figure things out. ;) Thanks for reading and your reviews. I love them! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 21

So sad.  Poor Maggie



Author's Response:

I know. Poor Maggie. At least she's safe now and can start a new, better life. Thanks! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thanks! We appreciate you continuing to read and always being great about leaving us a review. :)

XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

I love when they fight like that! That conversation between Jasper and Edward will be one to eavesdrop on. There are a lot of things they need to talk over, and not just about Peter and James, but his and Alice's relationship. I look forward to who wins in the battle between Bella and Edward, also!



Author's Response:

LOL, yeah they're both stubborn and well, Edward didn't o a very good job with the way he approached it. It only made her more determined. Hopefully they will both settle down and try to be a little more rational next time they discuss it, especially with some of the tension relieved. hehe. See you this weekend :)

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! So gla you enjoyed it, see you this weekend :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all your suport, always! See you this weekend :)

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for continuing to read. You are a Rockstar! We appreciate it so much. XOXO

Lissa 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thankfully everyone is going to be okay. Provided, that is, Bella can talk to Edward about becoming a cop! Bella and Charlie are going to end up being at least, friends, which is really good.



Author's Response:

I definitely think this is a turning point for Bella and Charlie. And yes, thankfully everyone will be okay physically. Now if we can just stop Bella from killing Edward. Lol. These two are equally stubborn, so no doubt things will get wild. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! We really appreciate your constant support. XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you somuch for reading and revewing! We appreciate so much that you stopped by to let us know you're out there. See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! We love knowing that you're sticking with us on this journey. 

XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thank heaven the cavalry arrived in time! I don't think any of these guys will say a word about  the end of James, and I whole heartedly agree with them! Now lets get everyone patched up and  lock up the rest of the bad guys!



Author's Response:

I know! They arrived just barely in time but Charlie knrew James couldn't leave there alive. definitely all lips are sealed and let's hope everyone is doing okay. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

I know! They arrived just barely in time but Charlie knrew James couldn't leave there alive. definitely all lips are sealed and let's hope everyone is doing okay. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

I knew damn good and well that James would find the cabin! Where is Jasper when you need him?I had to chuckle when you said you and Tyre would be in Witness Seclusion!



Author's Response:

We definitely needed seclusion. So many people wanted to hurt us. Lol. Everyone seems much happier now after a little murder... err I mean justified homicide. ;) Thanks so much for reading and staying with us even when it gets bumpy. XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 



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Thank you so much for all of your support! Always!

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

I hope Jasper hasn't given them away 



Author's Response:

TWCS was having issues last week so I missed this. I apologize! As you know by now, Jasper definitely didn't give them away. It would have been too cruel of us to bring him in just to make him bad. ;) We very much appreciate you continuing this journey with us. XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks!

Author's Response:

You're welcome and thank you for stopping in to let us know you're reading! Lots coming up, see you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

What else could it have been? Aro got James out of jail somehow and now he's in the wind! Bella is probably in a lot of danger so Edward is going into full protection mode, I'm sure! It figures that life was going on too well right now! Just please don't let anything too awful happen to Bella or Edward! They have had enough to deal with so far!



Author's Response:

We'll definitely find out more about Aro eventually. For now James is certainly a threat and hopefully the guys can keep everyone safe. No doubt Edward and Charlie will do whatever it takes to protect Bella and put James where he belongs. And yeah life can't go too well for long, but hopefully this will just make everyone stronger... as long as everyone survives. ;) 

Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2015 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

That's not good news



Author's Response:

Definitely not good. Let's hope Bella is kept safe... Thanks for everything! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with us. 😀 XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

This chapter was chock full of goodness! Alice's confession, her and Rose and Bella bonding over shared stories, Charlie's tale of Bella's beginnings. Of course, the best you saved for last, Edward's proposal and them finally making love again. I think they probably appreciated it more after abstaining for so long! The fashion shoots for Alice, being paid in clothes, wasn't bad either! See you in a couple weeks!



Author's Response:

We're so glad you enjoyed it. It was so important to have Bella have a strong support system outside of Edward. I think having great friends you can confide in and trust is so important. Charlie is certainly making an effort. He's made some mistakes, but hopefully they can work on building something. As for Edward and Bella... they went back and did things in a more appropriate way and I think it was good for them both. But they're solid and it's time for them to move forward. Good thing too since I doubt either of them would have lasted much longer. Lol. Thanks so much for reading! XOXO 

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Author's Response:

Thanks lovely lady! XOXO 

Lissa 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sticking with us! *mwah*

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 13

I can understand why Esme asked the questions she did, and so did Bella. Mom's want their children safe and happy, bottom line. I thought the dinner went pretty well, and Jasper got some of the same grilling. Seeing slimeball Jacob Black was kind of creepy but maybe they won't run into him again.



Author's Response:

Exactly! Bella was definitely not what Esme ever expected for Edward. She was allowed to be a bit shocked and question things a little. Yeah she probably could have used a tiny bit more tact, but Bella seemed to understand... which hopefully showed signs of her maturity. Really though, Esme just wants him healthy and happy. Once she sees that he is, I think she's okay. And yes, Bella definitely wasn't the only one on the end of some interrogation. Lol. Let's hope Jake uses some of the smarts that got him through law school to know he needs to leave Bella alone. Lol. Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

Now I'm seriously curious as to what James held over Peterall those years, someting so damning that he forced Jasper's brother to become a cop! Aro's little brother knows more than he told them but won't spill it all. Must be about his big brother the attorney! Edward and Bella seem to be doing well, too bad her dadisn't that lucky!



Author's Response:

Yes, a lot going on here and things will start to fall intoplace as we move along. Everything will come out in one fell swoop. Edward and bella are building their relationship squite well and moving forward. Poor Chaarlie, hopefully, she'll cut him some slack at some point. Thanks so much! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Thank you so much for your constant support! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks as always! *mwah* XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks! I am lovin' this story ;)

Author's Response:

We're so thrilled you're enjoying the story. We're having so much fun writing it. Thanks for continuing to read and for your reviews. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 11

Especially for Alice's sake I hope Jasper is as good a guy as he seems. If Bella can bring herself to come to an understanding with Charlie, life is going to be pretty great for her and Edward! I admire Bella's determination to be a better person.



Author's Response:

Let's hope Jasper is the good man he claims to be. We'll find out for sure eventually... ;) Charlie definitely seems to care for Bella, so maybe with time she will come to desire some form of relationship with him. And it appears Bella has finally found good people to surround herself with and she's motivated to make her life better. She's strong enough that she could do it no matter what, but having people who love her and care for her will certainly help in her pursuits and goals. Thanks so much for reading and for your review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading! We appreciate so much that you stopped in to let us know. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 10

:)



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Thank you so much for all of your support :)

fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 10

Smoke deserves to be top ten, it was a great story and I very much enjoyed it! Edward and Bella's first date went quite well, I thought and the plan to double with Rose and Emmett is a good one. I can't wait to see what punishment Edward is planning for Bella sending what must have been pretty provacative pictures!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much. I guess we'll see if it makes it in there. 

I think the date went well, also. They had a good time with a little flirting and food and then some good clear the air convo. Definitely some rose and Emmett double dating to be done and punishment is definitely in order lol. Thanks so much for reading and always reviewing. We appreciate it so much and LOVE reading your thoughts :)

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2015 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting us know you always read each chapter! :)

Also... just wanted to say that your name threw me off when I first saw it. I didn't look closely enough and thought Fyre had reviewed on our own fic. Lol.

XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

Charlie is probably lucky Bella didn't take a swing at him! She was really angry at the news of his being her father and that he had made Edward keep quiet about it, too. Bella and Rose are developing a better relationship and it's nice she will be working some at the shelter. This first date is okay so far, but I sense that it is about to become much more interesting soon!



Author's Response:

Charlie's definitely lucky she didn't do worse. Lol. Time will tell if she'll ever give him a chance to redeem himself.

Having a real friend is something new for Bella and I think she found a really good one in Rose. She seems to truly have Bella's best interests at heart.

I think working at the shelter will help Bella feel more like a part of society and help her maybe grow as a person and maybe even start to understand herself better through meeting other women who come from bad situations.

As for the date... nothing ever seems to go simply for these two. Lol. We'll see how things go now that things are out in the open.

Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Author's Response:

You're so good to us. Thank you! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2015 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!!! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Author's Response:

Thanks so much for supporting us on here, too. see you next chapter :) :) :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Amazing that they managed to not totally get carried away! I hope Bella doesn't hurt Charlie too badly when he tells her the truth. I also hope she won't be angry with Edward. This idea of doing things the right way is very appealing, but he's kidding himself if he thinks they won't end their date in bed! Jasper isn't going to be happy to learn how his brother went to the dark side, either. Of course, Alice will soothe that hurt, I'm sure! See you soon!



Author's Response:

I know. Saved by Rose and Em LOL. Very soon we'll see how the Charlie situation gets handled. Will he tell her himself? We're hoping that once Bella realizes that sex isn't a requirement for men, that she might understand more about being in a relationship. We'll have to see how that goes for them ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, see you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 7 The Verdict

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for the review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 The Verdict

I'm hoping for just a very few more bumps in the road for Bella and Edward. Her to-do list seems quite reasonable and attainable, too. So glad she put getting Edward back at the top of said list!



Author's Response:

He's definitely the most important thing in her life. But she really does want to change her life and start fresh. Hopefully they will finally get some time to just be a normal couple... whatever normal is. Lol. Thanks so much for reading and for the review! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 The Verdict

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Author's Response:

Thanks! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks!

Author's Response:

No, thank you! And wow, our names are similar. We so appreciate you stopping in to let us know you're reading along, it really means a lot to us :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

Right you are, how careless of me not to notice that we never knew Officer Whitlock's first name! I can see why Charlie is enjoying this situation and Edward isn't. It was a bit judgmental of Rose to give Edward a bad time, without knowing all the facts. I'm so glad this trial is nearly through, because I'm looking forward to Edward and Bella working things out!



Author's Response:

No, definitely not careless! Hardly anyone else was even in the ballpark. It is a twisted way for Edward to get the point, but yeah, I think he understands Charlie a little better now. Rose was jumping the gun, but we have to remember that she has a rough past, so she might've made a bad assumption. We get the verdict next chapter ;) Hopefully, it won't take Edward and Bella long to make a new start after that. Thanks so much for reading along and leaving us reviews, we love them :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

loving this



Author's Response:

Yay, I am so happy to hear that! Can't imagine an Alice without her Jasper! Thanks so much for all your reviews!!! 

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you. We really appreciate the support. :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Considering the slimy defense attorney she had to deal with, I think Bella did a good job of testifying. She seems to have found a friend in Rose, too, after hearing her story.



Author's Response:

She did do pretty good holding her own against the defense. They were really trying to target her, but she held it together as best she could and ended up showing them who's boss. Lol. I think Rose can end up being a good friend for Bella, which is something she's probably never really had before and something she really deserves. Thank you for reading and we love knowing your thoughts! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

As long as the mystery pov does no harm , I'll wait and see who it is! I'm glad Chief Swan knows and more than glad that Emmett told him to go home. Edward was just driving himself crazy the way he was going!



Author's Response:

Hopefully the mystery POV will be a good person... we'll see. ;) Edward wants to be near Bella, but he definitely needs some real rest and time to relax and process a bit. Thanks for reading! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Author's Response:

Thanks! I always look forward to your smiley faces. :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

I don't know who that is?



Author's Response:

All will be revealed in due tome ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, we appreciate it so much :)

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks!

Author's Response:

You're so welcome. Thank you for reading and reviewing! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 4

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:) :) :) Your smiles make our day. Thank you soooooo much :)

Fyre

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Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Thanks bb! :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

Is this sibling of Bella's?  I hope Edward sneaks into her room at nite.



Author's Response:

Is it??? We shall see. Emmett wouldn't be very good at his job if Edward was able to sneak in. ;) Thanks so much for reading!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

Looks to me like Charlie is waiting until after the trial to tell Bella who he is. She will have some information for him as well, if she tells him her feelings for Edward. I hope this mystery POV isn't going to gum up the works, but I have a bad feeling about it! I really don't care how you guys work it out, I just want Bella and Edward together, just because they want to be and they deserve to be! See you next time!



Author's Response:

It's going to be a bumpy road for everyone, but we're both E/B lovers so hopefully things will work out for them. ;) I have a feeling Charlie is in for it when everything comes out... especially if he keeps pissing her off. Lol. Thanks so much for reading!!! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hopefully Emmett doesn't shoot him when he pulls up!



Author's Response:

Let's hope not.We'll see sometime soon. Chapter 3 is with the beta now and we can't wait to spring it on you all. Mysterious things in the works ;) Thanks so much for leaving us your thoughts, can't wait to hear from you again :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is sooo good! 



Author's Response:

Yayyyy! Thank you so much! We are so glad you decided to join us and can't wait to hear your thoughts as we move forward. Buckle up! See you soon :)

Fyre

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks!

Author's Response:

You're so welcome and thank you for letting us know you're readin this story!! See you with BPOV next :)

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

I knew Bella would not be thrilled with Edward being removed from protcting her! I hope she gives him a break about that, since he had no say in the matter. What the chief says is what has to happen. I loved that James learned his plan to kill Bella came to nothing, and that his goose is cooked!



Author's Response:

Edward definitely enjoyed telling James the info. Lol. As for our dear Edward and Bella, things might get bumpy for a while but the love will remain. ;) Thank you so much for reading and letting us know your thoughts. We love hearing from you. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am so glad you are continuing this story.. Love it



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and hope you like the continuation. We appreciate the support! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) :)



Author's Response:

You are awesomesauce! :) :) :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

well good story. I finish one of your stories and here is another one. I love crime types. LOL



Author's Response:

We have endless ideas. Lol. We just pick the ones we know we can carry all the way through and try to go with something a bit unique. Thank you so much for being a reader. I can't even tell you how awesome that it. :) XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Thanks ;)

Author's Response:

Yayyyy! Soeey we missed this onelast week. See you as soon as wecan with chapter 3 :)

Fyre

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you keep going with this one. Bella is going to have a lot to overcome.



Author's Response:

We're definitely continuing it and yes there's still lots of story to tell and quite a bit of it for Bella. Thanks so much for reading. We hope you enjoy the story. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) loved this.  So happy you are continuing it



Author's Response:

Thank you! So happy you are still reviewing u everywhere, it really means a lot to us!!! See you soon :)

 

Fyre

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a story! It looks like Bella killed Whitlock the same way Charlie wants to kill Edward! What the hell does he expect? They have been together for months and they fell for each other. Charlie just doesn't understand! I hope they can work all this out!



Author's Response:

I know, where's he been all these years? Thank you for checking this one out! Sounds like you might have enjoyed it? Definitely going to be different. We'll get 2 to you as soon as we can:)

Fyre



Author's Response:

I know, where's he been all these years? Thank you for checking this one out! Sounds like you might have enjoyed it? Definitely going to be different. We'll get 2 to you as soon as we can:)

Fyre

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