Date: 20 Feb 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love your story so far. Just a tip, RNs should be officers not enlisted.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2016 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
All I can say is well done!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
They are acting and sneaking around like an actual couple who are being intimate, but they are not so they should be ok as far as fraternization goes. But they are very close so I don't know where that stands in regards to the army.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm betting he was to announce his retirement to come home & be with Bella.
Date: 31 May 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Such a great story.Many tissues were neede.
Date: 13 Dec 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved this story. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh I loved it the happy times and even the sad ones thank you
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Another great story
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
great little story ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
Date: 17 Apr 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love a hppy ending, and you always provide one!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
This whole chapter was great!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
I did wonder why a nurse practitioner would not have officer rank, but it had no effect on the story. Like they say, details, details! Loved the wedding, by the way! I thought Jasper's spirit would be there, too!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
This was a happy whirlwind of a chapter, except for that letter from Jasper. That had me in tears, no lie! Boy do I love happy stuff like this!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
I just knew that if they were together, they would get through this! I'll bet Rose is so sorry she's been such a hardass about Bella's service and deployment! This better turn out okay, by the way!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
Truly a hell of a situation, for them both, as well as the rest of the captives!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Those two better be really careful not to get too demonstrative around the rest of the troops!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
Looks like Bella will be welcomed and respected, partly because of who her brother was. I'm glad she and Edward will be together on this base. Doesn't bother me at all that this might not be regulation, it's a good story, that's whats important!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
It's sad that Rose is being so stubborn, it probably hurts her as much as it hurts Bella! This deployment thing is a big sticking point for all of them, it seems! Name one place in the Middle East that isn't dangerous for anyone in the military!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
I suspect Edward was about to get out and now that Bella has enlisted, he'll no doubt reup! I kind of can't blame Rose for being upset, since she's lost her twin to war, and now her baby sister has joined! I'll also wager Edward was planning to declare himself to Bella, before she shocked everyone with her announcement.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Just hearing what Emmett said about enlistment has planted the seeds in Bella's mind, for sure! I hope Rose isn't too uncomfortable with Edward being that much older than Bella, because it's starting to look like a definite possibility!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
It always makes me tear up when I see or read about this. I can picture my mom going through this same thing, every time! I see Bella and Edward growing closer as time goes by, so I'm guessing romance is on the way!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
That was so damn sad! I knew Edward would blame himself, just as I knew Bella would not! Thankfully, Alice will have the love and support of Jasper's family as well as the Cullens!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome how fast Bella has progressed through school the past several years. She's an ambitious and dedicated young woman! She and Edward have developed a nice relationship via the mail, it looks like.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
So the families are entwining with this marriage and the meeting between Bella and Edward seems to be promising, too!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
You guys! This chapter gave me huge goosebumps, and it's just barely started!
Date: 24 Mar 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved this story!!
Date: 20 Mar 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Got some babies quick there with the first two and then slowed down and waited a couples years for the twins that is too cute. Nightshade is a good guy and will be a good husband and daddy.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Nightshade seems like a good guy to be there for Alice. It is funny how he teased Edward about running away with Bella. Wonderful first time Edward was so delicate with her.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love the banter it was so cute.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
The letter was perfect timing jasper. Everyone knew he loved her. He did not hide it very well. Wonderful chapter.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my goodness she did good helping them escape with broken ribs. Wow she admitted her feelings. So glad they found aro.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope they will be okay. Just as they get good news danger has to happen.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
He is so sweet to her. They are so adorable together.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wonderful that she is there with him. They will be an amazing team. Yeah don't ask her out she is already spoken for.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awesome epilogue as always.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Beautiful story.
thanks,
v
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's a beautiful ending. I 'm happy so many lives became so wonderful!
At least this time the tears are happy ones. You've been murder on my tear ducts.
As always, you guys write a lovely story.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love happy endings Thank you very much
Date: 16 Mar 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for sharing this lovely bitter-sweet story. It was nice following it.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Lovely ending . Great story from you as alwways.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Lovely chapter. Great story.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
I loved the story, glad everyone got a happy ending. I have to ask did you see, American Snipper. It is a really good movie. I'm not one for a war movie but like this story it really isn't all about the war but the effect of what goes on. It made me cry and so did this story.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
and so it ends all too soon. I'm glad there is a happy ending for all. see you again soon!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great story! I will look for your groups on FB!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
Perfect wedding celebration & night! I have really enjoyed the military apect of this story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
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[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved the chapter and the way things have unfolded.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nicely pulled together! A lot did happen in this chapter and yet it doesn't feel rushed! Thank you for sharing.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it. i still had tears in my eyes over the hea. Great story.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for not keeping them captive for very long, my heart couldn't take it!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh no, this is horrible. Am I going to have to start reading with one eye closed? LOL
Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow didn't see that happening
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Always a pleasure ladies. Can't wait for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
This was much too risky, I'd be shaking in boots worrying about getting caught in my commanders room. But yes, they are getting closer & that's always a good thing.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hmmm, so they are together in a war zone but can't be together. Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh man, this is sad but I love it! Rose really needs to get over it. Bella needs her support now more than ever. So happy that Bella realized Edward does love love her.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Naming the baby after Jasper was a great idea, it needed a tissue warning though! I thnk joining a branch of the service is wonderful and Bella did it for all the right reasons (imho). I'm guessing that Edward was going to announce his retirement from the military but it doesn't look like that will be happening now.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love the comradderie between Bella, Rose & Alice. Nice birthday surprise and sentiment in Edwards's card to Bella.
Date: 16 Mar 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
Steamy.
thanks,
v
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
The perfect culmination for these two. The Colonel is so attentive to his young wife's needs!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great wedding and glad Alice is going to move on.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Sure better than FF. I really love this story and you two are really good storytellers.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
That was so beautiful and so sexy!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
I loved the reception especialy Rose's speech and Alice dancing and having a nice time. Her decision to begin to live again and her time of in depth grieving made me so happy for her.
B&E's first time making love so beautiful and I loved it being done from Edward's POV.
Thanks and awesome job.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great reception. It was a happy time for all the family after all the grief and sadness. Loved the speeches, both Rose's and Edward's. Glad that Alice and Edward talked and that Alice is ready to live life again. Maybe she and Peter will develop a relationship in time. He seems like a nice guy. Edward and Bella finally have their wedding night and HEA. Sorry to be seeing this ending so quick.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
Nice wedding night. Love the toasts.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
very lovely. all that I wanted and asked for in the honeymoon night. thank you!
Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
It feels as if Jasper was part of the wedding, even if not physically, but spiritually.
Maybe, Alice will "fall" for "Nightfall".
Thank you for this great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice set-up to what can be a beautiful story and friendship/romance.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Boy, this is going to be a tear-jerker at times, isn't it! Love it already!
Date: 15 Mar 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
yep her rank was done wrong. :) Hopping the next chapter is coming soooooonnnnnnn ;)
sapho99
Date: 15 Mar 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hey there,, it is fan fiction not history novels. We love you guys..
I love military and crime stories. Thank you again
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
I did a review of this chapter then lost it and couldn't get it back. I'm going to try to restate it and hope I don't leave anything out of it. As ever, it was an amazing chapter and of course I cried and yes they were happy tears except for Jasper's lack of physical presence. I LOVE IT from the time he picked her up. The proposal, their meeting with Gen. Aro (love this guy's character and role), Edward sharing his pride in her accomplishments, her promotion and the ceremony with Emmett presenting her new rank and getting promoted(See note at bottom), Nightfall's runaway bride piece, the wedding and processional including each person's role. His Mom was so emotional and loving, Rose and
Emmett walking down the aisle was beautiful, Alice and J.C.'s walk was indescribable and so lovely and the wedding itself was adorable!!!
Thank you and my apologies for the verbose review.
Lana
Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 14 Mar 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
brings tears to my eyes so sweet I love that they put some of Jasper with her
Date: 14 Mar 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love this chapter, so sweet and lovely, after all the drama. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it again had tears in my eyes.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
It is a good fiction, thank you.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
wonderful, lovely, moving quickly! will you write a honeymoon lemon? please?
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Je adore ce chapitre, la lettre de Jasper est une agréable surprise.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ils se sont échappés.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ils sont prisonniers!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Merci pour ce bon chapitre.